高考英語讀后續(xù)寫寫作素材積累二講義

高考讀后續(xù)寫寫作素材積累二1)

IgottostudyWillTraynorupclose,inthosefirstcoupleofweeks.Isawthatheseemeddeterminednottolookanythinglikethemanhehadbeen;hehadlethislight-brownhairgrowintoashapelessmess,hisstubble(胡茬子)crawlacrosshisjaw.Hisgreyeyeswerelinedwithexhaustion,ortheeffectofconstantdiscomfort(Nathansaidhewasrarelycomfortable).Theyborethehollowlookofsomeonewhowasalwaysafewstepsremovedfromtheworldaroundhim.SometimesIwonderedifitwasadefencemechanism(機(jī)制),whethertheonlywaytocopewithhislifewastopretenditwasn’thimitwashappeningto.2)

Iwantedtofeelsorryforhim.Ireallydid.IthoughthewasthesaddestpersonIhadevermet,inthosemomentswhenIglimpsedhimstaringoutofthewindow.AndasthedayswentbyandIrealizedthathisconditionwasnotjustamatterofbeingstuckinthatchair,ofthelossofphysicalfreedom,butanever-endinglitany(冗長而枯燥的陳述;)ofindignities(侮辱，輕蔑)andhealthproblems,ofrisksanddiscomforts,IdecidedthatifIwereWill,Iwouldprobablybeprettymiserabletoo.3)

ButohLord,hewasviletome.EverythingIsaid,hehadasharpanswerfor.IfIaskedhimifhewaswarmenough,hewouldretort(反駁;回嘴)thathewasquitecapableoflettingmeknowifheneededanotherblanket.IfIaskedifthevacuumcleaner(吸塵器)wastoonoisyforhim–Ihadn’twantedtointerrupthisfilm–heaskedmewhy,hadIworkedoutawaytomakeitrunsilently?WhenIfedhim,hecomplainedthatthefoodwastoohotortoocold,orthatIhadbroughtthenextforkfuluptohismouthbeforehehadfinishedthelast.HehadtheabilitytotwistalmostanythingIsaidordidsothatIseemedstupid.4)

Duringthosefirsttwoweeks,Igotquitegoodatkeepingmyfacecompletelyblank,andIwouldturnawayanddisappearintotheotherroomandjustsayaslittletohimasIpossiblycould.Istartedtohatehim,andI’msureheknewit.5)

Ihadn’trealizeditwaspossibletomissmyoldjobmorethanIalreadydid.ImissedFrank,andthewayheactuallylookedpleasedtoseemewhenIarrivedinthemorning.Imissedthecustomers,theircompany,andtheeasychatter(嘮叨，喋喋不休)thatswelledanddippedgentlylikeabenign(溫和的，仁慈的)seaaroundme.Thishouse,beautifulandexpensiveasitwas,wasasstillandsilentasamorgue(停尸房).Sixmonths,Irepeatedundermybreath,whenitfeltunbearable.Sixmonths.6)

AndthenontheThursday,justasIwasmixingWill’smid-morning,high-caloriedrink,IheardMrsTraynor’svoiceinthehall.Exceptthistimetherewereothervoicestoo.Iwaited,theforkstilledinmyhand.Icouldjustmakeoutawoman’svoice,young,well-spoken(談吐文雅的),andaman’s.7)

MrsTraynorappearedinthekitchendoorway,andItriedtolookbusy,whisking(攪拌)briskly(輕快地;迅速地)atthebeaker(燒杯;高腳杯).8)

‘Isthatmadeupwith60:40waterandmilk?’sheasked,peeringatthedrink.9)

‘Yes.It’sthestrawberryone.’10)

‘Will’sfriendshavecometoseehim.Itwouldprobablybebestifyou…’11)

‘I’vegotlotsofthingsIshouldbedoinginhere,’Isaid.IwasactuallyquiterelievedthatIwouldbesparedhiscompanyforanhourorso.Iscrewed(擰緊)thelidontothebeaker.‘Wouldyourguestslikesometeaorcoffee?’12)

Shelookedalmostsurprised.‘Yes.Thatwouldbeverykind.Coffee.IthinkI’ll…’13)

Sheseemedevenmoretensethanusual,hereyesdarting(投射;使迅速突然移動(dòng))towardsthecorridor(走廊),fromwherewecouldhearthelowmurmurofvoices.IguessedthatWilldidn’tgetmanyvisitors.14)

