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讀后續(xù)寫個(gè)人成長

人與動(dòng)物續(xù)寫文本（2024年南陽市期中考試高一英語）

Onesunnyday,Alex,ayoungboy,waswalkinghomefromschoolwhenhenoticedsomethingunusual.Asmall,scruffy(邋遢的)dogwassittingalonebythesideoftheroad,itseyes fulloffearandconfusion.Thepoordoglookedlostandhungry.Alexfeltasenseofempathy(同情)inhisheartashewalkedtowardsthedogslowly,offeringitapieceofhissandwich.

Themomentthedogcautiouslytookthefoodfromhishand,Alex'sheartmelted.Hecould

seethatthedogwasaloneandscared,andheknewhecouldn'tjustleaveitthere.Withoutasecond thought,Alexdecidedtotakethedoghome.Hecarefullyhidthedoginthegarage,hopinghis

fatherwouldn'tfindout.

Fordays,Alexspentallhissparetimeinthegarage,playingwiththedog.Henamedthedog

Max,andtheyquicklybecameclosefriends.Theirbondgrewstrongerdaybydayastheyshared

countlessadventurestogether.MaxbroughtsomuchjoyintoAlex'slife.

Oneday,Alex'sfatherdiscoveredtheirsecret.HewassurprisedandtoldtheboytoputMax

backonthestreet,thinkingitwasforthebest.Withaheavyheart,Alexdidashewastold.Heleft

Maxatthepark,hopingthatsomeoneelsewouldfindhimandgivehimalovinghome.Butashe

walkedaway,hisheartachedwithsadness,tearswellingupinhiseyes.

Alexwasheartbroken.HemissedMaxterriblyandfoundithardtofocusonanythingelse.

Hisgradesstartedtoslip(下滑),andhebecamequietandsilent.Hisusualcheerfulnesshad

disappeared,replacedbydeepsadnessthatseemedtoswallowhimwhole.Seeingthis,hisfatherrealizedhowmuchMaxmeanttoAlex.(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右; (2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答

ThefatherdecidedtobringMaxback_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

TheboytookfullresponsibilityforMax._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ReadforthecharactersAlexMaxayoungboy,noticedalostdogandbroughtithome,withwhomhehadajoyfultimealostdogcameacrossAlexwhotreateditasgoodfriendsecretlyAlex’sfatherdisagreedwithkeepingthedogathomeandaskedputMaxbackonthestreet2RReadfortheplotandemotionalchangesplotmountain

climax沖突最大化，也是情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)AlexcameacrossalostdogandoffereditfoodAlexdecidedtobringithomeandhidthedogAlexnameditMax,andbondgrewstrongerdaybydayAlex’sfatherfoundMaxandaskedAlex’sputMaxbacktothestreet,Alex’sdid.ItbroughtabadinfluenceonAlex,andhisfatherrealizedthis.爸爸決定把Max帶回來。Alex見到后會作何反應(yīng)？Alex以后照顧狗狗，這對于他的成長有何作用？主旨在哪里？worriedpitifulhappyanddelightedsadandsorrowheartbroken

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Thebondbetweenhumansandanimalsisbuiltonlove,trustandmutualrespect,enrichingbothlives.Readforlanguage

Onesunnyday,Alex,ayoungboy,waswalkinghomefromschoolwhenhenoticed

somethingunusual.Asmall,scruffy(邋遢的)dogwassittingalonebythesideoftheroad,itseyes

fulloffearandconfusion.Thepoordoglookedlostandhungry.Alexfeltasenseofempathy(同情)inhisheartashewalkedtowardsthedogslowly,offeringitapieceofhissandwich.

Themomentthedogcautiouslytookthefoodfromhishand,Alex'sheartmelted.Hecould

seethatthedogwasaloneandscared,andheknewhecouldn'tjustleaveitthere.Withoutasecond thought,Alexdecidedtotakethedoghome.Hecarefullyhidthedoginthegarage,hopinghis

fatherwouldn'tfindout.bedoing...when獨(dú)立主格with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

Fordays,Alexspentallhissparetimeinthegarage,playingwiththedog.Henamedthedog

Max,andtheyquicklybecameclosefriends.Theirbondgrewstrongerdaybydayastheyshared

countlessadventurestogether.MaxbroughtsomuchjoyintoAlex'slife.

