2016天津中考英語作文全攻略

1、天津中考英語作文全攻略近年來天津卷的書面表達，主要考查考生以下幾種能力：觀察能力、思維能力、運用能力以及寫作能力。書面表達題是中考題型中考查學(xué)生綜合語言輸出能力的一個重要形式，學(xué)生的書面表達質(zhì)量高與低，更多地取決于日常教學(xué)中學(xué)生語言知識的建構(gòu)和語料積累。只有語料積累到一定的高度，才能產(chǎn)生相對完美的語言輸出；同時也受書面表達題題目內(nèi)容的限制，好的書面表達題取材應(yīng)該源于學(xué)生的實際生活經(jīng)歷、貼近學(xué)生的實際生活、使學(xué)生有話可說、有內(nèi)容要表達。學(xué)生豐富的語言積累與可表達的親身經(jīng)歷為高質(zhì)量的輸出奠定了堅實的基礎(chǔ)。2012年的書面表達是通過寫感受的方式，描寫班上兩名同學(xué)的對比表現(xiàn)，最終寫出自己的觀點。寫作的

2、話題均來自學(xué)生的生活實際，學(xué)生審題的時候感覺輕松、親切，可有效減輕學(xué)生考試時的心理焦慮。本題目立意新穎，貼近生活、符合課標(biāo)，學(xué)生有話可寫。學(xué)生在寫文章時除寫出所給信息，應(yīng)盡量使用一些好的句式和語法現(xiàn)象，如：I don't think；spendin doing；Although；Because；So；tooto do；同時，學(xué)生在寫文章時會有些詞匯的障礙，如：請教；表現(xiàn)良好；賽前腿受傷。并且學(xué)生會遇到過去式的最大障礙。通過試卷推測，不少考生對文章結(jié)構(gòu)、語言的整體把握、語言的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性方面還有待提高，是今后教師教學(xué)中的重點和難點。書面表達是天津中考英語每年的必考項，雖然只有15分的分

3、值，但對于不同層次的學(xué)生而言，這15分是最能拉開差距的一項?？v覽天津市近三年中考，從08年“慶祝母親節(jié)”，到09年的“讀好書，促成長”，再到10年的“為有煩惱的朋友寫回信”，似乎每一年的考題都在盡可能的貼近學(xué)生的日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活。近三年的中考書面表達，都是以表格的形式給出相應(yīng)的信息，要求考生通過對信息的理解和整合，寫成自己的文章，這里考察考生如下能力：1.獲取信息的能力。對于同一個表格，不同的孩子能夠解讀出的內(nèi)容不盡相同，可放到考試中，每一個解讀出的信息都是相應(yīng)的給分點，因此讀題審題很重要。大到整個題目意義，小到每一個細節(jié)，都是給分點，因此信息的獲取一定要全面。2.整合信息的能力。獲取了各種知識

4、點后，考生是否能夠?qū)⑦@些信息加以自己的理解，合理的整合到一起，是決定這篇作文成績的關(guān)鍵因素。整合信息的過程中要注意：按照一定的順序進行整理。例如08年的“慶祝母親節(jié)”，需要考生按照事件發(fā)展的順序，從時間、地點、人物，到事情的詳細經(jīng)過和結(jié)果，如果反其道而行之，一定是不可以的。再如09年的“讀好書、促成長”，要按照活動的原因、目的、意義、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果、自身感受的順序行文，如果順序顛倒，會顯得很別扭。3.表達信息的能力。其實說白了，這就是要求考生按照符合與法規(guī)定的句子，把這些整合好的信息完整無誤的表達出來，句子的結(jié)構(gòu)是否齊全，同一個句子的表達是否可以借助復(fù)合句，文章的開頭結(jié)尾是否呼應(yīng)、是否點題等，都是

