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刷題02名校書(shū)信寫(xiě)作滿分范文10篇(解析版)學(xué)校:___________姓名:___________班級(jí):___________考號(hào):___________牛津譯林版期中好題精刷系列資料,助力期中沖刺!向滿分說(shuō)YES!一、書(shū)信作文1.(2022秋·江蘇南京·九年級(jí)校聯(lián)考期中)假如你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華,在英文??峡吹叫P撵`驛站(Heart-to-heartRoom)的招募信息。請(qǐng)根據(jù)招募內(nèi)容,用英文寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)函,談?wù)勀愕膫€(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì),對(duì)青少年問(wèn)題的看法以及如何幫助他人解決這一問(wèn)題。Joinus!AhelperiswantedbyHeart-to-heartRoom.Thehelpershouldhaveatleastthreestrongqualities:★Helpful★Clever★…stressfromstudyhavenotimeforhobbiesfeellonelyAttention!Chooseoneofthetopthreeteenageproblemsandexplainwhatyouthinkaboutitandhowyoucanhelpotherssolveit.注意:1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80左右(已經(jīng)給出的文章開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。DearSirorMadam,IwouldliketojoinHeart-to-heartRoom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwillbeveryhappyifIcanbethehelper.Youcanemailmeatlihua@.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文:DearSirorMadam,IwouldliketojoinHeart-to-heartRoom.First,letmeintroducemyself.IamaGradeNinestudent.IthinkIhavemanystrongqualitiesforthisposition.Iamveryhelpful.Ioftenhelpotherswhentheyhaveproblems.Also,Iamclever.Ialwayscomeupwithgoodideas.Moreover,Iamahard-workingboy.Ialwaysdoextraworkafterclassandnevercomplain.Alltheteachersandclassmateslikeme.Asforteenageproblems,Ithinkstressfromstudyworriesmoststudents.Gettinglowmarksintheexamsmakesthemloseheart.Icanhelpthemmanagetimebetterandlearntorelaxproperly.IwillbeveryhappyifIcanbethehelper.Youcanemailmeatlihua@.Yourssincerely,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]題材:本文是一篇書(shū)信作文;時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”提示:寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)法正確,語(yǔ)句通順。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步,表明寫(xiě)信目的。第二步,自我介紹,并談及個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)和對(duì)青少年問(wèn)題的看法以及如何幫助他人解決這一問(wèn)題。第三步,書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)尾,希望申請(qǐng)能夠通過(guò)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①comeupwith想出,提出②managetimebetter更好地管理時(shí)間[高分句型]①Gettinglowmarksintheexammakesthemloseheart.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))②IwillbeveryhappyifIcanbethehelper.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)2.(2022春·江蘇鹽城·九年級(jí)校聯(lián)考期中)時(shí)光荏苒,初中三年轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝?;厥淄甑某砷L(zhǎng)定會(huì)帶給你一些體會(huì)與感受。假設(shè)你是李平,請(qǐng)你以初三畢業(yè)生的身份,根據(jù)以下流程圖用英語(yǔ)給學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹們寫(xiě)一封信,談一談“如何成為一名出色的中學(xué)生”。注意事項(xiàng):1.英文信須根據(jù)流程圖自擬,要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合題意;2.詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右,信的首尾已在答題卡上給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.英文信中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息;4.信件必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。Dearnewfriends,It’smypleasuretowritetoyou.Asmiddleschoolstudents,Ithinkit’sourdutytobeexcellent.Ithinkwehavelotsofthingstodo._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifwefollowthese,wewillbeexcellent!Wishyouabrightfuture!Yours,LiPing【答案】Onepossibleversion:Dearnewfriends,It’smypleasuretowritetoyou.Asmiddleschoolstudents,Ithinkit’sourdutytobeexcellent.Ithinkwehavelotsofthingstodo.Firstofall,weshouldlearntobehonestandthankful.Weshouldalsobefriendlytoothersandbehavepolitelyinpublic.Moreover,weshoulddevelopourgoodstudyhabitsandkeepinterestedineverysubject.Weshouldworkhardaswell.Atthesametime,it’swisetohavegoodmethodstolearn,suchaslisteningtotheteachercarefully,takingnotesinclassandsoon.Finally,it’shelpfultobeingoodhealth.Wemusthaveenoughhealthyfoodandsleepwell.We’dbetterspendatleastanhourdoingsportseveryday.Ifwefollowthese,wewillbeexcellent!Wishyouabrightfuture!

