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1、高二英語(yǔ)寫作專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練高二英語(yǔ)寫作專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練-嚴(yán)貴華嚴(yán)貴華 April 29th,2015翻譯下列句子 1、他的文章充滿抽象的概念，但是缺少確鑿的事實(shí)。 2、中國(guó)政府一直在致力于改善教育體制。 3、It is still not too late to keep off the bad habit of staying up too late. 4、Keep in mind that nothing can replace a regular sleep habit to ensure you of feeling refreshed and vigorous next day. 第四部分：書面表

2、達(dá)（滿分第四部分：書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）分）假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購(gòu)假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購(gòu)買了一部某外國(guó)公司生買了一部某外國(guó)公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問(wèn)產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問(wèn)題，要求該公司更換。題，要求該公司更換。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一封電子郵件。文寫一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)：1.問(wèn)題：?jiǎn)栴}：2.手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信；該產(chǎn)品已售完，無(wú)信；該產(chǎn)品已售完，無(wú)法更換；型號(hào)新，無(wú)配法更換；型號(hào)新，無(wú)配件，無(wú)法維修。件，無(wú)法維修。2.要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。換。注意：注意：1.詞數(shù)為詞數(shù)為100左右；左右；2.參考詞匯：配件參考詞匯：配件spa

3、repart3.電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入你所為你寫好（不計(jì)入你所寫詞數(shù)）；寫詞數(shù)）；4.已給出的電子郵件的開頭已給出的電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。 However, some problems are presented with this mobile phone. In the first place, when there are phone calls, the mobile phone just cant ring. In addition, short messages can never be sent. when

4、 I came back to the mall for exchange, I was disappointed to be told that this model had been sold out. Worse still, it is a new model, thus no spare part is available at the moment. Nowhere can I have this phone repaired. Maybe there are some alternatives to handle this case, but I hope it can be d

5、ealt with and solved as soon as possible. In brief, my personal viewpoint is that you replace this mobile phone. Im looking forward to your reply.【分析】全文共九個(gè)句子,其中有兩個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,一個(gè)并列句;一個(gè)倒裝句;一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句。運(yùn)用了however,in the first place,in addition, worse still, in brief 五個(gè)過(guò)渡性詞匯。運(yùn)用了available, alternative兩個(gè)較高級(jí)詞語(yǔ)。whenw

6、henbutNowhere canIis thatHoweverIn thefirst place,Inaddition,WorsestillIn brief,availablealternatives25真題再現(xiàn) -環(huán)境保護(hù)環(huán)境保護(hù)一次性筷子的使用一次性筷子的使用真題真題假如你叫李華，是一名高中學(xué)生。根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一封倡議書，假如你叫李華，是一名高中學(xué)生。根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一封倡議書，呼吁人們停止使用一次性筷子。呼吁人們停止使用一次性筷子。注意：注意：1開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。2字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)150左右。左右。3參考詞匯：參考詞匯：rejectthrowawaychopsticksSt

7、epsofwriting 1 Extension-logical-paragraph 2 Translation -highlight -words and sentences 3 Correction and check假如你叫李華，是一名高中學(xué)生。根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫假如你叫李華，是一名高中學(xué)生。根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一封倡議書，呼吁人們停止使用一次性筷子。一封倡議書，呼吁人們停止使用一次性筷子。注意：注意：1開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。2字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)150左右。左右。3參考詞匯：參考詞匯：rejectthrowawaychopsticks Presentsituation Consequenc

8、es MeasuresExtension砍伐森林會(huì)導(dǎo)致很多嚴(yán)重的砍伐森林會(huì)導(dǎo)致很多嚴(yán)重的環(huán)境問(wèn)題。環(huán)境問(wèn)題。面對(duì)這樣的情況，我們應(yīng)該面對(duì)這樣的情況，我們應(yīng)該采取一些措施來(lái)保護(hù)森林了。采取一些措施來(lái)保護(hù)森林了。目前，中國(guó)的森林正遭受目前，中國(guó)的森林正遭受著著嚴(yán)重的破壞。嚴(yán)重的破壞。2Translation:PartOne: Do you know why sandstorms and landslides are happening more frequently than ever in recent years? According to the recent statistics, 中國(guó)正

9、面臨著嚴(yán)重的森林破壞問(wèn)題。中國(guó)的森林覆蓋率僅為13%，但是中國(guó)每年要生產(chǎn)大約450億雙筷子，而這些筷子就需要我們砍伐2500萬(wàn)棵樹。有環(huán)保主義者警告，照這樣的速度，中國(guó)可能在20年內(nèi)就要砍伐所有的森林。 面臨著面臨著 森林破壞問(wèn)題森林破壞問(wèn)題 覆蓋率覆蓋率 大約大約 450億億 2500萬(wàn)萬(wàn) 警告警告 滅絕滅絕 beconfrontedwith theproblemofdeforestation becoveredwith approximately 45billion 25million warn dieout 中國(guó)正面臨著嚴(yán)重的森中國(guó)正面臨著嚴(yán)重的森林破壞問(wèn)題。林破壞問(wèn)題。 中國(guó)的森林覆蓋

