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2021年中考滿分作文特快??骖}在線作文08黑龍江省龍東卷真題在線(黑龍江省龍東地區(qū)(農(nóng)墾森工)2021年中考英語試題)題目①為了有效地控制新冠疫情的蔓延,2021年我國(guó)實(shí)施了免費(fèi)接種疫苗的政策。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示列出接種疫苗后的注意事項(xiàng)。提示詞:wine(酒)內(nèi)容包括:1.三天之內(nèi)不洗澡;2.多喝水,不喝酒;3.多吃水果和蔬菜;4.不吃魚類和蛋類;5.適當(dāng)?shù)膽敉膺\(yùn)動(dòng),不熬夜。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________題目②同學(xué)們都知道安全的重要性,在生活中危險(xiǎn)無處不在,你知道如何保護(hù)自己的安全嗎?請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際生活,談?wù)効捶āL崾?1.家庭安全;2.校園安全;3.戶外安全……Asweallknow,dangeriseverywhereinourlife...(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________題目③仔細(xì)觀察圖片,展開合理想象,然后寫一篇短文。提示詞:volunteer;theoldpeople’shomes要求:1.話題作文和圖示作文任選其一。2.詞數(shù):80—100之間。3.字跡工整,語法正確,意思連貫,合乎邏輯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析考題解析題目①為材料作文。圍繞疫苗接種后需要注意的事項(xiàng)寫一篇短文。題目②為一篇材料作文。圍繞“如何保護(hù)自己的安全”寫一篇短文。題目③題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和圖片提示,寫出一篇有關(guān)參加志愿者活動(dòng)的作文,可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮,寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá),要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。滿分范文滿分范文題目①InordertoeffectivelycontrolthespreadofCOVID-19,Chinacarriesoutapolicyoffreevaccinationin2021.Thereareafewthingstolookoutforaftervaccination.First,don’ttakeashowerinthreedays.Next,drinkmorewater,anddon’tdrinkwine.Third,eatasmanyfruitsandvegetablesaspossible.Fourth,don’teatfishandeggs.Lastbutnotleast,dooutdoorsportsproperly,don’tstayuplate,andgetplentyofsleep.題目②Asweallknow,dangeriseverywhereinourlifeandsafetyisthefirst.Soit’snecessarytoknowsomewaystoprotectus.Don’tletchildrenplayinthekitchenathome,becausetheymayburnthemselves.It’seasytoslipandfallonawetfloor.Besuretokeepthebathroomfloordryafterhavingashowerorbath.Don’ttakeanyknifetoschool,becauseitmayhurtyourclassmatesbyaccident.Whenyougoacrosstheroad,youmustobeythetrafficrules.Don’tletthechildrengoswimmingalone.Ihopethesetipscanhelpyou.題目③Lastweek,severalofmyclassmatesandItookpartinavolunteeractivityheldbythecommunity.Wewenttotheoldpeople’shomesbybus.There,welearnedaboutthehealthsituationoftheoldpeopleandhelpedthemcleanup.Somecleanedtheyardandsomecleanedtheroom,suchassweepingthefloorandcleaningthetableandsoon.Wewerebusyallafternoon.Weweretired,butwewerehappy.Iwilltakepartinsuchactivitiesinthefuture.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)名師點(diǎn)評(píng).2021年龍東地區(qū)考題形式較前幾年沒有變化,同樣是一個(gè)小作文再?gòu)牟牧献魑暮涂磮D作文中選擇一個(gè)進(jìn)行寫作。題目主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),多用祈使句句式。分為兩段式:第一段引出主題;第二段介紹需要注意的事項(xiàng)。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性,邏輯性要強(qiáng),無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。題目②主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。從生活安全,學(xué)校安全和戶外安全等方面,結(jié)合實(shí)際生活提出自己的想法和觀點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性,邏輯性要強(qiáng),無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。題目③寫作時(shí)要圖片內(nèi)容緊密聯(lián)系起來,用第一人稱來寫作,時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主,要做到要點(diǎn)齊全,無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。佳句積累1.InordertoeffectivelycontrolthespreadofCOVID-19,Chinacarriesoutapolicyoffreevaccinationin2021.【亮點(diǎn)】inorderto…表目的,短語carryout:實(shí)施。2.First,….Second,…Third,….Lastbutnotleast…【亮點(diǎn)】First,….Second,…Third,….Lastbutnotleast…表列舉。