Yours,LiPing【詳解】1.題干解讀:本題要求以初三畢業(yè)生李平的身份,根據(jù)流程圖的提示寫(xiě)一封信給學(xué)弟和學(xué)妹們,談一談“如何成為一名出色的中學(xué)生”,內(nèi)容包括如何在個(gè)人品質(zhì)、學(xué)習(xí)和健康方面成為一名出色的中學(xué)生。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo):本文主要采用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作,時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)承接開(kāi)頭,緊扣提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行發(fā)揮,流程圖中省略的部分需圍繞提示補(bǔ)上你的建議;寫(xiě)作時(shí)還可以在提示內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行自我發(fā)揮,以豐富文章內(nèi)容和達(dá)成字?jǐn)?shù)要求;寫(xiě)作完成后應(yīng)確保文章內(nèi)容齊全,行文流暢,語(yǔ)言符合規(guī)范和英文表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.(2022·江蘇揚(yáng)州·??级#┘偃缒闶切睦砝蠋烳rs.Wang,九(2)班同學(xué)給你發(fā)了一封求助郵件,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容,用英語(yǔ)給Peter回一封電子郵件,幫助他分析情況并提出合理建議。DearMrs.Wang,

I’mPeterfromClassTwo,GradeNine.Ihavemetaproblem,beingshorterthanotherstudentsinmyclass.Andtheyoftenplayjokesonme.I’mfeelingangryandoftenwanttofightwiththem.Couldyouhelpme?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Peter要求:1.表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法正確,上下文連貫;2.必須包括提示中的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.詞數(shù)在100詞左右;開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù);4.不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。DearPeter,Thanksforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,Mrs.Wang【答案】例文DearPeter,Thanksforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou.Yousaidyouhavesometroublewithyourheightnow.Ithinkheightdoesn’tmatter.Asweknow,SpudWebb,thefamousNBAstarisshortbutverysuccessful.Moreover,it’stheirfaulttoplayjokesonyou.It’snotwiseofyoutofightwiththemfortheirfaults.Youshouldpaynoattentiontothosewholaughatyou.Youcanworkhardonyoursubjectsandgetgoodresultsinyourstudytoproveyourself.Ontheotherhand,wheneveryoumeetsuchaproblem,keepcalmandtrytotalktothemoraskyourteachersandfriendsforhelp.Ihopeyouthinkmyadviceisvaluabletoyou.Bestwishes,Mrs.Wang【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇建議信,屬于書(shū)信作文寫(xiě)作;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述,不要遺漏提示中的“幫他分析情況”這一要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步,承接書(shū)信開(kāi)頭,點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信目的;第二步,先幫他分析情況,并闡述自己對(duì)這一問(wèn)題的看法,接著重點(diǎn)就這一問(wèn)題給出相關(guān)的建議,可列舉具體的事例;第三步,表達(dá)祝愿并書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①havetroublewith在……方面②asweknow眾所周知③playjokesonsb開(kāi)某人的玩笑④ontheotherhand另一方面⑤bevaluabletosb對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)有價(jià)值[高分句型]①M(fèi)oreover,it’stheirfaulttoplayjokesonyou.(it作形式主語(yǔ),動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語(yǔ))②It’snotwiseofyoutofightwiththemfortheirfaults.(it作形式主語(yǔ),動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語(yǔ))③Youshouldpaynoattentiontothosewholaughatyou.