高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)專題輔導(dǎo)基礎(chǔ)寫作調(diào)查報(bào)告.pptVIP

1.50% of the girls 50%的女生 2. compared with同比起來(lái) 3. account for/take up占(多少比例) 4. be in favor of. 支持/贊成 5. as far as sb. is concerned就某人看來(lái),相關(guān)短語(yǔ),6. arouse their interest激發(fā)了他們的興趣 7. put. in the second place把放在第二位 8. rank the first place / rank first / be in the first place排在第一位,相關(guān)句式 1. Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”.上周我們就“誰(shuí)是你的偶像”在2, 600人中進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。 2. Recently our League Committee has carried out a survey, whose results are as follows.最近我們團(tuán)委進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查, 其結(jié)果如下。,3. According to the survey, about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. 根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果, 大約一半的學(xué)生有困難的時(shí)候會(huì)去找他們的同學(xué)或朋友。 4. Different persons may have different choices on how to spend pocket money.關(guān)于怎樣用零花錢, 不同的人有不同的選擇。,5. A recent survey suggests that students are different from each other in learning styles.最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示, 學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)方式上是各有差異的。 6. As is shown in the survey, drunken driving may result in serious accidents. 正如調(diào)查所顯示的那樣, 酒后駕駛會(huì)導(dǎo)致嚴(yán)重事故。,1. 注意審題, 轉(zhuǎn)換圖表。撰寫調(diào)查報(bào)告時(shí), 通常需要結(jié)合圖表, 觀察、對(duì)比調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù), 并把調(diào)查結(jié)果和數(shù)據(jù)轉(zhuǎn)換為文字表達(dá), 并按寫作內(nèi)容給出的要點(diǎn)按順序進(jìn)行寫作 。,2. 確定時(shí)態(tài), 規(guī)范全文。引出報(bào)告結(jié)果或數(shù)據(jù)時(shí)，發(fā)表議論和個(gè)人觀點(diǎn), 通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。若出現(xiàn)具體的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ), 如last year， next year, recently等時(shí), 應(yīng)根據(jù)具體使用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)。 3. 變換表達(dá), 豐富語(yǔ)匯。調(diào)查報(bào)告中多出現(xiàn)相同內(nèi)容的描述或分析, 為避免重復(fù), 建議使用不同語(yǔ)言和句式表達(dá)同類信息。,(2007年廣東) 上周, 我們以“誰(shuí)是你的偶像”為題, 在2600名考生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查(survey)。以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)：,寫作內(nèi)容 根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù), 寫一篇短文, 包括以下內(nèi)容： 1. 調(diào)查時(shí)間、調(diào)查問(wèn)題以及調(diào)查對(duì)象； 2. 男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異； 3. “父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差異； 4. 男女生在以偉人為偶像方面的異同； 5. 你的偶像及理由。,例題導(dǎo)寫 1. 認(rèn)真審題, 理清要點(diǎn)。第一點(diǎn)寫作內(nèi)容“調(diào)查時(shí)間、調(diào)查問(wèn)題以及調(diào)查對(duì)象”是在表格以外的寫作引入說(shuō)明部分找到具體信息, 第二至四寫作點(diǎn)中, 要求找出男女生數(shù)據(jù)的“差異”，寫作時(shí)要一語(yǔ)中的, 第五點(diǎn)寫作內(nèi)容則讓考生自由表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)。,2. 第五點(diǎn)寫作內(nèi)容, 給予考生很大的發(fā)揮空 間,也是體現(xiàn)考生寫作水平的很好機(jī)會(huì)?？忌M量避免使用“I like Jay Chow because he is handsome.”等語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)單、觀點(diǎn)膚淺的句子，而應(yīng)該運(yùn)用高級(jí)語(yǔ)句, 爭(zhēng)取高分, 如：My idol is Langlang because he is a person with strong determination. 或The person I admire most is Gou Jian because he is able to realize his dream with his courage and strong will.,3. 掃清難點(diǎn), 譯句成文。翻譯以下重要短語(yǔ)句式, 為寫作作準(zhǔn)備。 (1) 開展了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于的調(diào)查 _ _ (2) 調(diào)查結(jié)果表明 _,make /do / conduct/carry out a survey about / on sth.; survey sb. about sth.,The survey /result shows that .,(3) 把看作偶像 _ _ (4) 50%的女生 _ (5) 與是一樣的_,consider / choose / figure sb. as idols; think of sb. as idols,be the same as,50% of the girls, half of the girls,(6) 某人或某物排在第一位 _ _ (7) 某人把放在第二位 _ (8) 據(jù)某人看來(lái) _,sb. / sth. rank the first place, sb. / sth. is in the first place,as far as sb. be concerned, in ones opinion,sb. put.in the second place,(9) 某人持的觀點(diǎn) _ _ (10) 表示對(duì)比、比較 _,however, on the contrary, but，while,sb. hold the opinion that，sb. be of the opinion that,參考范文 Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.,能力提高 一、填空 請(qǐng)用所給動(dòng)詞的適當(dāng)形式填空。 