Oneday,Alex'sfatherdiscoveredtheirsecret.HewassurprisedandtoldtheboytoputMax

backonthestreet,thinkingitwasforthebest.Withaheavyheart,Alexdidashewastold.Heleft

Maxatthepark,hopingthatsomeoneelsewouldfind

himandgivehimalovinghome.Butashe

walkedaway,hisheartachedwithsadness,tearswellingupinhiseyes.

Alexwasheartbroken.HemissedMaxterriblyandfoundithardtofocusonanythingelse.

Hisgradesstartedtoslip(下滑),andhebecamequietandsilent.Hisusualcheerfulnesshad

disappeared,replacedbydeepsadnessthatseemedtoswallowhimwhole.Seeingthis,hisfatherrealizedhowmuchMaxmeanttoAlex.主語+謂語+其他，非謂語動(dòng)詞獨(dú)立主格故事梗概:小男孩Alex在放學(xué)路上看到一只邋遢的小狗，心生同情，給小狗一塊三明治后，決定把小狗帶回，藏在車庫里。他們很快成為了好朋友。然而，父親發(fā)現(xiàn)了這個(gè)秘密后，要求放回小狗。Alex雖不情愿但照做了，他傷心不已，成績下滑。父親看到Alex的變化后意識到了小狗對他的重要性。Readthe2givensentences推測續(xù)寫情節(jié)ThefatherdecidedtobringMaxback父親努力尋找小狗Max的過程及成功尋回小狗并將其帶回家后的場景。由第一段首句及第二段首句推測:父親尋找小狗，并將其帶回。寫作難點(diǎn):父親如何找到小狗?Alex見到小狗作何反應(yīng)?注意最后一句與第二段首句的銜接。TheboytookfullresponsibilityforMaxAlex認(rèn)真照顧小狗，產(chǎn)生巨大變化，父親認(rèn)識到小狗對Alex的積極影響，Alex也懂得了人與動(dòng)物的相互依存。由第二段首句推測:Alex悉心照料小狗。寫作難點(diǎn):Alex如何照顧小狗?產(chǎn)生什么改變?父親和Alex學(xué)到了什么?動(dòng)作和情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫1.他不遺余力的尋找小狗，但是徒勞。2.疲憊但是快樂，爸爸帶著小狗回了家。3.他松了一口氣當(dāng)他在公園看到小狗時(shí)候。4.Alex跪下來擁抱了小狗。HedecidedtobringMaxback.HewenttoextraordinarylengthstosearchforthedoginthenearbyblocksbutinvainExhaustedbutjoyful,thefatherbroughtMaxhome.HebreathedasighofreliefthemomenthesawMaxwanderinginthepark.AlexkneltdownandhuggedMaxtight.

ThefatherdecidedtobringMaxback.He________(不遺余力)tosearchforthedoginthenearbyblocksbut_______(徒勞地).ItsuddenlycrossedhismindthatmaybeMaxwouldhavereturnedtothepark.He______(松了一口氣)themomenthesawMaxwanderinginthepark.Thesettingsun___________(投射出橙色光芒)overthem.

(疲憊但快樂)_________,thefatherbroughtMaxhome.

(一看到)_______Max,soamazedwasAlex______herushedforward,knelt

downandhuggedMaxtight,hiseyes_______(twinkle)withexcitement.Fromthenon,Maxbecamean________(不可或缺的)partoftheirfamily.小試牛刀

TheboytookfullresponsibilityforMax.Tiring

feeding,bathingandwalkingMaxwere,hegained_____________(一種成就感)fromthesepuppycare____(雜務(wù)).ThedaysofMax'scompanywitnessedAlex's________________(更加發(fā)自內(nèi)心的笑聲)and(循序漸進(jìn)的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步)_______.__dawnedonthefatherthatMaxhelpedAlexbuildconfidenceandtaughthimaboutresponsibilityand_______(同情).Haditnotbeenforthisexperience,Alex________(永遠(yuǎn)不會知道)thebondbetweenhumansandanimalsisbuiltonlove,trustand___(相互的)respect,________(enrich)bothlives.核對答案：

ThefatherdecidedtobringMaxback.Hewenttoextraordinarylengthstosearchforthedoginthenearbyblocksbutinvain.ItsuddenlycrossedhismindthatmaybeMaxwouldhavereturnedtothepark.HebreathedasighofreliefthemomenthesawMaxwanderinginthepark.Thesettingsuncastanorangeglowoverthem