讀后續(xù)寫+自強不息朋友父親送我自行車+練習(xí) 高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項

名校聯(lián)盟高三上學(xué)期第一次大聯(lián)考英語讀后續(xù)寫題目:閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。BeforeIturnedten,Ihadlostbothmyparents.Ilivedaloneinaroomthatarelativehadallowedmetouserent-free.Andtosupportmyselfandmyeducation,Ihadtakentodeliveringnewspapers.Iwouldgetupeverymorningby5amandwalkfivekilometresfromKachiguda,whereIlived,tothenewspaperofficeinTroop’sBazaar.By6am,Iwouldcollect50copiesofManzil(UrduDaily)-thebundlemusthaveweighedoverfivekilograms.Mybeatspannedthreekilometres,fromMoazzamJahiMarkettoBasheerBagh.Afterdistributingthecopies,Iwouldrushhome-anotherthreekilometresaway,cookmymeaslybreakfast,andbeofftotheKachigudaHighSchool.IwasinClassSevenandeventhoughIhadweeklyholidays,therewasnobreakfromthiswork.OnewintryFridaymorningin1945,Igothomeaftermydeliveries,onlytofindaboyofmyageatmydoorstep.HeintroducedhimselfasAfzalandsaidhisfatherwantedtoseeme.WhenIaskedhimwhy,Afzalsaid,“Hewilltellyou.”Iassumedhisfatherwishedtosubscribetothenewspaper,soIfollowedhimtohishomenearby.Afzal’smother,NaseemBano,openedthedoor.Sheaskedmetosit,pattedmybackandwentinside.Shereappearedcarryingalargetrayfullofteaandsnacks.ThencameMrKader,Afzal’sfather,tellingmeAfzalwastheironlysonandastudentinmyschool.Naseempulledupherchairnexttomineandgentlyasked,“Tellmeaboutyourroutine,rightfromthetimeyouwakeupinthemorning.”Iwasn'tquitesurewhyshewantedtoknowthat,butItoldheraboutmymorningjobinafewwords.Later,asIwasabouttoleaveafterthankingthem，MrKaderaskedmetowaitandsteppedinsidethehouse.Meanwhile，Naseemaskedme,“Howmanymilesdoyouwalkeveryday?”Ireplied,“Alittlemorethan11km.”Myreplyshockedher.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:Atthesametime,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.Para2:MrKaderbegantoexplainwhyhegavemethebicycle.官方范文，Atthesametime,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.

Itwasaquiteexpensivenewbike.IwasfixingmyeyesonitwhenIheardMrKader'swords.“Thisisforyou!hesaid.“ButIhavenomoneytopayforit,"Imurmured.Afzal'smotherputherarmaroundmyshoulders,gaveagentlesqueezeandsaid,“Whoisaskingyoutopayforit,myson?"lttookafewsecondsfortheendearmenttosinkin.ltfeltwarm,likehome,asifmymotherwerethereforme.MrKaderbegantoexplainwhyhegavemethebicycle.

Hesaid,“Yournewspapereditorisafriendofmine.Hegavemeyouraddress,soIknewyoulivedcloseby.ThenAfzaltoldusmoreaboutyou."Ibowedgratefully.Ididn’evenrealizethatmyeyeshadwelledup,andtearswererollingdownmyface.Afzal'smotherwipedmytearsandheldmecloser.Thebicyclechangedmylifeformanyyearsthereafter.Irealizedthattimelyandneeds-basedhelpisincomparablyprecious.參考范文一，Atthesametime,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.

Withawarmsmile,hesaidgently,“IwanttogiveyouthisbicycleandIwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptit.”Shocked,Icouldn’thelpexaminingthenewbicycle,whichwasshinywith2bigwheels.Withit,Icouldquickenmydeliveryspeed,delivermorenewspapersandtakesomerest.However,myinstinctreplywas“No,sir.Ireallyappreciateyourkindness,butIcan’t.”Deepdown,Ihadaccustomedtodependingonmyown,weatheringalldifficultiesbymyself,andtheunexpectedkindnesswasbeyondmy“comfort

zone”.

MrKaderbegantoexplainwhyhegavemethebicycle.

