心靈雞湯讀后續(xù)寫34Lastwords導(dǎo)學(xué)案-九24屆高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

34Lastwords一、請根據(jù)兩個(gè)提示句進(jìn)行故事續(xù)寫，150詞左右。WhatIremembermostvividlywhensteppingintoDad’shospitalroomwastheevidenceofmyownsenses.Thebrightgreenwallsmeanttoberelaxingandthenoiseofthemachineshelpingmyfathertobreathewereallascreamofdesperation.Itookadeepswallowandsaidquietly,“HiDad.”Heturnedhisfacetowardme,andwhatgreetedmewasamanwholookeddecadesolderthanthelasttimeIhadseenhim.“Hi,honey,”hebreathedwithdifficulty.Theinstantoureyesmet,hehadsubmittedtowhatwascoming.WhenIlookedintomyfather’seyes,nowcloudedoverwithpain,Iknewthathewouldneverleavethatbedagain.AndsinceIwasboardingaplaneinsixhours,thiswouldbethelasttimeIwouldgettogazeatthoseeyes.Hewasn’tstrongenoughforsmalltalk.Isimplyheldhishandandletthequiettearsfall.Idon’tknowifhesawthemornot.Finally,whenitwastimetogo,Igotupallmycourage,setasidemyfearsandsaiddeterminedly,“Iloveyou,Dad.”Thosewordshadneverbeensaidinmyfamily.Myfatherneversaidthemtome,anduntilthen,Ineversaidthemtohim.Infact,I’msureIneverheardthemspokeninourstrict,Irish-Catholichousehold.Butmyfearofrejectionwasoutweighed(超過)bymyknowledgethatthiswasmylastchance.AndsoIsaidit.Buthecouldn’tgiveitback.Hisoncedancingeyes,nowmuddyandconfused,lookedaway.“I’mtired,”isallhesaid.“Maybeyoubettergo.”Threedayslater,Isatwithmyninesiblings(兄弟姐妹)planningmyfather’sfuneral.Wehadneverbeenanexpressivefamily,butatthismomentwealternated（交替）betweentensionandrelief,laughterandtears.However,myfather’sdeathwashardestonmyyoungestsisterCaroline,justasophomore（二年級生）inhighschool.Whilewekeptlookingbackon“Dadstories”,shejustsatthere.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Herwordshitme.Whyhadn’tfathersaidthesamewordstome?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、原版品讀LastwordsWhatIremembermostvividlywhensteppingintoDad’shospitalroomwastheassaultonthesenses.Thebrightgreenwallsweremeanttobesoothing,buttometheyscreamedofthedesperationoftheinmates.Thenoiseofthemachineshelpingmyfathertobreathesoundedlikethehissingsnakeofdeath.Itookadeepswallowtoquellthenausea.“HiDad,”Isaidquietly.Heturnedhisfacetowardme,andwhatgreetedmewasamanwholookeddecadesolderthanthelasttimeIhadseenhim.