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1、高二英語寫作專項訓練高二英語寫作專項訓練-嚴貴華嚴貴華 April 29th,2015翻譯下列句子 1、他的文章充滿抽象的概念，但是缺少確鑿的事實。 2、中國政府一直在致力于改善教育體制。 3、It is still not too late to keep off the bad habit of staying up too late. 4、Keep in mind that nothing can replace a regular sleep habit to ensure you of feeling refreshed and vigorous next day. 第四部分：書面表

2、達（滿分第四部分：書面表達（滿分25分）分）假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生買了一部某外國公司生產(chǎn)的手機，因有質(zhì)量問產(chǎn)的手機，因有質(zhì)量問題，要求該公司更換。題，要求該公司更換。請根據(jù)下列要點，用英請根據(jù)下列要點，用英文寫一封電子郵件。文寫一封電子郵件。要點：要點：1.問題：問題：2.手機不響鈴，不能發(fā)短手機不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信；該產(chǎn)品已售完，無信；該產(chǎn)品已售完，無法更換；型號新，無配法更換；型號新，無配件，無法維修。件，無法維修。2.要求：公司應盡快予以更要求：公司應盡快予以更換。換。注意：注意：1.詞數(shù)為詞數(shù)為100左右；左右；2.參考詞匯：配件參考詞匯：配件spa

3、repart3.電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計入你所為你寫好（不計入你所寫詞數(shù)）；寫詞數(shù)）；4.已給出的電子郵件的開頭已給出的電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。 However, some problems are presented with this mobile phone. In the first place, when there are phone calls, the mobile phone just cant ring. In addition, short messages can never be sent. when

4、 I came back to the mall for exchange, I was disappointed to be told that this model had been sold out. Worse still, it is a new model, thus no spare part is available at the moment. Nowhere can I have this phone repaired. Maybe there are some alternatives to handle this case, but I hope it can be d

5、ealt with and solved as soon as possible. In brief, my personal viewpoint is that you replace this mobile phone. Im looking forward to your reply.【分析】全文共九個句子,其中有兩個時間狀語從句,一個并列句;一個倒裝句;一個表語從句。運用了however,in the first place,in addition, worse still, in brief 五個過渡性詞匯。運用了available, alternative兩個較高級詞語。whenw

6、henbutNowhere canIis thatHoweverIn thefirst place,Inaddition,WorsestillIn brief,availablealternatives25真題再現(xiàn) -環(huán)境保護環(huán)境保護一次性筷子的使用一次性筷子的使用真題真題假如你叫李華，是一名高中學生。根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一封倡議書，假如你叫李華，是一名高中學生。根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一封倡議書，呼吁人們停止使用一次性筷子。呼吁人們停止使用一次性筷子。注意：注意：1開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。2字數(shù)字數(shù)150左右。左右。3參考詞匯：參考詞匯：rejectthrowawaychopsticksSt

7、epsofwriting 1 Extension-logical-paragraph 2 Translation -highlight -words and sentences 3 Correction and check假如你叫李華，是一名高中學生。根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫假如你叫李華，是一名高中學生。根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一封倡議書，呼吁人們停止使用一次性筷子。一封倡議書，呼吁人們停止使用一次性筷子。注意：注意：1開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。2字數(shù)字數(shù)150左右。左右。3參考詞匯：參考詞匯：rejectthrowawaychopsticks Presentsituation Consequenc

8、es MeasuresExtension砍伐森林會導致很多嚴重的砍伐森林會導致很多嚴重的環(huán)境問題。環(huán)境問題。面對這樣的情況，我們應該面對這樣的情況，我們應該采取一些措施來保護森林了。采取一些措施來保護森林了。目前，中國的森林正遭受目前，中國的森林正遭受著著嚴重的破壞。嚴重的破壞。2Translation:PartOne: Do you know why sandstorms and landslides are happening more frequently than ever in recent years? According to the recent statistics, 中國正

9、面臨著嚴重的森林破壞問題。中國的森林覆蓋率僅為13%，但是中國每年要生產(chǎn)大約450億雙筷子，而這些筷子就需要我們砍伐2500萬棵樹。有環(huán)保主義者警告，照這樣的速度，中國可能在20年內(nèi)就要砍伐所有的森林。 面臨著面臨著 森林破壞問題森林破壞問題 覆蓋率覆蓋率 大約大約 450億億 2500萬萬 警告警告 滅絕滅絕 beconfrontedwith theproblemofdeforestation becoveredwith approximately 45billion 25million warn dieout 中國正面臨著嚴重的森中國正面臨著嚴重的森林破壞問題。林破壞問題。 中國的森林覆蓋

