高考英語復習浙江強基聯(lián)盟讀后續(xù)寫-Findbackmydog-Spider講義

續(xù)寫題目：狗與主人再團圓MyfamilymovedfromToowoomba,CanadatoLondonin1950.Mymotherwasingreatpainfromthe1950s

epidemicofpolio

（小兒麻痹癥）.ShewishedtovisitspecialistsinLondon.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,

Fatherbadeatenderfarewelltohisfiveyearold

“friend”

atthedock（碼頭）,anAustraliancattledog,Spider,who

waslovedbyusall.Father’sfriendSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas.Sixweekslater,aletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwo

weeksafterwehadsailed.Iwillalwaysremembermyfather'sfacecrumblingandhiseyesglisteningashereadthe

letter.Wetriedtoforthim,knowinginourheartshowuselessthiswas.Sandyhasadvertisedconstantlyon

ABCradioandotherlocalnewspapers.Despitesome

“sightings”

inthedockatfirst,thedogwasneverfoundlater.

ItseemsSpiderdecidedtosearchforuselsewhere.WesailedbacktwoyearslaterandreestablishedourhomeinToowoomba.Myfatherimmediatelybeganhis

ownsearchingforSpider.SeveralmonthspassedbuttherewasstillnonewsconcerningSpider.Thedogwasgone,

possiblyshotordeadfromstarvationorexhaustion.Onecoldmorning

eightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromanoldladywhosaidshewas

puttingfoodout“foraveryolddog”.Inthenightthefooddisappeared.Thishadbeengoingonforafewweeks.

Thatwasenoughformyfathertointerruptmyhomeworkandwesetoffimmediately.Whenwearrivedattheold

lady’shouse,sheinvitedusintoanoldbush.Sadly,shethentoldusthatthe

“dingodog”

hadn’tbeenaroundfora

fewdays.Myfatherhadastrangelookinhiseye.Heputtwofingerstohislipsanddidhisspecialwhistle

（口哨）forSpider.Paragraph1:Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.Paragraph2:Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.前情回顧：1950年，由于母親與小兒麻痹癥有關(guān)的健康問題，全家從加拿大圖文巴搬到倫敦。臨走前，父親向他心愛的澳大利亞牛頭犬蜘蛛道別。父親的朋友Sandy同意在全家出國期間照顧Spider。Sandy的一封信告訴家人，Spider在他們離開兩周后逃跑了。盡管努力尋找他，包括在ABC電臺和當?shù)貓蠹埳系菑V告，Spider仍然下落不明。兩年后，一家人回到圖文巴，父親再次開始尋找蜘蛛。一位老太太聯(lián)系了這家人，報告她一直在喂一只“很老的狗”，可能是蜘蛛。老太太把他們帶到一棵老灌木，但說“野狗”已經(jīng)好幾天沒見了。.父親試圖用兩根手指抵住自己的嘴唇，以此來喚回蜘蛛。續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：第1段：突然灌木叢中出現(xiàn)了一聲狗叫。(1)Ourattentionisdrawn(2)Spiderappears(descriptionofappearance)(3)Peopleanddogsgathertogether第2段：從那時起，Spider和我父親會在碼頭閑逛(1)Thesignificanceofthedock(2)Descriptionofhumandoginteraction(3)Humandogemotionalevaluation(4)Borrowingdockforsublimation參考范文1Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.

“ItmustbeSpider!”

myfatheryelledexcitedly.Andthenextmomenthewasoutinthebush,followingthesoundofthebark.Curiously,Ifollowedmyfather’sfootsteps,prayingthatsomemiraclewouldeup.Yes,thereinthebushlayadog,skinnyandhungry,AnditwasourSpider,thedogwehadbeenmissingbadlyandlookingformadly.Hestruggledtohisfeet,approachedusandthrewhimselfintomyfather’sarms,whichmadehiseyesmoisten.Asiffindingbackhislonglosttreasure,myfatherscoopedupthedog,putitintothecarand,withheartfeltgratitudetotheoldlady,headedbackhome.Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.

BothmyfatherandSpiderenjoyedthemomentstogether.Everymorning,theywouldgreetthenewdaytogether,watchingthesunrisingbeyondthehorizonandtheshipssailingoutofthehustlingharbor.Andtowardstheevening,theywouldembracethelastrayofthesunlightdisappearingbehindthehorizonandwatchshipsinginforaquietnight.Dayinanddayout,Spiderwasgraduallybackonhisfeetwithmyfather’scareandtheirbondseemedtobestrengthening.Deepdownatheart,myfatherpromisedtohimselfthathewouldneverleavehisSpideraloneagainnomatterwhathappened.AndhewouldacpanySpidertilltheendoftheworld.參考范文2Suddenlythere

wasasoundinthebush.Outofthegrowthflewthisbattereddogrightinto

myfather'sarms.Spiderhadleapedoverthetenniscourtfencewithgreatforceandcertainty.

Myfather'seyesshone,andtheoldladyandIstoodtherewithtearsinoureyes.Hekeptlicking

myfather'sfaceandmakingchokingnoises.Hesmeltdreadful.Wewrappedhiminanold

blanketandIheldhimonmylaponthewayback.

Heneveroncetookhiseyesoff

myfatheras

wedrovehome.

EverysooftenIreceivedalickofgratefulness.Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.Oncehome

wehadthetaskof

gettingallthepricklesoff

him.Beforehewasputina

tintub,wegentlycleanedhimupwithsoap.

Spiderstoodstoicallythroughallthisasmyfather

alsoexaminedhisteethandears.Spiderspenttherestofhisdaysyearsonthefrontporch,

contentandsatisfied,

alwaysinwaitformysisterandmeinghomefromschoolwherehe

wouldgiveusalotoflickstomakesurewewereallright.Hethenwaitedformyfatherbythe

garagedoor.

Weneverlefthimanywherealoneagain.參考范文3Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.

However,nothinghappened,Daddroppedhishead,sawbislipsweretrembling.Nervousashewas,dadtriedagainandagain,desperateandhopeless,.Atthatverymoment,ayellowdotappearedattheendoftheroad.“WasitSpider?"Myheartbegantobeatwidely,mypalmsconstantlysweating.Ididn'tknowwhattodo.Dadgrabbedmycoatandrushedstraightahead,prayingforathousandoftimesthedogwasourSpider.Closerandcloser.FinallylcouldclearlyseethepoordogSpider.Itwashim,mylonglostfriend,spider..Spiderlookedlikeanoasisonthevastandbarelandofthedesertformydad.Oh,poorSpider.Wesawthepitifulpetdognow,coveredwithdustanddirt.Andoneofitslegswasbadlyhurt.Everyonepresentheldtheirbreathandlater,thefiled,crowdcouldn'tstoptheirtears.Fromthenon,Spiderandmyfatherwouldhangoutatthedock.BothmyfatherandSpiderenjoyedthemomentstogether.Everymorning,theywouldgreetthenewdaytogether,watchingthesunrisingbeyondthehorizonandtheshipssailingoutofthehustlingharbor.Seeingthesmileondadsface,lfeltrelivedthatheregainedhislosttreasureagain.Sunshinecastingaworeglowontheground,thecrazebutrewardingexperiencewasdeeplyengravedinmymind,givingmealostfriendagain.Alloureffortsweren'tinvain!參考范文4Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.

Myfatherjumpedoutofhisseatandranoutside.WeheardhimcallingSpider'sname,Wewaitednervouslyinside,prayingthatSpiderwould

ebacktous,Afterafewminutes,weheardmyfather'svoiceagain,louderandmore

excitedthistime.

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