10、率僅為中國(guó)的森林覆蓋率僅為13%，但是中國(guó)每年要，但是中國(guó)每年要生產(chǎn)大約生產(chǎn)大約450億雙筷子億雙筷子 而這些筷子就需要我們而這些筷子就需要我們砍伐砍伐2500萬(wàn)棵樹。萬(wàn)棵樹。 有環(huán)保主義者警告，照有環(huán)保主義者警告，照這樣的速度，中國(guó)可能這樣的速度，中國(guó)可能在在20年內(nèi)就要砍伐所有年內(nèi)就要砍伐所有的森林。的森林。 Chinaisconfrontedwiththeseriousproblemofdeforestation. 13%ofchinaiscoveredwithforest,butchinaproducesapproximately45billionpairsofthrowawaycho

11、psticks. Thesechopsticksneedustocutdown25milliontrees. SomeenvironmentalistswarnthepublicthattheforestofChinawilldieoutafter20yearsbythisspeed. China is confronted with the serious problem of forest destruction. 13% of china is covered with forest, but china produces approximately 45 billion pairs o

12、f throwaway chopsticks. These chopsticks need us to cut down 25 million trees. Some environmentalists warn the public that the forest of China will die out after 20 years by this speed. Confronted with the serious problem of deforestation. 13% of china is covered with forest, however approximately 4

13、5 billion pairs of throwaway chopsticks are produced by China annually, which means that we need to cut down 25 million trees. Therefore, some environmentalists warn the public that the forest of China will die out after 20 years by this speed.被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句連詞連詞分詞作狀語(yǔ)分詞作狀語(yǔ)Parttwo: 砍伐森林會(huì)導(dǎo)致很多環(huán)境問(wèn)題砍伐森林

14、會(huì)導(dǎo)致很多環(huán)境問(wèn)題，例如，水土，例如，水土流失，廢氣排放增多，溫室效應(yīng)。人類將會(huì)流失，廢氣排放增多，溫室效應(yīng)。人類將會(huì)遭受一個(gè)由自己帶來(lái)的災(zāi)難。遭受一個(gè)由自己帶來(lái)的災(zāi)難。 砍伐森林砍伐森林 水土流失水土流失 廢氣排放增多廢氣排放增多 遭受遭受 Excessive deforestation soil erosion the increase emission of carbon dioxide suffer from 砍伐森林會(huì)導(dǎo)致很多環(huán)境問(wèn)題， 例如，水土流失，廢氣排放增多，溫室效應(yīng). 人類將會(huì)遭受一個(gè)由自己帶來(lái)的災(zāi)難。 Excessive deforestation will lead t

15、o a series of environmental changes, for instance, soil erosion,the increase emission of carbon dioxide ,especially the green house effect. Its sure that the humen will suffer from a disater which is caused by ourselves.PartThree: 所以，我們是該采取一些措施來(lái)保護(hù)我們的森林資源了。 its time that sb did sth.萬(wàn)能措施一萬(wàn)能措施一 The lon

16、g term goal of environmental protection is to prevent the creation of pollutants and wastes and to produce durable, recyclable goods.萬(wàn)能措施二萬(wàn)能措施二 In view of sustainable development, the exploitation of mineral resources should be under strict government.萬(wàn)能理由三萬(wàn)能理由三 Mankind should join hand in hand to c

17、reate an inhabitable world for themselves and their offspring.3檢查檢查糾錯(cuò)糾錯(cuò) Do you know why sandstorms and landslides are happening more frequently than ever in recent years? According to the recent statistics, theyre due to the disappearing of forests. Dear friends, do you know they were eatlen by you

18、when use the chopsticks? Every year it products 45 billion chopsticks from China. The forests only cover 13 percents in China. These need 25 million of trees. Someone who cares the environment has alarmed that China may use out all of its forests according to this speed! It means that the environmen

19、t of China will break down entirely. So please throw away chopsticks now! using the throwaway chopsticks may kill our forests. China whose forests only covers 13% of its land, produces 45000000000 throwaway chopsticks every year. This needs 2500 million trees to be cut down. Whats worse, some enviro

20、nmentalists even warned that if we continue using these chopsticks at this speed, it will be possible for China to use up all its forest resources in only 20 years.( At that time, we human beings could not live on the plannet any longer and there way be no living thing on the earth, either. What a frightening thing it is! )So we should not use the chopsticks any more in order to make a better environment for our younger generation and for ourselves. Dear friends, lets take action from now on!必備詞匯必備詞匯1： deforestation 森林砍伐