專題20-讀后續(xù)寫：情感刻畫(原卷版)-2022年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心素養(yǎng)與實戰(zhàn)演練

專題20讀后續(xù)寫：情感刻畫（原卷版）情感細(xì)節(jié)包括人物的感受、情緒，是續(xù)寫中必不可少的細(xì)節(jié)描寫之一。合理的情感情緒描寫與刻畫，可以凸顯人物的性格、人際關(guān)系的特征、以及烘托故事高潮進(jìn)而突出語篇主題等。因此，合理的情感情緒刻畫在續(xù)寫中是非常必要的。以下就是讀后續(xù)寫過程中，刻畫人物情感情緒的四個方法：一、直接描寫法直接利用恰當(dāng)?shù)谋砬楦械男稳菰~、副詞或名詞、介詞短語等表達(dá)人物的喜怒哀樂例如：快樂(happy,delighted,pleased,joyful,enjoyable等)、吃驚(surprised,shocked,amazed,astonished)等形容詞或介詞短語(toone'ssurprise,inrelief,inpanic)等描述人物的情緒。二、環(huán)境烘托法利用環(huán)境細(xì)節(jié)“融情于景”烘托人物的情感【例1】Dellafinishedhercryinganddriedherface.Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutunhappilyatagraycatwalkingalongagrayfenceinagraybackyard.(小說《麥琪的禮物》中利用3個形容詞gray，體現(xiàn)了Della的難受和不開心。)【例2】涌上心頭

sth.welluponme/sth.sweptoverme

Afloodoffearwelledupinme.一股恐懼涌上心頭。高考真題：(1)[2020.7全國新?爆米花]Hewassodelightedthathecouldhardlyspeak,buthisbrightsmilefacespokeforhim.(2)[2020.1浙江?給Poppy買狗作伴]Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelittledog.(3)[2017.11浙江?與善忘母親一同旅游]Everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourney,apleasantsmilewouldspreadoverMom’sface.三、動作反映法利用恰當(dāng)?shù)膭幼髅鑼懛从橙宋锏那榫w例如：下面文章片段中的句子：Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hoping_to_see_the_lake.(動作描寫，說明Jane滿懷期望)Tohersurprise,(利用介詞短語體現(xiàn)Jane的吃驚)shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow-cappedmountaintop.(寓情于景，體現(xiàn)Jane的無望失落)Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.四、句式變換法利用高級句式和修飾成分細(xì)化情感細(xì)節(jié)句型1：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)①“Absolutely！”repliedJohn,excitementshinninginhiseyes.(利用名詞excitement和獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，描寫John的興奮激動)約翰答道，“一定”，他兩眼興奮地閃閃發(fā)光。句型2：so...that結(jié)構(gòu)②Soangrywasthebearthatitroaredandsmackedthefenceviolently.(so...that倒裝句型)熊怒火中燒，開始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍擊護(hù)欄。句型3：how+賓語從句③Youcannotimaginehowfrightenedwewereattheapproachofthepolarbear.(how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，介詞短語)你無法想象北極熊向我們逼近時我們多么的恐懼。句式4：非常…

Iammorethan+情感類形容詞to…

I’mmorethanhappytolearnthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity.得知你被北京大學(xué)錄取，我非常高興。句式5：讓我非?！氖恰?/p>

Muchtomy+情感類名詞,…

Muchtomydisappointment,noonecameuptogivemeahelpinghand.令我非常失望的是，沒有人站過來幫助我。句子演練Ⅰ.按要求補(bǔ)全下面動作、情感和心理細(xì)節(jié)的句子1．簡又害怕又無助，靠著一棵樹坐下，歇歇疼痛的雙腳。,Janesatagainstatree,.(形容詞短語/非謂語動詞作狀語)2．“如果我沒有和湯姆吵架，我現(xiàn)在就不會被困在這里了，”她想，悔恨的淚水模糊了她的眼睛?！埃眘hethoughttoherself.(虛擬語氣的倒裝句，with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))3．她掙扎著站起來尋找那個湖。4．她精疲力竭，她爬上一塊大石頭，躺了下來，很快睡著了。(so...that狀語從句，一連串的動作)5．簡醒來時天已經(jīng)亮了。6．盡管很沮喪，她還是決定繼續(xù)前進(jìn)。,shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.(讓步狀語從句),shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.(狀語從句的省略句)7．隨著小溪的聲音，她向水邊走去。,shewalkedtowardthewater.(非謂語動詞作狀語)8．突然，她注意到遠(yuǎn)處有一個熟悉的身影向她走來。(非謂語動詞作賓補(bǔ))Ⅱ.將以上補(bǔ)全后的各句合并為短文，注意恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯舆^渡【補(bǔ)充語料1】1.憤怒類(1)Hewasfumingwithrage.

