三維設(shè)計(jì)高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專題講座課件：第十一講 應(yīng)用文一——書信、電子郵件

1、題目要求題目要求(2011全國卷全國卷)假定你是李華，你所喜愛的假定你是李華，你所喜愛的global mirror周周報(bào)創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編報(bào)創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：1說明你是該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者說明你是該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者2贊賞該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：贊賞該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1)兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞2)介紹名人成功故事介紹名人成功故事3提出建議：提出建議：刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章注意：注意：1詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語己為你寫好；左右，開頭語己為你寫好；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)

2、節(jié)，以使行文連貫。dear editorinchief, congratulations on the 5th anniversary of global mirror!_sincerely yours, li hua技法指導(dǎo)技法指導(dǎo) 書信、電子郵件的寫作是高考中出現(xiàn)頻率最高的一種書信、電子郵件的寫作是高考中出現(xiàn)頻率最高的一種題型。從內(nèi)容上看，近幾年高考書信寫作主要包括致歉信、題型。從內(nèi)容上看，近幾年高考書信寫作主要包括致歉信、致謝信、筆友信、慰問信、投訴信、邀請(qǐng)信、介紹信、求致謝信、筆友信、慰問信、投訴信、邀請(qǐng)信、介紹信、求職信、讀者請(qǐng)求的解答信及其答復(fù)讀者的信等。不論哪種職信、讀者請(qǐng)求的解

3、答信及其答復(fù)讀者的信等。不論哪種形式，一般都有固定的寫作模式，只要記住其特定的寫作形式，一般都有固定的寫作模式，只要記住其特定的寫作模板，并能在具體的寫作中加以融會(huì)貫通，一定能讓你的模板，并能在具體的寫作中加以融會(huì)貫通，一定能讓你的作文水平快速提高，從而在考場(chǎng)上寫出檔次較高的文章。作文水平快速提高，從而在考場(chǎng)上寫出檔次較高的文章。下面介紹一下幾種?？紩诺哪０?，供大家寫作時(shí)借鑒。下面介紹一下幾種?？紩诺哪０澹┐蠹覍懽鲿r(shí)借鑒。，1投訴信投訴信 dear _， my name is/i am _. i am writing to you for _. firstly, _. secondly,

4、 _. thirdly, _. therefore, i require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. to be honest/honestly speaking, _. therefore, i do require(hope) _. thank you for your consideration.sincerely yours, li ming2建議信建議信 dear _， i am _. your collection of suggestion on _ is _. as is known,

5、 _. my suggestions are _： first, _. (people can _.) second, (to make economic profits, ) _. third, _. (as many of them _.) i hope you will find these proposals useful, and i would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details(or：your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly

6、appreciated) good luck with your _(祝愿祝愿)yours sincerely, li ming3求職信求職信 dear sir or madam, i write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in _(報(bào)紙名稱報(bào)紙名稱) of _(廣告發(fā)布時(shí)廣告發(fā)布時(shí)間間) i am _ from _.as a/an _， i have been _.besides, i won _ in _. if you consider me appropriate for the job

7、, please call me at _. i will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./thank you for considering my application, and i am looking forward to meeting you.yours sincerely, li ming4邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)信dear _， how is everything with you? i am writing to tell you that there will be a _(內(nèi)容內(nèi)容) at/in

8、_(地點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)) on _(時(shí)間時(shí)間)we would be honored to have you there with us. the occasion will start at _(具體時(shí)間具體時(shí)間). this will be followed by a _(進(jìn)一步的安排進(jìn)一步的安排)at around _(時(shí)間時(shí)間)，_(另一個(gè)安排另一個(gè)安排) ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? i really hope you can make it.my phone number is _.looking

9、 forward to _.yours sincerely, li ming5感謝信感謝信 dear _， i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _(感謝的原因感謝的原因) if it had not been for your assistance in _(對(duì)方給你的具體幫助對(duì)方給你的具體幫助)，i fear that i would have been _(沒有對(duì)方幫助的后果沒有對(duì)方幫助的后果) everyone agrees that it was you who _(給出給出細(xì)節(jié)細(xì)節(jié))again, i would like t

10、o express my warm thanks to you! please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely, li ming6道歉信道歉信 dear _， i am truly sorry that _(道歉的原因道歉的原因) the reason is that _(介紹原因介紹原因). once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely, li

11、 ming第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文謀篇布局謀篇布局黃金模板黃金模板dear editorinchief, congratulations on the 5th anniversary of global mirror! im _(介紹自己介紹自己). i like it very much for_(兩個(gè)理由兩個(gè)理由). first, it covers _(優(yōu)勢(shì)之一優(yōu)勢(shì)之一) so that, by simply turning the pages, i can learn _(了了解的事情解的事情) during the week. _(優(yōu)勢(shì)之二優(yōu)勢(shì)之二) are

12、the success stories of worldfamous people which help me _(對(duì)自己的幫助對(duì)自己的幫助). as a young student, i suggest _ (建議建議) to guide us in our english learning, and i hope _ (希望希望)sincerely yours, li hua第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章1首先，它兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞，因此，我隨便翻幾頁就可以首先，它兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞，因此，我隨便翻幾頁就可以了解到本周發(fā)生的重要事件。了解到本周發(fā)生的重要事件。 firstly,

13、there are both national and international news on it. so when i turn the pages simply, i can know all important things happened during the week. first, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, i can learn all important things that have happened during the

14、week. 2作為一名年輕的學(xué)生，我建議作為一名年輕的學(xué)生，我建議global mirror刊登一些刊登一些指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章。指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章。 as a young student, i make a suggestion that global mirror publish some articles that can guide us in our english learning. as a young student, i suggest that global mirror carry articles to guide us in our english learning.

15、第三步串句成文，保證流暢第三步串句成文，保證流暢dear editorinchief, congratulations on the 5th anniversary of global mirror! im a regular reader of your newspaper. i like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. first, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, i can lear

16、n all important things that have happened during the week. equally attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. as a young student, i suggest that global mirror carry articles to guide us in our englis

17、h learning, and i hope that it will become even more popular. sincerely yours, li hua(2011山東高考山東高考)假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友tom上個(gè)月上個(gè)月來到北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語演來到北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語演講比賽講比賽(speech contest)，你在資料搜集、語言運(yùn)用等方面，你在資料搜集、語言運(yùn)用等方面遇到了困難。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給遇到了困難。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給tom寫一封電子郵件：寫一封電子郵件：1詢問詢問tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；

18、的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；2談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請(qǐng)tom幫忙；幫忙；3告訴告訴tom你打算賽后去看他。你打算賽后去看他。注意：注意：1.詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：120150；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_參考范文：參考范文： dear tom, how time flies! it has been a month since you came to beijing. how is everything going on with your life and study now? what excited me most is that i will go to beijing to attend an english speech contest to be held in summer holiday in july for middle school students. but unfortunately, im encountering many difficulties in collecting materials needed and i also have problems in the applic