3.Whenyougoacrosstheroad,youmustobeythetrafficrules.【亮點(diǎn)】when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。4.Lastweek,severalofmyclassmatesandItookpartinavolunteeractivityheldbythecommunity.【亮點(diǎn)】過去分詞作定語修飾volunteeractivity。舉一反三相似題①你班計(jì)劃本周末乘大巴車到西山(WestHills)郊游,你校交換生吉姆愿意一同前往。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你用英語寫一個(gè)電子郵件,將活動(dòng)事宜告知吉姆。1.時(shí)間:周日上午8點(diǎn)至下午4點(diǎn)2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容:爬山,摘櫻桃(cherries)3.注意事項(xiàng):守時(shí);自帶午餐;確保安全注意:1.詞數(shù):90左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,We'regoingonatriptotheWestHillsthisSunday.Hereissomeinformationaboutthetrip.We'regoingtomeetattheschoolgatebefore8o'clock,andgotherebybus.We'llclimbupthehillsandenjoythebeautifulscenerythere.Youmustbecarefulandkeepawayfromanydanger.Pleaseremembertobringyourlunch.Afterlunch,we'llgodowntoalocalfarmtopickthesweetcherriesbeforewegobackhomeat4:00p.m.Haveanicetrip!Yours,LiHua【考題解析】1.題干解讀:該題目屬于電子郵件寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求介紹活動(dòng)的時(shí)間,具體內(nèi)容及注意事項(xiàng)。2.寫作指導(dǎo):本文用第一人稱來寫作;時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來時(shí)為主;介紹活動(dòng)的時(shí)間,具體內(nèi)容及注意事項(xiàng)敘述完整,條理清晰。相似題②你的好友David感冒了,你寫信告訴他一些注意事項(xiàng),提一些合理的建議。60字左右。DearDavid,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhaveacold._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours【參考范文】DearDavid,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhaveacold.Youshouldseeadoctor.Andyoushouldtakemedicineontime.Youalsoshouldtakemoreexercise,becauseitishelpfultoyourhealth.Youhadbetterdrinkmorehotwater.Don’tforgettowearmore!Andyoushouldhaveabalanceddiet,andeatmorefruitandvegetables.Itisimportanttokeephealthy.Ihopeyouwillbebettersoon.YoursLihua【考題解析】試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文,介紹好友生病了,給他提出注意事項(xiàng)和一些建議。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,二人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:Youshould……;becauseitis……;Youhadbetter……;Itisimportantto……;Ihope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,注意文后要表達(dá)希望好友盡快恢復(fù)健康的愿望。【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭表達(dá)對(duì)好友生病了而感到難過,接下來介紹他應(yīng)注意事項(xiàng)和一些建議,最后表達(dá)希望好友盡快恢復(fù)健康的愿望。此處用了takemedicine,takemoreexercise,ishelpfulto,forgetto,haveabalanceddiet等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少??键c(diǎn):提綱作文。相似題③假如你是陽光中學(xué)的學(xué)生陸明,你在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上看到國(guó)際部學(xué)生Thompson的求助信,請(qǐng)根據(jù)求助信的內(nèi)容,用英語給他寫一封電子郵件,介紹你校圖書館的借閱要求及注意事項(xiàng)。HelpNeededI'mThompson,aninternationalstudentfromBritain.Iwouldliketoknowhowtoborrowbooksfromtheschoollibrary.ShouldIbringmystudent’scardwithme?HowlongcanIkeepabook?Iwonderifyoucanprovideanytipsonborrowingbooks.Pleasee-mailmeatThompson2005@gmail.com.Thankyou!Thompson注意事項(xiàng):1.郵件須包括圖書館的借閱要求及注意事項(xiàng),要求符合情境、語句通順、意思連貫;2.詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右,郵件的首尾已在答題卡上給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.郵件不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息;4.郵件內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡的指定位置上。