“Hi,honey,”hewheezed.Theinstantoureyesmet,Iknewthathehadsurrenderedtowhatwascoming.WhenIlookedintomyfather’seyes,nowcloudedoverwithpain,Iknewthathewouldneverleavethatbedagain.Iwouldneveragainfeelthegripofhishand,neveragainheartheliltofhisvoice.Hewasn’tstrongenoughforsmalltalk.Isimplyheldhishandandletthequiettearsfall.Idon’tknowifhesawthemornot.Finally,whenitwastimetogo,Isummonedallmycourage.Isetasidemyfears.Iresolutelysaid,“Iloveyou,Dad.”Thosewordshadneverbeensaidinmyfamily.Myfatherneversaidthemtome,anduntilthen,Ineversaidthemtohim.Infact,I’msureIneverheardthemutteredinourstrict,Irish-Catholichousehold.Butmyfearofrejectionwasoutweighedbymyknowledgethatthiswasmylastchance.AndsoIsaidit.Buthecouldn’tgiveitback.Hisoncedancingeyes,nowmuddyandconfused,lookedaway.“I’mtired,”isallhesaid.“Maybeyoubettergo.”Threedayslater,Isatwithmyninesiblingsplanningmyfather’sfuneral.Wealternatedbetweentensionandrelief,laughterandtears.Wehadneverbeenanexpressivefamily,buttherewasatangiblesenseofbeingtiredoftherestraint.Hisdeathwashardestonmyyoungestsister,justasophomoreinhighschool.Asweshared“Dadstories”backandforth,shewasunusuallyquiet,butfinallyinanalmostembarrassedwaysaid,“IsawDadrightbeforehedied.Hetookmyhand,lookedatme,andsaid‘Iloveyou,Caroline.’”Herwordshitmelikeabluntforceinstrument.Helovedher.Whyhadn’thesaidittome?FindingoutthatjustadayafterIlefthimhetoldmysister,hisyoungestdaughter,thathelovedher,wasablow.Itwaseasytohidethereasonformytears—afterall,we’djustlostourfather—whowouldbegrudgeachildhergrief?Butnooneknewthetruesourceofmysorrow.I’llalwayswishthatIhadthatmomentwithmyfatheroveragain.IwishIhadsaid,“It’sokay,Dad—youcansayit.”WhatIdohaveisthemomentwithmysister.Dadfoundthecourageandstrength,onhisdeathbed,tosay“Iloveyou.”Ibelieveatleastsomeofthatcourageandstrengthcamefromme.AndIamgratefulthatatthetimewhenhewasmostvulnerable,Igavehimsomethingofsubstance.Somethingthatwouldhelphimtoletgo,andhelpmy15-year-oldsistertoletgoaswell.SoDad,Iwishyoucouldhavesaidittome.ButthanksforsayingittoCaroline.And,bytheway—Idoloveyou.AndIknowyouloveme,too.I.Wordsforunderstanding單詞音標(biāo)詞性釋義單詞音標(biāo)詞性釋義vividly['v?v?dli]adv.生動地utter[??t?(r)]vt.說;講assault[??s??lt]n.沖擊outweigh\o"outweigh"[a?t?we?]vt.超過soothing[?su?e??]adj.減輕(痛苦)的rejection[r??d?ek??n]n.拒絕scream[skri?m]vi.尖聲大叫sibling\o"sibling"[?s?bl??]n.兄弟姐妹desperation[?desp??re???n]n.絕望tension[?ten??n]n.繃緊inmate[??nme?t]

n.同院病人relief[r??li?f]n.寬慰hissing[h?s]v.發(fā)嘶嘶聲alternate['??lt?ne?t]vi.（使）交替swallow['sw?l??]n.咽tangible[?t?nd??bl]adj.可感知的wheeze[wi?z]呼哧呼哧地說restraint\o"restraint"[r??stre?nt]n.抑制,克制surrender\o"surrender"[s??rend?]vi.投降sophomore\o"sophomore"[?s?f?m??(r)]n.(高中)二年級學(xué)生cloud[kla?d]vi.露出(痛苦)神色hit[h?t]vt.侵襲grip\o"grip"[gr?p]n.緊握;緊抓blunt\o"blunt"[bl?nt]adj.

