讀后續(xù)寫親情類 想去四處旅游的媽媽 講義 高三英語二輪復習寫作專項

讀后續(xù)寫英文原文中文翻譯Myeighty-five-year-oldmotherofferedthatfamiliartiltofthehead，theonethattoldmesomethingwasup.Itensedmyshouldersandbitmylip,waitingforwhateverwascomingnext.我八十五歲的母親歪了歪頭，這個動作讓我知道她有話要說。我緊張地聳起肩膀，咬著嘴唇，等待下一句話。Icouldhandleit.Shewaspredictable,thoughdramatic.Iexpectedhertoexpressherthoughtsonthelatestnewsorsharetheseniorcommunitynews.我能處理這個情況。她雖然喜怒無常，但我能預測出她大概想做什么。我原以為她會談論最新的新聞或分享養(yǎng)老院的趣事。Inslead,shecalmlysaid,asthoughsheweresharingherdinnermenu,“I'mgoingtodownsizeandsellmyhouseandnearlyeverythingIown.”Thebreakingnewswasfollowedbyamatteroffactstare.然而，她卻平靜地說，仿佛在和我分享晚餐菜單一樣：“我要減少財物并出售房子以及所擁有的幾乎所有物品?！?/p>

這個突如其來的消息讓我愣住了?！癉owhat?"Iasked.“I'llbeafloater,”shesaid.“你說什么？”我問媽媽說：“世界那么大，我要去看看”。“I'llstaywithyou,thenwithmybrothersinMaine,andthenwithsomeofmyfriends.I'lljustfloataroundandenjoymyself."Shelaughedasthoughshe'djustdiscoveredtheperfectlifestyle.“I'lltakemycateverywherewithme.Ican'tbeartoleavehimbehindorgivehimaway.Whatdoyouthink?"“我會先和你住一段時間，然后去緬因州和我的兄弟住，接著去一些朋友那里。我會漂泊并享受自己的生活?！彼α似饋?，仿佛剛剛發(fā)現(xiàn)了完美的生活方式。“我會帶上我的貓。我無法忍受把它留在別處或送人。你覺得怎么樣？”“Noonewillwantyoutoshowupwithyourcat.”Myanswerseemedashocktoher.Afteronlyseconds,sheadded,“Well,Ijustwon'ttellthemhe'scoming.We'lljustshowup.Whatcantheydo?”“沒有人會愿意你帶著你的貓出現(xiàn)。”我的回答震驚了她。幾秒鐘后，她補充道：“那好吧，我就不告訴他們它要來。我們只需要出現(xiàn)就行了，他們能有什么辦法呢？”Shocked,Itookadeepbreathandforcedmyselftorespondbyexplainingallthereasonswhyselling,movinginwithme,andfearlesslydraggingthecatacrossthecountryinsecrelwereterribleideas.我感到震驚，深吸一口氣，強迫自己解釋為什么出售房子、搬來跟我住，以及偷偷地帶著貓到全國各地旅行都是壞主意。Unbothered,shesimplysaid,“You'resodramatic.It'llbefine.”她毫不在意地簡單地說：“你太夸張了。一切都會沒問題的?！盜didn'ttakeherannouncementseriously.Afewdaysafterherannouncement,mybrotherandIenjoyedafewlaughsoverheridea.Afterall,ourmotherwastooindependenttobeplacedinaplacelong-termwithanyofherchildren.ShehadmadethisclearonmanyoccasionswhenI'dbeggedtolivenextdoortoher.我沒有把她今天的話當回事。幾天后，我和我兄弟對她的想法還大笑了一番。畢竟，我們的母親太獨立了，不能長期與任何一個孩子住在一起。每當我乞求住在她旁邊時，她都多次明確表明過她的態(tài)度。I'dwantedtobecloseenoughtowatchoverherbutnottooclose,butshe'dalwaysrefused.

Ienjoyedlivingalone,hearingthequiet,writingandreading.Ihatednoise.Mymotherlovedradio,television,andphonecalls,endlessphonecalls.Wewouldnotmakegoodhousemates.

