讀后續(xù)寫高效創(chuàng)作點(diǎn)撥之生動描寫(2)講義-高三英語寫作專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫高效創(chuàng)作點(diǎn)撥生動描寫（2）

情緒語料庫（一）表現(xiàn)人物喜樂的表達(dá)短語：brightenone飛heart使某人心情愉快keepupone'sspirit振作精神beoverwhelmedwith被（強(qiáng)列的感情）充溢indescribablywildjoy難以形容的開心kindleone'spassionin…點(diǎn)燃某人對的熱情besomuchdelightedwithsth.對..…很高興befascinatedbythespectacleof被壯觀景象所吸引amixtureofexcitementandhappiness既興奮又開「C?句子：Mary'seyeslitup.瑪麗的眼睛亮了起來?！癢ell,Idolikebirds!”Marygrinned.“是的，我確實(shí)喜歡小鳥!”瑪麗咧嘴笑著。Hesoonreturned,hiswholefacebeamingwithdelight.他很快就回來了，高興得滿臉通紅。Aboywithacheeryfaceboundedintotheroom,laughing.一個(gè)興高采烈的男孩笑著蹦蹦跳跳地進(jìn)了房間。Anexpressionofintensejoyilluminatedtheoldman^eyes.老人眼神中閃爍著欣喜的光芒。Traddlesfrownedslightly,butthenhisfaceslowlybrokeintoasmile.特拉德爾眉頭微皺，但是之后他的臉上漸漸露出了微笑。Theyounggirlblushedwithdelightandleaped.年輕姑娘高興得臉都紅了，跳了起來。Therewassomethinginhisdiscussionthatmademechokewithlaughter.在他的討論中有一些東西讓我笑得喘不過氣來。Therewascolor,light,andlifeintheboy'sfacenow,vivacityinhismanner,andgenuinemerrimentinhislaugh.這孩子的臉上現(xiàn)唬有了顏色、光明和生機(jī)，他的舉止活潑，他的笑聲中帶著真正的快樂?！癘h!Thatdoesmenoendofgood.Tellon,please/9hesaid,takinghisfaceoutofthesofacushion,redandshiningwithmerriment.“哦!那對我有莫大的好處。請講下去。”他說著，臉離開了沙發(fā)靠墊，興奮得滿臉通紅。Atthebackofhischairshestoppedandstoodlistening,withhereyeswideopenandhercheeksredwithexcitementofthisunusualperformance.她在他的椅背后停下腳步，站在那里聽著，眼睛睜得大大的，她的臉頰也因這次不尋常的表演而泛著激動的潮紅。Upwentahandfulofsoftsnowandtheheadturnedatonce,showingafacewhichlostitslistlesslook in aminute,asthebigeyesbrightenedandthemouthbegantosmile.一捧松軟的雪扔過去后，那人立馬轉(zhuǎn)過頭來，臉上的倦怠表情一掃而光，大大的眼睛重現(xiàn)光芒，嘴角流露出微笑。段落：Allatoncethegypsygirlstartled,A tearandaflashofjoygleamed simultaneouslyinhereyes,sheknelt on the brinkoftheroofandextendedherarmstowardsthesquarewithanguish,exclaiming."Phoebus!Come!Phoebus!?,Hervoice,herface,hergesture,herwholepersonboretheheartbreakingexpressionofa ship-wrecked man who is makingasignalofdistresstothejoyousshipwhichispassingafaroffinarayofsunlightonthehorizon.忽然，吉卜賽姑娘的眼睛里，閃爍起一顆淚珠和一道歡樂的光芒，她跪在屋頂邊上。痛苦地向廣場伸出雙臂喊道：“菲比斯!來吧!菲比斯!”她的聲音、她的臉、她的姿勢，整個(gè)人帶著悲傷的表情，就好像海上遇難的人，看見遠(yuǎn)處地平線上的一束陽光里駛過一條歡快的大船，向它發(fā)出求救的信號。Thesingingofthissongthrewtheanimalsintothewildestexcitement.AlmostbeforeMajorhadreachedtheend,theyhadbegunsingingitforthemselves.Eventhestupidestofthemhadalreadypickedupthetuneandafewofthewords,andasforthecleveronessuchasthepiesanddogs,theyhadtheentiresongbyheartwithinafewminutes.Andthen,afterafewpreliminarytries,thewholefarmburstoutintoBeastsofEnglandintremendousunison.Thecowslowedit,thedogswhinedit,thehorsewhinniedit,theducksquackedit.Theyweresodelightedwiththesongthattheysangitrightthroughfivetimesinsuccessionandmighthavecontinuedsingingitallnightiftheyhadnotbeeninterrupted.