‘Ithink…I’llleavethemalltoit.’Shegazedoutintothecorridor,herthoughtsapparentlyfaraway.‘Rupert.It’sRupert,hisoldfriendfromwork,’shesaid,suddenlyturningtowardsme.15)

Igotthefeelingthatthiswasinsomewaymomentous(重大的),andthatsheneededtoshareitwithsomeone,evenifitwasjustme.16)

‘AndAlicia.Theywere…veryclose…forabit.Teawouldbelovely.Thankyou,MissClark.’17)

IhesitatedamomentbeforeIopenedthedoor,leaningagainstitwithmyhipsothatIcouldbalancethetray(托盤)inmyhands.18)

‘MrsTraynorsaidyoumightlikesomecoffee,’IsaidasIentered,placingthetrayonthelowtable.AsIplacedWill’sbeakerintheholderofhischair,turningthestraw(吸管)sothatheonlyneededtoadjusthisheadpositiontoreachit,Isneakedalookathisvisitors.19)

ItwasthewomanInoticedfirst.Long-leggedandblonde-haired,withpalecaramelskin,shewasthekindofwomanwhomakesmewonderifhumansreallyareallthesamespecies.Shelookedlikeahumanracehorse.Ihadseenthesewomenoccasionally;theywereusuallybouncingupthehilltothecastle,clutching(緊握)smallBoden-cladchildren,andwhentheycameintothecafetheirvoiceswouldcarry,crystalclearandunselfconscious,astheyasked,‘Harry,darling,wouldyoulikeacoffee?ShallIseeiftheycandoyouamacchiato?’Thiswasdefinitelyamacchiatowoman.Everythingabouthersmeltofmoney,ofentitlement(權(quán)利)andalifelivedasifthroughthepagesofaglossymagazine(服裝雜志).20)

ThenIlookedathermorecloselyandrealizedwithajoltthat(a)shewasthewomaninWill’sskiingphotograph,and(b)shelookedreally,reallyuncomfortable.21)

ShehadkissedWillonthecheekandwasnowsteppingbackwards,smilingawkwardly.Shewaswearingabrownshearlinggilet(shearling),thekindofthingthatwouldhavemademelooklikeayeti(雪人),andapale-greycashmerescarfaroundherneck,whichshebegantofiddlewith(擺弄),asifshecouldn’tdecidewhethertounwrapherselfornot.22)

‘Youlookwell,’shesaidtohim.‘Really.You’ve…grownyourhairabit.’23)

Willdidn’tsayathing.Hewasjustlookingather,hisexpressionasunreadableasever.Ifeltafleetinggratitudethatitwasn’tjustmehelookedatlikethat.24)

‘Newchair,eh?’ThemantappedthebackofWill’schair,chincompressed(壓緊),noddinginapprovalasifhewereadmiringatop-of-the-rangesportscar.‘Looks…prettysmart.Very…h(huán)ightech.’25)

Ididn’tknowwhattodo.Istoodthereforamoment,shiftingfromonefoottoanother,untilWill’svoicebrokeintothesilence.26)

‘Louisa,wouldyoumindputtingsomemorelogsonthefire?Ithinkitneedsbuildingupabit.’27)

ItwasthefirsttimehehadusedmyChristianname.28）

‘Sure,’Isaid.29)

Ibusiedmyselfbythelogburner,stoking(撥旺火)thefireandsortingthroughthebasketforlogsoftherightsize.30)

‘Gosh,it’scoldoutside,’thewomansaid.‘Nicetohaveaproperfire.’31)

Iopenedthedoorofthewoodburner,prodding(捅;戳)attheglowinglogswiththepoker.32)

‘It’sagoodfewdegreescolderherethanLondon.’33)

‘Yes,definitely,’themanagreed.34)

‘Iwasthinkingofgettingawoodburnerathome.Apparentlythey’remuchmoreefficientthananopenfire.’Aliciastooped(彎腰)alittletoinspectthisone,asifshe’dneveractuallyseenonebefore.35)

‘Yes,I’veheardthat,’saidtheman.36)

‘Imustlookintoit.Oneofthosethingsyoumeantodoandthen…’Afterapausesheadded,‘Lovelycoffee.’37)

‘So–whathaveyoubeenupto,Will?’Theman’svoiceheldakindofforcedjoviality(開心;高興)toit.38)

‘Notverymuch,funnilyenough.’39)

‘Butthephysio(理療)andstuff.Isitallcomingon?Any…improvement?’40)

‘Idon’tthinkI’llbeskiinganytimesoon,Rupert,’Willsaid,hisvoicedrippingwithsarcasm(譏諷).41)

