2020年1月浙江高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文試題解析

2020年1月浙江高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文試題解析01PartOne試題解讀假如你是李華，你校將舉辦外國(guó)學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。試題回顧思路點(diǎn)撥文體邀請(qǐng)信（郵件），要有完整的書信格式。發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)→說(shuō)明比賽信息→期待參加并預(yù)祝獲獎(jiǎng)內(nèi)容1.比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.比賽話題；3.報(bào)名方式語(yǔ)言這是一封熟人(朋友)間的信件，語(yǔ)言不必太客套。應(yīng)從讀者視角出發(fā)，遵循交際原則，以真摯、達(dá)意、簡(jiǎn)潔（Keen,Faithful,Concise)為佳。謀篇布局之開頭本題為熟人（朋友）之間的信件，故無(wú)需做自我介紹點(diǎn)明身份。從簡(jiǎn)明的角度出發(fā)，建議開頭段開門見(jiàn)山提出邀請(qǐng)。思考：I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechCompetitioninourschool.WhydoyouinviteGeorge?KnowingthatyouarequitefluentandexpertinMandarin,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechContest.Tip1:

次要點(diǎn)——George的優(yōu)勢(shì)（邀請(qǐng)George的原因）可以用非謂語(yǔ)做原因狀語(yǔ)的形式表現(xiàn)出來(lái)。謀篇布局之中段邀請(qǐng)信內(nèi)容時(shí)間(必備)報(bào)名方式（必備）獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)設(shè)置到某處報(bào)名或填寫報(bào)名表送到某處(郵箱或辦公室),需寫上截止時(shí)間。具體到某月某日或周幾的早中晚的某一時(shí)刻。參賽優(yōu)勢(shì)地點(diǎn)（必備）評(píng)委話題（必備）學(xué)校里適合大型集會(huì)的場(chǎng)所，如報(bào)告廳、禮堂、劇場(chǎng)等。中文演講賽，話題最好體現(xiàn)中國(guó)元素，如：我最喜愛(ài)的中國(guó)文化元素或我眼中的中國(guó)等?？蛇m當(dāng)舉例說(shuō)明話題的涵蓋面?？蓮呐d趣、性格、特長(zhǎng)等角度出發(fā)，適當(dāng)描述?？蛇m當(dāng)描述獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)、獎(jiǎng)品設(shè)置為體現(xiàn)比賽的規(guī)格和權(quán)威性，可適當(dāng)列舉評(píng)委陣容。謀篇布局之中段主要點(diǎn)的表達(dá)：1.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、話題ThetimeforthecontestisJanurary17thanditwillbeheldinthelecturehall.Thethemeforitis“MyFirstimpressiononChina”.Onthethemeof“FirstimpressiononChina”,thecompetitionisscheduledtobelaunchedintheschoolauditoriumat6p.m.onJanuary17th.Tip2:

以competition為主線，將時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)作為主要信息組成主句，將話題以介詞短語(yǔ)的形式表現(xiàn)出來(lái)。這個(gè)并列句中主、謂語(yǔ)均不一致，缺乏一貫而終的主線，句子只是“貌合神離”。主-系-表結(jié)構(gòu)的簡(jiǎn)單句給人以“回答問(wèn)題”的感覺(jué)，缺乏情感。Howtocombinetheinformation?謀篇布局之中段主要點(diǎn)的表達(dá)：2.報(bào)名方式Ifyouareinterested,pleasefeelfreetosignupforitbyEmail.Tip3:根據(jù)過(guò)往經(jīng)歷和生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)，從讀者視角出發(fā)，適當(dāng)增加必要的細(xì)節(jié)。如果George害怕失敗而不敢參賽，你將如何鼓勵(lì)他？

Yourabundantexperienceandoutstandingpresentationskillswillallowyoutowinoutinthecontest.郵件的具體地址是什么？報(bào)名的截止時(shí)間是什么？表明George的參賽優(yōu)勢(shì)和獲獎(jiǎng)可能，增強(qiáng)他參賽的信心和勇氣。Soifyou’reinterested,pleasesignupforitontheschoolwebsite(fileyourapplicationviaChinesecontest@)beforeJanuary15th.謀篇布局之結(jié)尾本題屬于朋友間建議性質(zhì)的邀請(qǐng)，故無(wú)需要求對(duì)方回復(fù)。為彰顯誠(chéng)意，可在結(jié)尾段表明期待參加，并可提前預(yù)祝對(duì)方取得好成績(jī)。常用句式：Yourpresenceishighlyanticipated.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.這封信是否需要回復(fù)？朋友之間需要如此客套嗎？Lookingforwardtoyourinvolvement.Wishyouagreatsuccess!Tip4:遣詞造句應(yīng)從適切性角度出發(fā)，根據(jù)與寫信對(duì)象的親疏程度選擇與之相適應(yīng)的語(yǔ)言，切忌生搬硬套模板句。02PartTwo下水作文賞析DearGeorge,KnowingthatyouarequitefluentandexpertinMandarin(普通話),I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechContesttobeheld.

Onthethemeof“FirstimpressiononChina”,thecompetitionisscheduledtobelaunchedintheschoolauditorium

onJanuary17that6p.m.Undoubtedly,yourabundantexperienceandoutstandingpresentationskillswillallowyoutowinoutinthecontest.Soifyou’reinterested,pleasesignupforitontheschoolwebsitebeforeJanuary15th. Lookingforwardtoyourinvolvement.Wishyouagreatsuccess!Yours,LiHua(90words)KeenFaithfulConcise03PartThree備考資源同體裁同話題備考資源DearJack,IamLiHua.OnbehalfofStudentUnion,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeoftheEnglishSpeechContesttobeheldnextFridayinourauditorium/schoolhall.

Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlastabouttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeechesonthegiventopic“Doingthingsrightordoingrightthings”.Withyourattendanceandpreciouscomments,itisboundtobeagreatsuccess.

Itcouldn'tbebetterifyoucouldofferussomevaluableadviceonlearningEnglishattheendoftheactivity.

Yourattendanceisgreatlyexpected.Pleaseinformyourpresenceatyourearliestconvenience.