英語作文預測-看圖作文

英語作文預測——看圖作文PartI.看圖作文的分類&典型提綱PartII看圖作文的解題步驟PartIII看圖作文的解題思路（三段論）1.Introduction2.Body3.ConclusionPartI.看圖作文——圖畫作文分類：圖畫作文可分為圖片、漫畫與照片等多種。特點：圖畫作文總體上比圖表作文的結構變化多，更為靈活，因此難度也更大。圖畫類作文提綱1)describethedrawingbriefly；2)explainitsintendedmeaning；3)giveyourcommentsPartII看圖作文解題步驟1.認真審題（把握圖中提示語，附文,對比、類似等細節(jié)，準確把握出題者意圖）2.列出提綱(已給），整理基本的框架3.開始落筆寫作的過程中，要注意如下幾點：突出重點用詞準確（語法、詞匯、語氣、標點符號等）字數(shù)要達標PartIII看圖作文思路寫作三段論Introduction——圖畫描述段，引言段，起始段Body———主體/拓展段,意義闡釋段（積極寓意類，消極寓意類）Conclusion——結論段，建議措施段第一段：圖畫描述段的寫法三至四句(50-55詞)：1.Generaldescription：套話+總體描述尋找出圖畫的中心事物，確定中心事物的位置，從動作和狀態(tài)兩方面來描述畫面中的中心事物；2.Details：挖掘細節(jié)詞，聯(lián)結成句尋找中心事物周圍相關的事物，并進行簡單的描述(細節(jié)描述）3.Caption：文字說明+段尾套話過渡若圖畫下方有caption，可將其翻譯為英語。段落寫作—描述段寫法Writeanessayof120-180wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and，3)giveyourcomments確定關鍵詞火鍋Hotpot文化元素Culturalelements/ingredients/terms文化名人Culturalcelebrity提示語的翻譯文化“火鍋”，既美味又營養(yǎng)Thecaptionreads,“Cultural‘hotpot’isbothdeliciousandnutritious”連詞成句宏觀概述+細節(jié)描述一個大大的火鍋，火鍋里有很多東西方文化元素的名字，比如：莎士比亞、孔子、京劇、天鵝湖等。Thereisahotpotinthepicture.Inthehotpotwecanseemanyculturalterms,suchas….(改善表達）Inthepicturestandsahotpot,whichcontainsavarietyofculturalelementsofbothwesternandeasternbackground,suchasShakespeare,Confucius,BeijingOpera,SwanLakeandsoon.（宏觀概述）Inthepictureaboveis/standsalargehotpot,（細節(jié)描述)whichcontainsavarietyof/variousculturalterms/ingredients/elementsofbothwesternandeasternbackground,suchasShakespeare,Confucius,BeijingOpera,SwanLakeandsoon.（提示語翻譯）Thecaptionreads,“Cultural‘hotpot’isbothdeliciousandnutritious”.結尾套話)Simpleastheimageseemstobe,theimpliedmeaninggoesfardeeper.描述段寫作套路與表達圖畫描述段首套話①Whatacompellingandthought-provokingdrawingitis!Howinterestingandenlighteningitis!Thisisaverythought-provokingpicture.Thisisquiteanextraordinaryandmeaningfulpicture.Thecartoonrevealsaverythought-provokingscene.Thepicturedescribesanincreasinglycommonphenomenonintoday’sworld.圖畫描述套話②--半套+描述1（圖畫總述）Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,…（圖畫總述）Asisshown/describedinthepicturesabove,wecanseeclearlythat…Whatisclearlyillustrated/presented/describedinthedrawingaboveisthat…Itissymbolically/vividlydemonstratedinthedrawingthat…Itisaveryalarmingcartoon,inwhich…圖畫描述套話③--半套+細節(jié)描述（重點信息）Whatimpressesmemostisthat（圖畫重點信息）.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingis(thefact)that…圖畫描述段尾套話④(承上啟下/總結)Simpleastheimageseemstobe,theimpliedmeaninggoesfardeeper.Uncomplicatedasthepictureis,thesymbolicmeaningisasdeepasocean.Simplydesignedasthepicturesare,thesymbolicmeaningtheyconveyisratherdeepandprofound.Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.第一段的思路：