5、決定這篇文章最后分?jǐn)?shù)檔的關(guān)鍵因素。想想看，如果在開頭處沒有直入主題，并且寫了個有語法錯誤的句子，再加上書寫不是很清楚，這篇作文的成績大家就可想而知了。下面，我們逐一來看看近三年的考題以及范文，注意紅體字部分的表達方式，在考試中，這些都是“閃光點”，是可以讓我們獲得高分的地方。先來看08年的考題天津中考08年英語作文2008年中考作文及范文書面表達（本大題共15分）假如你叫李華，5月11日母親節(jié)那天 你為母親做了很多有意義的事情。請你根據(jù)表格中所給信息，用英語寫一篇日記。上午你用零花錢給母親買了些鮮花，放在花瓶內(nèi)下午你去市場買菜，為全家人做了一頓簡單可口的飯菜完飯后你送給母親自己制作的賀卡，并祝

6、她節(jié)日快樂；告訴母親要多注意自己的健康，不要過度勞累；你還保證今后會幫助她做一些家務(wù)勞動；母親感動得留下了眼淚注意：1. 詞數(shù)80100 個左右 2. 日記的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 3. 日記必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，但不要逐句翻譯，可以假如適當(dāng)細節(jié)和適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使其通順、連貫。參考詞匯：pocket money 零花錢 vase 花瓶 overwork 過度勞累 be moved to tears 感動得流淚11th May Sunday Today is Mothers Day. I love mother so much that Ive done many things for

7、 her. In the morning, I bought Today is a special day, warm and meaningful. 11th May Sunday RainyToday is Mothers Day. I love Mother so much that Ive done many things for her. In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase. In the afternoon I went to the market to bu

8、y vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave Mother the card that I made myself and said “Happy Mothers Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some housework from today on. Hear

9、ing the words, Mother was moved to tears. Today is a special day, warm and meaningful. 2009年天津中考英語作及范文 假設(shè)你校即將開展“讀好書，促成長”的活動。請你根據(jù)這次活 動的主題，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。請根據(jù)表格中所給信息，用英 語寫一篇倡議書。讀書的意義獲取知識，增長見識，使人聰明，使人快樂，有助于學(xué)習(xí)，有助于成長目前的狀況聽音樂，看電視，上網(wǎng)等占去了學(xué)生大部分的讀書時間發(fā)出倡議多讀書，讀好書 注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80100個。 2. 倡議書的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 3. 倡議書須包括所有

10、內(nèi)容要點，行文連貫，表達清楚，書寫規(guī)范。參考詞匯：gain knowledge 獲取知識 open the mind 增長見識My dear friends, Reading is very important in our life. _ _ _ _ Lets start reading now!My dear friends, Reading is very important in our life. Reading has many advantages. Firstly, we can gain knowledge through reading. Secondly ,it can

11、not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. What more, We can study better and better if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. （However, many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. /It take up muc

12、h reading time to listen to music,watch TV and go online.）We spend much time listening to music, watching TV and going online instead of reading books. What a pity! ( So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. / I would like to suggest everyone to read

13、 more books and read good books. / I would like to suggest reading more books and read good books. )The more good books we read, the smarter we are. Lets start reading now! 書面表達 (本大題共15分)假設(shè)你校即將開展“讀好書，促成長”的活動。請你根據(jù)這次活 動的主題，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。請根據(jù)表格中所給信息，用英 語寫一篇倡議書。讀書的意義獲取知識，增長見識，使人聰明，使人快樂，有助于學(xué)習(xí)，有助于成長目前的狀況聽音樂，看電

14、視，上網(wǎng)等占去了學(xué)生大部分的讀書時間發(fā)出倡議多讀書，讀好書 注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80100個。 2. 倡議書的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 3. 倡議書須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，行文連貫，表達清楚，書寫規(guī)范。參考詞匯：gain knowledge 獲取知識 open the mind 增長見識My dear friends, Reading is very important in our life. _ _ _ 2010假設(shè)你是某學(xué)生雜志社的編輯Diara，收到了讀者Steve的一封來信，信中傾訴了他目前的煩惱。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給Steve寫一封回信。提示： 與人交流課上參與小組討論，表達自

15、己的想法；課間和同學(xué)交談表達善意主動問候同學(xué)；對同學(xué)友好；幫助同學(xué)參加活動積極參加班級活動（如：運動會、歌詠比賽等）參考詞匯：小組討論 group work 表達 express要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80 100個。 2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 3. 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)添加 范文： Dear Steve, Ive learned about your problems. I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to tal

16、k with your classmates at break. If you want to get on well with your classmates, dont forget to say hello when you meet them. Being friendly and helpful is also very important. You need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meetings, football games and singing competitions.

