高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí) 佳作誦讀5 講義

高考作文復(fù)習(xí)——佳作誦讀5第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文(滿分15分)假設(shè)你是江陰市第一中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華。你從官網(wǎng)得知，青少年藝術(shù)節(jié)（YouthArtFestival）組委會正在招募今年英語戲劇比賽的承辦學(xué)校。請你代表學(xué)校給組委會寫一封郵件，申請承辦該活動，內(nèi)容包括：1.承辦條件；2.初步計劃。注意:1.詞數(shù)80~100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【審題】1、本篇應(yīng)用文是一封郵件(申請信)：要求考生代表學(xué)校給青少年藝術(shù)節(jié)(YouthArtFestival)組委會寫一封郵件，申請承辦今年的英語戲劇比賽。2、文章分三段。第一段：表明寫信目的：代表學(xué)校申請承辦英語戲劇比賽。第二段：承辦條件和初步計劃：本段首先介紹為什么有資格承辦這項活動，列舉出1-2個承辦理由，例如：成功舉辦過相類似的活動、有相應(yīng)的設(shè)施等。初步打算如何承辦這項活動，例如：邀請專家評審、做好宣傳策劃等。第三段：衷心期盼組委會給予機會考慮我校申請。Possibleversion:Towhomitmayconcern,IamLiHua,presidentofthestudentunioninJiangyinNo.1HighSchool.Onbehalfofourschool,Iamwritingtoyoutoapplytobethehostschoolofthisyear’sEnglishDramaCompetition.Duetothefactthatinthepastthreeyears,ourschoolhassuccessfullyheldthreeEnglishdramacompetitions,eachofwhichiswellreceivedandappreciatedbyallteachersandstudents,I’mfirmlyconvincedthatourschooliswellqualifiedforhostingthisactivity.Asforourarrangement,notonlywillwemakethebestoftheEnglishcornertowarmupinadvanceandpublicizethisdramacompetition,butwearealsointendedtoinviteprofessionalteacherstojoinusandgiveusguidanceonEnglishskills.IdobelievetheEnglishdramacompetitionheldbyourschoolisboundtobringavisualfeasttothisyear’sYouthArtFestival.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua我是李華，江陰第一中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席。我代表我們學(xué)校寫信給您，申請成為今年英語戲劇比賽的主辦學(xué)校。由于在過去的三年里，我們學(xué)校成功舉辦了三場英語戲劇比賽，每一場比賽都受到了所有老師和學(xué)生的歡迎和贊賞，我堅信我們學(xué)校完全有資格舉辦這次活動。至于我們的安排，我們不僅會充分利用英語角提前熱身，宣傳這場戲劇比賽，而且我們還打算邀請專業(yè)教師加入我們，為我們提供英語技能指導(dǎo)。我相信我們學(xué)校舉辦的英語戲劇比賽一定會為今年的青年藝術(shù)節(jié)帶來視覺盛宴。如果您能考慮我的申請，我將不勝感激。期待您早日回復(fù)。第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Hereisasecretthateveryoneknows:Idon’tliketoaskforhelp.Ofcourse,mydisabilitymeansthatIneedassistancewhenIgetdressedandhavetobedriveneverywhere,butthatispreciselymypoint.Onenightafewyearsago,aftermycaregiverhelpedmetobed,Ienjoyedmyfavoritepartofmyroutine—playingwithmyservicedogMarshall.Whentherestoftheworldmademefeel“l(fā)acking”,Marshallmademefeellike“enough”.Asusual,hejumpedoffthebedafterafewminutes,butthepaininhiseyestoldmesomethingwaswrong.Afewdayslater,atriptothevetconfirmedmyworstfears.Dr.Tomsaid,“Imustperformanoperationtotreathim.”“Isheinpain?”Iheldmybreath.ThenIgottheanswer“Yes.”Ifeltheartbroken.Icouldn’tremembertalkingaboutthedetails.Ihadonehugequestion:“Howmuchwouldtheoperationcost?”