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】I'vereadyourletterandI'mwritingtotellyouhowtoborrowbooksfromtheschoollibrary.Firstofall,youshouldbringyourstudent'scardwithyouandshowittoalibrarian,oryouwon'tbeallowedtoborrowanybooks.Then,youcanaskthelibrarianforhelpifyoucan'tfindthebookyouwant.What'smore,keepitinmindthatyoumustreturnthebooksintime.Youcankeepthemfortwoweeks.However,ifyoncan'tfinishreadingthebooks,itisnecessaryforyoutorenewthem.Afteryouhaveborrowedthebooks,don'tlendthemtoothers.Isincerelyhopethetipscanbeofhelptoyou.Pleaseemailmeifyouhaveanyotherproblems.Yoursfaithfully,LuMing【考題解析】1、題干解讀本題目屬于記敘文寫作,根據(jù)收到的電子郵件寫回信,所以寫作格式按照郵件格式。第一段寫答應(yīng)對(duì)方的請(qǐng)求;第二段介紹借書的具體程序;第三段結(jié)束語。2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng)例文采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu);時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,其他時(shí)態(tài)為輔;人稱采用第二人稱為主;對(duì)借書的流程和注意點(diǎn)的描述很細(xì)致、很有條理,包括:需要學(xué)生證,咨詢圖書管理員,不要延期,不要借給別人。3、高分亮點(diǎn)短語:beallowedto;showsth.tosb.;what'smore;keepitinmind;lendsth.tosb.句型:However,ifyoucan'tfinishreadingthebooks,itisnecessaryforyoutorenewthem.相似題④近年來校園安全問題越來越引起人們的關(guān)注,建設(shè)平安校園是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任與義務(wù)。作為一名學(xué)生,我們不僅要注意自己的人身安全,更應(yīng)該珍惜自己和他人的生命。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格,就安全問題寫一封約90詞的演講稿,并談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā,F(xiàn)狀最近發(fā)生兩起安全事故建議人身安全刀具類危險(xiǎn)品不允許帶到學(xué)校課間不相互追逐打架心理安全學(xué)習(xí)壓力過大時(shí)通過聽音樂等方式放松你的意見校園安全還需要注意什么?請(qǐng)自擬至少兩點(diǎn)。注意事項(xiàng):1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。Hello,teachersandschoolmates.It’smyhonourtobehereandtalkabouthowtokeepsafeatschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thanksalot.【參考范文】Hello,teachersandschoolmates.It’smyhonortobehereandtalkabouthowtokeepsafeatschool.Asweknow,twosafetyaccidentshavehappenedaroundusrecently.Weshouldpayattentiontoourownsafety.Carryingsomethingdangerous,likeknives,isnotallowedinschool.Afterclass,weshouldn’trunafterorfightwitheachother.Sometimeswemayfeelstressed.Listeningtomusicanddoingsomesportswillmakeiteasierforustorelaxourselves.Whenweareintrouble,wecanalwaysaskourteachersforhelp.Moreover,posterscanbeputuptohelpstudentsknowmoreabouthowtokeepsafeatschool.That’sallformyspeech.Thanksalot.【考題解析】這是一篇材料作文。所給材料比較詳細(xì),提示條理清晰,我們要做的就是用英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題,深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題,同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作亮點(diǎn):這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,意思連貫,符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上注意使用多種句式,同時(shí)還使用了表示次序的連接詞,文章脈絡(luò)清晰,自然流暢。此外,一些常用短語如:talkabout,payattentionto,runafter,beintrouble,putup等的使用,為文章增色不少。相似題⑤3月26日是第二十三個(gè)全國(guó)中小學(xué)生安全教育日。今年安全教育日的主題是“普及安全知識(shí),確保生命安全”。暑假即將來臨,為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識(shí),提高自我保護(hù)能力,學(xué)校將舉行以安全為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格內(nèi)容寫一篇題為“Howcanwemakeourselvessafe?”的英語短文。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容飲食安全不吃變質(zhì)食物,少吃或不吃垃圾食品。交友安全網(wǎng)上慎重交友,不和陌生人交談。旅行安全照看好私人物品,遇險(xiǎn)及時(shí)報(bào)警。游泳安全不獨(dú)自游泳,不到河、湖里游泳。提示詞:becareful(小心)gobad(變質(zhì))要求:1.必須包含所給的全部要點(diǎn)及內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名。3.字?jǐn)?shù)80—100。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。