戶外遇險(xiǎn) 2023年名校真題讀后續(xù)寫話題分類寫作指導(dǎo)與訓(xùn)練

讀后續(xù)寫話題寫作戶外遇險(xiǎn)（2023春·湖北·高三校聯(lián)考開學(xué)考試）WhenAidenaskedmetoaccompanyhimonacampingtriptothemountains,Ienvisionedalogcabinwithacracklingfireplace,hotcocoa,andbunkbeds.Imaginehowmyrustic,yetcomfortableimageofcampingbecameanightmarewhenAidenandhisolderbrother,Lebron,showedupwithatruckfilledwithcampingsupplies-tents,rolled-upsleepingbags,andcanteens!Ididpackabackpack,asinstructed,butIhadnoideaweweregoingonsurvivaltraining!Lebron,eversoefficient,hadascheduletokeep,andhehurriedmetogetinsowecouldleavethecityhustleandbustlebehindus.Ahead,themountainsloomedbiggerthanIhadrememberedthem;thetreeswerelarger,andtheenvironmentwasmuchmoredangerous.Atleasttheweatherwasamazing—cotton-candycloudsdottedthedeepbluesky.Atthetrailhead,LebronstrappedasleepingbagontomypackandlecturedAidenandmeabouthikingetiquette.Thefirstpartofthetraillookedmorelikeawoodedroadthatledupthemountainsthanahikingpath.Soon,thepathbecamenarrowerandsteeper,forcingmetofocusonthetaskathandandtotalkless.Aswegainedelevation,wemovedabovethetreeline,andIcouldseethetrailzigzaggingupthemountain.“Itlookscloserthanitis,”Lebronsaid,readingmyfacialcues.“Thisisthemostdifficultpart…watchthetrail,nottheview.Looserocksandtreerootsmakethetraildangerous,andwehavenoshade.”Finally,wereachedthesummit.Mylegsaching,Idroppedmypackandgroaned.“Notimetorest,”Lebronsaid,lookingupatthesky.Theweatherhadbeenwarmallday,anditfeltgoodtorelaxinthecoolbreeze.“Theweatherupherechangesquickly,andthatcoolairmeansastormisbrewing.Weneedtosetupcamp.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Ithoughthewaskidding,butLebronwasquiteserious._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justasquicklyasthestormcamerushingin,itstopped,allowingustoexitthetent._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023春·湖北·高三校聯(lián)考開學(xué)考試）作者跟著艾登和他的哥哥勒布朗一起去露營(yíng)冒險(xiǎn)，一路艱辛，最終到達(dá)了山頂，就在作者想要放松休息一下時(shí)，勒布朗卻告訴她冷空氣意味著風(fēng)暴正在醞釀。他們需要馬上搭帳篷。Ithoughthewaskidding,butLebronwasquiteserious.Justasquicklyasthestormcamerushingin,itstopped,allowingustoexitthetent.________________________________________開始搭帳篷——帳篷里躲雨——欣賞雨后美景——感慨萬(wàn)千Ithoughthewaskidding,butLebronwasquiteserious.___________________________________________________________________________________________Justasquicklyasthestormcamerushingin,itstopped,allowingustoexitthetent._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我以為他在開玩笑，但勒布朗是認(rèn)真的。就像暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)的一樣快，它停了，讓我們可以離開帳篷。描寫他們開始搭帳篷和暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)臨后的事情。描寫暴風(fēng)雨停息后作者所見所想。Ithoughthewaskidding,butLebronwasquiteserious.HeandAidenworkedexpertly,whileIstoodaroundandpretendedtohelp,thunderrumblinginthedistance.Wesetupnearaboulderoutcropping,butthewind,thunder,andlightningwererelentless.Asthestormrolledinwithavengeance,wetookcoverinside.Lebron,sensingthatIwasscared,reachedinhisbackpackforsomecrackersandpeanutbutter.Slowly,butmethodically,hespreadthepeanutbutterandtoldstoriesabouthiscampingadventures.Eachtimelightninglitupthetentandthethunderechoed,Icringed.