短文改錯(cuò)組原創(chuàng)命題（人與社會(huì)人與自我）6篇--高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

1、南昌高英第六期命題坊高階研修短文改錯(cuò)組原創(chuàng)命題人與自我【原創(chuàng)命題1Recently, we had an English spoken class taught by Tang Ying, an experience and kind teacher. She gave her lesson with dialogue and communicated with encouragement and passion, which enabled us practice our spoken English skills. With her help, we noticed our mistake

2、s so that we would avoid making it again.This class was a great success but made a good impression on us. Just as Ms Tang said, Language is best learned when using in meaningful communication. To learn English good, we shouldnt only stick to grammar or a homework. Communicative teaching methods like

3、 talks and games is also very useful.【答案】Recently, we had an English spoken class teach by Tang Ying, an experience and kind teacher.speakingexperiencedShe gave her lesson with dialogue and communicated with encouragement and passion, whichdialoguesenabled us A practice our spoken English skills. Wi

4、th her help, we noticed our mistakes so that wetowould avoid making it again.themThis class was a great success but made a good impression on us. Just as Ms Tang said,andLanguage is best learned when using in meaningful communication.To learn English good, weusedwell的句子數(shù)動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞連詞連詞訶記人作者對(duì)11283中21101121

5、100出題敘與一次旅文自行中的我所見(jiàn)【原創(chuàng)命題5During the past few weekends, we held the first 24-Hour Play Festival on campus. It is the first event where our society board has held. It was really exciting because this was my first time. Students havent gotten together before the start of the pandemic, so it was refreshi

6、ng to see actors performing in the same room as theaudience.The actors were amazed. They had to memorize all their lines for 12 hours. Directors also contributed great ideas in such a short time. I was really too excited to watch the performance and be one of the staffs. It was not easy to start fro

7、m zero, and as long as there is a beginning, a story always forms.【答案】During the past few weekends, we A held the first 24-Hour Play Festival on the campus. It ishavethe first event where our society board has held. It was really exciting because this was my firstthat或省略time. Students havent gotten

8、together before the starting of the pandemic, so it was refreshing sincesinceto see actors performing in the same room as the audience.performThe actors were amazed. They had to memorize all their lines for 12 hours. Directors alsoamazingincontributed great ideas in such a short time. I really too e

9、xcited to watch the performance and be one of the staffs. It was not easy starting from zero, and as long as there is a beginning, a storystaffbutalways forms.【答案解析】第一處：第一句held前加have,時(shí)態(tài)誤用。時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)是during the past few weekends,所 以用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。第二處：o第二句where改成that或省略，定語(yǔ)從句連詞誤用。第三處：第三句my改為our,代詞誤用。這是我們社團(tuán)第一次，不是我的第一

10、次。第四處：第四句before改為since,連詞誤用。是自疫情起，不是疫情前。第五處:第四句performing改為perform,非謂詞誤用。see sb do sth表看見(jiàn)某事全過(guò)程。第六處：第五句amazed改為amazing,形容詞誤用。演員是令人驚嘆的。第七處：第六句for改為in ,介詞誤用。在12小時(shí)內(nèi)用in。第八處：第八句t。去掉，副詞誤用。不是結(jié)構(gòu)。第九處：第八句staffs改為staff o單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。staff作全體員工用單數(shù)形式。第十處：第九句and改為but。并列連詞誤用。本句語(yǔ)氣有轉(zhuǎn)折，所以用but。【命題細(xì)目表】試卷體裁主題題材訶數(shù)句數(shù)設(shè)置難度考點(diǎn)分布動(dòng)詞名數(shù)連

11、詞形代冠介其語(yǔ)2詞詞容詞詞詞他謂非并從境處詞語(yǔ)謂列屬錯(cuò)&動(dòng)語(yǔ)連連誤副詞動(dòng)詞詞的詞詞句子數(shù)出題記人參加2411682中11101121011敘與小時(shí)戲文自劇節(jié)我二、人與社會(huì)【原創(chuàng)命題6With the development of science and technology, great changes have been taken place in the ways of communication among people. In recent year, social networking apps have gained great importance in our daily l

12、ives. In the past, people keep in touch mainly use letters. It was convenient if people wanted to contact others immediately. Now, people have access to the Internet, that enables them to contact others whenever we like. However, increasing use of social networking apps contributes on peoples lack o

13、f face-to-face communication. In my opinion, these apps can be very helpful, and we must remember to live in the real world.【答案】With the development of science and technology, great changes have been taken place in the ways of communication among people. In recent year, kocial net working apps have

14、gained greatyearsimportance in our daily lives. In the past, people keep in touch mainly use letters. Itwas keptusinginconvenience if people wanted to contact others immediately. Now, people have access to inconvenientthe Internet, that enables them to contact others whenever we like. However, A inc

15、reasing use ofwhichtheyansocial networking apps contributes on peoples lack of face-to-face communication. In mytoopinion, these apps can be very helpful, and we must remember to live in the real world.but【答案解析】第一處：第一句been去掉，take place不及物動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，不用被動(dòng)。第二處：第二句year改成years,名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用，最近一些年要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。第三處：第三句keep改錯(cuò)

