中考英語書面表達(word)

1、中考英語書面表達（ word）一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1假如你即將在學校英 趣小 的活 中 言， 你用英 寫一篇 言稿。要點提示如下: （1）幾個月前，奶奶晚 后去跳廣 舞（do square dancing ）。（2）從那 起，奶奶喜 上了廣 舞。（3） 在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4） 有些 居有意 ， 音 很吵，無法入睡。（5） 你 人 可以跳廣 舞，但要求：（ 1）開 和 尾已 出，不 入 數(shù)。（2）要點 全，行文 ，可適當 。Boys and girls,I m very happy to speak here and I d like to talk abo

2、ut my grandma._That s all. Thank you!【答案】 Boys and girls,I m very happy to speak here and Ialkaboutdlikemyto grandmat.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has beenin love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What smore, she has

3、a lofriends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing.They think that the music is so loud that they can t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But theyshould think about the feelings of o

4、thers and they shouldn t make a lot of noise.That s all. Thank you!【解析】 是一篇 材料作文，根據(jù)要點提示寫一篇學校英 趣小 的活 中的 言稿。要注意隨著文章推 的 化，一開始 一般 去 ，而后面 用一般 在 ，最后表達自己 點的 候也 使用一般 在 。人稱 第一，三人稱，注意主 一致關系，構思文章框架，列 出可能會用到的好 好句， 住千萬不能漏寫信息要點。參考 就是必用 ，一定要運用到文章當中。在寫作中注意運用恰當?shù)?，使文章更加 ，自然。2 面表達地球是我 的家園，我 作 地球的主人，就 好好保 地球。 在正在倡 “低碳

5、”生活，只要我 不 染地球的 境，不浪 地球的能源，就能 我 的周 得更 ，生活 得更美好。作 中學生，我 怎 做呢？ 你的想法。內(nèi)容 包括以下幾點：1. 節(jié)約用水、用電； 2. 節(jié)約紙張，循環(huán)使用舊課本，保護森林；地上種樹； 4. 不亂丟雜物，保護環(huán)境；3. 節(jié)約糧食，在更多的土要求：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名；80 詞左右提示詞： the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution t

6、o our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】 How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the

7、 water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will

8、 plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do ， live in ， aroundus， such as， as a middle school student ，and s

9、o on， close down the water ， turn off the lights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth ， pollute our environment ， better and better 等。而固定結構 But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the

10、electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. 等復雜從句結構的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識

11、準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。3?的看法。內(nèi)容包括：1.你沒完成學習任務的經(jīng)歷（事情，原因及后果）；2.針對如何管理好時間給出幾點建議。作文要求：1.短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。3.詞數(shù) 80 個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy._【答案】 Once, I couldnt make good

12、 use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was

13、 also upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量

14、的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如make good use of ， lastweekend， how to do ， play a game， a kind of ， spent more time on ， forget to do ， in the end， be angry with ， be going to do ， on the paper ， put up 等。而特殊非謂語動詞結構 Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. 和 I think we should make a weekday plan. /We s

15、hould write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next. 等復雜從句結構的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意

16、發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。4每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長，作為初中生的你，你感覺自已比起小時候有了哪些變化 ?請寫一篇文章描述一下你認為最明顯的變化。要點包括 : 1. 變化是什么 ?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的 ?3. 化后有什么感受 ?_【答案】 The biggest personal change Ive ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was

17、 a child, I didn t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories forme and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time. Books are my friends. They will co

18、ntinue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，介 我比起小 候有了哪些 化?！?解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 和一般 去 ，人稱 第一，三人稱，注意主 一致 ，句子 構主要 系表 構和 構，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：When I was ，my mother always read ，Gradually I began to ，Books are 等句式的 用。寫作中注意運用代 ，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述 序，符合 關系。【點睛】本文 構 湊， 言 。開 介 了我最大的個人 化是喜 上 ，接下來介 我小 候不喜

19、，最后指出 在 籍是我的朋友。此 fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, beginto do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth 等 些 的運用也 文章增色不少。5 面表達根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇 Changes in Our Hometown 的英 短文（80 左右）文章內(nèi)容必 包含所 的所有信息開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)內(nèi)容要點： 去 在1舊房1高樓2河水 2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、 自行 上班3乘公交 、小汽 上班4道路狹窄（ narrow

