山西省呂梁市2023-2024學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期11月期中英語(yǔ)試題讀后續(xù)寫-失而復(fù)得的戒指善良的回響講義

山西省呂梁市20232024學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期11月期中英語(yǔ)試題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Sometimesanactofkindnesscanmeanalotinlife.ThreeyearsagoIworkedforafewweeksasadoctorinanewdentalclinic(牙科診所)atVictorHarbor,tothesouthofAdelaideandanhourfurtherawaythanmyusualworkplace.Myfirstdaytherewasarushdrivingtothenewclinicandgettingusedtotheclinicalenvironment.Asitwasallnewtome,Itookoffmygoldrings:myweddingring,andonethatwasananniversary(周年紀(jì)念日)giftfrommyhusband.Iputtheminatissue(紙巾)andplacedthembesidemyputer.Duringmylunchbreak,Inoticedthetissueandthoughtthatitdidnotlookverycleanandthrewitintotherubbishbin.Iwentaboutmyworkandmydaywentwell;ImetnewpatientsandfeltthatIhadbeenproductive.Attheveryfirstdayattheclinic,Ididagoodjob,busybutfruitful.SoIfeltmorethanproud.Whenitwastimetogetoffwork,Ichangedmyclothesandwentoutoftheclinic,thinkingnothingofthering.Drivinghomeattheendoftheday,justmomentsbeforeIreachedmyhouse,Inoticedthatmyringsweremissing.Ifelttheheatinmybodyrise,myfaceburningred.Ifeltsicktomystomach.Ispentanhourorsomakingcalls,tryingtofindmyrings.ThefirstpeopleIcalledweremymanagerandclinicalleaderandtheygavemeafewphonenumbersforcleaners.Igotintouchwithaladywhomanagedthecleaningservicesfortheclinic,andshetoldmethatthebinshadalreadybeencollected.Iknewnothingcouldbedonenow.Ihadlostmyrings.ItmatteredmuchtomeandnowasifIlostapreciousthingandmyfeelingswerebeyondwords.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Butabouttwohourslater,Ireceivedanamazingphonecall.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Threedayslater,Ifinallygotachancetothankthecleanerfacetoface.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：三年前，“我”在一家新牙科診所工作，因環(huán)境陌生摘下金戒指放在紙巾里置于電腦旁，午餐時(shí)誤將其扔入垃圾桶。下班回家發(fā)現(xiàn)戒指不見(jiàn)后，“我”焦急地打?qū)ふ?，?lián)系到清潔服務(wù)管理者得知垃圾桶已被清理，以為戒指無(wú)望找回。然而兩小時(shí)后接到清潔工，得知戒指被找到，三天后“我”當(dāng)面致謝。這個(gè)故事展現(xiàn)了清潔工的善良以及失而復(fù)得的喜悅。伏筆與回應(yīng)：伏筆：將戒指放在紙巾里且覺(jué)得紙巾不干凈。回應(yīng)：清潔工在垃圾中發(fā)現(xiàn)了放在紙巾里的戒指。伏筆：聯(lián)系清潔服務(wù)管理者得知垃圾桶已被收走。回應(yīng)：但清潔工已提前將戒指取出。伏筆：戒指對(duì)“我”意義重大，有結(jié)婚戒指和周年紀(jì)念戒指?；貞?yīng)：所以“我”在丟失后極度焦急，找回后萬(wàn)分感激。伏筆：“我”在第一天工作時(shí)表現(xiàn)不錯(cuò)，心情較好?；貞?yīng)：與丟失戒指后的沮喪形成對(duì)比，更突出找回戒指后的欣慰。伏筆：“我”詳細(xì)描述了尋找戒指的過(guò)程及聯(lián)系的人員?；貞?yīng)：為清潔工能聯(lián)系到“我”并歸還戒指做鋪墊。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：情感線：從接到時(shí)的驚喜、激動(dòng)，到去取戒指途中的期待，再到見(jiàn)到清潔工當(dāng)面致謝時(shí)的感激與欣慰。故事線：接到后與清潔工約定取戒指時(shí)間地點(diǎn)，前往取戒指過(guò)程中的心理活動(dòng)，見(jiàn)到清潔工后表達(dá)感謝并交流，了解清潔工拾金不昧的內(nèi)心想法。主旨升華句：Kindnessislikeabrightstarinthedarksky,lightingupourlostpath.（善良就像黑暗天空中的一顆明亮星辰，照亮我們迷失的道路。）