17、Im sure you will soon be among friends. Best wishes Diara【訓(xùn)練方法】1.記。認(rèn)真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學(xué)寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習(xí)慣，相當(dāng)一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學(xué)們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學(xué)到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學(xué)邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習(xí)

18、方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。3.寫。要進行實戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在15分鐘內(nèi)寫出80個詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習(xí)慣，考試時就能得心應(yīng)手。2011年九、書面表達（本大題共15分）假如你是某中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生。6月3日，是星期五，在放學(xué)回家的公交車上，你所經(jīng)歷的一件事讓你印象深刻。請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語寫一篇日記。要點：1.一位老爺爺和十來歲的孫子上了車，老人拿著書包和小提琴；2.你給老人讓座，老人的孫子卻坐了下來，老人只得站在旁邊；3.孩子大

19、聲喊著向老人要水喝，并將空水瓶扔到車上；4.你認(rèn)為孩子應(yīng)該尊敬、照顧老人，保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生。參考詞匯：孫子grandson 空水瓶empty bottle 保持干凈keepclean要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80100個。2. 日記開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。June 3, Friday FineOn my way home on the bus, I saw June 3, Friday Fine On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on the bus with his grandson who was a

20、bout ten years old. The old man was carrying the boys bag and violin. So I decided to offer my seat to the old man, but to my surprise, the boy took the seat instead of his grandpa, leaving his grandpa standing by. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa to ask for water. What surprised me mor

21、e is that he dropped the empty bottle in the coach after drinking it. His behavior made me angry. I think the boy should respect and take care of the old man. And its a duty for everybody to keep the environment clean. 2012年天津市中考英語滿分作文天津市中考英語作文題目: 假如你有兩位同學(xué)芳芳和明明,參加了上個星期二學(xué)校組織的英語演講比賽,他們的不同表現(xiàn)使你深有感觸.請你根據(jù)

22、下列表格中的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇英文短文.芳芳明明我1. 認(rèn)為自己英語好,不需要努力;花費很多時間挑選比賽用的漂亮衣服.2. 因準(zhǔn)備不足,太緊張,而 as沒有完成演講.1. 努力學(xué)習(xí),向別人請教;賽前兩天腿受傷,但不放棄.2. 在比賽中表現(xiàn)良好.應(yīng)該向明明學(xué)習(xí)參考詞匯:英語演講比賽 English Speech Contest注意：1.詞數(shù)：80100個；because she didnt prepare enough2.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English S

23、peech Contest in our school. What they did made me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did made me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought that her English was very good and she did

24、nt need to work hard(neednt work hard). So she spent a lot of time selecting beautiful clothes for attending the English Speech Contest. Meanwhile, Mingming studied hard and went to others for advice when meeting problems. Although his legs were hurt two days before the contest, he didnt give up.Dur

25、ing the contest, because she was nervous and didnt prepare well, Fangfang didnt finish the speech. Mingming did well.No pains, no gains. His hard work made a good result. We should learn from Mingming. 2013年假定上周六晚上，你們?nèi)以谝患绎埖昃筒?。請你根?jù)以下要點提示，用英語寫一篇短文，描述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，并適當(dāng)加以評論。 要點提示： (1)鄰桌年輕人大聲說笑、吸煙。 (2)你請他們不要那樣

26、做。 (3)他們不聽，反而嘲笑你。 (4)你認(rèn)為：1他們在公共場所那樣做是不對的。 2年輕人是天津的未來，應(yīng)該 參考詞匯：嘲笑 laugh at 要求： (1)詞數(shù)：80100個。 (2)短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 (3)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 Last Saturday evening，all my family had dinner in a restaurant_ Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when something

27、 disturbing happened. A group of young people were sitting at the table nearby. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked cigarettes, making the restaurant full of noise and smoke. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me. In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, one should keep quite and not affect othe