Unit10Ifyougotothepartyyoullhaveagoodtime!課時4Writing（教師版）八年級英語上冊講義（人教版）

Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagoodtime!Writing知識精講知識精講話題分析本單元的話題談?wù)撋钪杏龅降睦щy及其引發(fā)的感受，會提出合理的建議。并對未來的生活有規(guī)劃。寫作目標能描述青少年在生活中遇到的困難及其引發(fā)的感受和事情的后果，能針對問題提出建議。1．能用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句談?wù)撌虑榈慕Y(jié)果；2．能正確使用情態(tài)動詞should提出建議。詞匯積累(一)煩惱與問題類短語1．和某人吵架________________2．失去所有樂趣________________3．上課遲到________________4．丟失錢包________________5．沒有足夠的時間學(xué)習(xí)________________6．犯粗心錯誤________________7．感到害羞________________8．成績不好________________9．起床遲________________10．在某方面有麻煩________________(二)解決問題類短語1．討論你的問題________________2．告訴你的父母________________3．分擔你的問題________________4．什么都不做________________5．向老師尋求幫助________________6．向某人道歉________________7．為英語考試而學(xué)習(xí)________________8．計劃做某事________________9．環(huán)游世界________________10.接受教育________________11．上大學(xué)________________12．從專家處得到建議________________13．從……逃離________________14．與某人交談________________15．要求某人更細心________________16．解決問題________________(三)其他短語1．太……以至于不能________________2．擁有豐富的經(jīng)驗________________3．最后________________4.感覺一樣________________二、句子積累(一)佳句欣賞與模仿1．Ifweaskpeopletobringfood，they'lljustbringpotatochipsandchocolatebecausethey'llbetoolazytocook.【asksb.todosth.要求某人做某事；too…to…太……以至于不能】一些家長常要求孩子努力學(xué)習(xí)，但他們因為太忙以至于不能了解孩子的真正煩惱。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Ithinktalkingtosomeonehelpsalot.InEnglish，wesaythatsharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.【動名詞在句中可以作主語、表語、賓語、定語等】逃避問題會使你感到更糟。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)用“if”推理下列行為的后果，并提出合理的建議。1．Mikedecidestoworkwithoutfinishinghiscollege.Ifhedoes，________________________________________________________________________Ithinkheshould________________________________________________________________________2．Ilostmywalletlastweek，butIamstillafraidtotellmyparents.Ifyou________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________3．SuMei'sbrothercan'tdowellinEnglish.HeplanstogiveuplearningEnglish.If________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________(三)給下面青少年存在的問題提出合理的建議。1．Bettyalwaysrunsawayfromherproblemsandtellsnobody.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________2．Linglingisheavy.Someclassmatesoftenlaughather.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________【答案】一、詞匯積累(一)煩惱與問題類短語1.getintoafightwithsb.2.missallthefun3.arrive/belateforclass4．loseone'swallet5.nothaveenoughtimetostudy6.makecarelessmistakes7.feelshy8.haveproblemswithschoolwork9.getuplate10．haveproblemswithsth.(二)解決問題類短語1.discussyourproblems2.tellyourparents3.shareyourproblems4.donothing5.asktheteacherforhelp6.saysorrytosb.7.studyfortheEnglishexam8.plantodoaroundtheworld10．getaneducation11.gotocollege12.getadvicefromanexpert13．runawayfrom14.talktosomeone15.asksb.tobemorecareful16.solveproblems(三)其他短語1.too…to…2.havealotofexperience3.intheend4.feelthesamewayas二、句子積累(一)佳句欣賞與模仿1.Someparentsoftenasktheirchildrentostudyhard，buttheyaretoobusytoknowtheirchildren'srealtrouble.2.Runningawayfromproblemswillmakeyoufeelworse.三、篇章訓(xùn)練設(shè)想一下，將來你會成為一名什么？如果成為一名教師，律師，運動員……，你覺得有何好處和壞處？工作環(huán)境怎樣？請根據(jù)提示寫一篇60—80左右的英語短文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】本文對自己未來的職業(yè)和生活作了展望，屬于記敘文寫作。作者先明確未來要做演員，接著介紹當演員的好處和未來生活；最后是自己的感受IthinkIwilllivehappily。