九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)課件市公開課一等獎(jiǎng)省優(yōu)質(zhì)課獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

WritingShuitouNo.1MiddleSchool

ZhuRufang2023/3/11第1頁(yè)TheHighSchoolEntranceExam(中考)iscoming!tiredbusy2023/3/12第2頁(yè)goodwaystogetrelaxed

2023/3/13第3頁(yè)discussIsgoingouting(春游)agoodwaytorelaxforGrade9students?Why?Ithinkit’s(not)goodforus.Because…2023/3/14第4頁(yè)

Reasons70%ofstudentsagree30%ofstudentsdisagreeYouropinion

?1.getclosetonature;enjoythebeautifulnature2.Openoureyesandincreaseourknowledge3.begoodforourhealth1.wastetime;affectourstudy2.feeltired3.Worryaboutoursafety2023/3/15第5頁(yè)Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkit’sagoodway.Theythinkit’sagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature.Goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge.Goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth.30%ofthemdon’tliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheirstudy.Afterall,goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired.What’sworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudentGoingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy.However,itshouldbeorganizedwell.

2023/3/16第6頁(yè)Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkit’sagoodway._____theythinkit’sagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature.______,goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge.________,goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth.___________,30%ofthemdon’tliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheirstudy.Afterall,goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired.What’sworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudent________,goingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy.However,itshouldbeorganizedwell.

inaword,besides,first,next,ontheotherhand,FirstNextBesidesOntheotherhandInawordWritingskill:使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊，使文章更為地道，更具“英語(yǔ)味”。2023/3/17第7頁(yè)Sometimestodorelaxingthingscanmakeyoufeelbetter.2023/3/18第8頁(yè)TonyGina2023/3/19第9頁(yè)TonyGina2023/3/110第10頁(yè)TonyGinaso…that,and,than,so,however,but,so…2023/3/111第11頁(yè)Thebetterlearningway,thebettergradeyou’llget.2023/3/112第12頁(yè)

TonyandGinaaretwomiddleschoolstudents.Theybothworkhardbuttheyhavedifferentlearningways.Tonyoftentiredinclass.Hehardlylistenstotheteacher,hemisslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakes.Asaresult,It’stoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquickly.Sohehastostayuplateanddoesn’tgetenoughsleep.However,Ginalistenscarefulandtriestocatchwhattheteachersaysinclass.Becauseofthis,soshelearnsbetterthanTonyandshegoestobedearly.Inmyopinion,Ginalearnsbetterinclassandhasmorefreetimetoenjoyherself,soIpreferherlearningway.

改錯(cuò)1.Tonyisoftentiredinclass./Tonyoftengets/feelstiredinclass.2.hemisseslotsofimportantpoints3.Ginalistenscarefully4.Becauseofthis,shelearnsbetterthanTony.2023/3/113第13頁(yè)1.goodwords:

Suitableconjunctions:3.Wonderfulsentences:

Enjoybeautifulwordsandsentences.hardlystayuplate…butasaresult…soandhowever1…pointsthattheteacher…(定語(yǔ)從句)2It’stoo…forsbto…3…catchwhattheteachersays...(賓語(yǔ)從句)

4…betterthan…(比較級(jí))

Writingskill:使用好詞好句能使你文章加分增加文采。2023/3/114第14頁(yè)

TonyandGinaaretwomiddleschoolstudents.Theybothworkhardbuttheyhavedifferentlearningways.Tonyisoftentiredinclass.Hehardlylistenstotheteacher,hemisseslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakes.Asaresult,It’stoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquickly.Sohehastostayuplateanddoesn’tgetenoughsleep.However,Ginalistenscarefullyandtriestocatchwhattheteachersaysinclass.Becauseofthis,shelearnsbetterthanTonyandshegoestobedearly.Inmyopinion,Ginalearnsbetterinclassandhasmorefreetimetoenjoyherself,soIpreferherlearningway.

It’stoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquicklytriestocatchwhattheteachersaysinclassmisseslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakesShelearnsbetterthanTony2023/3/115第15頁(yè)Ourschoollivesarenearlyending.schoollifeWhatdoyouthinkofyourschoollife?Whatareimportantthingsinyourschoollife?Doyouhaveanydreamsnow?Whatarethey?Let’sshare!2023/3/116第16頁(yè)2023/3/117第17頁(yè)activities2023/3/118第18頁(yè)writing三年初中學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲行囊——成長(zhǎng)統(tǒng)計(jì)袋中應(yīng)當(dāng)增添一份你自己滿意答案,請(qǐng)以Myschoollife為題寫一篇短文,記下你校園生活，字?jǐn)?shù)６０－９０。寫作指導(dǎo)：１．Beforewriting：

(細(xì)讀試題，認(rèn)真審題)

2023/3/119第19頁(yè)寫作指導(dǎo)：２．Whilewriting：

3．

Afterwriting：

（１）擬提綱，分好段落（２）連句成篇檢查全文,注意邏輯和文采．2023/3/120第20頁(yè)

Don’tgiveup,you’llbesuccessful.2023/3/121第21頁(yè)Homework:1.根據(jù)中考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，四人一組互評(píng)作文并訂正個(gè)自錯(cuò)誤及找出同組作文中好詞、好句。（統(tǒng)計(jì)在作文本）2.再為你作文另寫一段開頭和結(jié)尾.2023/3/122第22頁(yè)Thankyou2023/3/123第23頁(yè)附作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（供參照）：第五檔（較好）：13—15分體現(xiàn)清楚，行文連貫，復(fù)合句利用自如正確，有文采，用上所有關(guān)鍵詞，