2016年中考英語寫作試題分析

2016年中考英語寫作試題分析一、成績分布狀況、效度與難度分析201615分，最低分0分，平均分7.173.970.48。全體評分曲線圖如下所示：至125分占比例較大，其中零分作文占8.64%，因此，我市初中學生英語寫作能力有待進一步提高。60至120，考生在寫作篇幅上二、考生典型問題分析（一）識記類問題識記類問題集中反映在考生對基礎詞匯的拼寫不夠準確，含義模糊，表現(xiàn)為詞不達意，影響讀者對文章的理解。具體表現(xiàn)為：拼寫錯誤spiritsprite,alwaysAmericaAmercia,China拼寫Chine,ChineseChinses,vacation拼寫為vication,beautifulbeautfull,motherbecause拼寫為because,USAUK等。用詞不當如①Iamverylikehim.②Heisverymissme.③Heisveryshyness.④Sometimes,hishelpmyquestions.⑤Heknowsthanksgivingothers.⑥TeacherspeakBillverycarefully.⑦Hepopularmylive.⑨He’sfromAmerican.固定搭配錯誤spendmanyfreetimetoplaycomputergames.②thereasonofhecomestomyhometownisthathethinksNingxiaisverybeautiful.③HewillgotripinNingxia.④HewillcomeNingxia.⑤HeisgoingtoNingxiaontripatholiday.⑥Heisgoodatlearnmath.⑦Youcanmakefriendwithhetheword,Billisagoodboy.固定句式錯誤havethreepeopleinhisspendshissparetimetoplaycomputergames.③Healwayshelpsclassmatesasforashecan.（二）結構類錯誤英語是一門形式邏輯很強的語言，這也是英語與漢語的最大區(qū)別。如名詞的單復數(shù)、動詞的及物與不及物如①Helikelisteningmusic.②HewantstolookNingxia’spark.③Heoftenhelpswithclassmates.及物動詞賓補結構錯誤如①HetellmegivesomesuggestionsaboutNingxia.②Hewantstotravelandhelphimselfrelaxing.時態(tài)問題如①HeisoncegotoNingxia.②Hehadjoinedschoolsoccerteam.③HewillclimbsthemountainTaiandvisitstheGreatWall.④HealsosaidhewanttoGuyanlingwithme.語態(tài)問題如①Heisvisitedhisgrandmother.②HeiswonderedhowChinalikes.5.語氣錯誤如Iwishhehasagoodtime.6.謂語重疊如①Helikesplaybasketball.②HeisgoingtosummerholidaycometoNingxia.③HewantarriveNingxia.④Iamgetalongwellwithhim.⑤He’slikeplaybasketball.謂語結構殘缺或錯誤如①Heisstudyverygood.②Thathiswish.③Heveryfriendlyandoutgoing.④FootballisBilllikebestonsports.⑤Hecanmanymoney.無主句如①Isverycute,studentthink②Hethinksthatcanfindsomethinginteresting.③Thereareagoodplace,canmakepeoplerelax④.Afterclassdon’tfightwithherfriends.主謂不一致haveagooddon’tknowthispeople.③Histeachersandclassmatessaysthatheisafunnyalwayssharehisbookwithme.名詞的單復數(shù)形式錯誤、人稱代詞格的混亂、介詞錯誤、冠詞錯誤名詞單復數(shù)形式錯誤如：①Heisamiddleschoolstudents.②Manyteacherthinkthatheispoliteandsmart.③Thereisagoodweatherhere.ysplayfootballnplayground②ye③Itintroducehimforyou.④Ibelievehewillloveinhere.冠詞錯誤如：①HelivesintheUSA.②Heisaexcellentboy.③Hisfatheristeacher.④Thesummer,hewanttogototheNingxia.（三）功能類問題功能類問題是從語用學的角度來說的，考生雖然能表達基本意思，但不能準確表述題目要點，往往與功能類問題有關。具體問題表現(xiàn)如下：詞性錯誤如①Doyouwanttoseehe?②Hehasanormalfamilylikesmanypeople.③Therearethreepeopleinhisfamily,hefather,hemotherandstudyisverywell.串句錯誤如①Theairisfresh,theskyisblue,thegrassisgreen. ②Whenwetalkonthephoneareveryhasagoodhobbyiscleanhisfamily’slivingroom.④HeheardofNingxiaisverybeautiful.平行結構錯誤如①Helikesswimming,runningandplaybasketball.②Heisshyness,butfriendshipforme.③Runningmakehimhappyandpleasure.④Heisfriendshipandoutgoing.語序混亂如①TheywithBillgetsonwith.②Becausehelikethereenvironment.③Hisaddressisverybighousewithgarden.④HelikewithparentswatchTVatevening.漢語式表達如①Iwanttolearnhere’sknowledge.②HecomeNingxiaplay.③YoucomeNingxiaisverygood.④Billhasahotheart,especiallyhavetroublepeople. ⑤Weverywelcometohecometoourhome.⑤Wethinkofpleasehisteachme,sothatweandhistogetherstudyharder.句式單調如①Hisdadisaworker.Hismomisaworker,too.②Hehasapairofbigears,andasmallmouthandhasayellowhair.③HewantstogotoChina.HewantstogotoNingxia.主從復合句錯誤如①HecomeNingxiaisbecauseheandhisparentslikeChinese.②HewanttoknowGuyuanpeoplelive.③Myteachersandclassmatesallthinkofheishelpful.④HehearofNingxiaisbeautiful.三、優(yōu)秀作文分析與點評案例1【分析與點評】考生能準確審題，層次清晰。第一段交代了人物的身份、家庭情況及愛好；第二段交式富于變化，長短句錯落有致。文中therebespendsb.indoingsth.結構、以及賓語從Histeachesthinkthat…Hisclassmatessay凸顯了作者駕馭語言的能力。案例2【分析與點評】becauseof介詞短語表inhissparetimesometimes兩個表示時間概念的詞，表述精細、具體。第二段中用asastudent,asa過渡巧妙，邏輯嚴密。第三段作者用副oncefromthenon實的語言功底和行文智慧。為了避免與第一段中heisinterestedin…句式重復，作者在最后Hehasstrong