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OPEN-ENDINGCOMPOSITION整理ppt開放性寫作出題方式：1根據(jù)結(jié)果，解釋原因

Whathappened?2根據(jù)事件，接續(xù)故事

Whathappenednext?Whatdidyoudowith...?Whatshouldyoudo...?Howwillyouintroduceyourschooltothem?3提出問題，給出建議整理ppt寫作注意原則：1、認(rèn)真審題，即：審語境、審人稱、審時態(tài)2、要緊扣主題，符合要求，首尾呼應(yīng)3、注意寫作對象和語言風(fēng)格，要有讀者的意識4、要進(jìn)行細(xì)致描寫，有細(xì)節(jié)的支撐5、要有主次之分，詳略得當(dāng)6、要力求內(nèi)容新穎，必須符合邏輯7、要做到思想健康，積極向上整理ppt海淀二模：Whenyourmothercomeshomefromwork.,shefindsthelivingroominaterriblemess.Sheasksyouthereasons.Youtellherwhathappened.審題：人稱--I,時態(tài)--過去時敘事---根據(jù)結(jié)果，解釋原因。整理ppt切記：1審題要準(zhǔn)；定位要清。2緊扣主題；首位呼應(yīng)。3內(nèi)容充實；詳略得當(dāng)。4合情合理；邏輯清晰。5語言簡潔；交際得體。整理ppt

說明文整理ppt說明文出題形式：1。文字+表格2。圖表3。圖畫整理ppt說明文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)主題句——引出全文的話題支持句——圍繞話題展開討論，用事實，理由，觀點等來進(jìn)行解釋，說明或論證。結(jié)束句——對話題進(jìn)行概括，總結(jié)歸納。整理ppt說明文的寫作方法：列舉法----用事例說明主題可用表示順序的示意詞來突出每個實例。如：

first,second,third,

first,secondly,finally,thefirstthing(point)is…,thesecondthing(point)is…,thethirdthing(point)is…,firstofall,also,finally,

one,another,thelast…整理ppt以事物的重要性來排列順序，可使文章層次清楚，重點突出。如：

foronething,also,theworstthingis…,firstofall,apartfromthat,themostimportantis…,foronething,whatismore,themost…,oneimportant,moreimportantly,themostimportant…,整理pptoneproblem..,anotherproblem…,themostseriousproblem…,整理ppt比較對比法：比較通常是指對人或事物之間的相同點進(jìn)行分析。對比通常是側(cè)重分析兩者之間的不同點，利與弊。

整理ppt寫作方法通常有：1）相同點---不同點分析A,A,A,B,B,B,結(jié)構(gòu)2）A,B,A,B,A,B,結(jié)構(gòu)（如內(nèi)容較多，可逐點分析。）整理pptTopicsentence

whetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparksSupportingsentence1

60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaoftheentrancefees.(A)tohavearestandenjoythemselvesinthepark(A)tobecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,(A)todoharmtotheappearanceofthecity.整理pptSupportingsentence2

40%thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged(B)needmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers(B)tobuyplantsandyoungtrees.(B)feesshouldbechargedlow.整理ppt請根據(jù)以下圖表和提示寫一篇關(guān)于我國手機擁有量變化的報導(dǎo)。并闡述手機給人們生活所帶來的利與弊。1.方便 2.隨時，隨地聯(lián)系3.許多設(shè)置滿足不同要求4.發(fā)短信，電話記錄5.接到打錯的電話為之付費6.電磁污染整理ppt宣武一模：請你根據(jù)下面圖表用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要包括以下兩方面：1。概括說明中美大學(xué)生的主要收入來源。2。分析產(chǎn)生這種不同現(xiàn)象的可能原因。整理pptIncome*American*Chinesesources*students*students----------------------------------------------Parents*50%*90%-----------------------------------------------Part-timejobs*35%*5%-------------------------------------------------scholarships*15%*5%整理pptTheincomeoftheAmericanandtheChinesestudentscomesthroughalmostthesamechannels:parents,part-timejobsandscholarships,butthepercentageofeachisquitedifferent.

HalftheAmericanstudents’incomeisfromtheirparents,thirty-fivepercentfromfrompart-timejobs,andfifteenfromscholarships.Chinesestudents,ontheotherhand,getninetypercentoftheirincomefromtheirparents.整理pptInmyopinion,therearetwomainreasonsforthis.