續(xù)寫第一段：Ireallypanickedwhenshestartedhavingyardsales.___續(xù)寫第二段：Itookhertomyhomefromthehospitalhappily,nolongerbotheredbyhermovingin.我曾經希望住得離她近一些，好照顧她，但又不想離她太近。我喜歡獨自生活，享受寧靜，寫作和閱讀。我厭惡噪音。我母親喜歡聽收音機和電視，打無休止的電話。我們不適合同住。母親喜歡收聽廣播、看電視、打電話，毫無休止地打電話。我們不適合同住。續(xù)寫第一段：當她真得開始賣房子時，我感到有點恐慌。續(xù)寫第二段：我高興地把她從醫(yī)院帶回家，不再為她的搬進來而煩惱。情節(jié)走向：個人不太喜歡第二段第一句的轉折點。本來原文中“我”不同意媽媽的“新計劃”，第二段第一句“我開心地把媽媽接出醫(yī)院”。（嘆氣），有種強行用“一件更棘手/悲傷”的事蓋住之前那個“難題/轉移注意力”。沒有解決根本問題，過度的也沒那么自然。得，畢竟我也不是出題人，只能“見招拆招”。不過，內容還挺“現(xiàn)實主義”的，老人的歸處：獨居？養(yǎng)老院？與子女合住？出去自由自在地看世界？試水作文：續(xù)寫第一段：Ireallypanickedwhenshestartedhavingyardsales.(“我”喜歡獨處和安靜，母親即將來我家住，我是“抗拒”的。)

Itseemedasthoughshewasgenuinelyseriousaboutherplantodownsizeandfloataround.(對應上文我和兄弟還“笑話”了一番母親的計劃)

Myanxiety

increasedwitheachitemshesold,andIcouldn'thelpbutworryabouthowthisnewarrangementwouldaffectmylife.

Butthensomethingunexpectedhappened.Mymothertrippedoverastoneandtwistedherleftankle.(太難了，第二段第一句我把媽媽從醫(yī)院接回家，所以第一段媽媽應該是去醫(yī)院了：生病了？摔跤了？很嚴重？輕微傷？既要去醫(yī)院，又不能太嚴重，我可以把她接回家。想了半天，只有扭著腳踝了還能接受)Myheartwasracingaswe

rushedtothehospital.

Inthatmoment,allmypreviousconcernsabouthermovinginwithmeevaporated.Iwantedtobe

withher,

andspendtimewithherduringherrecovery.Fortunately,theinjurytomymother'sanklewasnotsevereandthedoctoradvisedthatshecouldrecoverthroughrestathome.續(xù)寫第二段：Itookhertomyhomefromthehospitalhappily,nolongerbotheredbyhermovingin.

Mymother'sankleinjurywasawake-upcallforme.Irealizedthatlifeis

unpredictable（還記得原文第一段么？Icouldhandleit.Shewaspredictable,thoughdramatic.我可以predict媽媽的一些想法，然而生活處處充滿了unpredictability）andthatIshouldcherishthetimeIhavewithmylovedones.

Overthenextseveralweeks,asshehealed,Ihelpedmymotherwithher"announcement".Imadesuretocreateacomfortablelivingspaceforher

andhercat(之前我說她不能帶著貓去別人家),andwespentmanyhappydaystogether.

Throughthisexperience,Ilearnedthatsometimeslife’sunexpected

twist

(這里比較滿意，twist想表達一語雙關：1.腳踝扭傷twist2.媽媽的生活發(fā)生變化twist，我也學會接受變化)that

brought

us

closer

can

lead

to

exceptional

outcomes.

My

mother’s

initiative（超愛用這個詞，之前那篇紀念奶奶圣誕去送禮物的續(xù)寫最后也用了這個詞）

mayhaveseemed

daunting

atfirst,butitultimatelybroughtuscloserandenrichedourlivesinthewaythat

wenevercouldhaveimagined.有點沒控制住，寫得有些“冗長”了，大家再看一看官方參考范文是怎么描寫的。附官方參考范文：Ireallypanickedwhenshestartedhavingyardsales.

"Areyouserious?"

Iaskedheroneday."Ofcourse,"

sheanswered.Iforcedmyselftofacewhatwashappening,andIbeggedforsomecherisheditems.ThenonedayMomcaughtabadcoldandhadahighfever.Iwasafraidandsenthertothehospital.Duringthosedays,Iwasnolongerstressedaboutherfloaterplan,whetheritwasrightorlogical.Ijustwantedhertobeokay.Luckily,sherecovered.Itookhertomyhomefromthehospitalhappily,nolongerbotheredbyhermovingin.Iamnotsayingwewouldgetalongperfectly,butIseethingsdiff