2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語料積累之如何表達(dá)激動(dòng)背誦與測試 解析版

專題17讀后揉寫語料積累之如何表達(dá)激動(dòng)背誦與測武（詞-

句?文）講義

解析版

一、必背單詞

1.激動(dòng)類形容詞：

excited,thrilled,exciting,thrilling

2.激動(dòng)類副詞：

excitedly

3.激動(dòng)類名詞：

excitement,thrill

4.激動(dòng)類動(dòng)詞：

excite,thrill

二、高頻語塊

1.cheerup振奮起來

2.with/inexcitement激動(dòng)地

3.flushwithexcitement激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅

4.conceal/hideone'sexcitement難掩激動(dòng)

5.containone'sexcitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)

6.toone飛excitement/thrill令某人激動(dòng)的是

7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激動(dòng)的尖叫聲

8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮

三、佳句賞析

1.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動(dòng)，難以成聲。

2.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動(dòng)而放出光彩。

3.Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。

4.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。

5.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動(dòng)而發(fā)亮。

6.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動(dòng)不已。

7.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。

8.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽到這個(gè)消息,一陣激動(dòng)的

戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。

9.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的心,

他感到一陣興奮。

10.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.當(dāng)主持人宣布她

獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她興奮得不能自己。

11.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.爸爸說下

星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。

12.Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,hethrewhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,"Thankyou,

dearmum."不能抑制住他的高興和激動(dòng)，他一下子撲到我的懷里，喃喃道：媽媽，辛苦了。

測試鞏固區(qū)：分級(jí)測試步步為贏

一、高頻語塊漢譯英

L振奮起來

2.激動(dòng)地

3.激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅

4.難掩激動(dòng)

5抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)

6.令某人激動(dòng)的是

7.激動(dòng)的尖叫聲

8.一陣興奮

【參考答案】

1.cheerup振奮起來

2.with/inexcitement激動(dòng)地

3.flushwithexcitement激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅

4.conceal/hideone'sexcitement難掩激動(dòng)

5.containone'sexcitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)

6.toone'sexcitement/thrill令某人激動(dòng)的是

7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激動(dòng)的尖叫聲

8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮

二、佳句賞析漢譯英

1.他情緒激動(dòng)，難以成聲。

2.他的臉由于激動(dòng)而放出光彩。

3.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。

4.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。

5.她紅紅的臉因激動(dòng)而發(fā)亮。

6.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動(dòng)不已。

7.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。

8.聽到這個(gè)消息，一陣激動(dòng)的戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。

9.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的心，他感到一陣興奮。

10.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí),她興奮得不能自己。

11.爸爸說下星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。

【參考答案】

1.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動(dòng)，難以成聲。

2.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動(dòng)而放出光彩。

3.Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。

4.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。

5.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動(dòng)而發(fā)亮。

6.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動(dòng)不已。

7.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。

8.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽至U這個(gè)消息，一陣激動(dòng)的

戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。

9.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的心,

他感到一陣興奮。

10.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.當(dāng)主持人宣布她

獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她興奮得不能自已。

11.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.爸爸說下

星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。

三、情感表達(dá)片段運(yùn)用

請(qǐng)運(yùn)用以上必備單詞或高頻語塊，把下面的語篇補(bǔ)充完整。

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalong

theriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,]（媽媽激動(dòng)不已）.

Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2（抑制興奮），andwould

3（振奮起來）likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround

4（興奮地）.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5（激動(dòng)得

尖叫起來），Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6（眼

里閃著激動(dòng)的光芒）,wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.

【參考答案】

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalong

theriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,awaveofexcitementtakingholdof

Mom.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardlycontainherexcitement,andwouldcheer

uplikeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaroundwithexcitement.Themoment

wearrivedatthecampingplace,lettingoutascreamofthrill,Momlocatedaclearingandimmediately

guidedustopitchthetent.Witheyesqlittering/twinkliiiYwithexcitement,wesatonthegrass,

enjoyingthesplendidnature.

