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ContinuationWritingCompanionofDaughterandMotherTherewassomethingintheelderlywoman'sgracethatcaughtmyeye.Althoughslowandunsureofhersteps,thewomanmovedwithdeliberation（從容）,andtherewasnohesitationinhergestures.Itwasafewyearsago,andIhadtakenapart-timeholiday-seasonjobinavideostoreatthelocalshoppingmall.Frominsidethestore,Icouldseethepeopleoutsiderushingby.Theelderlywomanenteredthestore,alongwithherdaughter,whowasdisplayingaseriouscaseofimpatience,rollinghereyes,sighingandcheckingherwatcheveryfewseconds.Iguessedifshehadpossessedarope,shewouldhavefastenedittohermothertodragheralongtokeepstepwiththerushofothershoppers.TheelderlywomanseparatedfromherdaughterandbegantoseekthroughtheDVDsonthenearestshelf.Aftertheslightesthesitation,IwalkedoverandaskedifIcouldhelpherfindsomething.

Thewomansmiledupatmeandshowedmeatitlewrittenonanoldpieceofpaper.RatherthanrushofftolocatetheDVDforthewoman,IaskedhertowalkwithmesoIcouldshowherwhereshecouldfindit.Lookingback,IthoughtIwantedtoenjoyhercompanyforamoment.

Somethingaboutherdeliberatemovementsremindedmeofmyownmother,

who'dpassedawaythepreviousChristmas.ImissedmymomandstillfeltregretfulaboutthemomentswhenI'dusedmyimpatiencetomakeherlifeunhappy.Aswewalkedalongthebackofthestore,Iintroduceditsfloorplan:oldtelevisionshows,actionmovies,cartoons,sciencefiction.Thewomanseemedgladoftheunrushedcompanyandcasualconversation.WefoundtheDVDandshethankedme,sayingthatitwastheoneshe'denjoyedwhenshewasherdaughter'sage.

Unwillingly,Iaccompaniedhertothecashregister,realizingIhadtoreturntheelderlywomantoherdaughter,

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stilltappingherfootatthefrontofthestore.Paragraph1:Astheelderlywomanwaswaitinginthequeueatthecashregister,Iwalkedovertoherdaughter.______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardthestore?sexit.______________________________________________________________________:Videostore:afewyearsago;theyearafterhermotherpassedaway01Readforsetting&charactersC--CharactersThemomThedaughter

IS--Setting(where/when)WhereWhenTherewassomethingintheelderlywoman'sgracethatcaughtmyeye.Althoughslowandunsureofhersteps,thewomanmovedwithdeliberation(從容),andtherewasnohesitationinhergestures.Itwasafewyearsago,andIhadtakenapart-timeholiday-seasonjobinavideostoreatthelocalshoppingmall.Frominsidethestore,Icouldseethepeopleoutsiderushingby.Theelderlywomanenteredthestore,alongwithherdaughter,whowasdisplayingaseriouscaseofimpatience,rollinghereyes,sighingandcheckingherwatcheveryfewseconds.Iguessedifshehadpossessedarope,shewouldhavefastenedittohermothertodragheralongtokeepstepwiththerushofothershoppers.TheelderlywomanseparatedfromherdaughterandbegantoseekthroughtheDVDsonthenearestshelf.Aftertheslightesthesitation,IwalkedoverandaskedifIcouldhelpherfindsomething.elderly;grace;determined;impatient;irritable易怒的;

Thewomansmiledupatmeandshowedmeatitlewrittenonanoldpieceofpaper.RatherthanrushofftolocatetheDVDforthewoman,IaskedhertowalkwithmesoIcouldshowherwhereshecouldfindit.Lookingback,IthoughtIwantedtoenjoyhercompanyforamoment.

Somethingaboutherdeliberatemovementsremindedmeofmyownmother,

who'dpassedawaythepreviousChristmas.ImissedmymomandstillfeltregretfulaboutthemomentswhenI'dusedmyimpatiencetomakeherlifeunhappy.Aswewalkedalongthebackofthestore,Iintroduceditsfloorplan:oldtelevisionshows,actionmovies,cartoons,sciencefiction.Thewomanseemedgladoftheunrushedcompanyandcasualconversation.WefoundtheDVDandshethankedme,sayingthatitwastheoneshe'denjoyedwhenshewasherdaughter'sage.

Unwillingly,Iaccompaniedhertothecashregister,realizingIhadtoreturntheelderlywomantoherdaughter,

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stilltappingherfootatthefrontofthestore.

likemymotherlonely

regretfullonely;01Readforsetting&charactersC--CharactersThemomThedaughterThesellerelderly;grace;determined;likemymotherimpatient;irritable;

lonely;regrettedAmotherandadaugtherenteredavideostore.02ReadforcluesIaccompaniedthemothertofindtheDVDshewanted.Theoldladywenttothecashregister;thedaughterwasstilltappingherfoot.??????????PlotdiagramPara1.