HowcanwemakeourselvessafeAsteenagers,tolearnhowtomakeourselvessafeisespeciallyimportant._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowcanwemakeourselvessafeAsteenagers,tolearnhowtomakeourselvessafeisespeciallyimportant.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,wearesupposedtobecarefulwhenmakingfriendsonline,whichmaybringusunnecessarytroubles.Second,remembernevertogoswimmingonourownintheriverorlakebecausedoingthatwillprobablyputourselvesintodangeroussituations.Besides,inordertoeathealthilyandsafely,we’dbettereatlessjunkfoodandnoteatfoodthatgoesbad,fortheywilldoharmtoourhealth.Atlast,whentravelingoutside,takecareofourpersonalthingsandcallthepoliceforhelpintimeifweareindanger.Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!【考題解析】1.題干解讀:為了迎接第二十三個(gè)全國(guó)中小學(xué)生安全教育日的到來,學(xué)校組織了以“普及安全知識(shí),確保生命安全”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。要求結(jié)合所給的材料,介紹一下我們?cè)鯓幼霾拍苁棺约喊踩?.寫作指導(dǎo):本文是有關(guān)安全方面的作文,我們可以用“三步法”來寫。第一步:開篇點(diǎn)題,簡(jiǎn)明扼要地說明安全的重要性。第二步:提出建議,少吃或不吃垃圾食品;網(wǎng)上交友要慎重;不要獨(dú)自去河里游泳;外出時(shí),看好個(gè)人物品;遇到危險(xiǎn)求助于警察。第三步:總結(jié)概括,首尾呼應(yīng),點(diǎn)明安全第一。相似題⑥每年三月的最后一個(gè)星期一是“全閉中小學(xué)生安全教育日”。為了提高同學(xué)們的安全意識(shí),學(xué)校決定在畢業(yè)前再舉行一次以安全教育為主題的班會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示,就日常生活中需要注意的安全寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿。提示:1上學(xué)、放學(xué)途中的安全;2校園里的安全;3.家里的安全。要求:1.80詞左右,開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.語法正確,語句通順、流暢;3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。Hello,everyone!ThelastMondayinMarcheveryyearisNationalSafetyEducationDayofPrimaryandMiddleSchoolStudents.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshould________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Safetyisimportant.Weshouldalwayskeepitinmind.Thankyou!【參考范文】Hello,everyone!ThelastMondayinMarcheveryyearisNationalSafetyEducationDayofPrimaryandMiddleSchoolStudents.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldpaymoreattentiontosafety.Tobesafe,wemustfollowrules.Whenwegotoschoolorgohomefromschool,wemustfollowthetrafficrulesForexample,wemustwalkonwalk-side.Whenwecrosszebra-crossing,stopandlookrightandleft,thengoacrosstheroadfast.Wemustn'trunthroughredlightswhencrossingtheroad.Don'tplayfootballontheroad.Atschool,don'tpushwhenwegoupstairsordownstairs,orwemayhurtourselvesorothers.Neverusesharpthingsliketheknifewhenweplaywithourclassmates.Weshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates.Don'tfightwiththem,orwe'llbehurt.Athome,weshouldbecarefulwhenweuseelectricity.Ifthereisafireorathief,weshouldcallthepoliceforhelpintime.Also,foodsafetyisimportant.Nevereatthefoodthatgoesbad.Safetyisveryimportant.Weshouldalwayskeepitinmind.Thankyou!【考題解析】本文屬于話題作文,就日常生活中如何注意安全提一些建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如payattentionto,followthetrafficrules,playwith,getonwellwith,fightwith,intime以及祈使句stopandlookrightandleft以及don’tplayfootballontheroad等,增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。相似題⑦下圖描述了李華今年春節(jié)得到壓歲錢(luckymoney)之后,他和父母對(duì)于如何花壓歲錢產(chǎn)生的不同觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片提示,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要求:1.完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容。2.結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。