新型短文改錯1

新型短文改錯1文中共有10處語言錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。No.1Ialwayswantedtobeagreatscientist.Ihaddreamofdiscoveringanewdrugthatwouldsavethelifeofhundredsofpeople.Unfortunately,Iwasneververywellatchemistryatschoolandtheteacherwasusedtogetangrywithme.Idecidedtobecominganinventoranddesignedanamazingnewproduct.Myparentswereencouraging,buttoldmetobeafewmorerealistic.Afewweekslate,Ihadanideaofdesigningapentowritewithupsidedown.Inmydisappointment,afriendofmepointedoutthatitwasnotanewdiscovery.1.dream前加a2.life→lives3.well→good4.wasused去掉was5.becoming→become→design7.afew→bit/little8.late→later9.In→To→mineNo.2Oneday,aboyandagirlwhowerealldressedinfashionclothessatonabencheatingawatermelon.Whentheywentawaytheylefttheirpeelsonthebenchinsteadthrowingthemintothedustbinbesidethem.Perhapstheythoughttherewouldbeanyonetocleanuptherubbish.Ithinkthatwhatashametheirbehavioris.Ifeveryonebehavedastheydid,theworldwillbeabigrubbishdump.Butwewillliveintheworldofdiseases.Beside,dustmenwillhavetoomuchdifficultycleantheworldwherewelive.1.wereall→both2.lefttheir→his3.instead后加of4.anyone→someone5.thinkthat→去掉that6.behaved→behaves7.But→And8.theworld→a9.Beside→Besides10.clean→cleaningNo.3Hownicetohearofyouagain.Youwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninourschool.Onshort,thingshavebeenimprovingaftertheschoolbegantocarryoutexploringstudy.Inthepast,theteacherskeeponexplainingthepoints.Wejustlistenedandtooknote.Butnowwediscussandsolvetheproblemswasraisedbyteachersorbyus.Afterclass,weenjoyallkindsofactivityinsteadofdoingendlesshomework.Forexample,wecanreadthatweareinterestedinandgotothelibraryorsurflnternetforinformation.1.hearof→from2.Onshort→In3.after→since4.keep→kept5.note→notes6.wasraised→去掉was7.byus→ourselves8.activity→activities9.that→what10.surf后加theNo.4NevershallIforgetthefirsttimeEnglishlessonbyMissLiu.Onthisday,whensheenteredtheclassroom,wefoundoutshewasayoungandbeautifullady.Thensheintroducedherselfsaidweshouldn’tcallherTeacherLiubutMissLiu.Late,sheletusgototheblackboardandsaysomethingaboutourselvesinEnglishonturn.Whenitwasmyturn,IfelttooshythatIdidn’tdaretosayawordbeforetheclass.Shewentuptomeandsaidkindly,“Don’tafraid.Ibelieveyoucandoit.”Atlast,Iwenttotheblackboard.ShepraisedmeforthatIhaddone.1.firsttime→去掉time2.Onthis→that3.foundout去掉out4.said→saying5.Late→Later6.onturn→in7.tooshy→so8.went→came9.Don’t后加be10.forthat→whatNo.5Everyonelovesbeauty.Andwhat’struebeauty?Youcangettheanswertothefollowingstory.TodayIwenttothemarketwithmyparents.Inthewaywenoticedagood-dressedyoungfellowrideby.Herodesofastthatheknockedtheoldladydown.Buthepretendednotseethis.Tooursurprise,agirlinplainclothesranforwardhelpingtheladystandup.Weallpraisedbythegirl.Fromthisweknowwecan’tjudgeapersonbytheirappearance.Onlyapersonwhomhasabeautifulsoulistruebeautiful.1.And→But2.answerto→from3.In→On4.good-dressed→well-dressed5.theold→an6.not后加to7.praisedby去掉by8.bytheir→his9.whom→who10.true→trulyNo.6LastsummerIwenttoAmericantostudyataschool,whereIhadmanywonderfulexperience,butIalsohadasadone.Oneday,theschoolheldaparty,thereIwasinvitedtotalkaboutHangzhou.AfterwhichtheyaskedmelotsofthingsaboutChina.ButIcouldn’texplainitinEnglishclear.Ifeltsad.Ilearntalessonfromthisexperience.IhavestudiedEnglishfor8yearstime,butIcan’tuseitverywell.ImustworkhardlytoimprovemyspokenEnglishsothatIwillabletocommunicatefreelywithforeigners.IhopeIcanbeabridgebetweenChinaandothercountryinthefuture.1.toAmerican→America2.wonderfulexperience→experiences3.thereI→where4.Afterwhich→that5.explainit→them6.Englishclear→clearly7.yearstime去掉time8.workhardly→hard9.Iwill后加be10.othercountry→countriesNo.7Inyouremail,youshowedagreatinterestontheWaterCube.NowI’dliketointroduceit.TheWaterCubewaslocatedinBeijingOlympicSportPark,andcoveranareaof79532squarekilometers.Itsconstructionwasstartedin2022,andcompletedin2022.It’sdesignplan---H2O3wasproducedbytheglobaldesigncompetition.Itwascostbillionyuan.Swimming,divingorsynchronizeswimmingcanbeheldthere.Itwasthoughthighofbyofficials,expertsandathletes.TheythoughtofitanincrediblesymbolinthehistoryoftheglobalGames.Ihopeyourintroductionsatisfiesyou.WelcometotheWaterCubeifit’sconvenienceforyou.1.intereston→in2.Cubewas→is3.andcover→covers4.It’sdesign→Its5.Itwascost去掉was6.divingor→and7.thoughthigh→highly8.thinkofit后加as9.yourintroduction→my10.convenienceto→convenientNo.8LastSunday,Iwenttoreadinyourlibrary.Ifoundanythingunpleasant.I’dliketovoicemyopinions,that,Ihope,wouldbeofgreathelpforyoutocreatethemorecomfortableplaceforreaders.First,therearelittlenewbooksontheshelves,andmostbooksaren’tpopulartoday.Second,booksaren’tsortedonproperorder,makingitisdifficultforreaderstofindwhattheywant.Third,theassistantsdidn’tofferwellservice.Andtheytooknotnoticeofthefactalightwasn’tworking.Isuggestyouchangealltheseassoonaspossibly.1.anythingunpleasant→something2.that,I→which3.themore→a4.littlenewbooks→few5.onproperorder→in6.itis去掉is7.wellservice→good8.notnotice→no9.fact后加that10.aspossibly→possibleyouropinions→myNo.9LiuYaru,theworker,hadworkedinaweavingmillinJinanfor14years.On1992whenshewas34,MrsLiuwasoutoftheworkandstayedathome.Shewasworriedandwasn’tsureaboutfindingotherjob.Sometimelater,shewasnolongerafraidbeinglookeddownuponbyother.Finally,shefoundajobasawaitressatateahouse.Shedidsogoodinthejobthatcustomerslikedtocallonthisteahouse.Asaresult,Shemakesmanymoneythroughherhardworkandhaslivedahappylifesince.Shehassetupagoodexampletothelaid-offworkers.1.theworker→a2.on1992→in3.thework去掉the4.otherjob→another5.afraid后加of6.byother→others7.goodin→well8.callo