江蘇高考英語作文summary-技巧ppt課件

1、Summary writing,Learning objectives : 1. To have a better understanding of the elements of a summary; 2.To learn and be able to write a satisfactory summary,Summary writing (約30個(gè)詞概括,概要:約30詞，少于25或多于40詞均扣2分,抄襲原文材料為無效要點(diǎn)；改變句式表達(dá)方式，并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不認(rèn)定為抄襲,讀寫作文寫好summary 的意義,第一段是定調(diào)子，閱卷老師往往讀 完第一段就已經(jīng)打出基本分了。 -高考閱卷老師 相對(duì)于

2、寫作的其他要求來說，這一 部分較難寫，這一部分先讀后概括， 而其他部分都是有中文提綱的。 -往屆實(shí)驗(yàn)班考生,What is a Summary,A summary is a short account giving the main points of something longer or detailed,以約30個(gè)詞概括主要內(nèi)容,A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days complaining about it. “It is true that you cannot sin

3、g,” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!” “Oh, but what good is all this beauty,” cried the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!” “Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet vo

4、ice, you would still complain about another thing. Why cant you just be happy about what you have already got,人稱時(shí)態(tài),The story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you ha

5、ve already got,feels,comforts,you,you,過多細(xì)節(jié),In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of compla

6、ining about what he didnt possess,53 words,直接引語,A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, “No one is perfect, each one should be happy about what you have got.,- -,過早表達(dá)觀點(diǎn),Each of us has strengths and weaknesses, such as a peacock. A peacock was upset about his voice,

7、but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got,A peacock complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with,dos and donts,1、注意人稱時(shí)態(tài)正確； 2、不寫過多細(xì)節(jié):實(shí)行精“兵”裁“員” 3、不用直

8、接引語； 4、不能過早表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)； 5、不可完全照抄原文； 6、不可加入自己的觀點(diǎn)； 7. 思路清晰，巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞增強(qiáng)文章的 連貫性,Styles of passage,2015高考作文,1.記敘文,寫作方法：串聯(lián)要素法 六個(gè)要素： who; when; where; what; how; why 某人做了某事, 結(jié)果如何？ The passage mainly talks about,This story is about a peacock who complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beaut

9、iful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with,1）對(duì)象、性質(zhì)功用、利好 （2）問題、解決方法 （3）現(xiàn)象、原因、結(jié)果,2、說明文及新聞報(bào)道,koalas in wildlife parks that are repeatedly awaken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals,Koa

10、las in wildlife parks cant fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is considering making the tourists behavior illegal to protect the animals,Practice,Passage A (2014年江蘇高考作文,Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of

11、Contemporary Chinese has included 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not,WithEnglishwordsgetting popularinbothmediaanddaily life,aChinesedictionaryhas included239ofthem,leaving thepublicdividedintotwo opposinggroups:“For”and“Against,三要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)、論證。 文章結(jié)構(gòu)：總分結(jié)構(gòu)、分總結(jié)構(gòu)、 平行結(jié)構(gòu),3、議論文,Get

12、ting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the

13、 air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bo

14、dies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to ke

15、ep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it,1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea,Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance,2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences,a better memory a healthier body a better preparation for the

16、 day,3. Conclusion/suggestions,a good habit / benefit a lot,Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day,Teamwork is about people working together as a team. The idea has spread fr

17、om the world of sports to business. In the 21st century, as people and their work are becoming more technically advanced, working as a team makes it easier to get things done. Some things cannot be done by people working individually. More complex goals usually require that people work together. Any

18、one who has ever been to a job interview will almost certainly have been asked what teamwork means to them. This is because companies want people who are team players, who can get along with their colleagues and work together in a group. Because teamwork is required by many organizations today, they

19、 will often organize team building events in an attempt to get people to work as a team than as individuals,Teamwork,required by,There are seven important skills that one must learn in order to be a successful team player. They are as follows: Listening-listen and allow people to freely express thei

20、r ideas. Questioning-ask questions and discuss the objectives of the team. Persuading-encourage people to exchange, defend ,and rethink their ideas. Respecting-treat others with respect and to support their ideas. Helping-help ones partners, this is the general theme of teamwork. Sharing-share ideas

21、 and resources with the team to create an environment of teamwork. Participating-all members of the team are encouraged to participate in the team,skills,The passage states the importance of teamwork in business and that, in a more competitive world, people must co-operate in order to achieve their

22、goals. Besides, seven teamwork skills are also described,Q1：圖文并茂的讀寫歸納要涉及圖嗎,審題 看圖畫或圖表的作用 漫畫通?？珊雎?圖表看作用，有時(shí)不可忽略,2015高考作文,Think：2015高考的這幅圖在文字中體現(xiàn)了嗎,Tip1,多個(gè)并列語段只要找出其共性 主題， 為某一段落服務(wù)的插圖 可不涉及,Model 1: Topic + support,The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also

23、threaten peoples lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.(2015高考范文,觀察一下圖文的關(guān)系,蘇州2016,2015高考作文的翻版,Cultural differences do exist in every corner of the world，where the same behavior often carries totally different meanings when we socialize with people. The three experiences of

24、 the author are typical examples,蘇州2016,The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols

25、of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu. “It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University. The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from

26、the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart,讀寫讀寫先讀后寫,The panda is the most widely recognized symbol a

27、mong foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu,It is interesting

28、 to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University,The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart,Think：以上的三段文字和圖之間是什么關(guān)系,圖表中的內(nèi)容在文章中體現(xiàn)了嗎？要寫嗎,Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2,The box-