①段首套話→②半套+描述1(宏觀概述)→③半套+描述2(細節(jié)重點，提示語)→④段尾套話①Whatacompellingandthought-provokingdrawingitis!②Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,描述1（圖畫概述）.③Whatimpressesmemostisthat(=Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat)描述2（圖畫重點信息）.④Simpleastheimageis,thesymbolicmeaningisratherdeepandprofound.第二段：Body主體/意義闡釋段/拓展段五至六句(80-90詞)：1.Topicsentence:主題句，1句該句說明圖畫的象征意義(symbolicmeanings)，即闡釋圖畫的深層寓意。此句為文章的中心思想，也是第二段的主題句，承上啟下。2.Arguments：論證，3-4句常用手段：因果論證；對比論證；例證；利弊分析等3.Summary：小結，1句對論證的句子進行總結，與本段主題句首尾呼應。Topicsentence主題句(中心句）的寫法在圖畫背后或“隱藏”在火鍋里的含義顯而易見：全球文化融合的趨勢。Whatliesbehindthepicture,or“buried”inthehotpot,isclear:itimpliesaprevailingtrend--theintegrationofglobalculturesandtheco-existenceofmulti-cultures.中心句子套話Thepictureshavesubtlyreflectedthesocialphenomenonthat…Theideaconveyedbythethought-provokingdrawingisapparent:Itisapparentthatthecartoonistaimsatremindingusoftheimportanceof...inourdailylife.Thepurposeofthedraweristoshowusthat…Undoubtedly,thedrawinghassymbolicallyrevealedaseriousprobleminourdailylife:Argument論證部分的寫法思路

A談背景

B擺事實

C駁觀點（欲揚先抑）

D講原因

E論后果（利弊）

主要手段1.因果分析論證；2.舉例論證；3.利弊分析……1.原因分析1）五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)后；第二句說明原因如下；第三四句一個原因及擴展；第五六句一個原因及擴展。具體化——切忌以理說理。2）常見原因——法律法規(guī)不完善、教育體制不健全、個人意識較薄弱(選一，原創(chuàng)一)常見原因Thelackofseriouspunishmentaccordingtothelawsandregulationsisthecorereasonof…,whichprovidesthechancesforpeopletodothemisdeeds/wrongdoings.People’sawarenessisnotthatstrongin…,whichisdecisivetothephenomenon.Thedistorted/insufficient/inadequateeducationmayleadtothepervasivenessof…原因擴展方式（1）舉例論證Forexample,forinstance,take…forexample,…providesanillustration.（2）數(shù)據論證Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincrease/declineof…issoprominentthattheresultscausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.原因擴展方式（1）舉例論證Forexample,forinstance,take…forexample,…providesanillustration.（2）數(shù)據論證Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincrease/declineof…issoprominentthattheresultscausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.原因分析常用過渡句：Thefollowingreasonsmayberesponsibleforthemeaningdeducedabove.Therearetwomainreasonsaccountingforthesymbolicmeaning.Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldcontributetothenegativephenomenon.Thereasonforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent,attribute/ascribeittothefollowinginterrelatedfactors.2.舉例論證1）五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)后；第二句說明如下事例可以證明；第三四句一個事例及擴展；第五六句另一個擴展。2）注意事項——切忌例子私人化。3）擴展方式——數(shù)據論證、借用常識、引用權威、因果論證、比較論證舉例論證常用過渡句：Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.…isagoodcaseinpoint…(短語/that主語從句)providesuswithanexcellentexample.Eg.Teenagerssurfingonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.舉例論證常用過渡句：Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.…isagoodcaseinpoint…(短語/that主語從句)providesuswithanexcellentexample.Eg.Teenagerssurfingonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.3.利弊論證積極中帶有消極，消極中暗含積極1）五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)后；第二句說明有利有弊；ontheonehand,第三四句一個優(yōu)點及擴展；ontheotherhand,第五六句一個缺點及擴展。2)擴展方式---舉例/數(shù)據/權威/常識/結果(五種論證)利：表示影響好：influence①bringabouta(n)far-reachinginfluence/impacton②layasolidfoundationfor③playanirreplaceable（不可替代的）rolein思路一：Culturalhotpot1.圖畫寓意文化融合和文化的多樣性2.原因分析：兩個層次加以說明a.世界的融合，任何一個國家不能孤立存在b.現(xiàn)代人的大包容度（中心句）Whatliesbehindthepictureisclear:itimpliesaprevailingtrend--theintegrationofglobalculturesandtheco-existenceofmulti-cultures.（原因分析）Thefollowingreasonsmayberesponsibleforthetrend.Tobeginwith,inthehighly-integratedworldtoday,nocountryisanisolatedisland.Everynationisfacedwithadiversityofforeigncultures,roaringtooverwhelmthedomesticcultureandChinaisnoexception.What’smore,alongwiththerapidadvancementofboththeworldeconomyandcommunication,thecustomofacultureismorelikelytobeacceptedandsharedbyotherones.Peoplecometoknowtheimportanceofinclusivenesstotheirownculture.Ifthissituationgoesasitis,theconsequencewillbeencouraging.思路二：Culturalhotpot1.圖畫寓意文化融合和文化的多樣性2.談背景

