中考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)寫作-Friends課件

WritingCourse----FriendsWritingCourse1Iwannathankyouforthethingsyou'vedoneIwannathankyouforyourgenerosity,andI'llneverbealonethat'sbecause,that'sbecauseyouaremy______that'sbecause,that'sbecauseyouaremy______beenthroughthickandthintogether,throughtheupsanddownsyetwestillremain,andIcantalktoyouforeverthat'sbecause,that'sbecauseyouaremy______that'sbecause,that'sbecauseyouaremy______friendfriendfriendfriendListentoasongandfillintheblanks.Canyouguessthenameofthesong?FriendsIwannathankyouforthethin2Whatarefriends?Whatarefriends?3Whenwearesad,wecan________friends.goshoppinggoonlinestudydoeverythingtalktocrywithaskcallstaywithseeafilmtellsharehelpremindWheneverwefeellonely,wecan__________friends.Ifwehaveproblemsinstudy,wecan________friends.Whenwehavesomethinghappy,wecan_________friends.Ifwedosomethingwrong,friendsmay_______us.Friendscan_______together.Whenwearesad,wecan______4Sofriendsarevery_________.importantusefulvaluablenecessaryhelpfulgenerousSofriendsarevery_________.5Let'swatchavedioaboutfriendship!Let'swatchavedioaboutfrie6Goodfriendsmaysometimesbeangrywitheachother.It'susuallyhappytobewithfriends.Howtogetonwellwithfriends?Whatcanyoulearnfromthevideo??HoweverGoodfriendsmaysometimesIt'7Iftheyareintrouble,weshould________them.behappyforsharewithlearnfromhelpbewithtalkwithteachstudywithlistentoencourageWhentheyhavedifficultiesinstudy,wecan__________them.Whentheyarenothappy,wecan________them.Whentheygetsuccess,wemay_________them.Iftheyhavedifferentopinions,weshould_______them.gotoplayIftheyareintrouble,wesho8Groupwork:Workingroupsoffour,discussandmakelistsaboutfriends.FriendsWhyweneedfriends?Howtohavegoodfriends?Doyouhavegoodfriends?dosomethingtogetherhelpeachotherfeelhappylistenunderstandcareGroupwork:Workingroupsof9Canyouwritesomethingaboutmakingfriends?FriendsWhyweneedfriends?Howtohavegoodfriends?Doyouhavegoodfriends?Weshouldknowfriendsare________inourlife.Wecan_________withfriends.Tomakegoodfriends,we'dbetter________.Canyouwritesomethingabout10Hi,Everyone!IamMr.Bean.Iamalonelyboy,Iwanttomakesomefriends,canyouhelpme???最近，班里新來(lái)了一名同學(xué)Mr.Bean,他有一些煩惱，你能幫幫他嗎？Hi,Everyone!IamMr.Bean.I11書面表達(dá)(本題15分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上?！坝颜x的小船說(shuō)翻就翻”是2016年主流社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)上流行的網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言，對(duì)此你有何感想？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的寫作要求，寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括：1.我們?yōu)槭裁葱枰慌笥眩?.我們?cè)撊绾闻c朋友相處？（列舉至少兩點(diǎn)建議）3.呼吁同學(xué)們與朋友和睦共處。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。2.語(yǔ)句連貫，80詞左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

WritingpraticeAlmosteveryoneintheworldhasfriends.Howcanwemakeourfriendshiplastforever?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

beginningbodyending書面表達(dá)(本題15分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答12“友誼的小船說(shuō)翻就翻”是2016年主流社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)上流行的網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言，對(duì)此你有何感想？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的寫作要求，寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括：1.我們?yōu)槭裁葱枰慌笥眩?.我們?cè)撊绾闻c朋友相處？（列舉至少兩點(diǎn)建議）3.呼吁同學(xué)們與朋友和睦共處。寫作方法指導(dǎo)Beginning開頭部分Ending結(jié)尾部分Body正文1、我們?yōu)槭裁葱枰慌笥眩浚ㄅ笥褳槭裁词侵匾?？?、我們?cè)撊绾闻c朋友相處？3、呼吁同學(xué)們與朋友和睦共處。①Inmyopinion,it’s…tohavefriendsbecause…②Whenwe…,wecan…withfriends.③……First,weshould...Second,whenfriends…,weshould...Third,friendsmay…Fourth,...①Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun!②It’shappytohavefriends.③Noonecanlivewithafriend.④…“友誼的小船說(shuō)翻就翻”是2016年主流社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)上流行的網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)13CheckbyyourselfReadyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要點(diǎn)齊了嗎？2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)了嗎？3.句子連貫嗎？4.單詞都寫對(duì)了嗎？5.有沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤的語(yǔ)法？6.書寫整潔嗎？朗讀文章并檢查是否符合以下要求CheckbyyourselfReadyourpas14第一檔：12-15分內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，幾乎沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔：11-12分內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第三檔：8-10分內(nèi)容涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)尚清楚,但有一些語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。（以上為及格線）第四檔：4-7分內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點(diǎn)，寫出少量句子，但表達(dá)不連貫，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多。第五檔：0-3分只寫出個(gè)別單詞，不成句子，表達(dá)不清楚評(píng)分檔次和要求第一檔：12-15分內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，幾乎沒(méi)15Almosteveryoneintheworldhasfriends.Howcanwemakeourfriendshiplastforever?Inmyopinion,it’snicetohavefriendsbecausewecantalk,laughanddothingstogether.It’ssaidthatpeoplewhohavefriendsarehappierthanthosewhodon’t.Nowadays,manypeoplewanttoknowhowtomakefriendshiplastforever.Herearemysuggestions.First,weshouldbekindtoourfriends.Whenfriendsareintrouble,weshouldtryourbesttohelpthem.Second,wemusttrytounderstandeachotherandthinkofothersmorethanourselves.Friendshipisakindoftreasure.Wemustgetonwellwithfriends.SampleAlmosteveryoneinthewor16Wirtealettertoyourbestfriends:●Tellyourfriendswhatinterestingthingsyourememberaboutthem●TellthemhowhappytobefriendswiththemHomeworkWirtealettertoyourbestfr17FriendshipIsLiketheBreeze友誼如微風(fēng)

----byTerriFanningFriendshipislikethebreeze,友誼如和煦的微風(fēng)，Youcan'tholdit,你握不住它，Smellit,聞不到它，Tasteit,嘗不到它，Orknowwhenit'scoming,無(wú)法知道它何時(shí)光臨，Butyoucanalwaysfeelit,不過(guò)你總能感覺到它，Andyou'llalwaysknowit'sthere,而且總能意識(shí)