他氣得大發(fā)雷霆。（fumev.發(fā)怒）(2)Hecouldhardlycontrolhisrage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。(3)Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他氣得臉色陰沉。（臉上一塊烏云）2.悲傷憂愁類(1)Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來。(2)IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。(3)Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她手在顫抖，她快要哭了。（verge邊緣）(4)Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathewasdrownedwithsadness.聽到消息，他淹沒在悲傷中。(5)Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirface.他們坐在那里，帶著一臉憂郁。3.害怕類(1)[2018.6浙江卷：農(nóng)場游玩迷路]Tearsoffearandregretrolleddownmycheeks.(2)[2017.6浙江卷：與朋友騎車遇狼]AfterhearingMac’sexperience,theyfroze,theirmouthshangingopen.(3)Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他轉(zhuǎn)過身來，眼里充滿了恐懼。(4)Fearsslowlycreptuponher.恐懼慢慢蔓延到她身上。(5)Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她臉色蒼白站在那里，舌頭打結(jié)，說不出話?！狙a(bǔ)充語料2】關(guān)于情感句子的積累：(表達(dá)情感的形容詞+動作具體描寫），用so..that...興奮：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我激動得跳了起來開心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高興得上躥下跳。感動：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感動得一句話也說不出來。悲傷：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands.我難過得用手捂住了臉。生氣：IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我氣得一句話也說不出來。害怕：Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.我害怕得手心冒汗，心怦怦直跳。羞愧：IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感覺自己的臉在燃燒。模擬練習(xí)01讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。MissusSommers

onedayfoundherselftheunexpectedowneroffifteendollars.Itseemedtoheraverylargeamountof

money.

Foradayortwoshewalkedaroundinadreamystateasshethoughtaboutherchoices.HerdaughterJaniewaswearingwornshoesandneedednewones.Shewouldbuyclothfornewshirtsfortheboys.HerdaughterMagshouldhaveanother

dress.Andstilltherewouldbeenoughleftfornewstockingsforherchildren.Theideaabouthowtospendthedollarsmadeherrestlesswithexcitement.Onthedaysheplannedtogoshoppingwiththemoney,sheatealightmeal-no!Betweengettingthechildrenfedandthehousecleaned,andpreparingherselftogoshopping,she

forgot

toeatatall!Whenshearrivedatthelarge

department

store,shespottedapileofsilkstockingsattheentrance.Asignnearbyannouncedthattheyhadbeenreducedinpriceayounggirlbehindthecounteraskedherifshewishedtoexaminethesilkylegcoverings.Shesmiledasifshehadbeenaskedtoinspectdiamondjewelry,andstartedtofeelthesoft,expensiveitems.MissusSommerspickedupablackpairandlookedatthemclosely.Tworedmarkssuddenlyshowedonherpaleface.Shelookedupattheshopgirlandsaidproudly,“Well,Iwill

buy

thispair.”MissusSommerschangedhercottonstockingsforthenewsilkonesintheladies’restarea.Shehadletherselfbecontrolledbysomemachine-likeforcethatdirectedheractionsandfreedherof

responsibility.Howgoodwasthetouchofthesilkonherskin!Thensheputhershoesbackonandputheroldstockingsintoherbag.Next,shewenttotheshoedepartment,whereshetriedonapairofnewboots.Herfootandanklelooked

lovely.Shecouldnotbelievethattheywereapartofherself.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Afterbuyingapairofnewboots,shewalkedintotheclothingdepartment.______________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Shewasabouttoleavethestorewhenakidrunningaroundremindedherofsomething.______________________________________________________________________________________翻譯小練習(xí)：1.來到化妝鏡前，上下打量著鏡子里的自己，眼睛盯著鞋子，“如果我的鞋子和我身上完美的衣服搭配，我看起來會更漂亮嗎？薩默斯太太心想，向部門的女售貨員招手。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.薩默斯太太問她今年的時裝款式是什么，是否可以試穿一下。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.她的要求得到了批準(zhǔn)，薩默斯太太繼續(xù)嘗試她認(rèn)為在她身上最好的東西。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.身上穿著不同的衣服，她在鏡子前轉(zhuǎn)來轉(zhuǎn)去，像時裝秀上的超級模特一樣欣賞自己。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.她一件接一件地試穿，深情地把它們放進(jìn)購物車?yán)?。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________