“About$2,500.Itmightaswellhavebeenamillion.”Icouldn’taffordit.Eachday,Isearchedforwaystoraisemoneyforthisoperation.Abeautifulbiketrailwasclosetotheapartmentwherewelived.Onmostofthedaysofoureightyearstogether,MarshallandIusedit.Ilovedthetrees,thefreshairandbeingoutside.Overtheyears,manyoftheneighborsgotfamiliarwithus.EveryonelovedMarshall.Thenoneday,anideaoccurredtome.CouldIaskthesepeopletocontributetothecostofMarshall’soperation?IfIcouldpushmywheelchairacertainnumberoflaps(圈)andgetmoneyforeverylapthatIcompleted,mightIraiseenoughmoneyforMarshalltohavehisoperation?Ourregularroutewasamileandahalflong.Mygoalwastopushmywheelchairtenlaps,atotaloffifteenmiles.Next,feelingveryboldandalittlenervous,Isetadate.ThenImadepostersandpostedthemaroundmyapartmentandalloverthebiketrail.MyneighborswereconcernedforMarshall.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！緦忣}】1、本文以人物為線索展開，講述了身患?xì)埣驳淖髡卟⒉幌矚g尋求幫助。然而當(dāng)他的愛犬Marshall身患重病需要大筆錢做手術(shù)時，作者想到一個主意：推動輪椅15英里去籌錢。作者戰(zhàn)勝身體的疼痛，刻苦訓(xùn)練，最終實現(xiàn)了自己的既定目標(biāo)。在好心人的幫助下，成功籌到錢的故事。2、段落續(xù)寫①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“帶著希望，我開始訓(xùn)練自己?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡邞?zhàn)勝疼痛刻苦訓(xùn)練。艱難的開始~~信念的堅持~~最終成功。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“重要的一天終于來了，我在早上6:30出門。”可知，第二段可描寫作者成功地推著輪椅，完成了15英里，為馬歇爾的手術(shù)籌集了足夠的資金?？朔щy~~眾人支持~~籌款成功~~愛的力量Withhope,Istartedtotrainmyself.Forthefirstfewdays,itwasevenharderthanIhadexpected.PushingmywheelchairtenlapswassuchaconsiderablechallengetomethatwhenIpracticedit,Ifeltgreatpaininmybackandshoulders,withmyheartpoundingrapidlyandhandstremblingterribly.EverytimeIwasonthevergeofgivingup,itwasmyloveforMarshallthatboostedmydetermination.Insteadofsurrenderingtomybody,Ifocusedonthevoiceinmyheart.“Marshallneedsyou.Onemorelap,andyouwillsucceed.”Afterweeksofpersistenttraining,Icouldfinishallfifteenmiles.ThebigdayfinallycameandIwentoutat6:30a.m.NervousasIwas,Icautiouslypushedmywheelchairforthefirstfewlaps,whichseemedtobelongandlonely.Afterwhatseemedtobeages,surprisingly,anincreasingnumberofneighborscametocheermeon,afeelingofwarmthemergingfromthebottomofmyheart.Witheverymile,morepeoplejoinedanddonationsfromtheneighborscontinued.Manyhourspassed,andIfinishedallfifteenmilesaswellassucceedinginraisingenoughmoneyforMarshall’soperation.Tearsofhappinesstrickleddownmycheeks.Icouldneverhavemadeitwithouttheselovelypeople’ssupport.Itistheirselflessnessandkindnessthatmademefeellike“enough”insteadof“l(fā)acking”andenabledmetosaveMarshall.懷著希望，我開始訓(xùn)練自己。在最初的幾天里，這比我想象的還要難。推輪椅十圈對我來說是一個相當(dāng)大的挑戰(zhàn)，當(dāng)我練習(xí)時，我感到背部和肩膀都很痛，我的心怦怦直跳，雙手顫抖得厲害。每次我瀕臨放棄時，都是我對馬歇爾的愛增強了我的決心。我沒有屈服于自己的身體，而是專注于內(nèi)心的聲