高考英語書面表達專題輔導基礎寫作調(diào)查報告.ppt

1.50% of the girls 50%的女生 2. compared with同比起來 3. account for/take up占(多少比例) 4. be in favor of. 支持/贊成 5. as far as sb. is concerned就某人看來,相關(guān)短語,6. arouse their interest激發(fā)了他們的興趣 7. put. in the second place把放在第二位 8. rank the first place / rank first / be in the first place排在第一位,相關(guān)句式 1. Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”.上周我們就“誰是你的偶像”在2, 600人中進行了調(diào)查。 2. Recently our League Committee has carried out a survey, whose results are as follows.最近我們團委進行了一次調(diào)查, 其結(jié)果如下。,3. According to the survey, about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. 根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果, 大約一半的學生有困難的時候會去找他們的同學或朋友。 4. Different persons may have different choices on how to spend pocket money.關(guān)于怎樣用零花錢, 不同的人有不同的選擇。,5. A recent survey suggests that students are different from each other in learning styles.最近的一項調(diào)查顯示, 學生在學習方式上是各有差異的。 6. As is shown in the survey, drunken driving may result in serious accidents. 正如調(diào)查所顯示的那樣, 酒后駕駛會導致嚴重事故。,1. 注意審題, 轉(zhuǎn)換圖表。撰寫調(diào)查報告時, 通常需要結(jié)合圖表, 觀察、對比調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù), 并把調(diào)查結(jié)果和數(shù)據(jù)轉(zhuǎn)換為文字表達, 并按寫作內(nèi)容給出的要點按順序進行寫作 。,2. 確定時態(tài), 規(guī)范全文。引出報告結(jié)果或數(shù)據(jù)時，發(fā)表議論和個人觀點, 通常用一般現(xiàn)在時。若出現(xiàn)具體的時間狀語, 如last year， next year, recently等時, 應根據(jù)具體使用適當?shù)臅r態(tài)。 3. 變換表達, 豐富語匯。調(diào)查報告中多出現(xiàn)相同內(nèi)容的描述或分析, 為避免重復, 建議使用不同語言和句式表達同類信息。,(2007年廣東) 上周, 我們以“誰是你的偶像”為題, 在2600名考生中進行了一次調(diào)查(survey)。以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)：,寫作內(nèi)容 根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù), 寫一篇短文, 包括以下內(nèi)容： 1. 調(diào)查時間、調(diào)查問題以及調(diào)查對象； 2. 男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異； 3. “父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差異； 4. 男女生在以偉人為偶像方面的異同； 5. 你的偶像及理由。,例題導寫 1. 認真審題, 理清要點。第一點寫作內(nèi)容“調(diào)查時間、調(diào)查問題以及調(diào)查對象”是在表格以外的寫作引入說明部分找到具體信息, 第二至四寫作點中, 要求找出男女生數(shù)據(jù)的“差異”，寫作時要一語中的, 第五點寫作內(nèi)容則讓考生自由表達觀點。,2. 第五點寫作內(nèi)容, 給予考生很大的發(fā)揮空 間,也是體現(xiàn)考生寫作水平的很好機會?？忌M量避免使用“I like Jay Chow because he is handsome.”等語言簡單、觀點膚淺的句子，而應該運用高級語句, 爭取高分, 如：My idol is Langlang because he is a person with strong determination. 或The person I admire most is Gou Jian because he is able to realize his dream with his courage and strong will.,3. 掃清難點, 譯句成文。翻譯以下重要短語句式, 為寫作作準備。 (1) 開展了一項關(guān)于的調(diào)查 _ _ (2) 調(diào)查結(jié)果表明 _,make /do / conduct/carry out a survey about / on sth.; survey sb. about sth.,The survey /result shows that .,(3) 把看作偶像 _ _ (4) 50%的女生 _ (5) 與是一樣的_,consider / choose / figure sb. as idols; think of sb. as idols,be the same as,50% of the girls, half of the girls,(6) 某人或某物排在第一位 _ _ (7) 某人把放在第二位 _ (8) 據(jù)某人看來 _,sb. / sth. rank the first place, sb. / sth. is in the first place,as far as sb. be concerned, in ones opinion,sb. put.in the second place,(9) 某人持的觀點 _ _ (10) 表示對比、比較 _,however, on the contrary, but，while,sb. hold the opinion that，sb. be of the opinion that,參考范文 Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.,能力提高 一、填空 請用所給動詞的適當形式填空。 