Ialmostsmiledtomyself.ThiswastheWillIknew.Ibeganbrushingashfromthehearth(爐邊;壁爐地面).Ihadthefeelingthattheywereallwatchingme.Thesilencefeltloaded.Iwonderedbrieflywhetherthelabelwasstickingoutofmysweaterandfoughttheurgetocheck.42)

‘So…’Willsaidfinally.‘TowhatdoIowethispleasure?It’sbeen…eightmonths?’43)

‘Oh,Iknow.I’msorry.It’sbeen…I’vebeenawfullybusy.IhaveanewjoboverinChelsea.ManagingSashaGoldstein’sboutique.DoyourememberSasha?I’vebeendoingalotofweekendworktoo.ItgetsterriblybusyonSaturdays.Veryhardtogettimeoff.’Alicia’svoicehadbecomebrittle(易碎的;聲音尖利的).‘Ididringacoupleoftimes.Didyourmothertellyou?’44)

‘ThingshavebeenprettymanicatLewins.You…youknowwhatit’slike,Will.We’vegotanewpartner.ChapfromNewYork.Bains.DanBains.Youcomeupagainsthimatall?’45）

‘No.’46)

‘Bloodymanseemstoworktwenty-fourhoursadayandexpectseveryoneelsetodothesame.’Youcouldheartheman’spalpable(明顯的)reliefathavingfoundatopichewascomfortablewith.‘YouknowtheoldYankworkethic–nomorelonglunches,nosmuttyjokes–Will,Itellyou.Thewholeatmosphereoftheplacehaschanged.’47)

‘Really.’48)

‘OhGod,yes.Presenteeismwritlarge.SometimesIfeellikeIdaren’tleavemychair.’49)

Alltheairseemedtodisappearfromtheroominavacuumedrush.Someonecoughed.50)

Istoodup,andwipedmyhandsonmyjeans.‘I’ll…I’mjustgoingtofetchsomemorelogs,’Imuttered,inWill’sgeneraldirection.51)

AndIpickedupthebasketandfled.52)

Itwasfreezingoutside,butIlingeredoutthere,killingtimewhileI

piecesofwood.Iwastryingtocalculatewhetheritwaspreferabletolosetheoddfingertofrostbite(凍傷;凍瘡)ratherthanputmyselfbackintothatroom.Butitwasjusttoocoldandmyindexfinger,whichIuseforsewingstuff,wentbluefirstandfinallyIhadtoadmitdefeat.Ihauledthewoodasslowlyaspossible,lettingmyselfintotheannexe,andwalkedslowlybackdownthecorridor.AsIapproachedthelivingroomIheardthewoman’svoice,weavingitswaythroughtheslightlyopendoor.53)

‘Actually,Will,thereisanotherreasonforuscominghere,’shewassaying.‘We…h(huán)avesomenews.’54)

Ihesitatedbythedoor,thelogbasketbracedbetweenmyhands.55)

‘Ithought–well,wethought–thatitwouldonlyberighttoletyouknow…but,well,here’sthething.RupertandIaregettingmarried.’56)

Istoodverystill,calculatingwhetherIcouldturnroundwithoutbeingheard.57)

Thewomancontinued,lamely.‘Look,Iknowthisisprobablyabitofashocktoyou.Actually,itwasratherashocktome.We–it–well,itonlyreallystartedalongtimeafter…’58)

Myarmshadbeguntoache.Iglanceddownatthebasket,tryingtoworkoutwhattodo.59)

‘Well,youknowyouandI…we…’60)

Anotherweightysilence.61)

‘Will,pleasesaysomething.’62)

‘Congratulations,’hesaidfinally.63)

‘Iknowwhatyou’rethinking.Butneitherofusmeantforthistohappen.Really.Foranawfullongtimewewerejustfriends.Friendswhowereconcernedaboutyou.It’sjustthatRupertwasthemostterrificsupporttomeafteryouraccident–’64)

‘Bigofhim.’65)

‘Pleasedon’tbelikethis.Thisissoawful.Ihaveabsolutelydreadedtellingyou.Webothhave.’66)

‘Evidently,’Willsaidflatly.67)

Rupert’svoicebrokein.‘Look,we’reonlytellingyoubecausewebothcareaboutyou.Wedidn’twantyoutohearitfromsomeoneelse.But,youknow,lifegoeson.Youmustknowthat.It’sbeentwoyears,afterall.’68)

