BEC寫作：商務(wù)信函書寫規(guī)則(二)

1、英語考試作文BEC寫作：商務(wù)信函書寫規(guī)則（2）2010年商務(wù)英語BEQT算機(jī)考試解疑2010年BEC#算機(jī)化考試17個(gè)考點(diǎn)一覽2010 年劍橋商務(wù)英語確定5 次機(jī)考時(shí)間BEC!作：商務(wù)信函書寫規(guī)則(2)仔細(xì)和恰當(dāng)?shù)胤侄温? Paragraphing ) 商業(yè)書信要寫得使人一讀就明白， 因此必須按照內(nèi)容仔細(xì)和恰當(dāng)?shù)姆侄温洌?一般的分段落原則是一個(gè)段落一個(gè)意思( A paragraph for each point is a good general rule. ) . 現(xiàn)舉例說明：Dear Sirs,It is reported in a domestic newspaper that theI

2、ranian Central Bank has instructed the commercial banks to suspend their business of opening a new letter of credit as from the 3rd May for financial reason of foreign currency.Although it is said that this arrangement would be a temporary one and with establishment of new import policy this emergen

3、cy arrangement would be lifted, we are much concerned about the outcome of this movement toward restriction of import to Iran and shall be obliged if you will kindly keep us well advisedof development of this new arrangement especially in connection with import from France.Yours faithfully以上這封信只有一段，

4、供兩句。第一句 39 字，第二句 66句。 讀后雖然能基本了解其內(nèi)容， 但讀起來很舒服。 信的內(nèi)容大體有三點(diǎn)： 1伊朗中央銀行因外匯原因，通知個(gè)商業(yè)銀行從五月三日起停止開立信用證；2這臨時(shí)措施，新的進(jìn)口政策一訂，這個(gè)措施可能取消；3希望對方隨時(shí)告之有關(guān)情況。按照這三點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)?shù)胤址侄温?，把信重新改寫一下，可能讀起來比原來的清楚易懂：Dear Sirs,It is reported in a vernacular newspaper that theIranian Central Bank has instructed the commercial banks tosuspend their is

5、suing new Letters of Credit as from the 3rdMay because of its decreasing foreign currency funds.Furthermore it is said that the suspension seems a temporaryone and will be released with establishment if a new importpolicy. We are much concerned, however, about the outcome ofthis movement toward rest

6、riction of import to Iran. We, therefore, shall be obliged if you will keep us well informed of development of this new state of affairs, especially inconnection with imports from France.Yours faithfully,實(shí)例解說：” Cellulose Tape 1/2 ” x 3yds, with plastic dispenser 700 doz./-ditto-but 1/2” x 5 yds, 1,0

7、00doz.” 這是出口商接到的一份定單中有關(guān)商品品名， 規(guī)格和數(shù)量的內(nèi)容。 中文 意思是： ”纖維素帶 （幅） 寬半英寸， 長 3 碼， 帶塑料包裝容器， 700 打；同上，但（幅）寬寬半英寸，長5 碼， 1000 打。主要問題是后半句不清楚。” ditto ”在這里表示前面提到的商品名稱纖維素帶， 但不能包括”帶塑料包裝容器”， 因此， 幅 寬半英寸長5碼的纖維素帶是否有塑料包裝容器沒有說清楚，不完整c所 以 最好 改成 ： ” Cellulose Tape 1/2 ” x 3yds, with plastic dispenser 700 doz. Cellulose Tape 1/2” x 5yds ， with plasticdispenser 1000 doz. ” 這樣即完正，又清楚明確，不會(huì)引起誤解。相關(guān)練習(xí)：