16、kept,表述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用一般過(guò)去式。第四處：第三句use改錯(cuò)using,用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，ving表主動(dòng)。第五處：第四句convenient改成inconvenient,語(yǔ)境理解應(yīng)該是不方便。第六處：第五句that改成which,非限制性定語(yǔ)從句不能用that.第七處：第五句we改成they,代詞誤用。第八處：第六句在increasing前加the。第九處:第六句on改成to , contribute to促成，有助于。第十處：第七句and改成but【命題細(xì)目表】試卷體主題材詞數(shù)句設(shè)難考點(diǎn)分布裁題數(shù)置度動(dòng)詞名數(shù)連詞形代冠介其語(yǔ)2詞詞容詞詞詞他謂非并從境處詞語(yǔ)謂列屬錯(cuò)&動(dòng)語(yǔ)連連誤副詞

17、動(dòng)詞詞的詞詞句子數(shù)出題議人對(duì)社交1 0 373中21101111110論與軟件的文社不同觀會(huì)點(diǎn)shouldnt only stick to grammar ora homework. Communicative teaching methods like talks and games is also very useful. are【答案解析】第一處：第一句spoken改為speaking。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用。最近我們上了一堂唐老師教的英 語(yǔ)課，需要用現(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ)修飾class。第二處：第一句experience改為experienced。名詞誤用。and連接兩個(gè)并列的形容詞，需要 用 形容詞

18、experiencedo第三處：第二句dialogue改為dialogues。名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。唐老師利用對(duì)話的方式上課，需 要用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)dialogueso第四處：第二句us后加to。謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用。enable sb. to do sth.使某人能夠做某事，所以需 要在us后加tOo第五處:第三句it改為them。代詞誤用。我們犯的錯(cuò)誤很多，所以需要用them代指mistakeso第六處：第四句but改為and。連詞誤用。本堂課很成功，給我們留下好的印象，所以需要 用并列連詞ando第七處：第五句using改為used。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用。語(yǔ)言是被使用在有意義的溝通中，所以 需要用過(guò)去分詞use

19、d作狀語(yǔ)。第八處：第六句good改為well。形容詞誤用。為了學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，所以需要用副詞well。第九處：第六句or后面a刪掉。冠詞誤用。homework為不可數(shù)名詞，所以前面的冠詞不需 要。第十處：第七句is改為are。Be動(dòng)詞誤用。該句的主語(yǔ)為Communicative teaching methods, 所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞需要用復(fù)數(shù)?！久}細(xì)目表】試卷體裁主 題 語(yǔ) 境題 材詞數(shù)句數(shù)難度考點(diǎn)分布動(dòng)詞名詞數(shù)詞連詞形 容 詞 & 副 詞代詞冠詞介詞其他謂 語(yǔ) 動(dòng) 詞非 謂 語(yǔ) 動(dòng) 詞并 列 連 詞從 屬 連 詞Mrs Gao is a responsible teacher who always t

20、akes her work serious. Whenever I walk into her office, I always see her eyes glued to the computer screen, prepared for her classes.I have never seen her lose patient with students. She took time to explain answers in detail. Her devotion has helped me understand topics when we were confusing and s

21、olve problems we thought were impossible. Mrs Gao is also willing to provide a useful advice on learning methods, that benefits us a lot. With such an easygoing personality, Mrs Gao is popular among students. Beside, she often shares her ideas peers.【答案】Mrs Gao is a responsible teacher who always ta

22、kes her work serious. Whenever I walk intoseriouslyher office, I always see her eyes glued to the computer screen, prepored for her classes.preparingI have never seen her lose patient with students. She took time to explain answers in detail.patiencetakesHer devotion has helped me understand topics

23、when we were confusing and solve problems we usconfusedthought were impossible. Mrs Gao is also willing to pfvide a useful advice on learning methods,that benefits us a lot. With such an easygoing personality, Mrs Gao is popular among students.whichBeside, she often shares her ideas A peers.withBesi

24、des【答案解析】第一處：第一句serious改為seriouslyo形容詞誤用。根據(jù)形容詞修飾名詞，而在此句中， Mrs Gao認(rèn)真地對(duì)待工作，應(yīng)該是用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞。故把serious改為seriously.第二處：第二句prepared改為preparing0非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用。該句中，老師眼睛注視著電腦 屏幕在認(rèn)真?zhèn)湔n，應(yīng)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞preparing作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。故把prepared改為 preparing.第三處：第三句patient改為patienceo形容詞誤用。根據(jù)短語(yǔ)lose patience with sb.對(duì)某人 失去耐心，所以應(yīng)該用名詞。故把patient改為patience

