2020年江蘇中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)-話題8-人物介紹

1、2020年江蘇中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)話題8-人物介紹2020年江蘇中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)話題8-人物介紹 分析宿遷、鹽城、淮安及江蘇其他地市近6年中考真題的書(shū)面表達(dá)可知，與“人物介紹”這一話題相關(guān)的書(shū)面表達(dá)有以下命題角度：介紹自己周?chē)说膬?yōu)秀品質(zhì)，如2015宿遷；介紹自己。結(jié)合全國(guó)中考真題可知，此話題還有以下命題角度：介紹名人(一般會(huì)介紹人物的外貌、性格、愛(ài)好、優(yōu)勢(shì)、特殊之處或者不足之處；若是名人介紹，多會(huì)介紹其事跡對(duì)自己的影響)。命題探索 分析宿遷、鹽城、淮安及江蘇其他地市近6年中考教材鏈接教材鏈接 (2019南通改編)本學(xué)期就要結(jié)束了，假如你是李明，請(qǐng)你對(duì)自己本學(xué)期的表現(xiàn)進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并針對(duì)自己做得不足的

2、地方提出改進(jìn)措施，寫(xiě)一份英文的自評(píng)小結(jié)。 典例剖析一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句審主題：自我總結(jié)審文體：記敘文審時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)審時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) (2019南通改編)本學(xué)期就要結(jié)束了，假如你是李明，要點(diǎn)：1. 努力學(xué)習(xí)，在學(xué)習(xí)上取得了進(jìn)步；2. 重視保持健康，每天跑步半個(gè)小時(shí)；3. 積極參加學(xué)?；顒?dòng)，得到了很多機(jī)會(huì)和同學(xué)交流； 4. 自己仍然有做得不好的地方需要提升(自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn))。審要點(diǎn)：短文包含兩個(gè)方面，一方面是本學(xué)期表現(xiàn)好的地方，另一方面是自己的不足之處及改進(jìn)計(jì)劃，且不足之處及改進(jìn)計(jì)劃需要至少自由發(fā)揮2點(diǎn)，如：習(xí)慣于追隨別人，自己缺乏創(chuàng)造力。為了提升自己，將會(huì)讀更多的書(shū)

3、一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句要點(diǎn)：1. 努力學(xué)習(xí)，在學(xué)習(xí)上取得了進(jìn)步；審要點(diǎn)：短文包含兩參考詞匯：weakness弱勢(shì)注意事項(xiàng)：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。Im Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term._一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句參考詞匯：weakness弱勢(shì)一二1. Im go

4、od at English, so itll be an advantage for me to teach children English.2. He has the ability to organize the company, and everything is in great order.3. I took an active part in school activities, so I got more chances to communicate with others.4. My sister has more experience on how to play the

5、piano well.介紹個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句角度1好句范例1. Im good at English, so it1. 我擅長(zhǎng)唱歌和跳舞，并且經(jīng)常在比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。 _ _2. 她有能力照顧好自己，不讓父母擔(dān)心。 _I am good at singing and dancing and I often win prizes in the competition.She has the ability to take good care of herself and let her parents not worry about her.句 子 仿 寫(xiě)一階 審好題三階

6、練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句1. 我擅長(zhǎng)唱歌和跳舞，并且經(jīng)常在比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。I am go3. 我積極地參加小組活動(dòng)，所以我有很多機(jī)會(huì)分享想法。 _ _4. 她在如何與他人相處方面有更多的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。 _I took an active part in group activities, so I got more chances to share ideas.She has more experience on how to get on well with others.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句3. 我積極地參加小組活動(dòng)，所以我有很多機(jī)會(huì)分享想法。I t5. I am used to

7、following others, so I should think more by myself and have my own opinions.6. He seldom communicates with others in the class. As a result, he hardly has friends.7. You spend too much time on your study but pay little attention to physical exercise.介紹不足之處及改進(jìn)措施角度2好句范例一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句5. I am used

8、 to following othe5. 我習(xí)慣依靠他人，所以我應(yīng)該開(kāi)始自己做自己的事情。 _ _6. 我妹妹很少參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，所以她缺乏社交經(jīng)驗(yàn)。 _ _7. 我每天花太多時(shí)間在電腦游戲上，卻忽略了我的學(xué)習(xí)。 _ _I am used to depending on others, so I should start to do things by myself.My sister seldom takes part in social activities. As a result, she is short of social experience.句 子 仿 寫(xiě)I spend too

