2021屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達圖表題指導與解讀熱點話題：消費學案

1、2021屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達圖表題指導與解讀熱點話題：消費學案2021屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達圖表題指導與解讀熱點話題：消費學案PAGE PAGE 102021屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達圖表題指導與解讀熱點話題：消費學案圖表題指導與解讀（熱點話題:消費）考查圖表的描述一般還是要慎重地，因為圖表描述屬于相當高層次地寫作了，多出現(xiàn)在雅思托福寫作中。一方面要考查讀圖能力,另外一方面要把圖轉(zhuǎn)換成文,比較耽誤時間的。所以江蘇在用圖表加文字的形式,這樣通過文字的描述也很大程度上輔助考生轉(zhuǎn)換圖表.但下面作文就是一張圖，然后讓概括。而概括和描述還有區(qū)別。我以為單純考數(shù)據(jù)圖表不是和高考命題思想一致的。下

2、面我來細談一下:閱讀下面文字和餅狀圖,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。 上圖是2019年某市消費者選擇餐廳時的關注因素1。用約30個詞概括上圖內(nèi)容;2。請簡要分析以上因素影響消費者選擇的原因；3。談談你就餐的關注因素,并用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。注意：作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。第一部分 30個詞的概括圖表描述，關鍵是找準比例的主體,請思考:36的主體：消費者還是特色？選擇前者：36%的消費者選擇特色選擇后者:特色在所有的因素中占36%結(jié)合提示信息:2017年某市消費者選擇餐廳時的關注因素，應該取后者。如果有學生取前者，也沒問題。其次要會基本的數(shù)據(jù)表達，再復雜的數(shù)據(jù)，也

3、要簡化成：在中，A占多少比例。這就是：Among , A makes up / accounts for %.注意：Among后一定是一個名詞,這個名詞后會可能帶上一個后置定語或定語從句.分析：核心詞為“因素”,后面帶上后置定語：消費者選擇餐廳時的。這樣就可以寫成：As is illustrated in the chart, among factors influencing diners choice of a restaurant, distinctive features rank first， accounting for 36%。 Next come service and the

4、 dining environment， 27% and 24 respectively. Others like price make up the least proportion.這樣描述是詳細描述圖表，但是根據(jù)要求“概括,所以還要去掉細節(jié)：As is illustrated in the chart， among factors influencing diners choice of a restaurant， distinctive featuresrankfirst.Next comeservice and the dining environment。 Others like

5、pricemake up the least proportion.積累詞匯:占據(jù):make up, account for分別是: and respectively占據(jù)首位:rank first, take a lions share, be in the lead； top the list其次是：Next comes對比范文:A survey was conducted in a city in 2017 about factors contributing to diners preference of a restaurant. Flavor features, service an

6、d the dining environment made up the biggest proportion。個人之見:這個描述完全忽略了最小值,但是熟悉雅思圖表描述的都知道，圖表描述一般抓兩頭,即最大和最小，這樣才能形成對比,從而挖掘規(guī)律。所以我對范文保留自己的意見。第二部分、主體部分請讀者要留意，這兩個要點實際上是重復的，第二個要點要求談選擇原因，第三個要點還是談選擇原因，只不過對象換了，但本質(zhì)上沒有區(qū)別。所以考生寫的時候,不要在第二個要點寫的時候窮盡了思維。思維角度：大部分都能想到經(jīng)濟發(fā)展了,有錢了。這個著眼點是從社會經(jīng)濟角度。我們再考慮個人的精神層面上的需求，那就是更加追求心理上的享

7、受。個人：pursue spiritual consumption社會：economic development； rising living standards； high income成文:Quite a few things give rise to the phenomenon。 First, fast economic developmentgoes hand in hand with（也可以是contributes to） individual high income。Therefore, people naturally hightlight (也可以是prioritize）li

8、ving standards instead of justfilling their belly.This is whytheyfocus more onflavor features。Besides， theyincreasingly pursue spiritual consumption.For example， highquality service like sincere smiles can warm their heart andmake them at home. More often, a pleasant atmosphere with soft music canre

9、lieve tiredness and stressafter a whole days work。分析：第一個邏輯,從因果上拓展：經(jīng)濟發(fā)展了個人收入提高了追求生活水平的提高了重視食物的特色了注：推理到最后必須回到圖表中，這叫點題。第二個邏輯，從舉例上拓展:追求精神上的消費-舉例：音樂和微笑：賓至如歸；緩解疲乏。積累詞匯:give rise togo hand in hand withprioritizefill their bellyThis is whyfocus more onpursue spiritual consumption。make one at homerelieve one

10、s tiredness and stress第三個要點，有點麻煩，因為上面已經(jīng)講了兩個原因了，現(xiàn)在需要另辟一個關注要素了,就中國食品而言，一個不可回避的問題就是：安全。As for me, Igive high priority tothe safety of food and confortable environment， not only because poisoned or polluted food willpose a great threatto health， but because they can influence my appetiteto the great ext

11、ent.另外建議多儲備一些相關有用搭配：戰(zhàn)勝 / 取代 / 流行：outweigh; make room for; prevail; gain popularityeg.As a result， individual material needs have made room for mental needs。Firsclass food services will be prevailing in modern food market完整的文：As is illustrated in the chart， among factors influencing diners choice of

12、a restaurant， distinctive featuresrankfirst。Next comeservice and the dining environment. Others like pricemake up the least proportion。Quite a few things give rise to the phenomenon。 First， fast economic developmentgoes hand in hand with（也可以是contributes to) individual high income。Therefore, people n

13、aturally highlight （也可以是prioritize）living standards instead of justfilling their belly.This is whytheyfocus more onflavor features.Besides, theyincreasingly pursue spiritual consumption.For example, highquality service like sincere smiles can warm their heart andmake them at home. More often, a plea

14、sant atmosphere with soft music canrelieve tiredness and stressafter a whole days work.As for me， Igive high priority tothe safety of food and environment， not only because poisoned or polluted food willpose a great threatto health, but because they can influence my appetiteto the great extent.對比范文:

15、What has triggered this phenomenon？ With living standards rising fast， people now focus more on the diversity of food. Thats why flavor features, which 36.3% of the respondents highlight， top the pie chart， while the price only accounts for 8.4. Almost of equal importance are service and the dining environment。 The reason， by and large, is that service and an inviting atmosphere can make diners enjoy a meal to the fullest。If I choose to dine in a restaurant I will be more concerned about the safety of the food and envi