20、 ）4街道 （ wide ），干 整 5 居住條件（ living conditions ）差5 生活越來越好， 境（environment ）越來越舒適6 你的感想 （寫兩到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years ， great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】 Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, the

21、re used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish

22、 in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it s still important to remembe the past. It tells tha

23、t we should cherish the present life.【解析】【 解】亮點 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，內(nèi)容 ，表達流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go to do ， on foot ， by bike，better and better ， more and more 等。而 I think its still important to remember the past/It tells thatwe should cherish the present li

24、fe. 等 從句 構的運用，豐富了 作內(nèi)容，使表達多 ，是本文的最大亮點?！军c睛】 面表達 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開思 ，考 運用所學英 知 準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復 的句式 構以便得到 高的分數(shù)。6 保 是人 最關心的 之一， 以Change for a better China 主 ， 合自己家 的 化寫一篇英 短文。注意事 ：1.短文 包括表格中的所有提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，作適當 。2.短文中不能出 真 的人名和地名, 數(shù)不少于80。狀況水 染，大氣 染. 措施立即阻止

25、此 活 ,治理 境（至少兩條）.感想建 境能 得更好.Change for a better China_【答案】 We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well.But some people don t care about it .They throw litter into riverthe and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The

26、air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they shou

27、ld close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and morehealthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們

28、最關心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China 為主題，結合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。【點睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然，順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型： The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road t

29、hese days. ； We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy. 給文中增色不少。7書面表達（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔憂。學校英語校刊英語天地對此進行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾?，請你就此次調(diào)查的結果進行總結，并談談你自己的觀點。Grabbing redpackets on lineAgreement（ 75%）Disagreement （ 25%）Your opinion1.a popular form of entertainment,

30、bring more fun2.bring people closer, make more friendsspend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely1.2.提示詞： We chat 微信 Grabbing red packets on line 搶紅包注意：（ 1）詞數(shù) 80 左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（ 2）文章應包括題中所提的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（ 3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息;As we all know, grabbing

31、 red packets on line won popularity with the people during the SpringFestival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did thesurvey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packets” among students._【答案】 As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the

32、people during theSpring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we didthe survey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bringpeople closer , they can

33、 make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of peopleAbout 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don t havenough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happin

34、ess, but also send blessingsto people in a special form. Also, its obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes,each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people cant grabthe red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their ce

35、ll phones. Whats worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學校進行的關于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結果進行總結，并談談自己對這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結構清楚，有層次。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不要

36、逐詞翻譯，應從句子整體結構出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復合句。為提升文章檔次，還應注意使用高級句型和較復雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結構清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準確，符合英語的表達習慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular

37、 form ofentertainment, bring them more fun.、 Grabbing red packets has been part of people、 s livesAbout 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、 Personally,theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to peoplein a special form. 、

38、 If people cant grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,evenbreak their cell phones. 等等。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。8上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論?，F(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意：1.短文須包括寫作提示和表格中所列的全部內(nèi)容；2.時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整、規(guī)范；3.80-100詞。生詞提示： electric adj. 電討論結果25 人表示同意35 人不同意理由1.這樣很方便；2.能

39、節(jié)約上學1.年齡太小，騎電動車不安全；2.早上交通擁途中的時間。擠，騎電動車也快不起來。【答案】 Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go toschool.25 students of our class agreed with it ， because they said it was convenient for them andit could takethem less time to go to school. But

40、the other 35 students didn t agree with them. They said it wasnot safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also saidin the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。根

41、據(jù)所給要點寫一篇 80-100 詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個要點都表達出來，不要遺漏任何一個，書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。寫作亮點：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點的學生各自的理由，結構清晰，要點全面。時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less

42、 time to go to school.They also said in the morni ngthe traffic was busy and the students couldn t ride electric bicyclesquickly.闡述各自觀點時，理由也很充分?？键c：提綱類作文。9假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80 歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應如何保護它們（不少于三條）。要求： 1）恰當運用比較級和最高級；2）80 詞左右。倡議書的結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal; 象牙 ivoryDear classmates_I believe everyones contribution（貢獻）can make a big difference.You