(who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)④Ontheotherhand,wheneveryoumeetsuchaproblem,keepcalmandtrytotalktothemoraskyourteachersandfriendsforhelp.(whenever引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)⑤Ihopeyouthinkmyadviceisvaluabletoyou.(省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句)4.(2022秋·江蘇連云港·九年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中)在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中,我們總會(huì)遇到一些問(wèn)題和煩惱。假如你是青少年工作者M(jìn)rSigmundFriend,請(qǐng)根據(jù)David的來(lái)信,給他寫(xiě)封回信,幫助他分析問(wèn)題,并給出建議解決問(wèn)題。DearMrFriend,IamDavid,aGrade9student.IhaveaproblemandIdon’tknowhowtofaceit.Iamcrazyaboutbasketball.MyfriendsandIalwaysplaybasketballforhoursafterschool.SometimesIgohomelateandmyparentsgetangry.ShouldIspendlesstimeonbasketball?WhatshouldIdo?Ilookforwardtoyouradvice.Bestwishes,David注意:(1)詞數(shù)90左右,信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。DearDavid,Thankyouverymuchforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,SigmundFriend【答案】例文DearDavid,Thankyouverymuchforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou.Firstly,yousaidyouenjoyplayingbasketball,andIthinkit’sagoodhabittorelaxbothphysicallyandmentally.However,youneedtoarrangeyourtimereasonablyandestablishaschedule,andnotneglectyourstudiesjustbecauseofplayingbasketball.Secondly,Ithinkyoushouldcommunicatewellwithyourparentsandtellthemthatyouenjoyplayingbasketball,whichhasmanybenefits.Youwilluseyoursparetimetoplaybasketballandcontrolyourtimewell.Ibelievetheywillunderstandyou.Ihopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.Bestwishes,SigmundFriend【詳解】[總體分析]題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文;時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;提示:考生注意按照提示的要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步,表明寫(xiě)作意圖,感謝來(lái)信;第二步,具體分析問(wèn)題并給出解決方案;第三步,書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ),希望有所幫助。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①becauseof因?yàn)棰赾ommunicatewellwith與某人好好溝通③ishelpfulto有幫助[高分句型]①I(mǎi)thinkyoushouldcommunicatewellwithyourparentsandtellthemthatyouenjoyplayingbasketball,whichhasmanybenefits.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句中包含定語(yǔ)從句)②Ihopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)5.(2022秋·江蘇鹽城·九年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中)梁?jiǎn)⒊壬?jīng)告訴我們“少年強(qiáng)則國(guó)強(qiáng)”。為了充分發(fā)揮優(yōu)秀少年的榜樣和引領(lǐng)作用,現(xiàn)《我愛(ài)英語(yǔ)》俱樂(lè)部正開(kāi)展“最美少年”評(píng)選活動(dòng)。你班決定推選Millie參加本次評(píng)選,請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示用英文寫(xiě)一封推薦信。1.Whatisherlike?(well-organized,confident,modest…)2.Whatisherfavouritecolour/sport/andwhoisherhero…?3.Whatdidshedoandwhatisherdream?注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文完整、流暢。DearSirorMadam,WearewritingtorecommendMillieinourclassas“TheMostBeautifulYouth”inourschool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WethinkMillieisthemostsuitablepersonforthisaward.Wehopethatyouagreewithus.