四、情感表達(dá)語篇運(yùn)用

1.（2023上?廣西?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)

成一篇完整的短文。

I'veforgottenalmosteverythingaboutmyearlychildhoodexcepttheconcert,andmymotheralso

remembersit.

WhenIwasafive-year-oldboy,Iwaslearningtoplaythepianoinamusicalschool.Oneday,afamous

pianomasterwassaidtoholdapianoconcertinourcity.Wishingtoencouragemyprogressonthepiano,my

mothertookmetotheconcert.Afterwewereseated,mymotherspottedafriendintheaudience,whoshehadn't

metforalongtime.Soshetoldmetostayinmypositionandthenwalkeddownthepassagetogreetherfriend.

Mymotherandherfriendstoodchattinghappilyforawhilebeforetheperformance.Meanwhile,Iwassoexcited

toseetheconcertstagethatIstoodupandeventuallymademywaythroughadoormarked“NoAdmittance^^to

explorethewondersoftheconcerthall.

Whenthehouselightsbecamedimandtheconcertwasabouttobegin,mymotherreturnedtoherseat.And

shediscoveredthatIwasmissing.Mymothersaidshefeltreallyguiltyatthattimeandthatshesaidtoherself,

“It'smyfault.Ishouldn'thaveleftmylittlesonaloneinhisplace."Confusedandanxious,shelookedaround,but

Iwasnowheretobeseen.Suddenly,thecurtainpartedandspotlightsfocusedontheimpressivepianoonthestage.

Tohersurprise,shesawmesittingbythekeyboardinnocentlyplayingTwinkleTwinkleLittleStaronthepiano.

Atthatmoment,thepianomastermadehisentrance.Seeingme,alittleboy,sittingatthecenterofthestage

andplayingthepiano,heseemedtobecompletelyataloss.Butthenhequicklymovedtothepianoand

whisperedinmyear,"Don'tquit.Keepplaying."Leaningover,hereachedaroundtotheothersideofmeand

soonaddedarunningobbligato（伴奏）.Together,wetransformedafrighteningsituationintoacreativeexperience.

Theaudiencehadneverseensuchaperformanceform.Theylistenedcuriouslyandattentively,lostinthe

wonderfulmusicworld.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Whenthepiececametoanend,thepianomasterbreathedasighofrelief.

Aftertheconcert,mymotherandIwaitedforthepianomasterbackstage.

【滿分范文】

Whenthepiececametoanend,thepianomasterbreathedasighofrelief.Heturnedtome,huggedmeand

said,“Myboy,youreallydidagoodjob."Heroseandtookmetothecenterofthestage.Warmandloud

applausebrokeoutintheaudiencebeforehecouldsayaword.Peopleclappedandcheeredforourwonderful

cooperation.Excitedlyandhappily,Iranintomymother'sarmsandtookmyseatagain.Welistenedtothe

musicmorecarefullyandsatthroughtheconcerttogether.

Aftertheconcert,mymotherandIwaitedforthepianomasterbackstage.Seeinghimcoming,mymother

cameuptohimandsaidapologetically,t4Itakemylittlesontoyourconcertinthehopethathecanbenefitfromit.

Ididn'texpectthathe'druntothestage...Herepliedwithasmile,64Ilikeyourboy.Oneday,heisgoingtobe

somebody.9,Hearingthewords,mymotherwassorelievedandtouched.Thankstothemaster,Igotnotonly

thechancetosteponstagebutalsotheconfidenceformyfuturepathofmusic.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了小時(shí)候媽媽帶著作者去看音樂會(huì)，作者誤走入舞臺(tái)上彈鋼琴的故

事。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)這首曲子結(jié)束時(shí)，鋼琴大師松了一口氣?！笨芍?，第一段可

描寫作者彈完鋼琴后鋼琴大師鼓勵(lì)作者，觀眾也給作者鼓掌，作者很高興。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“音樂會(huì)結(jié)束后，我和媽媽在后臺(tái)等鋼琴大師?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫媽媽向鋼琴大