Therewassilence.IrealizedIdidnotwanttolistentoanymore,andstartedtomovesoftlyawayfromthedoor,grunting(咕噥)slightlywiththeeffort.ButRupert’svoice,whenitcameagain,hadgrowninvolumesothatIcouldstillhearhim.69)

‘Comeon,man.Iknowitmustbeterriblyhard…allthis.ButifyoucareforLissaatall,youmustwanthertohaveagoodlife.’70)

‘Saysomething,Will.Please.’71)

Icouldpicturehisface.Icouldseethatlookofhisthatmanagedtobebothunreadableandtoconveyakindofdistantcontempt.72)

‘Congratulations,’hesaid,finally.‘I’msureyou’llbothbeveryhappy.’73)

Aliciastartedtoprotestthen–somethingindistinct(不清楚的，模糊的)–butwasinterruptedbyRupert.‘Comeon,Lissa.Ithinkweshouldleave.Will,it’snotlikewecamehereexpectingyourblessing.Itwasacourtesy(禮貌).Lissathought–well,webothjustthought–youshouldknow.Sorry,oldchap.I…IdohopethingsimproveforyouandIhopeyoudowanttostayintouchwhenthings…youknow…whenthingssettledownabit.’74)

Iheardfootsteps,andstoopedoverthebasketoflogs,asifIhadonlyjustcomein.IheardtheminthecorridorandthenAliciaappearedinfrontofme.Hereyeswerered-rimmed(邊),asifshewereabouttocry.75)

‘CanIusethebathroom?’shesaid,hervoicethickandchoked.76)

Islowlyliftedafingerandpointedmutelyinitsdirection.77)

Shelookedatmehardthen,andIrealizedthatwhatIfeltprobablyshowedonmyface.Ihaveneverbeenmuchgoodathidingmyfeelings.78)

‘Iknowwhatyou’rethinking,’shesaid,afterapause.‘ButIdidtry.Ireallytried.Formonths.Andhejustpushedmeaway.’Herjawwasrigid(僵硬的),herexpressionoddlyfurious.‘Heactuallydidn’twantmehere.Hemadethatveryclear.’79)

Sheseemedtobewaitingformetosaysomething.80)

‘It’sreallynoneofmybusiness,’Isaid,eventually.81)

Webothstoodfacingeachother.82)

‘Youknow,youcanonlyactuallyhelpsomeonewhowantstobehelped,’shesaid.83)

Andthenshewasgone.84)

Iwaitedacoupleofminutes,listeningforthesoundoftheircardisappearingdownthedrive,andthenIwentintothekitchen.IstoodthereandboiledthekettleeventhoughIdidn’twantacupoftea.IflickedthroughamagazinethatIhadalreadyread.Finally,Iwentbackintothecorridorand,withagrunt,pickedupthelogbasketandhauled(拖，拉)itintothelivingroom,bumpingitslightlyonthedoorbeforeIenteredsothatWillwouldknowIwascoming.85)

‘Iwaswonderingifyouwantedmeto–’Ibegan.86)

Buttherewasnobodythere.87)

Theroomwasempty.88)

ItwasthenthatIheardthecrash.Iranoutintothecorridorjustintimetohearanother,followedbythesoundofsplintering(裂成碎片)glass.ItwascomingfromWill’sbedroom.OhGod,pleasedon’tlethimhavehurthimself.Ipanicked–MrsTraynor’swarningdrilledthroughmyhead.Ihadlefthimformorethanfifteenminutes.89)

Irandownthecorridor,slidtoahalt(暫停;停止)inthedoorwayandstood,bothhandsgripping(握緊，抓牢)thedoorframe.Willwasinthemiddleoftheroom,uprightinhischair,awalkingstickbalancedacrossthearmrests,sothatitjuttedeighteeninchestohisleft–ajoustingstick.Therewasnotasinglephotographleftonthelongshelves;theexpensiveframeslayinpiecesalloverthefloor,thecarpetstudded

(散布)withglitteringshards(尖利的碎片)ofglass.Hislapwasdustedwithbitsofglassandsplinteredwoodframes.Itookinthesceneofdestruction,feelingmyheartrateslowlysubside(減弱，平息)asIgraspedthathewasunhurt.Willwasbreathinghard,asifwhateverhehaddonehadcosthimsomeeffort.90)

Hischairturned,crunching(發(fā)嘎吱嘎吱聲)slightlyontheglass.Hiseyesmetmine.Theywereinfinitelyweary.Theydaredmetoofferhimsympathy.91)

