人教版高中英語必修第一冊(cè)Unit1《TeenagelifeSectiomⅣ》精品課件

1、Unit 1TEENAGE LIFE Sectiom 寫作指導(dǎo)寫作方法指導(dǎo)夯基提能作業(yè)寫作方法指導(dǎo)寫作儲(chǔ)備閱讀教材P18建議信，提煉建議信的寫作特點(diǎn)：常用寫作格式1齊頭式，即日期，正文，署名全在左邊頂格寫。教材中就采用了這種格式。2空格式：日期，署名在右邊，正文每段開頭空兩格。寫一封有關(guān)學(xué)校生活的建議信黃金寫作模板建議信 寫作語言特點(diǎn)1建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。2提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。寫作常用詞匯1have trouble in.在有些麻煩2communicate with.與交流3feel lonely感到孤獨(dú)4ask for advice on

2、.就征求建議5suggestion n建議6overcome v克服7get along well with和相處很好8make it做到9make friends交朋友10as far as I am concerned/in my opinion就我而言/在我看來.寫作常用句型1建議信開頭常用句式：(1)I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人交流方面有些麻煩，你也可能經(jīng)常感到孤獨(dú)。(2)Im glad to receive you

3、r letter asking for my advice on.我很高興收到你就征求建議的來信。(3)Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.這里有幫助你的一些建議。(4)I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.如果你聽從以下建議，我認(rèn)為你會(huì)做到的。2表達(dá)建議常用句式：(1)First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends.首先，為什么不參加一個(gè)俱樂部？如果你這樣做的話，就會(huì)交到

4、朋友。(2)Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way, you will feel better.其次，你應(yīng)該盡力與人交談。這樣，你會(huì)感覺好點(diǎn)。(3)Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.第三，如果你看書或聽音樂將會(huì)是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的主意。通過這樣做，你會(huì)使自己平靜下來。3建議信結(jié)尾常用句式：(1)I hope you wi

5、ll find these ideas useful.我希望你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這些辦法有用。(2)As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice above.如果你遵從以上建議，隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們會(huì)更加理解你，會(huì)愿意和你交朋友的。(3)I believe that if you follow my advice, youll get along well with your classmates.我相信，如果你聽從我的建議，你

6、會(huì)和同學(xué)們相處好的。典例剖析假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示給她寫一封信。1要交朋友首先要做一個(gè)朋友；2要和朋友同甘共苦；患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3友誼需要時(shí)間和投入(effort)。注意：詞數(shù)80左右。審題謀篇定框架 好的開始，成功的一半體裁建議信人稱第二人稱為主時(shí)態(tài)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)框架第一段：點(diǎn)出寫信的目的：交朋友存在困難第二段：正文列出所提的建議：做一個(gè)朋友；和朋友同甘共苦；需要時(shí)間和投入最后一段：寫信人的希望定要點(diǎn)、關(guān)鍵詞及動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài) 打造一篇要點(diǎn)全面、用詞準(zhǔn)確得體、時(shí)態(tài)多樣的極優(yōu)作文要點(diǎn)一：知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很抱歉。(賓語從句)I

7、am sorry to know _.要點(diǎn)二：如果你采納我的建議，改變這種處境是很容易的。(beadj.to do)The situation _if you take my advice.要點(diǎn)三：要交朋友首先要做一個(gè)朋友。(主謂結(jié)構(gòu))If you want to make friends, _.that you are having trouble in making friendsis easy to changeyou should be a friend first要點(diǎn)四：你要和朋友同甘共苦。You should _.要點(diǎn)五：患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。A friend _ is a

8、 friend _.要點(diǎn)六：友誼需要時(shí)間和投入。(主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu))Friendship _.share happiness and sorrow with your friendsin needindeedcalls for/needs time and effort詞匯、句式升級(jí) 創(chuàng)造極優(yōu)作文的倩詞靚句升級(jí)句式一：用why not改寫要點(diǎn)三_升級(jí)句式二：用wouldnt it be a good idea if.改寫要點(diǎn)四_升級(jí)句式三：用just as a saying goes來豐富要點(diǎn)五_If you want to make friends, why not be a friend fir

9、st？Wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friends？Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.組建極優(yōu)作文 水到渠成的成就感：動(dòng)力的源泉_To begin with, why not be a friend if you want to make friends? In addition, wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow w

10、ith your friends? Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least, wouldnt it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends? It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours，Li Hua假設(shè)你是李華，貴校在學(xué)生

11、中征集意見，詢問學(xué)生是否贊成開設(shè)iPad課程(iPad class)。你代表學(xué)生會(huì)，支持開設(shè)iPad課程。請(qǐng)給校長(zhǎng)寫一封建議信，要點(diǎn)如下：1資源豐富；2.促進(jìn)交流；3.利于環(huán)保；4.其他理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3開頭和結(jié)束語已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。To begin with, everyone learns in a respective way. Students can customize their iPads with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailo

12、r them to meet their different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently, which will contribute favorably to their learning efficiency. Furthermore, we also consider it environmentfriendly to open iPad classes, for paper is no longer a necessity. More importantly, students passion