師道歉，大師很欣賞作者，認(rèn)為作者以后會(huì)有所作為，多虧了大師，作者現(xiàn)在能登上舞臺(tái)，而且對(duì)未來的

音樂之路充滿信心。

2.續(xù)寫線索：彈完曲子一一鋼琴大師鼓勵(lì)作者一一觀眾鼓掌一一高興，回到座位上欣賞音樂一一音樂會(huì)結(jié)

束一一向大師道歉一一大師很欣賞作者一一作者如今音樂有所作為

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①擁抱某人：hugsb./givesb.ahug

②鼓掌：clap/applaud

③走近：comeupto/approach

情緒類

①興奮地：Excitedly/withexcitement

②感動(dòng)的：touched/moved

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Excitedlyandhappily,Iranintomymother?sarmsandtookmyseatagain.（由副詞作

伴隨狀語）

[高分句型2]Seeinghimcoming,mymothercameuptohimandsaidapologetically,“Itakemylittlesontoyour

concertinthehopethathecanbenefitfromit.（由現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句）

2.（2023上?湖南岳陽?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之

構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Forsomeweeks,Ihadnoticedanelderlywomanwalkingpastourhouse,pushingagrocerycartfilledwith

trashbags.Icouldn'thelpbutfeelsorryforherassheshuffled（拖著腳走路）along.Occasionally,shewould

pauseandpickupacanfrombesidetheroad.Shewouldcarefullyputitintooneofthebagsandcontinueonher

way.

Iwonderedwhatcircumstanceshadbroughthertothispointinlife.Didshehavenofamily?Wasthereno

onetolookafterher?

Oneevening,Icouldnolongerstandit.Asshewalkedby,Iwentouttothestreetandstoppedher.

“Madam,“Isaid.uCanIaskyousomething?^^

Sheturnedtolookatmewithbeautiful,darkeyesthattwinkledinherwrinkledface.Iknewthenthatshe

wasnoordinaryhomelessperson.Therewasdignityand,yes,evenjoyabouther.Suddenly,Ifeltembarrassedto

askhermyquestions,butIinsisted.

'Tveseenyouforafewweekspickingupcans,“Iexplained.4tDoyousellthemtobuygroceries?^^

“No,"shesaidwithasmile."Idothistohelpthechildren.^^

Imusthavelookedconfusedbecauseshewentontoexplain.

“Ihadcancer-twice——andbothtimesIwenttoabighospitalinanothertown.Theycuredme.ButwhileI

wasthere,Imetthechildren,andI'veneverforgottenthem.Idon'thaveanymoney,butIcanstillwalk,andI

pickupthesecanstosellthemformoneyforthehospital.^^

Shetoldmethatshespendsmanyhoursaweekcollectingcans;atleasttwobusinessessavecansforher.

Whenshehasenough,sheloadsthemallintoafriend^pickup,andthetwoofthemtakethemtothecitywhere

thehospitalislocated.Theretheygetcashedout.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

“No,no.Idon'twantyourmoney,“sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

【滿分范文】

Aswecontinuedtotall,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.t4Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyof

myagestillwalkontheroadtomakesomemoneybycollectingcans,"shesaid.“Iknowifsnotmuch,butevery

littlebitcounts.AndwhenIseethechildrensmile,itmakesallthehardworkworthit.I'vebeenblessedinmy

life.Iwanttodosomething,andthisissomethingIcando.Apartfromthat,thereisnothingIcandotoensure

personslikemeareblessed.Itdoesn'tcostmemuch-onlythecostofthegas-andithelpsthechildren.^^

Hearingthis,Ireachedintomypurseandpulledsomebillsout.