Asmallactofkindnesscancreateabigwaveofwarmthinthecoldworld.（一個(gè)小小的善舉能在冰冷的世界中掀起一股巨大的溫暖浪潮。）Inaworldfullofhustleandbustle,kindnessisthemostprecioustreasurethatconnectspeople'shearts.（在一個(gè)充滿喧囂的世界里，善良是連接人們心靈的最珍貴寶藏。）Truekindnessknowsnoboundariesandalwaysbringshopeandforttothoseinneed.（真正的善良沒(méi)有界限，總是給有需要的人帶來(lái)希望與安慰。）Thepowerofkindnessliesinitsabilitytoturndespairintojoyandmaketheworldabetterplace.（善良的力量在于它能將絕望轉(zhuǎn)化為喜悅，讓世界變得更美好。）寫作示范一：Butabouttwohourslater,Ireceivedanamazingphonecall.Itwasthecleaner.Shesaidinagentlevoice,"Doctor,Ifoundyourrings.TheywereinthebinbutIsawthemrightaway.Iknewtheymustbeyours."Iwasspeechlesswithjoyandgratitude.Iquicklyaskedwhereshewasandwearrangedtomeetatanearbycaféthenextmorning.Allnight,Icouldn'tstopthinkingabouttheringsandthekindcleaner.Thenextday,onmywaytothecafé,myheartwaspoundingwithexcitement.WhenIsawher,anelderlywomanwithawarmsmile,Irushedtoherandthankedherprofusely.Shejustsaiditwasnothingandthatsheknewhowimportanttheringswere.Threedayslater,Ifinallygotachancetothankthecleanerfacetoface.Ibroughtherabouquetofflowersandasmallgiftcard.Shewasabitshybutacceptedthemwithasmile.Wesatandtalkedforawhile.ShetoldmethatshealwaysbelievedindoingtherightthingandthatseeingmydistresswhenIcalledmadeherevenmoredeterminedtoreturntherings.Itoldherthatheractofkindnesshadnotonlysavedmypreciousringsbutalsorestoredmyfaithinhumanity.Asweparted,IknewthatthisencounterwouldstaywithmeforeverandthatIwouldalwaysbeinspiredtopassonsuchkindness.寫作示范二：Butabouttwohourslater,Ireceivedanamazingphonecall.Thevoiceontheotherendbelongedtothecleaner."Ma'am,Ihaveyourrings.Iwasemptyingthebinandnoticedthem.Ifiguredtheywerevaluableandyou'dbeworried."Iwasecstaticandthankedherrepeatedly.WedecidedthatIwouldpickthemupfromherplaceafterworkthenextday.Duringthedrive,Iwasfilledwithanticipation.WhenIarrivedatherhome,asimplebutcozyhouse,shegreetedmewithabigsmileandhandedmetherings.Ihuggedher,tearsofgratitudeinmyeyes.Threedayslater,Ifinallygotachancetothankthecleanerfacetoface.Iinvitedhertotheclinicandpresentedherwithacertificateofappreciation.Shewastouchedandsaidthatshewasjustdoingwhatanyoneshoulddo.Wesharedacupofcoffeeandtalkedaboutlife.Shetoldmethatshehadfacedhardshipsbutalwaysheldontohervalues.Irealizedthatherkindnesswasnotjustaonetimeactbutareflectionofhercharacter.Thisexperiencemademeunderstandthatkindnessisthethreadthatweavesabeautifultapestryofhumanconnectionandthatweshouldcherishandspreadit.【答案】參考范文：Butabouttwohourslater,Ireceivedanamazingphonecall.Thecleanerhadgonethroughthebinsandfoundmyrings!Iwassothankfultoher,someonewhohadtakenthetroubletogothroughthebins—whichisnotapleasanttask—tofindmypricelessring.Iworkedatthatclinicthefollowingday,soIboughtchocolatestothankthiswonderfulperson