四級(jí)寫作之漫畫作文輔導(dǎo)

四級(jí)寫作之漫畫作文輔導(dǎo)第1頁/共92頁寫作概述實(shí)際樣例參考運(yùn)用（?？挤治?下發(fā)資料）寫作語法黃金結(jié)構(gòu)高分策略之詞匯替換高分策略之句型多樣化評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及建議第2頁/共92頁概述

第3頁/共92頁寫聽讀譯30mins15%30mins35%40mins35%30mins15%大學(xué)英語四級(jí)試卷的結(jié)構(gòu)第4頁/共92頁你知道四級(jí)的答題順序嗎?作文段落翻譯聽力長篇閱讀仔細(xì)閱讀在答題紙1上作答,完成后交答題紙1.剩下題目在答卡2上作答.選詞填空第5頁/共92頁全國大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試答題卡1第6頁/共92頁全國大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試答題卡2第7頁/共92頁1.審題（1-2mins)2.構(gòu)思提綱(3-5mins，確定主題)3.寫文章(20mins)4.修改檢查(5mins)寫作概述

第8頁/共92頁Stepspre-writing:仔細(xì)閱讀題干，確定寫作主題Para.1:describethepicture簡要描述漫畫（who,what,when,where…）開門見山TIPS:1.寫作的directions部分雖然給出了大致的主題，但是也要求考生對漫畫進(jìn)行描述，切忌拋開漫畫內(nèi)容直接議論！?。。？甲魑膯栴}一）第9頁/共92頁

TIPS:2.漫畫的內(nèi)容一定要符合圖片，切忌無中生有?。。。？甲魑膯栴}二）

TheboythoughtdeeplyTheboyfeelashemedandsaysnothing.Theboystopsplayingandlearningalot.Theboyismakingaplanandthegrandpaisencourainghim

第10頁/共92頁para2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message

揭示主題（觀點(diǎn)）并加以解釋和說明論證;揭示現(xiàn)象(問題)并闡述現(xiàn)象（問題）產(chǎn)生的原因。TIPS：可以從2-3個(gè)方面進(jìn)行闡述，也可以將這部分分為兩段。第11頁/共92頁P(yáng)ara3.：giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建議，重申觀點(diǎn)主題句(b)對如何解決漫畫中所反映的問題提出合理建議或總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。TIPS：主題句的復(fù)述不是簡單地重復(fù)，通常需符合如果在段末，用強(qiáng)調(diào)詞轉(zhuǎn)換方式連接。與主題句保持意思一致，更進(jìn)一層。轉(zhuǎn)換方式：詞對應(yīng)，同根，逆向第12頁/共92頁EXAMPLES主題句：youshouldconfirmeveryappointmentwhenyoudobusinessinUS.主題句復(fù)述：InbusinesscircleinUS,businessmanusuallymakessureeveryappointment.2.主題句：To

perceiveismoreimportantthantojudge.主題句復(fù)述句：Itis

ofgreatimportancetoperceivetojudge.ORToperceiveisnolessimportantthantojudge.第13頁/共92頁實(shí)例運(yùn)用+?？挤治龅?4頁/共92頁?？家坏?5頁/共92頁一、語法問題1.時(shí)態(tài)，人稱，單復(fù)數(shù)的混用，不統(tǒng)一。eg:1.Theboyplaycomputergamesandhisgrandpawatchhim.2.Playcomputerisausualactivityforuniversitystudents.3.Lifeplanmusthasadestination4.Ifsomeonedon'thavealifeplan...2.詞性的使用錯(cuò)誤

eg:1.ifyouhaveaplan,youshouldworkhardly.2.sosheissucceedatlast/ayoungpeoplecan'tbesuccess3.weshouldfacedifficultbravely4.wehavemanychooses第16頁/共92頁3.Therebe句型使用錯(cuò)誤eg:1.Therearemanyyoungpeoplewastetimetodosomeboringthings.2.Therehaveaprobleminthefutureifwedon'thavelifeplan.4.被動(dòng)語態(tài)的使用錯(cuò)誤eg:1.asshowsinthepicture,theboyis...2.everyonehasalifeplan,maybenotwrite...3.ThefirstConfuciusInstitutebuildin20044.confuciusinstitutessettospreadchineseculture.

第17頁/共92頁4.run-onsentences串句無法理解的句子EG:1.Therearemanythisphenomenons2.ifeverythingisalie,wearen'tneedalifeplan.3.Otherpeoplemakingalifeplanfromsth.4.Asayoungpeople,weshouldhave....

