01.選擇性Unit5Revealingnature觀察日記

Unit5Nurturingnature單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)觀察日記單元話題考題展示觀察日記【新高考模擬試題】你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)開設(shè)了“LearningtoObserve”欄目。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇黃豆芽（soybeansprouts)生長(zhǎng)觀察日記，并向該欄目投稿，內(nèi)容包括：觀察過(guò)程你的體會(huì)注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。本單元寫作項(xiàng)目是描寫植物生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程的觀察日記。觀察日記多是親身經(jīng)歷和耳聞目睹的事情，所以要用第一人稱來(lái)寫;日記多是記述發(fā)生過(guò)的事情，因此常使用一般過(guò)去時(shí),但使用時(shí)必須靈活掌握。日記應(yīng)條理清楚,寫出真實(shí)感。此外,應(yīng)注意日記的格式，包括日期、星期和天氣的書寫位置。觀察日記篇章結(jié)構(gòu)一般采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu):第一段:表明寫作目的;第二段:為主體部分,記錄植物的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程;第三段:記錄作者的感受。考向分析與應(yīng)對(duì)策略近幾年高考對(duì)日記的考查較少，但日記也是應(yīng)用文中比較實(shí)用的一種文體。日記書寫的注意事項(xiàng)入局如下：(1)日期、星期一般頂格寫在正文之前?？梢韵葘懶瞧冢髮懩暝氯?，也可以先寫年月日，后寫星期幾。(2)天氣情況應(yīng)寫在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之處。表示天氣情況常用fine,cloudy,rainy,snowy,windy,stormy,sunny等形容詞來(lái)表示。(3)正文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該思想健康，積極向上。文章可長(zhǎng)可短，開頭語(yǔ)應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)潔，結(jié)尾可適當(dāng)發(fā)表感想。（4）日記或周記的題材廣泛，一般來(lái)說(shuō)要求記錄一次意義非凡的事件，例如：宣傳節(jié)約用水活動(dòng)、幫助父母做家務(wù)、現(xiàn)場(chǎng)或在電視上觀看一場(chǎng)比賽、畢業(yè)前夕制作畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的過(guò)程、一次有意義的旅行、一次有意義的志愿者活動(dòng)或助人為樂的事件等等。(5)日記和周記的寫作思路：第一部分，交代事件及發(fā)生的時(shí)間和場(chǎng)所；第二部分，描寫事件的經(jīng)過(guò)及具體細(xì)節(jié)；第三部分，自己的感受及感想。話題詞匯

1.growthconditionsoftheplant植物的生長(zhǎng)條件2.aholelargeenough足夠大的洞3.puttheearthbackinthehole把土放回洞里4.upto20feetinlength長(zhǎng)達(dá)20英尺5.selectproperseeds選擇合適的種子6.alightapplicationoffertilizer輕施肥料7.species物種8.observation觀察9.process過(guò)程10.growth生長(zhǎng)11.conditions條件，環(huán)境12.environment環(huán)境13.suitable適合的14.container容器15.sprout發(fā)芽話題句式1.Onthefirstday,Iputsomeseedsintoabasin.第一天,我把一些種子放進(jìn)一個(gè)花盆。2.ThenIpouredsomewaterintothebasin,forthisplant..y然后我把一些水倒入花盆，因?yàn)檫@種植物……3.Iplacedthebasinunderthesun.我把花盆放在陽(yáng)光下。4.Severaldayslater,theyoungplantsbeganogrowoutofthesoftsoil.幾天后,幼苗開始從松軟的土壤中長(zhǎng)出來(lái)。5.Iputthebasinintheroomtoavoidthehotsun.我把花盆放到房間里來(lái)避開烈日。6.Theseyoungplantsbegantogrowrapidly...這些幼苗開始快速地生長(zhǎng)……7.Nowtheyhavegrownintotallplants.現(xiàn)在它們已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)成了高高的植物。8.I'msurprisedat...我對(duì)……感到驚訝。III.模版框架觀察日記篇章結(jié)構(gòu)一般采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu):第一段:表明寫作目的;第二段:為主體部分,記錄植物的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程;第三段:記錄作者的感受。假設(shè)你是李華,英語(yǔ)老師讓你觀察某種植物的生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所拍攝的圖片寫一篇觀察日記,記述苗的生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程,以便在英語(yǔ)課上跟大家分享。內(nèi)容包括:1.播種方式;2.生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程;3.生長(zhǎng)結(jié)果。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:蒜瓣garlicclove;嫩芽tendershoot;蒜苗garlicsprout________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作分析】[總體布局]觀察日記主題觀察植物生長(zhǎng)體裁應(yīng)用文布局第一段播種方式第二段生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程第三段生長(zhǎng)結(jié)果人稱以第一、三人稱為主時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主I.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語(yǔ)填空1.________________________肩并肩地,并排地2.________________________出來(lái)3._________________________n.根4.________________________n.厘米答案1.sidebyside2.getoutof3.root4.centimetreⅡI.本單元語(yǔ)塊、語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用1.完成句子第一部分:播種方式(1)Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthem________________________(并排地)inaroundplasticbowl,andthepointedends________________________(朝上).第二部分:生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程(2)Withthegarlic_________________________(生長(zhǎng)),therootsgrow________________________(越來(lái)越 長(zhǎng)). Theroots_________________________(看起來(lái)像)thewhitebeardofGrandpa.第三部分:生長(zhǎng)結(jié)果(4)Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigherdaybyday,andthey________________________(已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)到20厘米左右了).