譯林版八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)Unit-4-第四單元寫(xiě)作素養(yǎng)提升練課件

寫(xiě)作素養(yǎng)提升練安徽譯林版八年級(jí)上

Unit4Doityourself本單元的話題為“自己動(dòng)手做”，要求寫(xiě)關(guān)于“自己動(dòng)手做事”的短文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先根據(jù)寫(xiě)作提示介紹自己動(dòng)手做事的起因；其次詳細(xì)描述自己動(dòng)手做事的過(guò)程和結(jié)果，可用first，next，then和finally等詞進(jìn)行描述；最后要介紹自己的感想，同時(shí)可以表達(dá)自己的希望。安徽譯林版八年級(jí)上寫(xiě)作時(shí)主要用第一人稱或第三人稱單數(shù)，在描述做事的過(guò)程和結(jié)果時(shí)應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。表達(dá)希望時(shí)可用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。安徽譯林版八年級(jí)上你的生日快要到了，你的媽媽決定自己為你做蛋糕，你花了兩個(gè)小時(shí)的時(shí)間幫助媽媽做蛋糕。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇日記，記錄如何做蛋糕，不少于80詞。【思路構(gòu)建】步驟構(gòu)思列綱1決定自己為我做蛋糕decidedtomakeacakeformebyherself2用了……小時(shí)Ittook...hoursto...finish...3首先……然后……最終……當(dāng)我們完成……時(shí)First...Then...Finally...Whenwecompleted...Saturday,29OctoberMybirthdayiscoming,somymotherdecidedtomakeacakeformebyherself.Ittookmetwohourstohelpmymotherfinishthework.FirstIhelpedmymotherputthreekilosofflourintoabowl.Nextmymotheraddedonekiloofbuttertotheflour.Thenshemixedthebutterandtheflourtogetherandaddedaglassofmilk.Finally,shebroke【精彩范文】twelveeggsintothebowlandaddedonekiloofsugar.Whenwecompletedthework,therewasflouroneverything:thetable,myclothes,myhandsandmyface!IbelieveIcanmakeabettercakenexttime,becausepracticemakesperfect.add,mix,instead,terrible,advise,salad,certain【單詞】standfor,becrazyabout,putin,fill...with...,forexample【短語(yǔ)】Idecided...bymyself.Let’s...We’dbetter...Ittookme...tofinish...Thisisthefirst...I’vemade...It’s...forsb.todosth.Practicemakesperfect.【句型】以“MyfirstDIYjob”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.在媽媽生日前做一個(gè)生日音樂(lè)盒，并保密，給媽媽一個(gè)驚喜；2.花了許多時(shí)間，在制作期間曾出錯(cuò)；3.將一朵真玫瑰粘貼在盒蓋上；4.打開(kāi)盒子，媽媽就能聽(tīng)到生日歌；5.第一次為媽媽做禮物，媽媽高興，你更高興。注意：詞數(shù)不少于80（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使句子通順、連貫。MyfirstDIYjobMymother’sbirthdayiscoming,soIdecidedtomakeherabirthdaymusicboxbymyself.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MyfirstDIYjobMymother’sbirthdayiscoming，soIdecidedtomakeherabirthdaymusicboxbymyself.IwenttoAmy'shometomakeitbecauseIwantedtokeepitsecret.Amyhelpedmemakethemusicbox.Wehadfunworkingtogether.Ittookmeaweektofinishit.Lotsofthingswent____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________wrongduringthattime.Finally,Istuckarealroseonthecoverofthemusicbox.W