唱著這支歌，動物們陷入了情不自禁的亢奮之中。幾乎還沒等少校唱完，他們就已經(jīng)自己唱了起來。即便是最遲鈍的動物也已經(jīng)學(xué)會曲調(diào)和一些歌詞了。至于聰明一些的動物，如豬和狗，兒分鐘內(nèi)就記住了整首歌。之后，他們又練了幾遍，整個(gè)農(nóng)場頓時(shí)整齊地回蕩著《英格蘭獸》。牛眸陣地叫，狗汪汪地吠，馬嘶嘶地鳴，鴨子嘎嘎地喚。唱著這首歌，他們是那么興奮，以至于整整連著唱了五遍，要不是中途被打斷，他們真有可能唱個(gè)通宵。（二）表現(xiàn)人物急躁憤怒的表達(dá)短語：rageatsb.對某人大發(fā)脾氣beboilingwithrage怒火中燒stampone'sfootinanger憤怒地跺腳scarletwithshameandanger因羞愧和憤怒而漲得滿臉通紅express/voiceacomplaintabout對.??表示不滿bespeechlesswithindignation氣得說不出話來bedispleasedatone'sconduct對某人的行為感到不滿runoutoftheroominaburstofanger怒氣沖沖地跑出房間句子：ColinstaredatMarycrossly.柯林生氣地瞪著瑪麗。Mary'sfaceturnedtothunder.瑪麗的表情變得憤怒起來。Uriah'seyesburnedwithhatred.尤賴亞的眼睛里充滿了仇恨。AflushofangerspreadacrossMr.Murdstone^cheeks.一抹憤怒的紅暈掠過摩德斯通先生的面頰。Thedreadfulmanleapedoutofhischairwitharoar.那可怕的人咆哮著從椅子上跳了起來。Shestrodeuptothescreamingboyandstampedherfoot.她大步走到那個(gè)尖叫的男孩跟前，跺著腳。 _Brent'swideingenuousfacewaspuzzledandmildlyindignant.布倫特那張老實(shí)巴交的寬臉上呈現(xiàn)出迷惑又略帶憤怒的神情。Heathcliffthrustherawayfromhimanddashedfromtheroom.希刺克厲夫把她推開，從房間沖了出去。Hestartedpullinghishairout,andbeatinghisheadwithhisownfists.他開始扯自己的頭發(fā)，用拳頭捶打自己的頭。"Whosaidthat?^heroared,clenchinghisfistsasifreadytofightallthestudentsatonce.“誰說的?''他攥緊拳頭吼道，好像馬上要和所有的學(xué)生打架。段落：Tousetheexpressive,ifnotelegant,languageofaschoolgirl,"Hewasasnervousasawitchandascrossasabear”.Theword“l(fā)imes“waslikefiretopowder,hisyellowfaceflushed,andherappedonhisdeskwithanenergywhichmadeJennyskiptoherseatwithunusualrapidity.用女學(xué)生們生動但不算優(yōu)雅的語言來說，“他如同女巫一樣緊張，如同熊一樣暴躁。”“邊界”一詞如同引發(fā)火藥的火源一般使得他蠟黃的臉頰發(fā)紅，他用力敲打著桌子，嚇得珍妮迅速地跳回到她的座位上。（三）表現(xiàn)人物悲傷消沉的表達(dá)短語：grieveoversth.因失去某物而感到悲傷bedisheartenedby因????而沮喪withasinkingheart懷著沉重的心情fallintodespaii?陷入絕望aflashofgriefcomesuponsb.某人感到一陣悲傷oasentimentalmood讓某人很傷感raiseastormoffrustration引發(fā)一陣挫敗感g(shù)etsuckedintoawhirlpoolofnegativity陷入消極的漩渦句子：Sumnmerleewaswhitewithhorror.薩莫里嚇得臉色發(fā)白。TheideaofdangermadeConseilgopale.想到危險(xiǎn)，康塞爾的臉色就變白了。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他們一臉憂郁地坐在那里。Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面而泣。Sheoftenturnedasidetowipeawayatear.她常常扭過頭去擦眼淚。Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.這消息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。Thesolitary,hungrylookinhiseyeswentstraighttoJo'swarmheart.他那孤獨(dú)而迫切的眼神直擊喬的熱心腸。Albertturnedfrightfullypale;heendeavoredtospeak,butthewordsdiedonhislips.艾伯特的臉色蒼白得可怕;他想說話，可是話到嘴邊又說不出來了。9.1heldmyarmsovermyface,dizzywithpainandshock.我用手臂擋住臉，痛苦和震驚使我暈眩。10.Shedidnotcryoutbutbiteherlipandwentevenwhiter.她沒有哭出聲來，但咬緊嘴唇，臉色更加慘白了。11.1yelled,runningafterthecartandchokingbacksobs