10、率僅為中國的森林覆蓋率僅為13%，但是中國每年要，但是中國每年要生產(chǎn)大約生產(chǎn)大約450億雙筷子億雙筷子 而這些筷子就需要我們而這些筷子就需要我們砍伐砍伐2500萬棵樹。萬棵樹。 有環(huán)保主義者警告，照有環(huán)保主義者警告，照這樣的速度，中國可能這樣的速度，中國可能在在20年內(nèi)就要砍伐所有年內(nèi)就要砍伐所有的森林。的森林。 Chinaisconfrontedwiththeseriousproblemofdeforestation. 13%ofchinaiscoveredwithforest,butchinaproducesapproximately45billionpairsofthrowawaycho

11、psticks. Thesechopsticksneedustocutdown25milliontrees. SomeenvironmentalistswarnthepublicthattheforestofChinawilldieoutafter20yearsbythisspeed. China is confronted with the serious problem of forest destruction. 13% of china is covered with forest, but china produces approximately 45 billion pairs o

12、f throwaway chopsticks. These chopsticks need us to cut down 25 million trees. Some environmentalists warn the public that the forest of China will die out after 20 years by this speed. Confronted with the serious problem of deforestation. 13% of china is covered with forest, however approximately 4

13、5 billion pairs of throwaway chopsticks are produced by China annually, which means that we need to cut down 25 million trees. Therefore, some environmentalists warn the public that the forest of China will die out after 20 years by this speed.被動語態(tài)被動語態(tài)定語從句定語從句連詞連詞分詞作狀語分詞作狀語Parttwo: 砍伐森林會導致很多環(huán)境問題砍伐森林

14、會導致很多環(huán)境問題，例如，水土，例如，水土流失，廢氣排放增多，溫室效應。人類將會流失，廢氣排放增多，溫室效應。人類將會遭受一個由自己帶來的災難。遭受一個由自己帶來的災難。 砍伐森林砍伐森林 水土流失水土流失 廢氣排放增多廢氣排放增多 遭受遭受 Excessive deforestation soil erosion the increase emission of carbon dioxide suffer from 砍伐森林會導致很多環(huán)境問題， 例如，水土流失，廢氣排放增多，溫室效應. 人類將會遭受一個由自己帶來的災難。 Excessive deforestation will lead t

15、o a series of environmental changes, for instance, soil erosion,the increase emission of carbon dioxide ,especially the green house effect. Its sure that the humen will suffer from a disater which is caused by ourselves.PartThree: 所以，我們是該采取一些措施來保護我們的森林資源了。 its time that sb did sth.萬能措施一萬能措施一 The lon

16、g term goal of environmental protection is to prevent the creation of pollutants and wastes and to produce durable, recyclable goods.萬能措施二萬能措施二 In view of sustainable development, the exploitation of mineral resources should be under strict government.萬能理由三萬能理由三 Mankind should join hand in hand to c

17、reate an inhabitable world for themselves and their offspring.3檢查檢查糾錯糾錯 Do you know why sandstorms and landslides are happening more frequently than ever in recent years? According to the recent statistics, theyre due to the disappearing of forests. Dear friends, do you know they were eatlen by you

18、when use the chopsticks? Every year it products 45 billion chopsticks from China. The forests only cover 13 percents in China. These need 25 million of trees. Someone who cares the environment has alarmed that China may use out all of its forests according to this speed! It means that the environmen

19、t of China will break down entirely. So please throw away chopsticks now! using the throwaway chopsticks may kill our forests. China whose forests only covers 13% of its land, produces 45000000000 throwaway chopsticks every year. This needs 2500 million trees to be cut down. Whats worse, some enviro

20、nmentalists even warned that if we continue using these chopsticks at this speed, it will be possible for China to use up all its forest resources in only 20 years.( At that time, we human beings could not live on the plannet any longer and there way be no living thing on the earth, either. What a frightening thing it is! )So we should not use the chopsticks any more in order to make a better environment for our younger generation and for ourselves. Dear friends, lets take action from now on!必備詞匯必備詞匯1： deforestation 森林砍伐