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Outlining(提綱)

Analysing(審題)

Drafting(草稿)

Polishing(修改)

Proofreading(校對)Transcribing(謄寫)

2WritingSteps明確文章的目的和體裁標出說明和要點中的關鍵詞確定每個要點的時態(tài)確定每個要點的人稱WritingStepsAnalysing(審題)

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在你臨近畢業(yè)之際，你(張華)的網(wǎng)友（Peter）發(fā)來郵件和你暢談畢業(yè)心情，你立即回復，回信中提到：1.初中階段你有哪些收獲;2.初中階段你有哪些遺憾或未實現(xiàn)的愿望;3.你對未來的高中生活有哪些計劃或打算。4.最后你會盡全力爭取考出好成績。要求:1.90詞左右,首句已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);2.字跡工整,語言流暢,表達準確,邏輯清晰。DearPeter,Thelifeofmyjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend._________________________________________________threeparagraphsWritingStepsOutlining(提綱)

AboutjuniorhighschoolAboutnowAboutseniorhighschoolthreetopicsentences2WritingStepsProofreading(校對)

2WritingStepsTranscribing(謄寫)

23Howtopolishyourdraftreplacejuniorvacabularyemploypropersentencepatternsaddpropertransitions有益的第一反應詞good替代詞beneficialwealthysignificant重要的富有的importantrichof+n.example3-1replacejuniorvacabularyreplacejuniorvacabularyexample3-1解決第一反應詞solve替代詞deal/copewithsparenoefforttodoforinstance例如盡力forexampletrytodoreplacejuniorvacabulary實際上第一反應詞infact替代詞actuallyasamatteroffactinrealityexamplereplacejuniorvacabulary3-1立即atonceimmediatelywithoutdelay3Howtopolishyourdraftreplacejuniorvacabularyemploypropersentencepatternsexample3-2employpropersentencepatterns

吉姆每天準時到校。Jimcomestoschoolontimeeveryday.Jimneverfailstocometoschoolontimeeveryday.第一反應句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns巧用雙重否定Practice

他必須采取行動才能實現(xiàn)夢想。Hemusttakeactiontoachievehisdream.Hecan'tachievehisdreamwithouttakinganyaction.第一反應句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns

這樣做的話，我們才能有個美好的將來。Ifwedolikethis,wecanhaveagoodfuture.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyabrightfuture.第一反應句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns倒裝句型

天安門廣場緊鄰故宮博物院。Tian'anmenSquareisnexttothePalaceMuseum.NexttothePalaceMuseumisTian'anmenSquare.第一反應句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns

我們還是小孩子,父母理應保護我們。Wearestillchildrenandourparentsshouldprotectus.Wearestillchildrenandshouldbeprotected.第一反應句替代句被動語態(tài)example3-2employpropersentencepatterns

因為他的粗心駕駛才發(fā)生了事故。Hehadanaccidentbecauseofhiscarelessdriving.Itwasbecauseofhiscarelessdrivingthathehadanaccident.第一反應句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns

他們很熟悉這個校園。Theyknowtheschoolverywell.Theydoknowtheschoolverywell.第一反應句替代句Practice強調(diào)句型example3-2employpropersentencepatterns省略句When/WhileIwassleeping,Iheardaloudnoise.When/Whilesleeping,Iheardaloudnoise.if/when/wheneverpossible/necessaryifso/not/anyexample3-2employpropersentencepatterns她是個友好的女孩，總是面帶微笑和我們說話。Sheisafriendlygirl,andshealwaystalkstouswithasweetsmile.Sheisafriendlygirlwhoalwaystalkstouswithasweetsmile.第一反應句替代句定語從句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns我非常喜歡運動，運動使我保持健康。Ienjoysportsverymuch,andtheyhelpmekeephealthy.Ienjoysportsverymuch,whichhelpmekeephealthy.第一反應句替代句定語從句Practiceexample3-2employpropersentencepatterns雙重否定被動語態(tài)省略句倒裝句型強調(diào)句型定語從句3Howtopolishyourdraftreplacejuniorvacabularyemploypropersentencepatternsaddpropertransitions3-3addpropertransitionsexample表因果關系：表并列補充關系：表進行舉例說明：表達自己觀點：表文章結構順序：

表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關系：

表總結：

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…firstofall,andthen,intheend/finally…h(huán)owever,but,although…inshort,inaword,allinall,…practice3

在你臨近畢業(yè)之際，你(張華)的網(wǎng)友（Peter）發(fā)來郵件和你暢談畢業(yè)心情，你立即回復，回信中提到：1.初中階段你有哪些收獲;2.初中階段你有哪些遺憾或未實現(xiàn)的愿望;3.你對未來的高中生活有哪些計劃或打算。4.最后你會盡全力爭取考出好成績。要求:1.90詞左右,首句已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);2.字跡工整,語言流暢,表達準確,邏輯清晰。DearPeter,Thelifeofmyjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend.______________________________________________________appreciation4

Thelifeofmyjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend.SinceIcametothejuniorhighschool,I’vegainedconfidenceandhappiness.Withthehelpofourteachers,I’velearnedplentyofknowledge.Besides,I’vemadesomegoodfriends.

However,thereisstillsomethingthatIfeelsorryabout.BecauseIwasbusywithmyschoolwork,Icouldn’tkeeponreading.Onceinawhile,IfeltsoupsetandanxiousthatIquarreledwithmyparents.

Inthefuture,I’llgetonwellwithmyparents.Meanwhile,I’lltrytomakegooduseofmytimeandspendmorefreetimereadingbooks.I'vemadeupmymindtosaprenoeffortto