Yourssincerely,Cindy【答案】例文:DearSirorMadam,WearewritingtorecommendMillieinourclassas“TheMostBeautifulYouth”inourschool.Millieiswell-organized,soallherthingsareputinorderandsheneverforgetsthethingssheneedstodo.Sheissoconfidentthatshecanfacealldifficulties.What’smore,shealwaysdoesextraworkforourclass.Sheismodest.Shenevershowsoffwhenshegetsgoodgrades.Millielikesbluebecauseitbringsherpeaceofmindandbody.Sheiscrazyaboutplayingbasketballbecauseitcanmakeherrelaxedandherlifemoreinteresting.Hermotherisherheroinherheart.Becauseshealwayshelpspeopleinneed.Shelearnsalotfromhermother.Lastweek,shehelpedaclassmatelearnabouttheworldthroughtheInternetbecauseshebelieves“Helpingothersishelpingyourself”.Shewantstobeanexcellentteacherinthefuture.WethinkMillieisthemostsuitablepersonforthisaward.Wehopethatyouagreewithus.Yourssincerely,Cindy【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一封推薦信;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”;③提示:根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)完成寫(xiě)作,不能遺漏信息,可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步,表明要推薦的人(開(kāi)頭已給出);第二步,根據(jù)提示介紹被推薦人的情況,推薦理由;第三步,表達(dá)希望對(duì)方可以同意請(qǐng)求。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inorder按順序②showoff炫耀③becrazyabout迷上④inneed需要幫助[高分句型]①Shenevershowsoffwhenshegetsgoodgrades.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)②Millielikesbluebecauseitbringsherpeaceofmindandbody.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)6.(2022秋·江蘇南京·九年級(jí)南京市科利華中學(xué)校考期中)Duringthe“HelpingWeek”,yourschoolhascollectedmanylettersaboutteenageproblemsfromallthestudents.AndyougotaletterfromHelen.Pleasegiveahelpinghandtoher.Hellothere!I’mHelenandI’maGrade9student.Idon’thaveanyclosefriendsandmyparentshavenotimeforme.SoIreallyfeellonely,WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Thankyousomuch.Helen注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右,開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.內(nèi)容須包括所有要點(diǎn),全文連貫、通順;3.文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearHelen,It’sveryluckyformetogetyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyouinsomeways.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,Tom【答案】例文:DearHelen,It’sveryluckyformetogetyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyouinsomeways.Theproblemsofmanyteenagerstodayaresimilartoyou.Theyhavetoomuchhomework.Theydon’thaveenoughtimefortheirhobbies.Soyourproblemisverycommonandyoudon’thavetoworrytoomuch.Ithinkyoushouldhavegoodcommunicationwithyourparentsandletthemknowhowyoufeel.Theywillunderstandyou.Yourparentsmustloveyouandtheywanttomakeyouabetterperson.Besides,youcantakepartinschoolactivitiessoastomeetmorefriends.Ifyouarefriendlytothem,theywillmakefriendswithyou.Ihopeyouhaveagoodresult.Bestwishes,Tom【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作,為書(shū)信作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:根據(jù)Helen的來(lái)信中提到的問(wèn)題寫(xiě)一封回信,給她一些具體的建議。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步,表明寫(xiě)作意圖(已給出);第二步,先安慰,再根據(jù)她的具體問(wèn)題給出相應(yīng)的建議;第三步,書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①besimilarto和……相似②toomuch太多③havegoodcommunicationwith和某人有良好的溝通④takepartinschoolactivities參加學(xué)?;顒?dòng)[高分句型]①I(mǎi)thinkyoushouldhavegoodcommunicationwithyourparentsandletthemknowhowyoufeel.(賓語(yǔ)從句)②Ifyouarefriendlytothem,theywillmakefriendswithyou.(if引導(dǎo)的條狀狀語(yǔ)從句)7.(2022秋·江蘇南京·九年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中)Notefromeditor:“Worriesinbottle”isacolumnonteenageproblemsinTeenagerMagazine.Nowweareinvitingyoutohelpsolveothers’worriesbywritingareplyletter.寫(xiě)作要求:1.請(qǐng)選擇以上兩個(gè)漂流瓶中的一個(gè),以“Mike”的名義寫(xiě)一封回信。2.內(nèi)容需針對(duì)瓶中問(wèn)題,并提出至少兩條建議,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。