【參考范文】It’simportanttosavemoneyandputittogooduseinlife.AfterthisSpringFestival,LiHuagotalotofluckymoney,heandhisparentshaddifferentopinionsabouthowtouseit.Hismotherwantedhimtobuysomebooksbecausereadingcanbringhimsomeknowledgeandhisfatherthoughtheshouldgiveitawaytothepoorstudentsinneedtogeteducation,buthehopetobuysomethingnicetoeatorsomefuntoys.AnywayIthinkhecansaveitinabankandthentakeitoutwhenusingit.Also,weshoulduseittodosomethingmeaningfulinsteadofthinkingaboutbuyingsomefoodortoys.【考題解析】試題分析:本篇習(xí)作成功地完成了寫作任務(wù),表達(dá)順暢,結(jié)構(gòu)連貫,字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。能夠準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),做到了要點(diǎn)全面,語法正確,上下文意思連貫,還適當(dāng)發(fā)揮了想象。短語的使用使得文章很生動(dòng),例如spend…on…,inorderto,helpthemtogotoschool等。而多種句式的運(yùn)用則是本文的亮點(diǎn),例如,ThespringfestivalistheloveliestinChina,whichiscomesinFebruary.;Hethinksheshouldspendluckymoneyondeliciousfood.;Hisfatherthinksheshouldgivethemoneytothepoorchildreninordertohelpthemtogotoschool.??梢哉f,這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。相似題⑧下面的圖中描述了李華放學(xué)后在家學(xué)習(xí)的情景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片提示,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括:1.完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容;2.簡(jiǎn)要陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。要求:1.可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Oneday,whenLiHuacamehomefromschool,hefoundhismotherwasnotathome.Hefeltfree.Heputdownhisschoolbagandbroughthisfavoritefoodfromtherefrigerator—hamburgersandcolawhicharenotallowedtoeat.Heenjoyedhisdeliciousfoodwhileplayinggamesandlisteningtomusic.Hefeltveryhappy.Buthelefthishomeworkbehind.Atabout7o’clock,hismothercameback.ShewasveryangrywhenshesawLiHuamakethehousemessy.Atthistime,LiHuaalsorealizedhismistakesandbegantodohishomework.Asforme,Iwilldohomeworkfirst.Ithinklearningisthemostimportantthingforus.Weshouldstudyfirstandthenrelaxourselvesinoursparetime.Weshouldlearnself-discipline.Weshouldn’talwaysrelyonparents.【題目解析】1.題干解讀:文章是一篇看圖作文。主要是描寫李華放學(xué)后自己在家的學(xué)習(xí)情況,從圖中要抓住重要信息——不自律的行為,從而襯托后面要提出的個(gè)人的意見觀點(diǎn),要注意寫作時(shí)可以用一般過去時(shí)描寫,多使用第三人稱描寫,要注意語言的連貫性。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng):文章分兩段描寫。第一段主要描寫圖片所給出的一些信息,他在家的學(xué)習(xí)情況;第二段主要寫自己的觀點(diǎn)看法。文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整思路清晰,語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確連貫,意思通俗易懂。3.高分亮點(diǎn):短語:putdown;beallowedtodo;listento;leave…behind;begintodo;relyon。句型:when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句;which引導(dǎo)的定語從句;Ithink+賓語從句;and引導(dǎo)的并列句。相似題⑨下面的圖片描述了李平上周收留流浪狗的故事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容,為??坝⒄Z園地”寫一篇約100詞的英語短文,完整描述圖畫情景,并表述自己對(duì)此事的看法。參考詞匯:astraydog流浪狗give…abath給……洗澡【參考范文】LastFriday,onthewayhomefromschool,Lipingfoundadirtystraydoglyingbesidethedustbin.Itwassoweakthathecouldn’topenitseyes.Hefeltsorryforthepuppydogandcarriedhimhomeimmediately.Afterfeedinghimfoodandmilk,hegaveitabath.Hewassogladtoseethedogrecover.ItwassolovelyandLipingwantedtokeepit.Afterdiscussingthesituationwithhisparents,hedecidedtoadoptit.WeshouldlearnfromLiPingtoprotectanimals.Animalsareourmostloyalfriends.【考題解析】1、題干解讀:這是一篇看圖寫作,一共四幅圖。寫作文時(shí),認(rèn)真讀圖,可知四幅圖描述了李平上周收留流浪狗的故事,并表述自己對(duì)此事的看法。2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng):描述故事時(shí),主要以第三人稱為主;時(shí)態(tài)主要以一般過去時(shí)為主;將重點(diǎn)放在對(duì)圖畫內(nèi)容的描寫上,不能遺漏圖畫中的主要信息。同時(shí)也需要描寫

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