答案(1)sidebyside;facedup(2)growing;longerandlonger(3)looklike(4)havegrowntoabout20centimetres2.句式升級(jí)(5)用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句(1)6)用定語(yǔ)從句合并句(2)和句(3)答案Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.連句成篇January8Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.ThenIpouredenoughwaterintothebowlandputitinasunnyplace.Everyday,Iwaterthemontime.January16Manylightgreentendershootsaregettingoutofthecloves.Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.January24Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigherdaybyday,andtheyhavegrowntoabout20centimetres.Allofthemlookverybeautiful,andarenotlessbeautifulthandaffodils.寫作積累實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練2一、單句翻譯1.讓我告訴你如何種樹。2.以下是我對(duì)它們生長(zhǎng)的觀察。3.給樹挖一個(gè)足夠大的坑，但坑不應(yīng)該太深。4.在土壤中種植兩周后，幼苗的葉子逐漸生長(zhǎng)成較大的傘形葉子。5.這朵粉紅色的花吸引了幾只蜜蜂，它們圍著花兒飛舞。6.觀看它們的生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程就像欣賞花朵一樣有趣。7.通過(guò)觀察，我發(fā)現(xiàn)親自觀察草莓的生長(zhǎng)過(guò)長(zhǎng)很有趣。Letmetellyouhowtoplantatree.Hereismyobservationoftheirgrowth.Digaholelargeenoughforthetree,buttheholeshouldnotbetoodeep.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgraduallygrowintolargerumbrellashapedleavesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Thepinkflowerattractsseveralbees,whicharedancingaroundit.Watchingtheirgrowthprocessisasinterestingasenjoyingtheflowers.Throughtheobservation,Ifinditinterestingtowatchthegrowthprocessofstrawberriesinperson.二、語(yǔ)篇翻譯Inordertolearnhowsoybeansgrowintosoybeansprouts,Igrewsomebymyself.Andhereismyobservation.Whenhighqualitysoybeanshavebeenkeptincleanwaterfortenhours,theybegintobeesoftandtheircolourbeeslighter.Then,whentheyareputinacontainerandkeptinaplacewherethereisnosunlightforoneday,softsmallbudsstarttoappear.Duringthefollowingthreedays,thebudsgraduallybeelongerandlonger.Onthefourthday,thebudspletelygrowintomaturesoybeansprouts.Watchingthegrowthofsoybeansproutsisapleasure·andIenjoythisprocessofobservation.書面表達(dá)假如你是李華,你想研究一下向日葵從種子到植株的生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇觀察日記:1.你把向日葵種子埋進(jìn)一個(gè)花盆里,澆了些水;2.幾天后,盆中長(zhǎng)出了幼苗;你把花盆放在屋里,避免陽(yáng)光暴曬;3.幼苗在茁壯地成長(zhǎng),幾天后就長(zhǎng)得很高了;4.你對(duì)于它的生長(zhǎng)很是驚訝。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnedayIburiedsomeseedsofsunflowersintoabasin,wheretherewassomerichsoil.Afterpouringsomewaterintothebasin,Ibegantoobserveitwithgreatpatience.Severaldayslater,somegreenshootsgrewoutofthesoil,whichweresolovely.Seeingthatthesoilwasalittledry,Iaddedsomewatertoitagain.Afterseveraldays,theseyoungplantsgrewintosometallplants,whichwereverystrong.IwassurprisedatwhatIsawthatday!Howamazingitistowatchaseedbeeatallplant!【新高考模擬試題】你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)開設(shè)了“LearningtoObserve”欄目。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇黃豆芽（soybeansprouts)生長(zhǎng)觀察日記，并向該欄目投稿，內(nèi)容包括：觀察過(guò)程你的體會(huì)注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inordertolearnhowsoybeansgrowintosoybeansprouts,Igrewsomebymyself.Andhereismyobservation.Whenhighqualitysoybeanshavebeenkeptincleanwaterfortenhours,theybegintobeesoftandtheircolourbeeslighter.Then,whentheyareputinacontainerandkeptinaplacewherethereisnosunlightforoneday,softsmallbudsstarttoappear.Duringthefollowingthreedays,thebudsgraduallybeelongerandlonger.Onthefourthday,thebudspletelygrowintomaturesoybeansprouts.Watchingthegrowthofsoybeansproutsisapleasure·andIenjoythisprocessofobservation.下午數(shù)學(xué)考試，你成績(jī)不好，心情郁悶。晚上幾個(gè)好朋友邀你去歌廳(KTV)唱歌，你們一晚上唱得很盡興。你用日記的形式記錄下你今天的活動(dòng)及感受。日記須包括以下幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：(1)你因數(shù)學(xué)成績(jī)不佳，心情一直不好。(2)晚上朋友們邀請(qǐng)你去KTV唱歌，這是你第一次去KTV。(3)大家唱得很高興，而你一直當(dāng)聽眾，你覺得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。(4)在大家的鼓勵(lì)下，你終于拿起麥克風(fēng)(microphone),唱了一首英文歌曲IBelieveICanFly(5)現(xiàn)在你心情舒暢了，更重要的是你找回了自信。(6)你在日記中對(duì)自己說(shuō)了這樣一句話：“……”注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)日記必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________