專題01-7感謝信-2023屆新高考英語寫作精講寫作模板(教案)

專題01-7感謝信——2023屆新高考英語寫作精講+寫作模板【典題解讀】(2021年6月·浙江卷)假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學習英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家，請給他寫一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.回憶Alex對你的幫助；3.臨別祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAlex,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【解讀】這是一篇應用文寫作之感謝信。要求考生給Alex寫一封郵件以表示對他在“你〞英語學習方面所給的幫助表示感謝。題干除了把寫信的緣由交代清楚了(在Alex即將返回自己的國家之際，對他所給的幫助表示衷心的感謝)，其他只給了籠統(tǒng)的提示，需要考生圍繞“回憶Alex對你的幫助〞去展開。展開時必須要緊緊扣住“經(jīng)常幫助你學習英語〞這個話題(在哪些方面給了你實實在在的幫助，在他的幫助下/指導下，你所取得的成績等等，或者用虛擬語氣“withoutyourhelp/butforyourhelp/guidance,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogressinEnglish.〞開啟話題)。【答案】DearAlex,Learningthatyou’releavingfortheUnitedStatessoon,I’meagerlywritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourhelp.Honestlyspeaking,it’ssoniceofyoutooffermeaclassofpracticallearningskills.Underyourprofessionalguidance,IhavemadesuchunbelievableprogressinEnglish.It’sindeedapleasantsurpriseformetoevenrankfirstinarecentEnglishspeechcontest.WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youalwayscheermeupandhelpmeout,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmforEnglishandpromotesmetoregaintremendousconfidence.NowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam.Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours,LiHua附錄：中間段另外兩種表達1.Tobefrank,withoutyourhelp,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogressinmyEnglish.Itwasyourpatientinstructionsthatenabledmetocommunicatewithforeignersfluently.Apartfromthat,notonlydidmyEnglishlevelimprove,butIalsohadabetter