【佳作展示】MaybeIwillbeeanactor.IfIbeeanactor,IwillstarmanymoviesandTVplays.Iwillworkwithmanypeople.IfIactTVplaysormovieswell,Iwillbeveryfamousandwillbeabletomakealotofmoney.Manyyoungpeoplewatchmeallthetime.IwillbuyabighouseinBeijingorJinanandaskmyparentstolivewithmetogether.Iwillalsogivesomemoneytoschoolsinpoorareasandcharities.IfIdothesethings,IthinkIwilllivehappily.【名師點評】例文點評：這篇習(xí)作先寫未來的職業(yè)再談感受，屬于“總分式”結(jié)構(gòu)；以一般將來時為主，用第一人稱敘述；內(nèi)容充實，想象合理，描述細致，表達條理，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。高分亮點：高分短語：TVplays,workwith,beableto,makemoney,alotof,allthetime,asksb.todosth.,livewith.高分句型：1).IfIbeeanactor,IwillstarmanymoviesandTVplays.（條件狀語從句）2).Iwillbeveryfamousandwillbeabletomakealotofmoney.（并列結(jié)構(gòu)）3).IthinkIwilllivehappily.（賓語從句）【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。范文最后用含有賓語從句的if條件句IfIdothesethings,IthinkIwilllivehappily.說出了自己的感受，顯示出較好的語言功底。能力拓展能力拓展1．書面表達設(shè)想一下，將來你會成為一名什么？如果成為一名教師，律師，運動員……，你覺得有何好處和壞處？工作環(huán)境怎樣？請根據(jù)提示寫一篇60—80左右的英語短文。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．書面表達時間都去哪兒了？這是許多成年人的感慨，也是一些中學(xué)生的煩惱：沒有時間做作業(yè)，沒有時間從事個人愛好……其實，時間就在我們的掌握之中，關(guān)鍵是能否合理利用。請根據(jù)提示，以＂Howtospendourtimeproperly＂為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。HowtospendourtimeproperlyWherehasourtimegone?Howshouldwespendourtimeproperly?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifso,I’msurewewillliveahappierschoollife.3．書面表達假設(shè)你是David，你的好朋友Toby非常喜歡體育運動，但是他的父母不允許他花費太多時間在運動上，為此他很苦惱。請你根據(jù)下面的提示給他寫一封信，針對他的問題，提出你的建議，并給他一些安慰和鼓勵。提示：1.WhatshouldDaviddoinhisstudy？2.WhatshouldDavidtalktohisparents？3.WhatshouldDaviddotohisparents？要求：1.語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當發(fā)揮；2.70詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearToby，I’msorrytohearthat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，David參考答案1．MaybeIwillbeeanactor.IfIbeeanactor,IwillstarmanymoviesandTVplays.Iwillworkwithmanypeople.IfIactTVplaysormovieswell,Iwillbeveryfamousandwillbeabletomakealotofmoney.Manyyoungpeoplewatchmeallthetime.IwillbuyabighouseinBeijingorJinanandaskmyparentstolivewithmetogether.Iwillalsogivesomemoneytoschoolsinpoorareasandcharities.IfIdothesethings,IthinkIwilllivehappily.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文對自己未來的職業(yè)和生活作了展望，屬于記敘文寫作。作者先明確未來要做演員，接著介紹當演員的好處和未來生活；最后是自己的感受IthinkIwilllivehappily。2.例文點評：這篇習(xí)作先寫未來的職業(yè)再談感受，屬于“總分式”結(jié)構(gòu)；以一般將來時為主，用第一人稱敘述；內(nèi)容充實，想象合理，描述細致，表達條理，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。3.高分亮點：高分短語：TVplays,workwith,beableto,makemoney,alotof,allthetime,asksb.todosth.,livewith.高分句型：1).IfIbeeanactor,IwillstarmanymoviesandTVplays.（條件狀語從句）2).Iwillbeveryfamousandwillbeabletomakealotofmoney.（并列結(jié)構(gòu)）3).IthinkIwilllivehappily.（賓語從句）【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。范文最后用含有賓語從句的if條件句IfIdothesethings,IthinkIwilllivehappily.說出了自己的感受，顯示出較好的語言功底。2．HowtospendourtimeproperlyWherehasourtimegone？Howshouldwespendourtimeproperly？Asstudents，itisimportantforustostudy，soweshouldmakeaplanforeveryday．Mostofall，weshouldlistencarefullyinclass．Forhomework，weneedtomakealistandworkouthowmuchtimeweneed，andthenfinishthemonebyone．Hobbiesarealsoimportantinourlivesanddifferentstudentshavedifferentkindsofhobbies．Theycanmakeusfeelhappyandconfident．Butwedon’tneedtospendsomuchtimeonthem．Soweshouldachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandourhobbies．Inotherways，weneedtime，too．Forexample，weoftenspendalotoftimetalkingwithourfriendsatlunchtimeandwatchingTVattheweekends．Ifso，I’msurewewillliveahappierschoollife．【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于怎么利用我們的時間的文章。動筆前先要認真閱讀