“Thisisjustatypicalsummerstorm—they’reshortlived,butintense,”Lebronstated.“Thecampsitemightgetabitmuddy,butwhat’sthefunincampingifyoucan’tgetdirty!Atleasttherainwillkeepthebearsaway,”hesaidwithasmile.Justasquicklyasthestormcamerushingin,itstopped,allowingustoexitthetent.Theviewwasstunning—Icouldseeformiles,andtherainleftafreshscentofpineandanearthysmellofsoil.Asdarknesssetin,lmarveledatthemultitudeofstarsinthenightsky.Iwon’tlie—Iwasyearningforahotshowerandasoftbed,butasIgazedupwardattheMilkyWay,IknewthiswasanadventureIwouldneverforget.（2023秋·河北邢臺(tái)·高三邢臺(tái)市第二中學(xué)?？计谀㎡nJune4th,myfamilyandIdecidedtogowhite-waterrafting(激浪漂流)downtheNantahalaRiverinWesternNorthCarolina.Itwasaperfectdaytobeoutonthewater.Myfatherthoughtthatwecouldalldealwithanewsituation,sohedecidedtobringustogowithoutaguideatthisnew,hardcourse.MymomandIwereupsetbymydad’sdecision,butmybrotherwaspleasedwithit.So,wehadtoagreewiththem.Wegotlifejackets,ourraftandpaddlesthatwereusedtorowit,andthentookabustothedroppointwherewecarriedtherafttotheicycoldwater.Havingfinishedthetraining,wewereonourownwhite-waterrafting.

Withinthefirsthour,wegotstuckontworocks.Anotherrafthadtohitourstogetusofftherocks.Afterabouttwohours,wesawahugerockontherightsideoftheriver.Itwascomingoutofthewaterabouttenfeethighandaboutfifteenfeetwide.Somehow,weendedupontopofthisrock.Afteraboutaminute,waterstartedrushinginwheremybrotherwassitting.Whenhestartedfallingintothewater,Itriedtopullhimback.Unfortunately,wefellofftogether.Mymotherjumpedinafterus,butshecouldonlygettomybrotherbecausehewascloserthanIwas.Mydadjumpedoutandranupthebankoftherivertogettotheroad,sohecouldseewhereIwas.Iwaspickedupafterabouttwominutesbyastrangerinanotherraftandwasheadingdowntherivertowardalittlerestingspot.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。IkeptcryingbecauseIwassofrightenedandworriedaboutmyfamily.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Oneoftheguidesforanotherrafttoldusthattherewasanearlierplacewecouldgetout._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023秋·河北邢臺(tái)·高三邢臺(tái)市第二中學(xué)?？计谀┳髡咭患胰似鞯慕?jīng)歷，因?yàn)閮尚值苈渌斐闪肆钊撕ε碌捏w驗(yàn)，因此作者決定不再漂流。

IkeptcryingbecauseIwassofrightenedandworriedaboutmyfamily.Oneoftheguidesforanotherrafttoldusthattherewasanearlierplacewecouldgetout.因擔(dān)心家人而一直哭→家人被救→決定繼續(xù)漂流至終點(diǎn)→導(dǎo)游提供一個(gè)更近的終點(diǎn)→錯(cuò)過(guò)了更近的終點(diǎn)→最終到達(dá)目的地→決定以后不再漂流。

IkeptcryingbecauseIwassofrightenedandworriedaboutmyfamily.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Oneoftheguidesforanotherrafttoldusthattherewasanearlierplacewecouldgetout.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我一直在哭，因?yàn)槲液ε?，且?dān)心我的家人。另一個(gè)筏上的導(dǎo)游告訴我們，有一個(gè)能早點(diǎn)出去的地方。作者的家人被救了，然后決定繼續(xù)漂流至終點(diǎn)。四個(gè)人只有兩只槳，因此將會(huì)花很長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間到達(dá)終點(diǎn)。導(dǎo)游告訴了我們一個(gè)可以早點(diǎn)結(jié)束漂流的地方，但我們卻錯(cuò)過(guò)了，只能硬著頭皮繼續(xù)前進(jìn)。