鈍的;不鋒利的lilt\o"lilt"[l?lt]n.抑揚(yáng)頓挫begrudge\o"begrudge"[b??gr?d?]vt.對……感到不滿summon\o"summon"[?s?m?n]vt.鼓起grateful[?ɡre?tf?l]adj.感激的resolutely\o"resolutely"[?rez?lu?tl?]adv.堅(jiān)定地vulnerable[?v?ln?r?bl]adj.脆弱的短語釋義短語釋義setaside暫不考慮backandforth來回地letgo放手III.Readtoappreciate:FillintheblanksaccordingtoChinesetranslationsTheinstantoureyes,Iknewthathehadtowhatwascoming.(Action)我們的目光一相遇，我就知道他已經(jīng)向即將到來的事情投降了。2.Isimplyheldhishandandletthequiettears.(Action)我只是握著他的手，默默流淚。3.Finally,whenitwastimetogo,Iallmycourage.(Action)最后，到了該走的時(shí)候，我鼓起所有的勇氣。4.Heturnedhisfacetowardme,andwhat______________mewasamanwholookeddecadesolderthanthelasttimeIhadseenhim.(Appearance)他把臉轉(zhuǎn)向我。于是，一個(gè)看上去比我上次見到他時(shí)老了幾十歲的人映入我的眼簾。WhenIlookedintomyfather’seyes,now______________________,Iknewthathewouldneverleavethatbedagain.(Appearance)父親的眼睛現(xiàn)在被痛苦籠罩著。當(dāng)我看著它們時(shí)，我知道他再也不會離開那張床了。Hisonceeyes,nowand,lookedaway.(Appearance)他那雙曾經(jīng)跳動的眼睛，現(xiàn)在變得渾濁而困惑，看向了別處。Butmyfearof____________wasbymyknowledgethatthiswasmylastchance.(Emotion)但我知道這是我最后的機(jī)會，這超過了我對被拒絕的恐懼。Wealternatedbetweenand,and.(Emotion)我們時(shí)而緊張，時(shí)而放松；時(shí)而歡笑，時(shí)而流淚。FindingoutthatjustadayafterIlefthimhetoldmysister,hisyoungestdaughter,thathelovedher,wasa.(Emotion)就在我離開他的第二天，他告訴我妹妹─他最小的女兒，他愛她，這對我是個(gè)打擊。Thenoiseofthemachineshelpingmyfathertobreathesoundedlikethesnakeofdeath.幫助父親呼吸的機(jī)器發(fā)出的聲音聽起來就像死亡之蛇發(fā)出的嘶嘶聲。(Metaphor)Herwordsmelikeabluntforceinstrument.(Metaphor)她的話像鈍器一樣擊中了我。IV.LanguageinuseApplicationofthekeywords:FillintheblanksaccordingtotheChinesesentences1.隨著輪胎發(fā)出的刺耳的聲音，救護(hù)車沖過街角。Theambulanceracedroundthecornerwithitstyres________.她抑制住自己的失望，說：“沒關(guān)系”。She________herdisappointment,saying,"That’sOK,itdoesn’tmatter."一提到她死去的丈夫，她的臉色就陰沉下來。Atthementionofherdeadhusband,herface________over.長時(shí)間的等待實(shí)在無聊，我們靠打撲克來解悶兒。Weplayedcardsto________theboredomofthelongwait.母獅子不理會最小的幼師，任由它死去。Thelioness________thesmallestcub,whichdied.她把玻璃杯扔向屋子的另一頭，砸在墻上。Shethrewherglassacrosstheroomandit________thewall.“放開我的手，你弄疼我了！”_____________________ofmyhand,you’rehurtingme!他們跟著她，沒有說一句怨言Theyfollowedherwithout________asinglewordofprotest.這本書喚起我童年的記憶。Thebook________upmemoriesofmychildhood.Imitationofthescenes：請描寫“我”向臨終父親表白愛意的場景。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Key:一、讀后續(xù)寫Whilewekeptlookingbackon“Dadstories”,shejustsatthere.Seeminglyconfusedbyhowthiscouldhavehappened,sheloweredherheadandbitherlips,unusuallyquiet.Recallingtheverymomentstayingwithfatherbeforehisdeathbed,Isigheddeeply,expressingmyfeelingthatfatherhadneverlovedme.AtthistimeCarolinewasnotsoquietthatsherosetoherfeet,sayinginanembarrassedvoice,“IsawDadrightbeforehedied.Hetookmyhand,lookedatme,andsaid‘Iloveyou,Caroline.’”Herwordshitme.Whyhadn’tfathersaidthesamewordstome?Itwasnodoubtablo