1. Recently, I _ (survey) my classmates about their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students are quite satisfied with it, while 15% _ (dislike) it and 5% _ (have) no opinion. Students who _(like) it say the pictures with the texts are very attractive, which greatly arouse their interest in learning.,have surveyed,dislike,have,like,Moreover, the book is very interesting, _(cover) many hot topics and _(provide) lots of cultural knowledge of the world. However, students who dislike it _(complain) there _(be) too many new words and difficult sentences, _(make) the texts difficult to understand. In conclusion, the new English textbook _ (help) most students improve their English enormously already.,has helped,covering,providing,complain,are,making,2. The result _ (show) that 75% of the students _(be) in favor of surfing the Internet for information last year. And the data also _(suggest) that the number _(continue) to rise next year.,shows,were,suggest,will continue,二、勘誤 請用橫線劃出下列句子中的錯誤, 并將其改正過來。(錯誤可能不止一處) 1. There are 50% of the girls think of film and TV stars as idols, however, 48% of the boys choose sports stars.,1. 改法一：There are 50% of the girls think (改為thinking 或who think) of film and TV stars as idols， however，(改為but，或把however前的逗號改為句號，然后另起一句，使用However)48% of the boys choose sports stars. 改法二：There are (刪除There are)50% of the girls think of film and TV stars as idols, .,2. Last week, we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find that the choices from boys and girls are different.,2. Last week, we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find (改為found) that the choices from boys and girls are (改為were) different. 注釋該處動詞時態(tài)與last week, did等相呼應。,上月，我們公司以35歲以下的人群作為調(diào)查對象, 選取了1000人進行了關(guān)于“網(wǎng)上購物”的一項調(diào)查, 調(diào)查情況如下：,寫作內(nèi)容 根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫一篇調(diào)查報告, 內(nèi)容包括： 1. 調(diào)查時間、調(diào)查問題以及調(diào)查對象; 2. 愿意網(wǎng)上購物的人占調(diào)查人數(shù)的百分比； 3.人們愿意在網(wǎng)上購物的主要原因； 4. 人們不愿意在網(wǎng)上購物的主要原因； 5. 本次調(diào)查的結(jié)論。,參考范文 Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping on line among 1000 interviewees younger than 35 years old. 64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home.,Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees dont want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. In conclusion, only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line.,精華點評,考生寫作時必須排除不必要信息的干擾, 因?qū)懽鲀?nèi)容中并沒有要求寫“不愿意網(wǎng)上購物的人所占百分比為32%”這一信息點, 所以不必把表格內(nèi)容全部翻譯。此外, 寫作時盡量使用與寫作內(nèi)容相對應的英語翻譯, 使文章表達更切題。,例如, 寫作內(nèi)容中出現(xiàn)“主要原因”和“結(jié)論”這些重要的寫作線索, 考生應該盡量使用與之相應的語句進行翻譯, 如“.for the main reason that.; .mainly because; In conclusion; Finally, we arrive at the conclusion that.”, 使閱卷老師對寫作信息一目了然，以獲取高分。,上月, 為了給顧客提供更好的服務, Sun-flower餐廳作了一次調(diào)查, 以下是調(diào)查問卷以及調(diào)查結(jié)果：略,寫作內(nèi)容 根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù), 寫一篇短文, 內(nèi)容包括： 1. 顧客最滿意餐廳的兩個方面； 2. 顧客最希望通過什么途徑了解到餐廳最新信息； 3. 愿意再次到餐廳就餐的顧客所占調(diào)查人數(shù)的比例； 4. 顧客對餐廳提出的主要建議。,參考范文 In order to serve the customers better, Sun-flower Restaurant carried out a survey last month. It can be learnt from the data that 85% of the customers are satisfied with the service and 72% of them are satisfied with the food ordered. 71% of the customers are willing to learn about the