IkeptcryingbecauseIwassofrightenedandworriedaboutmyfamily.Thankfully,theyweresavedbyanothertworafts,andeveryonewasfine,justalittlefrightenedandverycold.Atthelittletestingspot,wehadashortrestandthendecidedtocontinuetherafting.Whenwegotbackinourraft,wehadonlytwopaddlestoleaveforusfourpeople.Weallknewthatitwasgoingtotakeaverylongtimetogettotheend.Oneoftheguidesforanotherrafttoldusthattherewasanearlierplacewecouldgetout.Soweplannedtogetoutfromtheplace.Butunfortunately,wemissedtheexitandheadeddowntotheendingpoint.Wehadtriedourbesttoavoidfallingintotheriver,andseveraltimeswenarrowlyescaped.Anyway,wefinallygottotheendingpoint.Wegotoutofthewater,wetandcold.Iwon’traftagainbecauseofthisterribleexperience.Allofthishappenedbecausemydaddidn’thireaguide.（2023秋·江蘇南通·高三統(tǒng)考期末）PamBaleslefthercarandsteppedontothesnow-coveredJewellTrail.Sheplannedasix-hourhikethroughNewHampshire’sMountWashingtonStatePark.ThehikeupthelowerpartofJewellwaspleasant.At8:30am,stillbelowthetreeline,shetookthefirstinaseriesofon-the-trailselfies.Lessthananhourlater,shetookanotherphoto,aftershe’dclimbedintocolderairanddeepersnows.Shemadeherwayacrossthesnow-coveredridgetowardMountWashington.Thenshenoticedsomething:asinglesetoffootprintsinthesnowaheadofher.She’dbeenfollowingfainttracksalldayandhadn’tgiventhemmuchthought,becausesomanypeopleclimbJewellTrail.Butthese,sherealized,hadbeenmadebyapairoftrainers,notsuitableforhikingonsnow.By11am,Baleswasgettingcoldanddecidedtoabandonherplan.TheonlythingkeepingBalesonGulfsideTrailwasthetrainertracksinthesonw.Asshefoughtthewindandheavysleet(雨夾雪),thetracksmadeahardleft-handturnoffthetrail.Nowshealarmed.ShewassurethehikercouldgetthroughintheowvisibilityandwasheadingstraighttowardthechallengingtrailsoftheGreatGulfWilderness.Balesstoodthere,stunned.Thetemperatureandcloudswereinaracetofindtheirlowestpoint,anddarknesswasmerehoursaway.Sheturnedtotheleftandcalledout,“Hello!”intothefrozenfog.Nothing.Shecalledoutagain:“Isanybodyoutthere?Doyouneedhelp?”Thestrongwesterlywindscarriedhervoiceaway.Sheblewintoherrescuewhistle.Forafleetingmomentshethoughtsheheardsomeonereply,butitwasjustthewindplayinggameswithhermind.Shestoodlistening,thenturnedandwalkedcautiouslyinthedirectionofthesinglesetoftracks.Balesfollowedthetrackscautiouslyfor20to30meters.Sheroundedaslightcornerandsawamansittingmotionless.注意：(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;

(2)開頭已給出。Whensheapproachedhimandsaidhello,hedidnotreact.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterwakingthemanup,Balesrecognizedthattheyhadtogetoutoftheresoon._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023秋·江蘇南通·高三統(tǒng)考期末）帕姆·巴勒斯計(jì)劃在新罕布什爾州的華盛頓山州立公園徒步六小時(shí)，不到一小時(shí)后，她已經(jīng)爬進(jìn)了更冷的空氣和更深的雪中。她穿過(guò)白雪覆蓋的山脊，向華盛頓山進(jìn)發(fā)。然后她注意到了一件事：她前面的雪上有一組腳印。Whensheapproachedhimandsaidhello,hedidnotreact.Afterwakingthemanup,Balesrecognizedthattheyhadtogetoutoftheresoon.檢查——拿出物品給男子取暖——喚醒男子——扶起那名男子——一起下山——脫離險(xiǎn)境——感受Whensheapproachedhimandsaidhello,hedidnotreact.__________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterwakingthemanup,Balesrecognizedthattheyhadtogetoutoftheresoon.____________________________________________當(dāng)她走近他打招呼時(shí)，他沒有反應(yīng)。在叫醒那個(gè)人后，巴勒斯意識(shí)到他們必須盡快離開那里。