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llcherｉshthewordsoｆherthrougｈｍｙlｉｆe.Iwilltrytｏfａｃｅthedｉfficｕltiｅsｉnｍｙlｉfewｉthouｔｈesitａt(yī)ｉon.Thａt(yī)’stheｂｅstwayｔoreturｎherｌove.（11/171ｗoｒds)Todaｙiｓteaｃher’ｓday．Iwaｎｔtogivｅbｅｓtwisheｓtｏmyteacｈers，whoaｓsisｔmetolearｎanｄwhoｓhapetheｗorldtome.Ｉremeｍbｅriｔwａsｉｎ２023，Iwoｕldhａvetheｃhｅmiｓｔrｙｏｌiｍpｉcｃompetｉtioｎfoｒｈighscｈoolstudents．Astｈeonlyonegiｒlinmｙclass，Ｉdidｎ’ｔｈaveｃonfidｅncetｏcｏmpetewithmyboycｌａssｍａt(yī)ｅs.Ｍr.Ｗangｗhowasｍycｌaｓｓmａｓteralwａｙｓｅncｏｕragedme:“ｒｅmembｅrｇirlscandoａｌlthｉngswhatｂoyscando.”Ｂesｉdes,ｈeheｌpedｍｅwｉｔhｍyｓtudies．EｖenduｒiｎgtｈewinterｖacatｉonwｅcouldｄosomeinteｒｅstingsmallｅｘｐｅrimｅntsaｔMｒ.Wang’shome．Whathemａdeusknｏwｎarenｏtoｎlysomedifｆiculｔｑuestionsbuｔａlsothｅcorｅforsｃiｅnce，tｈｅｌoveforsｃiｅｎｃｅandtｈeｃouragetothiｎkandtoaskqｕeｓtｉoｎs.Iｎberief，Mr.Wａngmadeuseｎjoysciｅnｃeratherthaｎwｏrｋjｕsttowｉnｔhegaｍe.TodaｙＩａｍstudyinginunｉveｒsitｙ.I’lｌalwａyｓreｍeｍｂｅｒwhatMｒ．Ｗangｔａugｈｔuｓ，Iwiｌlworkhａrdoｎmystｕdiｅsａndreｍｉndmｙselｆｔoｗorkfｏrthebｅneｆitｏfhumanｓ.(8/17９wordｓ)TodaｙｉｓTｅacｈer’sDay.HappyＴeａcher’ｓＤａy,ｍyｔｅacｈeｒｓ．Inｔheeveｎｉng,alｌoｆmyclassｍatesａｎdImaｋeaｐartｙｆorourteachers.Intheparty，ｅachoｆuｓgiｖepｒｅreｎtstotｅachｅrsanｄｈopethｅmｆeｅｌiｎghａｐpyandhｅaｔhy.Ｔhen,teaｃhersａｎｄｕｓｐlaytogetｈｅr．Ａlｌofusfｅelｖeryｈappｙ.IaｌsoremｅｍbeｒwhenIｗasiｎｍyｍidschool,myＥｎglｉｓhteａｃherｈelｐｍetostｕdyEｎgｌisｈ.Aｔｔｈattime,ｍｙEngｌishisveryveryｐoor.AｌthouｇｈＩstudieditdayanｄｎiｇhｔ,itseeｍｅdwortherandworthｉer，TｈenmyＥnｇlishteacheｒtｏldmethatthｅwaｙIstudyingisworrｙ.Hｅtｏlｄmetｈｅrightｗayaｎdhelpmefｒienｄlｙeｖｅryday.Withｈｉshｅｌp,ｍｙＥnglisｈbecamebetterandbetteｒ．Teachersａrealsofriendsforuｓ.IthinｋImuststudyhardｔoｒepaｙmyｔeacheｒ.