understandingofEnglishculture,whichisbeneficialtomyEnglishlearning.WhatcountsmostwasthatyoutaughtmehowtokeepcalmandoptimisticwhenIwasfacedwiththedifficulties.IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.2.InthelatestEnglishexamination,Igotthefirstplaceinmyclass.Franklyspeaking,butforyourhelp,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchprogressinEnglish.WheneverImetdifficulties,youalwayscheeredmeupandhelpedmeout.What’smore,itwasyourloveandsupportthatgotmethroughthehardtimes.【寫作點撥】感謝信是重要的禮儀文書，是向幫助、關心、支持、饋贈、款待過自己的集(群)體或個人表示感謝的書信，或者是對人家寫給你的慰問信、祝賀信回復的信件。一般來說，高考應用文感謝信的題干對“由于什么事情要給對方表示謝意〞交代得比擬具體，但是對事情具體細節(jié)題干提示得既簡單又籠統(tǒng)，因此，考生在寫作時要特別注意圍繞題干所給的要求增加具體內(nèi)容，以使行文連貫，力求符合題目所規(guī)定的字數(shù)要求。第一段：(問好、介紹自己)。由于什么事情要給對方表達謝意；第二段：細述對方給予的幫助并發(fā)表感想或表示贊賞；第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達回報對方的愿望?！境Ｓ盟夭摹縃ow’severythinggoing?Iamwritingthesefewlinestoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyoufor...您最近好嗎？我寫下這寥寥幾行是為了表達我對您……發(fā)自內(nèi)心的感謝之情。I’mwritingtoconveymysinceregratitudefor...我寫信是為了表達我對……的衷心感謝。Iwouldliketoconveymythankstoyouforyourkindhelp.我想感謝你的幫助。Forthisreason,Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysincerethankstoyou.為此，我寫這封信是為了表達我對你真誠的感謝。I’mwritingtothankyouforthefewwonderfuldaysin...我寫信感謝你幫我在……度過的快樂日子。Iwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfelt/sincere/earnestthanks/gratitudetoyouforyour...在這封信中，我要對您的……表示衷心的/真誠的/誠摯的感謝。Havingbeenthoroughlyimpressedwith...Ihavereceived,Iwouldliketoextendmysinceregratitude/thankstoyouforyour...我對收到的……留下了深刻的印象，謹對您的……向您表示衷心的感謝。Thankyouverymuchforthe...yousentme.It’soneofthemostwonderful...Ihaveevergot.非常感謝您給我寄來的……。這是我收到的最好的……之一。Iamwritingtoconvey/extendmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourkindhelpduringmystay...,withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyedmyself.我寫這封信是為了表達我衷心的感謝，感謝您在我逗留……期間給予我的幫助，沒有您的幫助，我就不會玩得那么開心的。Ifithadn’tnotbeenfor/haditnotbeenfor/butfor/withoutyourassistancein...,IfearthatIwouldhavebeen/done...如果不是因為/不是因為/沒有你在……方面的幫助，恐怕我就會……Imadegreatprogresswithyourhelp,withoutwhichIcouldn’thavegotthefirstprize.在你的幫助下，我取得了很大的進步，沒有你的幫助，我不可能得到一等獎。It’sconsiderateofyoutodo...formeandIdoappreciateitmorethanIcansay.您為我做……真是體貼，我真的非常感謝你。Iwouldliketothankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforallthatyouhavedoneforme.我要衷心感謝您為我所做的一切。Itwaskindandgenerousofyoutodothisforme,andIappreciateitmorethanIcansay.您對我如此的友好和慷慨，我真是感謝不盡。WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youofferedmegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidance.每當我遇到困難時，你都給了我慷慨的幫助和不斷的指導。Tobeginwith,itwasyouwho...carefullyandpatiently.首先，是你認真耐心地……What’smore,Istillrememberthedaywhen...而且，我還記得……的那一天。Eventually,withyourhelp,Imadeit.最后，在你的幫助下，我成功了。Iwishtherewereabetterwordthan“thanks〞toexpressmyappreciationforyourgeneroushelp.任何語言都不能表達我對您慷慨幫助的真摯謝意。WheneverIlookback,Ijustcan’thelpthinkingofyou.每當我回首往事，我就忍不住想起你。Itwassokindofyouto...你……，真是太好了。Nothingwillbeabletoerasemywonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.沒有什么能抹去我美好的回憶，我將永遠珍惜它們。Thankyouagainforyourgeneroushelp.再次感謝你的慷慨幫助。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmysincerethanks.如果你能接受我誠摯的感謝，我將不勝感謝。Yourkindnessandhelpwillalwaysberemembered.我將永遠銘記你的善意和幫助。Thankstoyourgeneroushelp,Ihavemadesuchgreatprogress.多虧你的慷慨幫助，我真是感謝不盡。Itwaskindandgenerousofyoutodothisforme,andIappreciateitmorethanIcansay.你對我如此友好和慷慨，我真是感謝不盡。Iwishtherewereabetterwordthan“thanks〞toexpressmyappreciateforyourgeneroushelp.我希望有比“謝謝〞更好的詞能表達我對你慷慨幫助的真摯謝意。Thanksalotforyourassistanceagain.Givemybestregardstoyourfamily.再次感謝您的幫助。代我向你的家人問好。IsincerelyhopeyoucancometoChinaforavisitwhenit’sconvenienttoyouandIwillbeyourguide.我真誠地希望你能在方便的時候來中國參觀，我做您的向?qū)А！灸０鍢?gòu)建】模板一Dear_______,(Howareyoudoing?/Howiseverythinggoing?/Howaboutyourlife/study/work?)I’mwritingtoconvey/expressmyheartfelt/sinceregratitudetoyoufor/thanksforyour_______(感謝的緣由).Undoubtedly,ifithadn’tnotbeenfor/haditnotbeenfor/butfor/withoutyourassistancein_________(對方給予你某方面的幫助),IfearthatIwouldhavebeen/done_________(后果).WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youofferedmegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidance.Tobeginwith,itwasyouwho________(幫助1).Besides,________(幫助2).What’smore,Istillrememberthedaywhen/neverIwillforgetyour_______(幫助3).I’mmorethangratefulforwhatyouhavedoneformeagain/Thanksalotforyourassistance/help/kindnessagain.Wishyouhappinessandgoodhealth/Wishyouallthebest/Givemybestregardsto_______(何人何方)!