第18頁/共92頁二、佳句欣賞1.Therefore,wearesupposedtomakealifeplanfromnowontomakeourlifemoremeangingfulandcolorful(章笑盈)2.AsfarasIamconcerned,makingalifeplanisveryimportantforyoungpeople.(李程鵬)3.Itisobviousthatthedrawerofthepicturewantstodrawourattentiontowardsthatweshouldmakealifeplanfromanearlyage.Makingalifeplanshouldbeattachedgreatsignificancetobyourselves.(趙建宏)4.Onlyyoumakealifeplananddevoteyourselfintoit,canyouhavenoregretwhenyouareold.(卞涵)5.Weareeasytobocomeconfusedwithourlife.Makethelifeplanrightnowandfocusonthethingsyouwanttodobecausetimedoesn'twaitforanyone.(錢林豪)第19頁/共92頁三、看圖作文的解題思路應(yīng)用1.審題（認(rèn)真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫信息“focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”確定寫作主題：年輕人應(yīng)該做好人生規(guī)劃以及人生規(guī)劃的重要性的原因第20頁/共92頁2.作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）第一段：簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…）:爺爺教導(dǎo)孫子：如果年老的時(shí)候?qū)懽詡鳎銜?huì)看到自己去過哪里，（whereyouhavebeen）如果年輕時(shí)候?qū)?，你就?huì)知道你將去哪里(willseewhereyouaregoing)。第21頁/共92頁Thepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomputerandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,you’llseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,you’llseewhereyou’regoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whichiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate第22頁/共92頁第二段：解釋圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）并加以解釋和說明論證。Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,you’remorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustments.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第23頁/共92頁第三段：給出自己的看法（總結(jié)全文，強(qiáng)調(diào)正確的做法）。

Tosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearly

soastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcorecouresandinterest-basedminorcoursesandfiguringoutexactschedulesforstudyorfuturecareer.Onlyinthisway,

canouruniversitytimeisrewardinginthelongrun.

第24頁/共92頁實(shí)際樣例參考運(yùn)用（見資料）第25頁/共92頁Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.四級(jí)寫作新題型--看圖作文

2013.06真題第26頁/共92頁第27頁/共92頁看圖作文的解題思路應(yīng)用1.審題（認(rèn)真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫信息“expressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig”確定寫作主題：做任何大事前都應(yīng)該從小事做起（一屋不掃，何以掃天下。）第28頁/共92頁2.作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）第一段：簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…）:父子之間的對話，兒子關(guān)注核廢料處理（disposalofnuclearwastes）,父親認(rèn)為要從小事做起（emptythedustbinfirst）；第29頁/共92頁DoingBigThingsStartsfromDoingSmallOnesSAMPLE1

Asisvividlyrevealedinthepictureabove,theboyexpresseshisworriesaboutthedisposalofnuclearwastes,whilethefathertellshimtoemptythedustbinintheroomfirst.Thepictureremindsusof

anoldChinesesaying—Ifyoudon’tliketodotrivialthingslikecleaningyourroom,it’simpossibleforyoutoundertakeanyimportanttask.第30頁/共92頁SAMPLE2Wecanseefromthecartoonthatthereisafathertalkingwithhisson.Havingheardhisson’swordsthat“Dad,Iamabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearweapon.”Thefatherrepliesthat“Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhere,youcandoanything”andpointsthegarbagecanbesidehim.

Funnyandcommonastheconversationsounds,itreflectsthatthefatherintendstoadvisehissontodosmallthingsbeforeundertakingbig.

第31頁/共92頁作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）第二段：解釋圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）并加以解釋和說明論證。努力做好小事可以培養(yǎng)做大事所需要的優(yōu)良品質(zhì)（developgoodqualitiesneededundertakingimportanttasks）;第32頁/共92頁

Undoubtedly,thesymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedinthepictureshouldbethatitisvitalandnecessarytodealwithtrivialthings.Doingsmallthingswellmayhelpusdevelopthegoodqualitiesneededinundertakingimportanttasks,whichlaysasolidfoundationforourfuturedevelopment.Smallthingswouldoftenmakethedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Wesurelyknowthatthewantofahorseshoenailmaycauseakingdomtobelost.Therefore,whenitcomestothekeytosuccess,themostimportantthingliesindoingeverytrivialthingwell.第33頁/共92頁

Definitely,doingsmallthingsisthefirststepofsuccessandwilllayrootfordoingsomethingbig.Bydoingsomethingsmall,weareabletoaccumulateexperience,masterskillsandtrainourselvestobemorepatient.Inotherwords,wecanbewellpreparedforfurtherchallengesinthecourseoffulfillingsmallthings.Bycontrast,thosewhodesiretodosomethingbigatoncewillconstantlybehauntedbydisappointment,frustrationsorevenfailures,aswithopportunities-“somethingbig”-showingup,theycanhardlyseizethembecauseofthelackofexperienceandconfidencewhichstemsfromdoingsmallthings.第34頁/共92頁作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）第三段：給出自己的看法（總結(jié)全文，強(qiáng)調(diào)正確的做法）。

實(shí)現(xiàn)做大事的目標(biāo)，不僅需要有雄心壯志（thegreatambition）,還需要有從小事踏踏實(shí)實(shí)做起的實(shí)踐精神（thepracticalspirit）.