“No,no.Idon'twantyourmoney,9,sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit."ButIwantyou

totakeit,“Itoldher."Useitforgasorwhateveryouwant.^^ShesmiledandfinallytookthebillsIheldout.She

thengavemeahug.Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stopping

occasionallytopickuponeortwo.Atthecorner,sheturned,smiled,wavedandwasgone.AndIrealizedat

thatmomentthatnotallangelshavelightandwings.Somehavegrocerycarts.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了幾個(gè)星期以來，作者注意到了一個(gè)推著一輛裝滿垃圾袋的購物車

的老婦人，于是詢問老婦人的個(gè)人情況，在得知了老婦人遇到的困難后，作者想要給老婦人錢，但是開始

被拒絕了，在我的堅(jiān)持下她收下了錢。作者認(rèn)為老婦人像天使一樣。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“隨著我們繼續(xù)交談，我越來越了解她的想法”可知，第一段可描寫作者和老婦人交

談以及老婦人的感受。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容"不，不。我不要你的錢，'她回答說，揮了揮手，后退了一點(diǎn)」可知，第二段可

描寫老婦人拒絕了作者的錢，作者如何說服她收下錢以及作者的感悟。

2.續(xù)寫線索：交談一一深入了解一一拿錢幫助一一被拒絕一一說服老人收下一一作者感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①撿起：collect/pickup

②看見：see/spot/notice

③確保：ensure/makesure

情緒類

①幸運(yùn)：blessed/lucky

②值得：worthit/worthwhile

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]“Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyofmyagestillwalkontheroadtomakesome

moneybycollectingcans,“shesaid.（運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)賓語從句和when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stopping

occasionallytopickuponeortwo.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

3.（2023?全國?模擬預(yù)測）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的

短文。

WhenIenteredmyfirstrodeo（牛仔競技比賽）,Iwas12yearsold.Itwasmorelikeaplaydaythanarodeo,

buttoa12-year-oldgirllikeme,IfeltlikeIwasattheNationalFinalsRodeo!

Astobarrelracing（繞桶賽），Ididn'tknowmuchaboutit,onlywhatmydadhadtoldme.ButIhadbeen

determinedtoentertheplayandwintheplayeversinceIwastoldthatmynotsomucholdercompetitivecousin

Courtneywouldbethere.ThiswasmynighttofinallyshowherthatIcouldrideahorsejustasgoodorbetter,and

doanythingelseshecoulddo.Shewasinforasurprise!

Courtneyalwaysthoughtshewasbetterthanme.Shealwayssaidherhorsewasbetterthanmine,too.

CourtneyhadaPalominohorsenamedBuck.Hewasfast,andbeautiful.MyhorsewasabigAppaloosanamed

Zipper.Hewasn'tbeautifulorflashylikeBuckbuthewaskindandwillingtopleasetheskinnylittlegirlthatfed

himsugarseverydayafteradayofriding.ThatwasthereasonIknewwecouldbeatCourtney,becausewehad

somethingshedidn't-apartnership,onewebothrespected.

CourtneyandIwereinthe12-14agegroup.AsIwatchedthemeninthearena（競技場）setthethreebarrels

upintheirplaces,Ifeltnervousandalittlescaredforthefirsttimethatnight.ThoughIhadpreviouslypracticeda

lotwithZipper,andZipperracedfastandmadeturnsstably,Istillgotupsetwhenthinkingaboutracingagainst

Courtney!

Iclosedmyeyes,takingadeepbreath.Suddenly,Ifeltawarmfamiliarhandonmyshoulder.ItwasDad.He

smiledatme,saying,t6Areyouscaredornervous?Orboth?”"Both,butFmmorescaredthatI'mgoingtomess

up,“Ireplied,truthfully.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,“Dadsaid.

Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone.

【滿分范文】

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,9,Dadsaid.ThafswhenIrealizedIwasnotgoinginto

thatarenaalone,butwithmypartner!Zipperhadbeenpracticingjustashardasme.SoIthought,ifImessedup,

hewouldberighttheretocorrectme."Iknowwhattodo,Dad.Thankyou.^^Dadjustsmiled,€4Nowgowarmup

andwina