描寫巴勒斯救助這名已經(jīng)失去意識(shí)的男子的過(guò)程。描寫巴勒斯和那名男子一起下山，脫離險(xiǎn)境的過(guò)程。Whensheapproachedhimandsaidhello,hedidnotreact.Takingadeepbreath,Balesgotcloser,checkedhispulseandsuddenlyrealizedthatthemanmusthavepassedout.Sheknewshehadtowakehimupimmediatelyorthedreadfulweathercouldputhimingreaterdanger.Outofherbag,Balestookacarpettowraptheman,gavesomehotwatertohim,calledoutrepeatedlyandshookhimhard.Fortunately,itdidn’ttakelongbeforethemancametohimself.Afterwakingthemanup,Balesrecognizedthattheyhadtogetoutoftheresoon.Thewindkepthowlingwiththeheavysleetdrivingfiercely,andevenworse,darknessbegantofall.Anxious,Balesstruggledtohelpthemanup,supportinghisweightandinchingalongthetrail,followingthetracksleftbyherhikingboots.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,theyfinallymadeittothefootofthemountain.Themanwasrushedtohospitalimmediately.Exhaustedasshewas,Balesfeltawaveofhappinesswelledupinside.（2023年1月江蘇無(wú)錫高三期末）Livinginacompetitiveanddishonestcommunitywasnotalwayseasy.Peoplekeptwalkinginandout,wearingartificialsmiles.Allselfishsouls!Finally,myparentsdecidedtohaveabreathoffreshair.Wewereonvacation,havingdriventoNewHampshire.Wewouldn’tseefriendsonfamily—itwouldbejustme,myparents,andmylittlebrother,Wyatt,outforanice,sociallydistancedweekaway.WehadhikedabouthalfamiletoapopularspotcalledDianna’sBaths,wherethewaterfallsofaseriesofflatstonesonthemountainside.Thebathswerefulloffamilies,sowemadeourwaytooneoftheupperlevelsofrocktokeepourdistance.Bothwherewesatanddownbelow,thewalerpouredandfellintosmallpools,wherekidsinswimsuitsweresplashingaround.Wecouldn’thelprushingtojointhem.Someparentsnervouslydrovetheirkidsawayfromtherocks’edges,whilemyparentsweregratefulthattheywereoutofthatstage,sowetwo,atsixteenandeight,couldkeepourphysicalspacewithmoreconfidence.Don’tgetmewrong:Momwassillterrifiedasshesawusjumpbetweentheslipperyrocks,“Norunning,”shesaidagainandagain.“Stayawayfromallthoseedges.”Butshesoonrelaxed,andwewereallhavingfun,splashinginthepools.Then,secondslater,thingschanged.IturnedandsawmyWyattsittingdownbetweentwostonesinafast-movingstream.Iyelledathimtogetout.HeyelledbacksomethingthatIcouldn’thear,andthenhedisappearedovertheedge.itwasabout12feetfromthetopofthewaterfalltothepoolbelow,wherethereweremanyhugerocks.AllIrememberfromthemomentismother’sscreaming,overandover,likeaprayer,“Somebodyhelpsmyson!”Myfatherwasalreadydashingdowntherocks,whenIheardanotherwomanscream.“Thatchildjustwentoverthewaterfall!”sheshoutedatherhusband.“Hurryup!Let’sgivethemahelpinghand!”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Whileeveryoneelselookedonfromadistance.thisyoungwomandidn’thesitate._____________________________________________________________________________________________________Theambulancecame,takingWyattoutoftheparkonastretcher._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023年1月江蘇無(wú)錫高三期末）作者的父母生活在充滿競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的社區(qū)里，很不容易。因此帶著孩子們一起去新罕布什爾州度假，放松,但是弟弟Wyatt貪玩坐到了激流中的一塊石頭上，來(lái)不及喊他下來(lái)，他已經(jīng)不小心掉入瀑布中。媽媽著急呼救，爸爸跳下石頭救人。Whileeveryoneelselooked