OneisthatChineseparentscaresomuchfortheirchildrenthatitisalmostunthinkableforstudentstoliveontheirown.TheotheristhatChinesestudentshavefewerchancestofindpart-timejobs.整理ppt小結(jié)：1。確定主題；理清結(jié)構(gòu)。2。信息歸類；支撐論點。（相同；不同）3。上下連貫；邏輯清晰。（正確使用連接詞）4。首位呼應(yīng)；緊扣扣題。整理pptWishyousuccess整理ppt寫作常見錯誤：1動詞與主語關(guān)系不清誤：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandwasabouttocrossParkRoad.正：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandhewasabouttocrossParkRoad.整理ppt誤：Butthecarranoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.正：Butthedriverdroveoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.整理ppt誤：Theparkshouldchargetheentrancefee.正：Theentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.正：Peopleshouldpayfortheentrancefeeiftheygototheparks.整理ppt2句子之間的邏輯關(guān)系不清誤：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,awoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.TheoldmanandIsawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Theoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.

整理ppt正：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,whowasawoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.

Fortunately,Isawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Noticingtheoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.整理ppt3畫蛇添足、過多的長句使句子復(fù)雜化（語言不簡潔）修改前：

Afamoussportsmanwasgivingaspeechwhichwasratherinteresting.修改后：Afamoussportsmanwasgivinganinterestingspeech.整理ppt修改前

Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Theairpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriouswhichiscausedbybusesandcars.What’smore,somanyriversarepollutedbydirtywaterwhichisfromfactory.Inaddition,sandstormstruckusnowandthen,fromwhichwesufferedalot.整理ppt修改后

Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Asaresult,peoplehavetosuffersandstormsnowandthen.What’smore,asbusesandcarsgiveoffalotofpoisonousgases,theairisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Moreover,therearemanyriverspollutedbydirtywaterfromfactories.Thesituationisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.整理ppt修改前：Assoonascamein,weheardsomevoicemadebyinstruments.Thereweresomestudentsplayingpianoviolinandsoon.修改后：Assoonaswecamein,weheardapieceofbeautifulmusicplayedbythestudentsbydifferentinstruments,suchas,piano,violinandsoon.整理ppt4過于簡單的句子使文章缺少邏輯性，可讀性。修改前Yesterday,therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.整理ppt修改后Yesterday,apolicemanstoppedacar—Hondaatthecornerofthestreet,becauseitnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.整理ppt修改前Suddenly,acarrunquicklyfromthethirdstreetandturnedtothewest.Thecardidn’tstopandhittheoldman.Thedriverdidn’tstopandhavealook.Thecarranawayquickly.Thecarwasyellowandthedriverwasawoman.整理ppt修改后Suddenly,acarturnedwestfromthe3rdStreettotheParkRoad.Ithittheoldman,butitdidn’tstopandranawayquickly.Inoticedthecarwasyellowandthedriverwasawoman.整理ppt整理ppt9、靜夜四無鄰，荒居舊業(yè)貧。。2023/1/32023/1/3Tuesday,January3,202310、雨中黃葉樹，燈下白頭人。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/31/3/20237:26:43PM11、以我獨沈久，愧君相見頻。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/3Jan-2303-Jan-2312、故人江海別，幾度隔山川。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/3Tuesday,January3,202313、乍見翻疑夢，相悲各問年。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/32023/1/31/3/202314、他鄉(xiāng)生白發(fā)，舊國見青山。。03一月20232023/1/32023/1/32023/1/315、比不了得就不比，得不到的就不要。。。一月232023/1/32023/1/32023/1/31/3/202316、行動出成果，工作出財富。。2023/1/32023/1/303January202317、做前，能夠環(huán)視四周；做時，你只能或者最好沿著以腳為起點的射線向前。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/32023/1/39、沒有失敗，只有暫時停止成功！。2023/1/32023/1/3Tuesday,January3,202310、很多事情努力了未必有結(jié)果，但是不努力卻什么改變也沒有。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/31/3/20237:26:43PM11、成功就是日復(fù)一日那一點點小小努力的積累。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/3Jan-2303-Jan-2312、世間成事，不求其絕對圓滿，留一份不足，可得無限完美。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/3Tuesday,January3,202313、不知香積寺，數(shù)里入云峰。。2023/1/32023/1/32023/1/32023/1/31/3/202314、意志堅強的人能把世界放在手中像泥塊一樣任意揉捏。03一月20232023/1/32023/1/32023/1/315、楚塞三湘接，荊門九派通。。。一月232023/1/32023/1/32023/1/31/3/202316、少年十五二十時，步行奪得胡馬騎。。202