3.語(yǔ)言通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范,詞數(shù)80左右。Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursMike【答案】例文1DearAlex,Iamsosorrythatwhatyourdeskmatesaidmadeyousosad,andIdon’tthinkyouaretoosensitive.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.First,youcantellyourdeskmatenottosaythatagain.It’simpolitetolaughatpeople’sappearanceortheirfigures.Secondly,ifhestilldoesthingsthatmakeyoufeeluncomfortableorsad,justignorehimanddon’tcareaboutwhathesays.Atruefriendwillacceptyouforwhoyouare,notforhowyoulookorwhatyoupersonallybelieve.Lastly,trytobeacceptyourselfforwhoyouare.Remember,youareunique.Tryyourbesttolookforfriendswhoreallycareaboutyouandyourfeelings.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.YoursMike例文2DearLinda,Iamsosorrythatyouarehavingdifficultyincommunicatingwithyourclassmates.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,youcantrytoaskyourclassmatesabouttheirlikesanddislikessothatyoucaneasilyfindtheclassmateswhosharethesameinterestwithyou.Besides,you’dbettertrytotakepartinsomediscussionswithyourclassmateseventhoughthetopicisnotwhatyoureallyinterestedin.Inthisway,theywillseethatyouarewillingtojointhemandtheywillbemorelikelytochatwithyou.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.YoursMike【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一封建議信,屬于書(shū)信作文寫(xiě)作;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:按照題目所示兩個(gè)漂流瓶中的一個(gè)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析,并給出對(duì)應(yīng)的建議。不要遺漏在稱(chēng)呼中要補(bǔ)上你所選擇的那個(gè)對(duì)象的名字,可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步,開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)明選擇兩個(gè)漂流瓶中的哪一個(gè)問(wèn)題,引出話題;第二步,結(jié)合所選擇的漂流瓶中所呈現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題,針對(duì)性地給出相應(yīng)的建議,不少于兩條建議,可列舉具體的做法;第三步,表達(dá)祝愿并書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①sharesthwithsb和某人分享某物②bewillingtodosth樂(lè)于做某事③behelpfulto對(duì)……有幫助④havedifficultyindoingsth在做某事方面有困難[高分句型]①I(mǎi)amsosorrythatwhatyourdeskmatesaidmadeyousosad,andIdon’tthinkyouaretoosensitive.(and連接兩個(gè)并列分句,第一個(gè)并列分句中含有that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句,且賓語(yǔ)從句中含有what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句,第二個(gè)并列分句中含有省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句以及否定前移的用法)②Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.(倒裝句)③It’simpolitetolaughatpeople’sappearanceortheirfigures.(it作形式主語(yǔ),動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語(yǔ))④Secondly,ifhestilldoesthingsthatmakeyoufeeluncomfortableorsad,justignorehimanddon’tcareaboutwhathesays.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句,且從句中含有that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)⑤Besides,you’dbettertrytotakepartinsomediscussionswithyourclassmateseventhoughthetopicisnotwhatyoureallyinterestedin.(eventhough引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句,what引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句)⑥Tryyourbesttolookforfriendswhoreallycareaboutyouandyourfeelings.(who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)8.(2022·江蘇常州·校考二模)近年來(lái),國(guó)家越來(lái)越重視中小學(xué)生的勞動(dòng)教育,要求各學(xué)校對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)、熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)人民的教育。假如你是Sigmund,請(qǐng)閱讀初三學(xué)生林濤的求助信,根據(jù)來(lái)信內(nèi)容用英文寫(xiě)一封回信,幫助解決問(wèn)題。DearSigmund,Ihearthatourgovernmentnowpaysmuchattentiontoeducationonthehard-workingspiritamongstudentsinChina.Studentsshouldgetbasicworkingabilityfortheirlifeandtheirowndevelopment.However,asaGradeNinestudent,IspendsomuchtimeonmystudythatIseldomdoanyhouseworkathomeorvoluntaryworkinsociety.

