建議信寫作評講課件高一下學期英語作文復習專項

Aletterofadvice

—evaluateandpolishPracticalwritingWhatmakesagoodcomposition?EvaluateanddiscussReadandevaluatethecomposition.Doyouthinkit’sagoodcomposition?Giveyourreasons.假定你是李華，你的朋友Jim即將升人高中，擔心高中生活節(jié)奏太快，怕趕不上別的同學，感到很困惑。請你給他寫一封電子郵件,提一些學習建議。內容包括:1.與老師交流;2.上課積極，專心聽講，做好筆記;3.課后準時完成作業(yè),

鞏固知識。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結尾已經給出,不計人總詞數(shù);2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫Basicstructureandcontentofaletterofadvice“Head”(para.1):1.Backgroundinformation2.Writingpurpose“Body”(para.2):suggestionsandreasons

“Tail”(para.3):expectationsandwishes1.communicatewithteachers2.beactive,listenattentivelyandtakedownnotescarefully.3.finishhomeworkontimeandconsolidate(鞏固)wahtyouhavelearned1.Usingtransitionsentence(過渡句),topicsentence(主題句)andtransitionwordstomakeyourcompositionclear(清晰的),logical(有邏輯的)andcoherent(連貫的).Firstofall,firstly,tobeginwith,firstandforemost...Inaddition,besides,moreover,additionally,furthermore,moreimportantly...Lastly,lastbutnotleast...LanguagePara.1:Backgroundinformation(problem)+writingpurposecommonexpressionsinparagraph1.Problem:1.havetrouble/difficulty/problemsdoing2.beworried/anxiousabout..3.beconfusedabout...4.beupsetabout...你的朋友Jim即將升人高中，擔心高中生活節(jié)奏太快，怕趕不上別的同學，感到很困惑。

提一些建議Purpose:withtheintention/aimof...inanefforttodo...withthehopeofPara.1:Backgroundinformation+writingpurposeHavingknownthatyouareworriedaboutyourhighschoollife,I’mwritingto

offeryousomeusefulsuggestions,

hopingtheycanbehelpful.2.Iknowyouareworriedaboutyourhighschoollife.I’llgiveyousomesuggestions.Ihopetheycanhelpyou.(用非謂語改寫)1.I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Theywillhelpyou.(用定從改寫)句式升級：I'mwritingwiththeintentionofgivingyousomepractical/constructivesuggestions,whichwillbeofgreathelp.I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions,whichwillhelpyou.RewritethesentencesPara.2(Body):suggestionsWhatexpressionswillyouusewhenyougiveadvice?Youshould...Youmust...notpolite,improper為什么不...如果我是你的話，我會毫不猶豫去做...做...對你是有幫助/重要的的。你最好...做...是一個明智的選擇最重要的事情是你...強烈建議你做...我強烈建議你做...Whynotdo...

IfIwereyou,Iwouldnothesitatetodo...Itisofhelp/importance/significanceforyoutodosthYou’dbetterdosthItwouldbeawisechoiceifyoudo/it’sadvisabletodo.Themostimportantthingisthatyou...It’shighly/stronglysuggested/recommendedthatyoudosth...Ihighly/stronglyrecommendthatyoudosth...Keywordsandphrasesinparagraph2交流：參與：認真地，專心地：communicatewith,interactwithtakeanactivepartin,participatein,get/beinvolvedin,involveoneselfin,engageinattentively,intently,earnestly,withallone’smind,withdedicationPara.2(Body):suggestionsTranslatethesesentencesintoEnglish.(6mins)1.首先，你最好經常與老師交流，他們可能給你提供一些對于你學習和生活有價值的建議。（定語從句)首先，經常與老師交流是一個很好的緩解壓力的方法，因為他們可以給你提供你需要的幫助。(動名詞作主語）2.除此之外，積極參與課堂、認真聽講，做好筆記也很重要。(it作形式主語)

只有這樣有才能提高課堂上的效率(efficiency)。(倒裝句)Firstofall,you’dbettercommunicatewithyourteachersregularly,whomayoffersomevaluableadviceonbothyourstudyandlifetoyou.Besides,it’salsoimportantto

involveyourselfineachclass,listentotheteachersattentivelyandtakedownnotescarefully.Onlyinthiswaycanyouimproveyourefficiencyinclass.Firstly,interactingwithyourteachersisagoodwaytorelievestress,becausetheycangivethehelpyouneed.Para.2(Body):suggestionsTranslatethesesentencesintoEnglish.(6mins)3.最后，我強烈建議你課后準時完成作業(yè)，這可以幫助你練習并鞏固(consolidate)你學到的知識。（賓語從句+定語從句）Lastbutnotleast,Ihighlyrecommendthatyoufinishyourhomeworkontimeafterschool,whichcanhelpyoupracticeandconsolidatewhatyouhavelearned.LanguagePara.3(“tail”):expectationsandwishes1.Idohopemysuggestionswillbeofgreathelp.

2.Hopefully,mysuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.3.It’smysincerehopethatyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration/account.4.Ihopethesesuggestionswillgiveyouareliefandhelpyousolveyourproblems.5.Iwillbemorethandelightedifyoufindmysuggestionshelpful.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Commonsentencepatterns

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Tobevaried..goodhandwriting.tidyandneat.appropriatenumberofwords1.從句的使用clause2.非謂語形式non-predicate3.it作形式主語4.倒裝句invertedsentence5.副詞adverbs,短語phrases3paragraphstopicsentencetransitionsentencetransitionwordsArethereproblemsofyourcomposition?Polishyourcompositionusingyourredpen.self-evaluationandpolishPractice假設你是李華，你的好友Tom上學期隨父母去了另外一個城市，寫信告訴你他很不適應新的校園生活，感到很孤獨并希望你給出建議。請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他回一封電子郵件。1.多交一些朋友;2.積極參加各種活動;注意：80詞左右開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:adaptto適應。Usewhatyouhavelearnedandwritethisletterofadvice.DearTom,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtoyournewschoollife.Iunderstandhowlonelyitcanbetobeinanewplace.I’mwritingwiththeintentionofofferingsomepracticalsuggestionstoyou.

Firstly,Istronglysuggestthatyoushouldtrytomakemorefriends,whocanalwaysbringyouhappiness