“Youngman,Ihaveheardalotaboutyou.You’relivingalifethatisreallyhard,butyou’veaccomplishedwhatmostpeoplewouldyieldto.Actually,youhaveinspiredmyfamilyalotwithyourpersistenceandnevergivingup.Pleaseacceptitasmysignofrespect.”ThesewarmwordsbrokedownmypsychologicalbarrierwhichIhadbuilt,exposingmypainsandhardwork.Holdingbacktears,Ithankedhimfromthebottomofmyheart.Thewayinfrontofmewastoughandfullofdifficulties,but

IwasconvincedthatIwouldgothroughit.Thebicyclewasjustlikealight,offeringmehopeandsupportwhenIwasexhausted.

參考范文二，Atthesametime,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.

Smilingwarmly,hesaid,“Thisisforyou.”Iwasstunnedandfixedmyeyesonthebicycle,whichgleamedinthesunlight,asymboloffreedomandopportunityIhadneverexpected.“ThanksbutIcouldn’tpayforit”,Iwhispered,feelingdown.“Kid,itisagift,totallyfree.”Afzal’smothersmiled,pattingmyshouldergently.Icouldn’tbelievemyears,becausethisbicyclewouldbeagame-changerforsomeonelikemewhohadbeenwalkingover11kilometerseveryday.Icouldn’tbelievemyluck.

MrKaderbegantoexplainwhyhegavemethebicycle.

“Weweremovedbyyourdeterminationandcommitmenttoyoureducation.Afzelhere,beingastudentinyourschool,toldusaboutyourdailyhardships.Webelieveinthepowerofeducationandwanttoeaseyourjourneytowardsit.”Teaswelledupinmyeyesastheirkindnessoverwhelmedme.Thatbicyclenotonlylightenedmydailyloadbutalsosymbolizedthesupportandempathyofacaringfamily.Fromthatdayon,Ipedaledtocollectnewspaper,distributedthem,andstillmanagedtogettoschoolontime.IwouldalwaysbearinmindthekindnessfromMr.Kader’sfamilywhotaughtmethetruemeaningofcompassionandthevalueofeducation.

參考范文三：Atthesametime,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.Thatisabrandnewandveryexpensivebicycle.ThisisexactlythebicycleI'vebeendreamingof,butIdarenotdreamtoomuchofit.WhenIheardMr.Kadel'swords,Iwasstaringatitintently.Dearchild,thisisforyou!"Hesaid.ButIdon'thavethemoneytopay,"Iwhispered,loweringmyheadandnotdaringtolookathim.Afzal'smotherhuggedmyshoulderandgentlysqueezed,saying,"Whowantsyoutopay,myson?"Ittookafewsecondsforthisfeelingtotakerootinpeople'shearts.Ifeelverywarm,justlikeawarmhome,asifmymotherisbymyside.MrKaderbegantoexplainwhyhegavemethebicycle.

Hepatientlyexplained,"Yournewspapereditorhappenstobeagoodfriendofmine.Hegavemeyouraddress,soIknewyoulivednearby.ThenAfzaltoldusmoreaboutyou.Yourperseverancehasmovedus.Ibowedgratefully.Ididn'tevenrealizethatmytearshadwelledupandrolleddownmyface.Afzal'smothergentlywipedmytearsandheldmecloser.Sincethen,bicycleshavechangedmylifethereformanyyears,andtheloveandwarmthofmyparentshavealwaysinspiredmetomoveforward.Irealizedthattimelyandon-demandhelpisextremelyprecious.參考范文四：Atthesametime,IsawMrKaderemergeagain,wheelinganewbicycle.

Hesmiledenthusiasticallyandsaidfondly,"Thisisagiftforyou.Itwillhelpyou,mychild."Iwascompletelystunned,myeyesfixedonthisbike,itlooksgreat.Thebicycleshinesbrightlyinthesunlight,whichisapreciousgiftthatIhaveneverthoughtof.Thankyou,butIcan'taffordit,"Iwhispered,feelingdown.Child,thisisagiftoflove,andit'scompletelyfree."Afzal'smothersmiledatmeandgentlypattedmyshoulder.Iwidenedmyeyesandcouldn'tbelievemyears,becauseforsomeonelikemewhowalksover11kilometersaday,thisbicyclewillchangean