25、.第四處：第四句took改為takes.謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)誤用。因這里指Mrs Gao一般的行為，應(yīng) 該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故把took改為takes.第五處：第五句me改為us.代詞的誤用。根據(jù)后文主語(yǔ)為we,應(yīng)保持人稱一致性，故改 為US.第六處：第五句confusing改為confusedo形容詞的誤用。這里指我們感到困惑，故改為 confused.第七處：第六句刪除a。冠詞誤用。因?yàn)閍dvice作名詞，表示建議，是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù) 數(shù)形式。故把a(bǔ)刪除.第八處：第六句that改為which。附屬連詞誤用。該定語(yǔ)從句表達(dá)的意思是老師提供的學(xué)習(xí) 方法方面的有用建議使我們受益匪淺，先行詞為advice

26、,指物，且是非限制定語(yǔ)從 句。故把that改為which.第九處：第七句Beside改為Besides。介詞誤用。Beside意為“在旁邊”；Besides意為“此 外”。文中該句和上句是承接關(guān)系。故把Beside改為Besides。第十處：第七句 在ideas和peers之間增加with。根據(jù)短語(yǔ)share sth. with sb.,此處缺少一 個(gè)介詞witho故在ideas和peers之間增加with。【命題細(xì)目表】【原創(chuàng)命題3試卷體裁主題語(yǔ)境題材詞數(shù)句數(shù)難度考點(diǎn)分布動(dòng)詞名詞數(shù)詞連 詞形 容 詞 & 副 詞代詞冠詞介詞其他謂 語(yǔ) 動(dòng) 詞非 謂 語(yǔ) 動(dòng) 詞并 列 連 詞附屬連詞出題記敘文人

27、與 自我教師對(duì) 作者的 影響1038中11100121120Last week, our student union held a online culture class on how to make Chinese dumplings. Some foreign schoolmates were curious about why dumplings are so popular the Chinese. I told them the culture of dumplings must to lie in its contents. Different type of fillings

28、suit different eaten preferences. Besides, there are no “one standard filling”. Whats most, dumplings will come with different fillings. No matter how types of fillings are in dumplings, people focus more on what we stand for. In a word, the online class was meaningful. Not only did we had an enjoya

29、ble discussion, but we also conveyed a positive attitude toward cultural diversity.【答案】Last week, our student union held a_online culture class on how to make Chinese dumplings.anSome foreign schoolmates were curious about why dumplings are so popular A the Chinese. I toldwiththem the culture of dum

30、plings mustSto lie in its contents. Different typn of fillings suitdifferenttypeseaten preferences. Besides, there are no one standard filling， Whats most, dumplings will comeeatingismorewith different fillings. No matter how types of fillings are in dumplings, people focus more on whatwhatwe stand

31、for. In a word, the online class was meaningful. Not only did we had an enjoyabletheytheyhavediscussion, but we also conveyed a positive attitude toward cultural diversity.【答案解析】第一處：第1句a改為an。冠詞誤用。，此處。nline第一個(gè)字母發(fā)音為元音音素，故使用 ano第二處：第2句popular改為popular with。介詞誤用?？疾榻樵~的用法，也是考查固定搭配 be popular with 的用法。第三處：

32、第3句刪除to。情態(tài)動(dòng)詞誤用。考查情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的用法，此處情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后接動(dòng)詞原形， 故刪除tOo第四處：第4句type改為types。名詞單數(shù)誤用?？疾槊~的復(fù)數(shù)，此處different表示有很 多不同的種類，故使用types。第五處：第4句eaten改為eating。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用?？疾榉侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作定語(yǔ)，使用eating。第六處：第5句are改為is。謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用?？疾橹髦^一致，表語(yǔ)是單數(shù)，故使用is。第七處：第6句most改為more。形容詞誤用。What，s more為固定搭配，故使用比擬級(jí)的more,而不是最高級(jí)的mosto第八處：第7句how改為what。連詞誤用。考查讓步狀語(yǔ)從句中連詞的

33、選擇，表示什么種 類，故使用whato第九處：第7句we改為they。代詞誤用。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知是指餃子的含義，他們的，而不是 我們的,故使用theiro第十處：第9句had改為have。謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用?？疾榈寡b句，not only位于句首，主句使用 局部倒裝，故使用haveo【命題細(xì)目表】試卷體裁主題 語(yǔ)境題材詞數(shù)句數(shù)難度考點(diǎn)分布動(dòng)詞名詞數(shù)詞連詞形 容 詞 & 副 詞代詞冠詞介詞其他謂 語(yǔ) 動(dòng) 詞非 謂 語(yǔ) 動(dòng) 詞并 列 連 詞從屬連 詞出題記敘文人 與 自 我作者對(duì)一次網(wǎng)上包餃子經(jīng)歷1159易31100111110【原創(chuàng)命題4On Thursday, I saw something a litt

34、le different.The bus did not take us to another forest park and instead into a neighborhood filling with houses of unique designs. Some were modem with French windows and square, block-shaped roof. On a short two-minute drive in the neighborhood, I see homes with pink walls, gardens and huge enclosed balconies. A few even had its own fruit trees which planted in their front yards! This was surprised to me because I lived in a neighborhood where every house in the area looked identically. In this neighborhood, there are no two houses where looked the same!And th