Ilookeddownathislap,andthenattheflooraroundhim.IcouldjustmakeoutthepictureofhimandAlicia,herfacenowobscuredbyabentsilverframe,amongsttheothercasualties(

受害者;毀壞物).92)

Iswallowed,staringatit,andslowlyliftedmyeyestohis.ThosefewsecondswerethelongestIcouldremember.93)

‘Canthatthinggetapuncture(車胎等的刺孔;)?’Isaid,finally,noddingathiswheelchair.‘BecauseIhavenoideawhereIwouldputthejack(千斤頂).’94)

Hiseyeswidened.Justforamoment,IthoughtIhadreallyblownit.Butthefaintestflickerofasmilepassedacrosshisface.95)

‘Look,don’tmove,’Isaid.‘I’llgetthevacuumcleaner.’96)

Iheardthewalkingstickdroptothefloor.AsIlefttheroom,IthoughtImighthaveheardhimsaysorry.ReadingComprehension1.What’sWilllike,accordingtothe

descriptionofparagraph1?Howdidyouknow?Heseemedtogiveuphislife,wilted.Hefeltexhaustedanduncomfortable.Judgingfromthedescriptionofhisappearance(Isawthatheseemeddeterminednottolookanythinglikethemanhehadbeen;hehadlethislight-brownhairgrowintoashapelessmess,hisstubble(胡茬子)crawlacrosshisjaw.Hisgreyeyeswerelinedwithexhaustion,ortheeffectofconstantdiscomfortTheyborethehollowlookofsomeone),wecanvividlypictureWillinourmind.2.Whydoestheauthoruse“crawl”

inPara1?Canitbereplacedbyotherwordsorphrases?Thepersonificationofstubbleisquitepersuasiveandvivid.“

crawl”

suggeststhe

lengthoftimeandthesufferingfromthedisabilities.Willwerenotabletoandunwillingtofightagainsthisfateoreventokeephimselfneat.“

Crawl

across”literallyshowsthathisfacewascoveredwithorfullofstubble,buttosomeextent,itgrantsthereadersanunpleasantfeeling.【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】正確理解段落，并能體會(huì)第一段中關(guān)于外貌的細(xì)節(jié)描寫，刻畫出來人物性格特點(diǎn)，并能加以體會(huì)crawl用詞的精當(dāng)3.

What’sLousia’sattitudestowardsWillinthefirstcoupleofweeks?

AndhowaboutWill’sattitudestoLousia?Shefeltsorryandsympatheticforhim,butshealsohatedhim.

Andhewas

mean

andharshtoher.4.Canyougetthemeaningof

“vile”

inpara3accordingtothecontext?Bad;harsh;unacceptable可惡的；邪惡的【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】正確段落中的細(xì)節(jié)描寫，并能根據(jù)上下文推測(cè)詞義，把握主人公的情緒變化和心路歷程5.InPara5,whatkindsoftechniquesdidtheauthoradopttoshowLou’sunsatisfactionwiththepresentjob?Bycontrast:comparethefeelingswithherpreviousjob:shemissedheroldjob.Simileandexaggeration:

Thishouse,beautifulandexpensiveasitwas,wasasstillandsilentasamorgue.Repetition:

Sixmonths,Irepeatedundermybreath,whenitfeltunbearable.Sixmonths.【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】仔細(xì)研讀第五段，鑒賞文章運(yùn)用的技能和手法，尤其是修辭手法。長短句相結(jié)合，句子的多樣性和韻律感。最后一句的重復(fù)和短句，鏗鏘有力，的確能體會(huì)到女主對(duì)現(xiàn)在工作的難以忍受。比喻；夸張；對(duì)比和重復(fù)都是語言張力的很好表現(xiàn)手法。《遇見你之前》中男主威爾特雷納的一段話，看一次哭一次6.Canyouparaphrasethesentence:

“Isneakedalookathisvisitors”

inpara18?

I

lookedathisvisitorssecretlyor

I

glancedathisvisitorsfromthecornerofmyeyes.7.Whatdo

“I”

meanbysaying

…“whomakesmewonderifhumansreallyareallthesame

species”

inpara19?Louimpliesthat

by

comparison,Aliciawaselegantandleadsadelicateormaybeposhlifewhilesheherselfwasratherordinary,evenobscure.

Therewasagiantgapbetweenthem.【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】根據(jù)語境推測(cè)詞義，并能進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)確的解釋。文章的字面理解是基礎(chǔ)，文學(xué)著作的鑒賞