Iwanttobeanexcellentstudenttodevelopthehard-workingspirit.CanyoutellmewhatIcandobothinandoutoftheschool?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LinTao注意事項(xiàng):1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);2.表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;3.詞數(shù)不少于100,開(kāi)頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:educationonthehard-workingspirit勞動(dòng)教育DearLinTao,I’mgladthatyouworksohardinyourstudy.However,asastudent,weshouldalsolearntodosomethingmeaningfulforourschool,familyandourcountry.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearLinTao,I’mgladthatyouworksohardinyourstudy.However,asastudent,weshouldalsolearntodosomethingmeaningfulforourschool,familyandourcountry.Firstofall,inordertohaveagoodplacetolearnknowledge,weshouldkeepourclassroomaswellasotherpartsoftheschoolcleanandtidy.Whenattendingcoursesintheyouthcentre,wecanmakefulluseofthegoodchancesandlearnmoreskillswhichcan’tbelearnedfromtextbooks.Asforourfamily,ourparentsaregettingoldernowandit’stimeforustodosomethingforthem.Whynotcookdinnersforthemwhentheyarebusyandspendmoretimecommunicatingwiththemwhentheyarefree.Therearealsomanythingswecandoforourselveslikewashingourshoesandclothes.Lastbutnottheleast,wemustlearntodosomevoluntaryworkforsociety.Forexample,wecanvisitthehomefortheelderlyanddonatesomethingtothechildreninpoorareas.Respectingpeoplefromdifferentcareersfortheirhardworkisalsonecessarybecauseeveryjobisimportant.Ihopeyouthinkmyadviceisworthtaking.Yours,Sigmun【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為一封書(shū)信;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;③提示:對(duì)方求助內(nèi)容已給出,考生應(yīng)注意就“來(lái)信”中“如何去實(shí)踐生活勞動(dòng)”提出建議,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步,開(kāi)頭已給出,寫(xiě)作時(shí)從學(xué)校、家庭和社會(huì)的角度,分點(diǎn)提出具體建議;第二步,書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ),希望建議有所幫助。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inorderto為了②attendcourses上課③Asfor關(guān)于④Lastbutnottheleast最后但同樣重要的是[高分句型]①Whenattendingcoursesintheyouthcentre,wecanmakefulluseofthegoodchancesandlearnmoreskillswhichcan’tbelearnedfromtextbooks.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)②Respectingpeopleformdifferentcareersfortheirhardworkisalsonecessarybecauseeveryjobisimportant.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)9.(2022春·江蘇無(wú)錫·九年級(jí)校聯(lián)考期中)假如你叫梁華,是無(wú)錫陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的學(xué)生,進(jìn)入九年級(jí)后感到學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大,想找youthworker傾訴煩惱、尋求幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下社區(qū)提供的兩名候選人信息,選擇其一并用英文寫(xiě)一封求助信。Mrs.FriendPersonality:Patient&kindHobbies:WritingSpecialty:Listening&comfortingAvailableTime(可用時(shí)間):6:00p.m.–8:00p.m.fromMondaytoFridayMr.LightPersonality:Active&humorousHobbies:PlayingbasketballSpecialty:ColortherapyAvailableTime:9:00a.m.–5:00p.m.attheweekend注意事項(xiàng):1.求助信須陳述選擇該工作人員的原因,要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合題意;2.詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右;3.求助信中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearMr.Light,IamLiangHua,andIamaGrade9student.AfterenteringGrade9,Ifeelverystressed.Ithinkayouthworkerwillbeofgreathelptome.Iusedtoplaybasketballforthirtyminuteseverynight,butnowIambusywithmyschoolworkonweekdays.Moreover,myparentsarestrictwithmeandcaretoomuchaboutmyexams,sothatmakesmeblue.Youareactive,humorous,andgoodatplayingbasketball.Ithinkyoumayhavethesameexperienceduringyourschooldays.Whatinterestsmemostisthatyouca

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