Sample1：Inoneword,toachievegoalsneedsnotmerelythegreatambition,

but

thepracticalspiritofdealingwithtrivialthings.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakethehighesteminence.第35頁/共92頁

Sample2：

Inconclusion,undernocircumstancesshouldweundervaluethepowerofdoingsmallthings.Instead,weshouldregardsmallthingsasthesourceofexperience,skillsandtheprerequisiteofsuccess.“Greatachievementonlybelongstothosewhocandosmallthingsperfectly.”Aristotlealsousedtosay.第36頁/共92頁Let'shaveatry第37頁/共92頁Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.PRACTICE1第38頁/共92頁第39頁/共92頁看圖作文的解題思路應(yīng)用1.審題（認(rèn)真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫“expressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions”確定寫作主題：Totakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.(未雨綢繆)第40頁/共92頁2.作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）第41頁/共92頁

Thepicturefocusesonapersonwhoisstandinginfrontofthesea,watchingthetiderising.Abovethepicture,thereisathought-provokingsentencewhichtellsusthatweshouldtakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.第一段：簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）。第42頁/共92頁第二段：針對圖畫所表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)（主題）進(jìn)行舉例論證

Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateshouldhebelaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.第43頁/共92頁WritingTechniques:

AGeneralPointSupportedbyExamples

Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateshouldhebelaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.第44頁/共92頁第三段：總結(jié)全文。

Allinall,itisadvisableforanyonetomakeprecautionarypreparationsfortheunexpecteddifficultiesordisastersinlifeinadvance.第45頁/共92頁Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofanglewhenpeopleobservingsomething.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.PRACTICE2第46頁/共92頁第47頁/共92頁看圖作文的解題思路應(yīng)用1.審題（認(rèn)真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫信息“expressyourviewsontheimportanceofanglewhenpeopleobservingsomething”確定寫作主題：應(yīng)該從不同角度來觀察事物。第48頁/共92頁2.作文提綱（結(jié)構(gòu)）第49頁/共92頁

Thepictureshowsusthatintheeyesofthemanneartheapple,theappleisofgoodquality,whiletothemanwhoisfarfromtheapple,theappleisofbadqualitywithawormintheflesh.Itistheanglesratherthanthedistancethatdifferentiatethewitnessoftheapple’squality.Thepictureremindsusof

aphilosophicalview—Observingthesamefromdifferentanglesisamust.第一段：簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）。第50頁/共92頁第二段：進(jìn)行解釋和說明論證。

Itisimportantandverynecessarytoobserveorevaluateathingfromdifferentangles.Forexample,sometimeswhenyouthinkyouareunhappy,toothersitmaybethatyouaresurroundedbyhappiness.Therefore,differentconclusionswouldbearrivedatwhenweviewathingfromdifferentangles.第51頁/共92頁第三段：給出自己的看法（總結(jié)全文）。

Itisknowntoallthatacoinhastwosides.Ascollegestudent,weshouldtrytolearnfromsomeoneelse’spositions.Onlyinthiswaycanwebecomeamoreconsiderateandperfectperson.第52頁/共92頁ObservingtheSameThingfromDifferentAngles第53頁/共92頁

Thepictureshowsusthatintheeyesofthemanneartheapple,theappleisofgoodquality,whiletothemanwhoisfarfromtheapple,theappleisofbadqualitywithawormintheflesh.Itistheanglesratherthanthedistancethatdifferentiatethewitnessoftheapple’squality.Thepictureremindsusof

aphilosophicalview—Observingthesamefromdifferentanglesisamust.Itisimportantandverynecessarytoobserveorevaluateathingfromdifferentangles.Forexample,sometimeswhenyouthinkyouareunhappy,toothersitmaybethatyouaresurroundedbyhappiness.Therefore,differentconclusionswouldbearrivedatwhenweviewathingfromdifferentangles.

