Unit1續(xù)寫經(jīng)典實訓(xùn)1.圣誕鈴鐺講義高中英語人教版

2022年高一下讀后續(xù)寫（1）細(xì)品讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Itwas

ChristmasDay.Robinwasworkingalonefixinganoldlanterninthebackroomwhenheheardtheringingofhisbellontheshopdoor.The

bell,whichproducedauniquelypleasantsound,hadbeeninhisfamilyforoverahundredyears.Hevalueditdearlyandenjoyedsharingitssongwithallwhocametohisshop.Althoughthebellhungontheinsideofthemaindoor,

Robinhadtiedawiretothescreendoorsothatitwouldringwhethertheinnerdoorwasopenornot.Hearingthebell,heleftthebackroomtogreethiscustomer."AndhowcanIhelpyou,littlelady?"hisvoicewasjoyful."Hello,sir."

Thelittlegirl

spokealmostinawhisper.ShelookedatRobinwithherbigbrowneyes,andthenslowlyscannedtheroominsearchofsomething

special.Shylyshetoldhim,"I'dliketobuyapresent,sir.""Well,let'ssee,"Robinsaid,"whoisthis

present

for?""My

grandpa.It'sformygrandpa.ButIdon'tknowwhattoget."Robinbegantomakesuggestions."Howaboutapocketwatch?It'singoodcondition."Thelittlegirldidn'tanswer.Shehadwalkedtothedoorwayandputhersmallhandonthedoor.Sheshookthedoorgentlytoringthebell.Robin'sfaceseemedtoglowashesawhersmilingwithexcitement."Thisisjustright,"thelittlegirlsaid."Momsaysgrandpalovesmusic."Justthen,hisexpressionchanged.Fearfulofbreakingthelittlegirl'sheart,hetoldher,"I'msorry,Missy.That'snotforsale.Maybeyourgrandpawouldlikethislittleradio."Thegirllookedattheradio,bowedherhead,andsadly

sighed,"No,Idon'tthinkso."Inanefforttohelpherunderstand,Robintoldherthatthebellhadbeenhisonlypanion,fortherestofhisfamilywereallgonenow,exceptforhisestranged(疏遠(yuǎn)的)

daughter

whomhehadnotseenfornearlyadecade.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100詞左右。2.應(yīng)使用4個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語。3.續(xù)寫部分為一段,開頭語已為你寫好。4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Withagianttearinhereye,thelittlegirllookedupathim.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：LaterthateveningwhenRobinwasclosinguptheshop,heheardafamiliarringing._________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1：Withagianttearinhereye,thelittlegirllookedupathim.______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：LaterthateveningwhenRobinwasclosinguptheshop,heheardafamiliarringing._____________________續(xù)寫素材分析：“圣誕鈴鐺”Paragraph1“disappointed”1.她眨了眨眼以掩飾她的些許的失望，輕聲地說，“對不起”。(ing形式做狀語)Blinkingtohide/cover/conceal/maskhermilddisappointment,shesaidgently,“I’msorry.”令她大失所望的是她未買到特別的禮物。Toherutter/bitter/extremedisappointment,shedidn’tgetanythingspecial.“hesitant”1.Robin靠在門上，顯然陷入了沉思。(done做狀語)Heleanedagainstthedoor,apparently

lost/sunkin

thought.2.面對是否要將鈴鐺給小女孩這個抉擇，Robin皺著眉頭,內(nèi)心充滿矛盾。(done做狀語)

Facedwiththe

decisionwhethertosellthebellouttothegirl/regardingsellingoutthebelltothegirl,Robinwasfull

of

contradictions,frowning.3.他小心翼翼地把鈴鐺解開，凝視了幾秒，似乎在和一個老朋友告別。Heuntied/unfastened/undidthebellcarefully/delicately/cautiously,andstaredat

the

bellfor

afew

seconds,asifsayinggoodbyetoanoldfriend.“sad”1.小女孩失望地走出去，頭低著。（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨立主格）Disappointed/with

frustration,thegirlwentout(with)her

head

down.

2.無果的嘗試讓她愁云滿面。(castashadow/cloudofgloom)Afruitlessattemptwould

cast

a

shadow

on/upon/overher.“happy”1.聽到此，小女孩臉上/眼睛里露出喜色。Her

face

lightedup/litup/brightened/wasbeamingat

the

goodnews,Her

eyes

sparkled

herpleasureatthenews.2.心滿意足，小女孩朝他感激地笑了笑，開心地走了出去,這使Robin既欣慰又悲傷。（adj.做狀語）Perfectlycontented/pletelysatisfied/ontopoftheworld,thelittlegirlgavehimagratefulsmileandgotouthappily/delightedly/heartily,whichmadeRobinsadandrelieved.3.心里歡呼雀躍，小女孩走出去，把鈴鐺緊貼在胸前。（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨立主格）Cheersinmind,thelittlegirlgotout,withthebellheldclosetoherchest.Paragraph2“surprised”他正要抬頭看,突然聽到一陣興奮地聲音：“外公，圣誕節(jié)快樂！”Hewasjustabouttolookupwhenheheardofarippleof

excitement:“MerryChristmas,Grandpa”.2.他一看到站在小女孩旁邊的女士，Robin就因為震驚而麻木/站著一動不動。Atthesightoftheladybesidethelittlegirl,Robinwasnumbed/insensitivewith/in

shock,standingstill./Robinstoodtheredumbfoundedinshock.“excited”1.他努力控制住自己的情緒，眼淚留下臉頰。(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨立主格)Hestruggledtokeep

control

of

hisemotions,(with)tearsrunningdown

his

cheeks.2.眼里噙著幸福的淚水，她伸出雙臂緊緊地抱住他。(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨立主格)(With)happy

tears

gatheredin

her

eyes/(With)happytears

welledupinher

eyes,sheheldherarms

outstretchedaroundhimtightly./Shestretchedout

herarmsand

embraced

him

close/fast.參照答案Paragraph1：Withagianttearinhereye,thelittlegirllookedupathim.Withthebination/mixtureofpityanddisappointment,shemurmured,“I’msorrytohearthat.”Thelittlegirlwipedhertears,turnedaroundandsteppedtothedoor.WhenRobingazedatthegirlassheleft,thememoryabouthisdaughtercrowdedintohismind.Suddenly,Robincalledout,“Doyoureallywantit?”Hearingthat,thegirlnoddedexcitedly.Robinadded,“TodayisChristmasDayandthebellwil