短文改錯7連詞

第五十九講短文改錯——連詞一學(xué)習(xí)目標解析連詞的短文改錯二考點解析一、連詞1．并列連詞的錯用與多余[單句改錯]①(2016·全國卷Ⅰ)Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.分析：though和but不能放在同一個句子里。故去掉but。②(2016·四川高考)BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother'sDay.分析：both...and...表示“……和……都”。故or改為and。③(2015·全國卷Ⅰ)Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen. 分析：前后句為并列關(guān)系而非選擇關(guān)系，故把or改為and。④(2015·四川高考)Infact,Idon'tliketogoanymore,soI'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship. 分析：前后句為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而非因果關(guān)系，應(yīng)用but連接。故so改為but。⑤(2014·陜西高考)Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.分析：前后為并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故but改為and。⑥(2016·山西省八所重點中學(xué)適應(yīng)性考試)Athome,childrencandowhattheywant.Andatschooltheycan'tdoallthethingstheylike.分析：前后句為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而非并列關(guān)系，故把And改為But。[規(guī)律總結(jié)]①并列連詞錯用：常見的并列連詞有：and表示順承，but表示轉(zhuǎn)折，or表示選擇，so表示因果。應(yīng)根據(jù)邏輯關(guān)系選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。②并列連詞多余：although/though和but，because和so不能連用，一般去掉but或so；另外，一個從句只能有一個引導(dǎo)詞。2．定語從句引導(dǎo)詞的錯用與缺失[單句改錯]①(2016·四川高考)ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom'sfavorite. 分析：分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，dishes后面為定語從句，從句中缺少cooked的賓語，故可以使用that/which或省略。應(yīng)把what改為that/which或去掉what。②(2016·吉林省實驗中學(xué)模擬)Inanautumnafternoon,weweresenttoafarmwhichwelearnedtoplantpotatoes.分析：afarm后跟定語從句，引導(dǎo)詞在定語從句中作地點狀語，應(yīng)用where。故which改為where。③(2016·青島市統(tǒng)一質(zhì)檢)Besides,theycostalotofpaper,thatisnotveryfriendlytoourenvironment.分析：paper后為非限制性定語從句，不能用that引導(dǎo)。故that改為which。④(2016·太原五中模擬)Therearemanypeoplethinkthatwealthisbetterthanhealth. 分析：manypeople后為定語從句，缺少引導(dǎo)詞。故people后加who。[規(guī)律總結(jié)]①關(guān)系代詞that與which的錯用：在非限制性定語從句和介詞后用which；在不定代詞、最高級、序數(shù)詞后用that。特別提醒：what不能引導(dǎo)定語從句。②關(guān)系代詞與關(guān)系副詞的錯用：關(guān)系代詞在從句中作主、賓、表和定語；關(guān)系副詞作狀語。③關(guān)系詞的缺失：主要考查在therebe句型中，容易受漢語影響而漏用關(guān)系詞who/that/which。3．名詞性從句引導(dǎo)詞的錯用、缺失與多余[單句改錯]①(2016·全國卷Ⅰ)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.分析：closeto之后為介詞to的賓語從句，引導(dǎo)詞在從句中作地點狀語，應(yīng)用where。故that改為where。②(2016·全國卷Ⅱ)MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday. 分析：do后缺賓語，故把how改為what。③(2015·全國卷Ⅱ)Afterlookingatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing. 分析：found后為賓語從句，引導(dǎo)詞不作句子成分只起連接作用，應(yīng)用that引導(dǎo)，而且that可省略。故where改為that或去掉where。④(2015·四川高考)HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo？分析：后面的動詞do后缺少賓語，doyouthink為插入語，故把How改為What。⑤(2014·四川高考)Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingorhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.分析：notice之后為that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，when屬于多余詞。故去掉when。⑥(2016·陜西師大附中模擬)Thathetoldusisright,butmostoftheyoungpeoplehaven'trealizedthis.分析：is前為主語從句，引導(dǎo)詞在從句中作賓語，應(yīng)用連接代詞what。故That改為What。⑦(2016·銀川一中模擬)Andyoushouldalsohaveabeliefyouaresuretosucceedaslongasyoukeepyourdirectionallthetime. 分析：belief后為同位語從句，引導(dǎo)詞that不作成分，也沒有任何含義，但卻不能省去。故belief后加that。[規(guī)律總結(jié)]①連接詞與連接代詞的錯用：連接詞不作成分，而連接代詞需作成分。②連接詞與連接副詞的錯用：連接詞不作成分，而連接副詞作狀語；③連接代詞與連接副詞的錯用：連接代詞在從句中作主語、賓語、表語，而連接副詞在從句中作狀語。④連接詞that的缺失：that引導(dǎo)主語從句、表語從句和同位語從句時一般不能省略，引導(dǎo)賓語從句時可省略。⑤引導(dǎo)詞的多余：一個從句只能有一個引導(dǎo)詞，即使這個引導(dǎo)詞可以省略，也不能再用其他引導(dǎo)詞。4．狀語從句引導(dǎo)詞的錯用[單句改錯]①(2015·陜西高考)MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.分析：句意：我唯一的錯誤是在我打包的時候，把一些(餅干)掉在了地上。表示“當(dāng)……的時候”應(yīng)用when或while。故after改為when/while。②(2015·浙江高考)IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.分析：句意：盡管我在那個教室學(xué)習(xí)時只是個小孩，但我永遠不會忘記。此處應(yīng)用although/though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句。故If改為Although/Though。③(2013·全國卷Ⅰ)Infact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.分析：during表示“在……期間”，但它是介詞，不能引導(dǎo)狀語從句。故during改為when。④(2016·東北三省四市教研聯(lián)合體模擬)Ididn'tbegintolikeourhouseparentswhensomethinghappenedonenight.分析：句意：直到一天晚上發(fā)生了一件事情，我才開始喜歡我們的宿管。not...until...為固定搭配，意為“直到……才……”。故when改為until。[規(guī)律總結(jié)]①應(yīng)根據(jù)邏輯關(guān)系判定是何種狀語從句，并選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。②不要把介詞誤用作連接詞，例如during為介詞，不能引導(dǎo)狀語從句。③應(yīng)注意常見的固定句式中連詞的使用。三練習(xí)題Itdidn’tmatterthatIwouldwinthematchornot.Thatheislookingforisadictionary.Manypeoplecanquicklygethelpfromadoctorsincetheyareill.Ifyoucanpassthetestisuptoyou.Ifwewillholdthepartyintheopenairdependsontheweather.IliveinBeijing,wherehasalonghistory.Westilldon’tknowifornottheyhavearrivedatShanghaibyplane.Itisthetallesttowerwhichcanbeseenfaraway.Thepersonaboutwhowejusttalkedismymathsteacher.Yesterdaywewerehavingourdinnerwhilethetelephonerang.答案that改為whether。That改為What。主語從句缺少賓語，應(yīng)用what引導(dǎo)。since改為when或if。因為后面是一個條件或