（5／1３９wｏrds)Tｅａｃher’sDay.HappｙDay.Ihｏpeteａｃｈesfeelluｃk.Iｂｅｌieveitisｔimｅwｅelevaｔedｔhｅteachetothespａceｗhereitbeloｎgs,tｈerebyｓettinganｅxaｍplｅtoｔhepeopｌetoｔhｅteacher’sattiｔude.Rｅmembｅｒ，whenIwasayoungboy,Iamａoutraｇeｏusｂoｙ.Ｉｎtｈecｌasｓｒoｏm,Ｉｈavebeeｎｏｂseｒｖedtoｔhrｏwsｏmｅthｉngacrosstheｃoｕrｔwithoutcｏnｓiｄesucｈａｍoveｍighｔhaveanｇryｓomeｏneinｔheirｓeat.Therｅfor，myteaｃｈerＭr.Lｉaｌwayssmaｉｌeｄtoｍｅ.sheoffｅｎtａlｋｔomｅ．youlikeatｈleｔｉc,liｋeJｏdａｎ.Ｉｆｅledｈａppy.Sｈeｔaｌlmewhenclassisovｅr,Doｎ’tｄoitinclaｓs．Wecaｎpｌａｙtogｈtewhｅnoｕｒclａssｉsｏver.Notsojuｓt,Isｏmetiｍestｈrowsomethingatsomｅone,yet.But，Iｃanrememｂermytheａcher’ｓwoｒds．Don’tdｏit！Iｓthereenoｕghheｌpｓｔoｈelｐsｅcｕreｍefuｔure?Icertａinｌyｔhinkso．Tｈａnks，teａｃher.Tｈｅacheｒ,ｙoｕmaysｏonseeandpｏssｉlyｆeeｌdｉffｅrenｃeinｙｏuｒｅaｃtioｎI(lǐng)ａmgｏiｎgtｏａt(yī)eachetｏhelpｓｏmeｓtudenｔsliｋeme.Aｃｔuaｌly,Iwillｂecomestudeｎt’sｇoodfｒeindｓ.(2／１８1ｗordｓ)2023.01ShｏuldｔheUｎivｅｓｉtyCampusBeＯｐｅｎtoTouristｓ?Unｉversitycampｕsｅｓ，especiallｙthoｓeoｆtｈeｒｅｎｏwｎedunｉｖeｒsｉtｉeｓ,haveｒecｅｎtlybecometheｎewｔoｕrｉｓｔaｔtｒaｃtions.Prosandcoｎｓhaｖebｅｅnputfoｒwardcoｎcerniｎgｔhisｎｅｗphenｏmｅnｏn.Ｓｏmｅpeopleａｒequｉｔeinfavourｏfthｅｃaｍpus’opｅｎingｔotoｕｒistｓwhiｌeothersarｅoppoｓedtoiｔ.Tｈeopeｎinｇoｆcａｍpuswｉｌlｓtiｍulａt(yī)etｈetoｕriｓtｉnｄｕstry,ｂutｔheeasｉeｒaccesstocampusｗillleaｄtosｏmｅａccidentsorsaｆｅtｙprobｌemsｗｈiｃhwiｌlinterfｅｒeinｓｔuｄｅｎts’ｌife.Iｎmyoｐiniｏn，campusescanbeoｐentotouriｓtsoncｅａｗeｅｋ,ｓａy，onＳaturｄayorSuｎdａy.Thissuggｅｓtion,Ibｅliｅｖe,isｑuitｅfｅasｉbleｂeｃauseitcouｌdkilｌtwobirdswitｈonestoｎe.Ｆorｏnｅthiｎg，cａmpｕsｅscoｕldａｔｔrａcｔmaｎytourisｔｓonｗeekeｎdｓ,ｔhusboosｔingthetourｉsm.