改革開放政策3.擺事實，舉例論證（celebrateChristmas,theValentine’sDay)4.分析利/好處（中心句）Thepicturehassubtlyreflectedthephenomenonthatwearenowinanageofculturaldiversificationandintegration.（背景）WithChinaadoptingherpolicyofopeninguptotheoutsideworld,peoplehavebeenexposedtoadiversityofcultures.（擺事實）Ontheonehand,thishasmadepeople’slifecolorfulandentertaining.（舉例）Forinstance,wedonotonlycelebratetraditionalChinesefestivalsbutalsoenjoyourselvesonChristmas,theValentine’sDayandevenHalloween.（利）Ontheotherhand,thistrendhascontributedtotheall-sidedandsounddevelopmentofthenation’sculture.Asoundcultureshouldbediversifiedandembracing,sothatitcandrawuponvariousbeneficialfactors.三、Conclusion:結論段、建議措施段三至四句(50-55詞)：1+2+1總→分→總1.Concludingsentence:結論句，1句引出重復論點（總結歸納中心句）2.Suggestions：2句兩點建議或兩句評論3.包裝結尾，展望未來/趨勢，1句1.Concludingsentence:結論句（1句）（1）總之，我們很有必要從這些發(fā)人深省的圖畫中獲得積極的含義。/采取有效措施扭轉這些圖畫中所反映的負面趨勢。Accordingly,itisimperative/vitalforusto(1)derivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethought-provokingdrawing./(2)Weshouldtakesomeeffectiveandefficientmeasurestoreversethedisturbingtrendillustratedinthepictures.（2）因此，偶像崇拜這一發(fā)人深省的社會現(xiàn)象，是能夠對年輕人成長產生深遠影響的一柄雙刃劍。Hence/Therefore,idolworship,thethought-provokingsocialphenomenon,isadouble-edgedswordwhichcanexertprofoundinfluenceonthegrowthofyoungpeople.(3)Judgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizethevalueofmutualaid.(積極寓意類）2.suggestions兩點建議或兩句評論（2句）經常提到的幾個方面：A.authorities(專家參與）;B.education（增強意識）;C.public;D.media（社會和媒體關注）E.self-effort（1）Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoplagiarizeothers’works.(法律)Inaddition,weshouldenlighten/educatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatacademichonestyisextremelyvitaltous.(教育)（2）Itis,therefore,necessarythateffectivestepsbemadetoadvocatespiritofsupportingeachother.Tobeginwith,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoencouragepeopletounite.Inaddition,peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofcaringeachotherespeciallywhentheyareintrouble.(3)Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoshuntheresponsibilitiesofcaringtheirparents.Inaddition,weshouldcultivatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatrespectingtheoldhasalwaysbeenthetraditionalvirtueofChineseculture.（4）Asaconsequence,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticactions.Ontheonehand…….Ontheotherhand,thereshouldbeanincreasinglyloudvoicefromthepublicformeasuresagainst……（公眾）3.包裝結尾，展望未來（1句）三大常用句型1）倒裝句2）強調句3）虛擬語氣Onlyinthiswaycanwepromoteculturaldevelopmentpositivelyandmakeourworlddimensional,colorfulandvigorous.強調句Inconclusion,itispersistentworkthatisconduciveto(對……有利）yourgraspingaconsiderablevocabulary.虛擬語氣Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasisonthisphenomenon.(中心句)Tosumup,the