Itisknowntoallthatacoinhastwosides.Ascollegestudent,weshouldtrytolearnfromsomeoneelse’spositions.Onlyinthiswaycanwebecomeamoreconsiderateandperfectperson.第54頁/共92頁寫作語法黃金結(jié)構(gòu)1.notonly,butalso2.Itis+adjforsbtodosth3.Therebe句型4.強(qiáng)調(diào)句和倒裝句的靈活使用5.被動(dòng)語態(tài)（?？紝懽鞣g出現(xiàn)大問題）6.狀語從句7.定語從句8.插入語的靈活運(yùn)用第55頁/共92頁

插入語可以是時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，銜接詞，同位語，強(qiáng)調(diào)語，修飾語，同義復(fù)指或從句。使句子更有跳躍感和地道。

Hefinallycame,inthelastminute,tofulfillhistask.Drought,inSouthwestChina,scorchedearth—ourmotherland.Tourism,however,givesrisetoanumberofproblems.Tsunami,adestructivenaturaldisaster,hitChilewithoutanywarning.Weare,ifnotgoingbackward,makingprogress.第56頁/共92頁詞匯替換第57頁/共92頁1.常用詞替換2.邏輯詞替換第58頁/共92頁Firstgroup常用詞第59頁/共92頁people,personsmakesensethingbuildindividuals,folks,mankind,humanbeing,citizenhaveapointaffair,business,matter,stuffshape,establish,construct,erect,fabricate第60頁/共92頁原詞aspectcausewantrememberhavepopular替換為facet,feature,sidegiveriseto,resultin,leadto,incitedesire,setone’shearton,yearnforkeep...inmindenjoy,possess,ownprevalent,prevailing第61頁/共92頁原詞替代詞knowstrengthenexperiencemoreandmorerealize,beawareofenhance,intensify,deepensee,witness,livethrough,endure,undergoAnincreasingnumberof、Increasingly、Growing第62頁/共92頁原詞tryone’sbestveryattractsamebuy

替換詞doone’sutmost,exertoneselftodosth,devotetoextremely,greatly,vastly,severely,terribly,exceedinglycapture,enchant,entice,appealtoidenticalpurchase,acquire,afford第63頁/共92頁表明importantThinkofcomeupwith

sthoccurto/strikesbCometoremind/flashbackto/recollect/recallmomentous,considerable,distinctive,major,vital,capital,substantial,material,conspicuous,striking,prominent,eminent,noticeable,consequentialreveal,indicate,convey,reflect,confirm,demonstrate,imply第64頁/共92頁Ithink??Asweknow?inmyoponion?formypart?frommyperspective?第65頁/共92頁1.harbortheideathat2.taketheattitudethat3.itiswidelysharedthat4.Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat5.AsfarasIamconcerned6.I'mconvincedofsth/that

第66頁/共92頁beinterestedin

???1.sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb2.s.b.befascinatedwithsth3.s.b.befondofsth第67頁/共92頁

邏輯指示詞第68頁/共92頁1.原因–由于，多虧第69頁/共92頁1.thanksto2.attributeto3.dueto4.bepartiallyresponsiblefor5.owingto6.rusultfrom第70頁/共92頁2.因果--結(jié)果，導(dǎo)致，產(chǎn)生第71頁/共92頁leadto導(dǎo)致resultin導(dǎo)致giveriseto產(chǎn)生stemfrom起源于asaresult/consequenceconsequently第72頁/共92頁2.遞進(jìn)第73頁/共92頁What’smoreInaddition/besidesFurthermoreMoreoverObviously/definitely/undoubtedlyThatistosayIndeedInparticular/especially第74頁/共92頁

3.假設(shè)SupposeAssumingImagineOnceIf第75頁/共92頁4.比較第76頁/共92頁同義比較1.Similarly/besimilarto2.Likewise3.Inthesameway4.As…as第77頁/共92頁反義比較1.Conversely2.Onthecontrary3.In/bycontrast5.Incomparison第78頁/共92頁句型多樣化

第79頁/共92頁1.描述漫畫句:

*Fromthecartoonwecanseethat_____.*Wecanseefromthecartoonthat_____.*Asisindicatedinthecartoon,_____.第80頁/共92頁2.引出暗含主題句*Wecandeducefromthesetwovividdrawingsthat_____.*Whathasbeendescribedinthecartooncarriesgreatmeanings/implicationsforourlife,esp.howto_____.*Whatitillustratesisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,anditexpresses/conveysthesymbolicmeaningof_____.第81頁/共92頁3.引出原因句

*Therearequiteafewpossiblereasonssuggestedhere.Tobeginwith,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.Finally,_____.*Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthistendency.Tobeginwith,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.Finally,_____.