Ｆorａnothｅr,restｒiｃtｅdopeｎiｎgｏfｃａmｐusｗillbｅneficｉaｌlynarｒoｗthegapbetｗｅenｃampusesａnｄtheoｕtsidｅwoｒld.Furthermore,thiswｉllalsoatｔractmoｒｅｐｕbｌiｃａt(yī)ｔenｔｉｏnandｂuildａgrｅatreｐutaｔｉoｎfoｒtheuｎiｖｅｒsity.Nowadayｓ,ｕｎiversitｙcａｍｐusesａrebecoｍｉngｍoreandｍｏreatｔｒacｔiｖｅfortoｕriｓtsａllarouｎdthｅworld.Amｏngthoseuniversities,manyｈaveaｌonghistoｒy.Peｏｐlｅwoulｄｌovetotｒａveｌarｏundintｈeｃaｍpus,ｅｎjoyｉngｔheｈistoｒicｌanｄscaｐｅｔhere．Asａｒesult，ｗetheｒｔheunｉversitycaｍpｕsshouldbeoｐｅｎｔoｔouｒistｓcａllｓforourａt(yī)tentiｏn．Soｍepeoplｅｔｈinkthａｔitsｈould.“Ｂｅｃａuｓeuniversitiesａrethepｒopertｙofeｖeryone,ａｎdit’sｇoｏdforustoｗalｋaroｕｎdanｄｅnjoｙｔheatｍosｐherｅｏflｅａｒniｎｇ,”theymaysaｙ.Ｈｏwever，oｔｈersholdanｏpposｉｔeoｐinion．Ｔｈｅyｆeelthatuｎiveｒsitystｕdｅnｔsmaybedｉstｕrｂeｄandtoｏmanｙtｒavelerssｏｍhowleadstoｄiｓordｅｒ.Inmyopｉniｏｎ,touristｓｍａｙcｏmeｉｎｔoｔｈｅuｎivｅrsｉｔycａmpusonconditionthａt(yī)theｎｕmbｅrｏftheｍisconｔroｌeｄ．It’struethaｔunｉversｉtyisourownｆortune,andａｔthｅsａmetimeｗeｓhoulｄthiｎkｍorefortｈeｓtｕdeｎtswhoｎｅeｄpeaceｆorｓｔｕdy.Atpresent，moreandmoreuniversitｙcａmpusaｒebeingｏpｅｎtｏtourｉsts.Ｐayiｎgavisｉｔtotｈｅｕｎiversiｔyisbecｏminｇanｅwkｉｎdofｔｒavelｉng.Meanｗhilｅ,itｈaｓatｔracｔｅｄｐeople’satteｎtion.Ｏｆcｏｕrse,ｄｉffｅｒentpｅrsonhａsｄifferentｉdｅatｏitwｈethertheunivｅｒｓｉtｙcamｐusshoｕlｄbｅopeｎｔｏｔｈesｏciety．Somｅpeopｌｅtｈｉｎkthattheuniverｓｉtyiｓａplaceｆｏrｓtｕｄentstｏstudy,notaplacefortourｉstsｔovisit，tｈeothｅｒpeoｐlｅagreｅtｈattheuniversｉtyisaplacetobewoｒthvisiｔing.What’sｍｏre,theyｃaｎｆeeｌtｈatthiｃkandacaｄemicａｔmospheｒe．Inmypersoｎaｌopiｎion,thｅuniveｒsｉtｙcampｕssｈoulｄn’tbeｏpentotouｒｉｓｔs.Juｓｔasasａyｉngｇoeｓ，tｈｅｕｎiverｉｓtyiｓwhｅrｅthestuｄentsmaｋeaｄeｅｐｓtudy.Ｉfthecaｍpｕｓbeoｐentotｏｕrists,stｕdentsｍaｙbｅaｂsenｃeofmindｉnstuｄｙ.Ｓo,inmymiｎd，ｔheuｎｖersitycampushadbetternotbeoｐentoｔhｅsｏｃｉety.Therearemｏｒeａndmorefaｍousunｉvｅrsitｙcampuｓbecｏmingｉntereｓtplacｅsthatｐeopleeagerａbouttｏvｉsit.Wｉththiｓsituａiｏn,tｈeprobｌemthawhetｈｅrtｈeuniversｉtycaｍpｕsｓｈoulｄ