Astheelderlywomanwaswaitinginthequeueatthecashregister,Iwalkedovertoherdaugher.Para2.Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardthestore’sexit.par1-2beginningpar3-6duringpara7climax

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Astheelderlywomanwaswaitinginthequeueatthecashregister,Iwalkedovertoherdaugher.____________________________________________________________________A.請問你是女士的女兒嗎？對方愛答不理......B.父母親是生我們養(yǎng)我們的人，他們做的一切都是為我們好，我們應(yīng)該尊重他們....C.勸誡她趁著母親還在身邊好好陪伴,對待母親D.自己感到很后悔，沒有陪伴母親,讓母親不開心E.聽了我說的話，女兒似乎被觸動了.....走向她的媽媽Emotions

thedaughter:________________

I____________________________________ACDE02ReadforcluesandemotionsParagraph2:

Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardthestore’sexit.______________________________________________________________________

arrogant傲慢的----ashamed/movedcautious---regrettedParagraph2:Togethertheymadetheirwaytowardthestore’sexit.______________________________________________________________________A.女兒放慢了腳步，伸出自己的胳膊，隨意卻又鑒定地挽住了母親。B.母親緊緊地抱著女兒，臉上綻放出燦爛的笑容。C.看著她們的笑臉，我意識到，就在這一刻，兩代人之間的堅冰融化成一條溫暖的溪流D.輕柔的音樂在店里回響，如同母親的輕撫，讓愛的音符流進(jìn)了人

們的靈魂和心田。E.第二天，母親來店里向我道謝。ABCD02Readforcluesandemotionsemotions:

delighted&moved03theme:

Identifythethemebyaskingyourself:Whoistellingthestory?Whatisthestoryabout?Whatistheauthortryingtosaytothereader?familyrelationshiporhelpA.Theelderlywomanenteredthestore,alongwithherdaughter,whowasdisplayingaseriouscaseofimpatience,rollinghereyes,sighingandcheckingherwatcheveryfewseconds.B.

Lookingback,IthoughtIwantedtoenjoyhercompanyforamoment.C.Somethingaboutherdeliberatemovementsremindedmeofmyownmother,

who'dpassedawaythepreviousChristmas.D.ImissedmymomandstillfeltregretfulaboutthemomentswhenI'dusedmyimpatiencetomakeherlifeunhappy.E.

Unwillingly,Iaccompaniedhertothecashregister,realizingIhadtoreturntheelderlywomantoherdaughter,

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stilltappingherfootatthefrontofthestore.04Readforlanguagestyles05topolishthesentences

情節(jié)1.我詢問“請問你是哪位女士的女兒嗎？”她愛答不理Whenaskedwhethertheelderwomanwashermother,shesaidyeswithannoyanceinherreply,halfsighandhalfgroan.情節(jié)2.趁著母親還在身邊，好好陪伴,對待母親Strivingtokeepmyvoicecalm,Imentioned

neverhadIgotthetruemeaningofthewords“Imissyou”untilIreachedformymom’shandanditwasn’tthere.當(dāng)我問她那個老婦人是不是她的母親時，她說是的，回答中透露著惱怒，半是嘆氣半是抱怨。05topolishthesentences

情節(jié)3.自己感到很后悔，沒有陪伴母親,讓母親不開心Eventoday,IwasoverwhelmedwithregretsandguiltwhenthinkingofhowIhadturnedablindeyetomymother’scompanionandherloneliness.情節(jié)4.聽了我說的話，女兒似乎被觸動了Impressedbymywords,sheseemedtoberemindedofthemomentswhenshewasalwaysimpatientwithhermother.05topolishthesentences

情節(jié)5.

女兒放慢了腳步，伸出自己的胳膊，挽住了母親。Shesloweddownherpace,stretchedoutherarm,andlinkedhersthroughhermother’sinacasualbutdeterminedway.情節(jié)6.看著她們的笑臉，我意識到，就在這一刻，兩代人之間的堅冰融化成一條溫暖的溪流----------我也開心愉悅起來Seeingtheirsmilingfaces,Irealizeditwasatthisverymomentthattheicebetweentwogenerationsmeltedintoawarmcurrent,flowingintotheirhearts.

Seeingthetwoimmersedthemselvesinthebeautyofthemusicandenjoyedthepreciousmother-daughtertime,Icouldhardlysuppressthesmileandenjoyedthesamehappinessaswasfloodingthroughme.05ahappyandharmoniousending

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輕柔的音樂在店里回響，如同母親的輕撫，讓愛的音符流進(jìn)了人們的靈魂和心田。Thesoftmusicflowedacrosstheshop,asgentleasamother’stouchandflowedoverpeoplewithnotesofloveintotheirsoulsandhearts.2.陽光透過窗戶，照在他們身上，見證了這和諧的場面，溫暖而永恒。Thesunlightfilteredthroughthewindowandshoneontheirshoulders,witnessingtheharmoniuslove,warmandeternal永恒.3.當(dāng)我注視著那對母女的背影時，我的心里泛起了一絲暖意，并夾雜著幸福。ArippleofwarmthmingledwithhappinessranthroughmyheartwhenIstaredafterthemotherandherdaughterfadinginthecrowds.Astheelderlywomanwaswaitinginthequeueatthecashregister,Iwalkedovertoherdaughter.“Mindsomeadvice?”Iaskedcautiously.Sherolledhereyesandmumbledwithannoyance,“ofcoursenot”,halfsighandhalfgroan.Strivingtokeepmyvoicecalm,Imentioned

neverhadIgotthetruemeaningofthewords“Imissyou”untilIreachedformymom’shandanditwasn’tt