1. Recently, I _ (survey) my classmates about their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students are quite satisfied with it, while 15% _ (dislike) it and 5% _ (have) no opinion. Students who _(like) it say the pictures with the texts are very attractive, which greatly arouse their interest in learning.,have surveyed,dislike,have,like,Moreover, the book is very interesting, _(cover) many hot topics and _(provide) lots of cultural knowledge of the world. However, students who dislike it _(complain) there _(be) too many new words and difficult sentences, _(make) the texts difficult to understand. In conclusion, the new English textbook _ (help) most students improve their English enormously already.,has helped,covering,providing,complain,are,making,2. The result _ (show) that 75% of the students _(be) in favor of surfing the Internet for information last year. And the data also _(suggest) that the number _(continue) to rise next year.,shows,were,suggest,will continue,二、勘誤 請(qǐng)用橫線劃出下列句子中的錯(cuò)誤, 并將其改正過(guò)來(lái)。(錯(cuò)誤可能不止一處) 1. There are 50% of the girls think of film and TV stars as idols, however, 48% of the boys choose sports stars.,1. 改法一：There are 50% of the girls think (改為thinking 或who think) of film and TV stars as idols， however，(改為but，或把however前的逗號(hào)改為句號(hào)，然后另起一句，使用However)48% of the boys choose sports stars. 改法二：There are (刪除There are)50% of the girls think of film and TV stars as idols, .,2. Last week, we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find that the choices from boys and girls are different.,2. Last week, we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find (改為found) that the choices from boys and girls are (改為were) different. 注釋該處動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)與last week, did等相呼應(yīng)。,上月，我們公司以35歲以下的人群作為調(diào)查對(duì)象, 選取了1000人進(jìn)行了關(guān)于“網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物”的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查, 調(diào)查情況如下：,寫作內(nèi)容 根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告, 內(nèi)容包括： 1. 調(diào)查時(shí)間、調(diào)查問(wèn)題以及調(diào)查對(duì)象; 2. 愿意網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的人占調(diào)查人數(shù)的百分比； 3.人們?cè)敢庠诰W(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的主要原因； 4. 人們不愿意在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的主要原因； 5. 本次調(diào)查的結(jié)論。,參考范文 Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping on line among 1000 interviewees younger than 35 years old. 64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home.,Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees dont want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. In conclusion, only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line.,精華點(diǎn)評(píng),考生寫作時(shí)必須排除不必要信息的干擾, 因?qū)懽鲀?nèi)容中并沒(méi)有要求寫“不愿意網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的人所占百分比為32%”這一信息點(diǎn), 所以不必把表格內(nèi)容全部翻譯。此外, 寫作時(shí)盡量使用與寫作內(nèi)容相對(duì)應(yīng)的英語(yǔ)翻譯, 使文章表達(dá)更切題。,例如, 寫作內(nèi)容中出現(xiàn)“主要原因”和“結(jié)論”這些重要的寫作線索, 考生應(yīng)該盡量使用與之相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)句進(jìn)行翻譯, 如“.for the main reason that.; .mainly because; In conclusion; Finally, we arrive at the conclusion that.”, 使閱卷老師對(duì)寫作信息一目了然，以獲取高分。,上月, 為了給顧客提供更好的服務(wù), Sun-flower餐廳作了一次調(diào)查, 以下是調(diào)查問(wèn)卷以及調(diào)查結(jié)果：略,寫作內(nèi)容 根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù), 寫一篇短文, 內(nèi)容包括： 1. 顧客最滿意餐廳的兩個(gè)方面； 2. 顧客最希望通過(guò)什么途徑了解到餐廳最新信息； 3. 愿意再次到餐廳就餐的顧客所占調(diào)查人數(shù)的比例； 4. 顧客對(duì)餐廳提出的主要建議。,參考范文 In order to serve the customers better, Sun-flower Restaurant carried out a survey last month. It can be learnt from the data that 85% of the customers are satisfied with the service and 72% of them are satisfied with the food ordered. 71% of the customers are willing to learn about the