Yours,LiHua【模板運用】一(改編自2022·全國高三專題練)假定你是李華，上周六你的英國好友Eric教你如何創(chuàng)立個人網(wǎng)站，你從中學到很多知識。請你給他寫一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.簡述Eric給予你的幫助；3.再次表示感謝并向他的家人問好。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為100左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearEric,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

Li

Hua【答案】DearEric,I’mwritingtoconveymysinceregratitudeforhelpingmecreateapersonalwebsitelastSaturday.Undoubtedly,haditnotbeenforyourassistanceinfurnishingmewithprofessionalguidance,IfearthatIwouldnothavecreatedmyownpersonalwebsite.WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youofferedmegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidance.Tobeginwith,itwasyouwhoexplainedrelevantknowledgetomecarefullyandpatiently.Besides,youtaughtmethestepsofcreatingapersonalwebsiteindetail.What’smore,Istillrememberthedaywhenyouencouragemenottogiveup.Eventually,withyourhelp,Imadeit.Thanksalotforyourassistanceagain.Givemybestregardstoyourfamily.Yours,

Li

Hua模板二Dear_______,(Howareyoudoing?/Howiseverythinggoing?/Howaboutyourlife/study/work?)Iamwritingthisletter/thesefewlinestoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude/thankstoyoufor_______(感謝的緣由).WhenIlookback,Ijustcan’thelpthinkingofyou/whatyouhavedoneforme.Itwassokindofyouto________(幫助1).Besides,you________(幫助2),whichreallysurprisedme/whichmademelesshomesick/Besides,Ihavetotosinghighpraisefor/speakhighlyof________(幫助2),whichwasjustlike_______(做類比).What’smore,Ishallalwaysremember________(幫助3).Nothingwillbeabletoerasemywonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.Isincerelyhopeyoucancometo_______(何地)foravisitwhenit’sconvenienttoyouandIwillbeyourguide.Yours,LiHua【模板運用】二(改編自2022·湖南寧鄉(xiāng)市教育研究中心模擬預測)假設你叫李華，暑假期間在倫敦旅行時借住在你媽媽的朋友布朗夫人家。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封電子郵件表示對她的感謝，并邀請她來中國。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMrs.Brown,How’severythinggoing?IamwritingthesefewlinestoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourwarmhospitalitywhenIstayedinSydney.WheneverIlookback,Ijustcan’thelpthinkingofyou.ItwassokindofyoutooffermeacomfortableandcleanroominyourhousewhenIwasinLondon.Besides,youcookedmesomedeliciousfood,whichmademelesshomesick.What’smore,IreallyappreciatedyourpracticingoralEnglishwithme,whichhelpedmemakesuchrapidprogressinmyspokenEnglish.Nothingwillbeabletoerasemywonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.IsincerelyhopeyoucancometoChinaforavisitwhenit’sconvenienttoyouandIwillbeyourguide.Yours,LiHua【寫作實踐】一(改編自2022·安徽安慶一中三模)假設你是李華，高三生活即將結(jié)束，跟同學、老師相處多年，友情彌足珍貴，請你給你最喜歡的同學或者老師寫一封信。內(nèi)容如下：1.寫信目的；2.你們之間難忘的事情；3.再次表示感謝與表達良好的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，文中不要出現(xiàn)真實的人名或地名。2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMs.Zhang,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMs.Zhang,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforhelpingmesuccessfullypassthecollegeentranceexamination.Undoubtedly,butforyourassistanceinmystudy,IfearthatIwouldn’thavebeensuccessful.WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youofferedmegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidance.Tobeginwith,itwasyou,asmybelovedheadteacher,whohelpedmeadapttothestudylifeofseniorthreeassoonaspossible.Besides,whenIwasatalossafterIfailedinoneexmination,youcomfortedmeanddiscussedwithmethereasonsformyfailingintheexam.What’smore,neverwillIforgetyourprofessionalguidanceonmyEnglishstudy.I’mmorethangratefulforwhatyouhavedoneforme.Wishyouhappinessandgoodhealth.Yours,LiHua【寫作實踐】二(改編自2022·天津經(jīng)濟技術開發(fā)區(qū)一中)假設你叫李華，在美國學習期間，吃住在一戶美國人家里，現(xiàn)在馬上就要學成回國，臨走前你給你的房東Mrs.Jones寫封感謝信，