9、much time on computer games but pay little attention to my study.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句5. 我習(xí)慣依靠他人，所以我應(yīng)該開(kāi)始自己做自己的事情。I a8. Im shy. Its not easy for me to make friends.Its not easy for me to make friends because Im shy.9. He is kind and always helps others.He is so kind that he always helps others.10. My

10、teacher is very strict with us. She cares about every student.My teacher who cares about every student is very strict with us.介紹性格角度3升格范例一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句8. Im shy. Its not easy for 8. David is very confident. He is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people. (用原因狀語(yǔ)從句升格) _ _9. Helen is

11、 nice and friendly. All the teachers and classmates like her very much.(用so.that升格) _ _David is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people because he is very confident.Helen is so nice and friendly that all the teachers and classmates like her very much.句 子 升 格一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句8. David

12、 is very confident. He10. Our English teacher is very patient. She always explains the text to us carefully. (用定語(yǔ)從句升格) _ _ Our English teacher who always explains the text to us carefully is very patient.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句10. Our English teacher is ver11. I love fruit.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)看法)I love fruit. I think i

13、ts healthy.12. My favorite subject is science.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)原因)My favorite subject is science because its interesting.13. Im serious about running.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)好處)Im serious about running. Its a way to make us keep fit.介紹愛(ài)好角度4擴(kuò)寫(xiě)范例一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句11. I love fruit.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)看法)I love11. Id like to join the Music Club.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)看法)

14、_12. I like collecting stamps.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)原因) _ _13. I am interested in drawing pictures.(擴(kuò)寫(xiě)好處) _ _ Id like to join the Music Club. I think it makes me more active.I like collecting stamps because I can learn something from them.句 子 擴(kuò) 寫(xiě)I am interested in drawing pictures. Its a way to calm myself down.一階 審好題

15、三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句11. Id like to join the Music速記14. Friends are like booksyou dont need a lot of them as long as theyre good.朋友就像書(shū)，你不需要太多，只要他們是好的。15. A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.真正 的朋友可以向你伸出援手并觸動(dòng)你的心靈。16. A good friend is like a mirror. 好朋友就像一面鏡子。17. A friend in need is a

16、friend indeed. 患難見(jiàn)真情。18. Friendship is love with understanding. 友誼是愛(ài)與理解。19. A friend is a second self. 朋友就是另一個(gè)自己。20. Everyone has his price. 天生我材必有用。俗語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句速記14. Friends are like booksy練語(yǔ)段個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)study well/do well in my schoolwork/. 語(yǔ)段練習(xí)1 not only _(個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)1)but also _(個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)2). Besides, I

17、_ _(個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)3)speak English very well/have a good voice, so I ever got the first prize in the competition/.am good at playing musical instruments/communicating with others/.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句練語(yǔ)段個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)study well/do well in mHowever, he/she also has some weaknesses. He/She _(不足之處1). So I hope _(改進(jìn)措施1). He

18、/She also _(不足之處2), so he/she needs 不足之處及改進(jìn)措施is careless sometimes, so he/she may leave his/her homework at home/is easy to get angry with others, so he/she has few friends/. he/she can be careful in the daily life/patient enough to talk with others and make more friends/. does badly in math/English

19、/seldom takes part in school activities/. 語(yǔ)段練習(xí)2一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句However, he/she also has some_(改進(jìn)措施2). I really hope he/she can have a change and become more perfect.to study math/English hard/to take an active part in school activities/.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句_My _(人物關(guān)系)is _(外貌1). He/She has _(外貌2)

20、. Generally speaking, he/she is _(性格1)and _(性格2). He/She _(性格的具體表現(xiàn)).介紹外貌、性格、愛(ài)好、優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)等best friend/English teacher/.tall/short/thin/fat/.a round face/big eyes/.warmhearted/kind/.outgoing/helpful/. often helps others without asking for anything in return/can get on well with teachers and classmates/. 語(yǔ)段

21、練習(xí)3一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句My _In his/her spare time, he/she likes _(愛(ài)好1)and _(愛(ài)好2)He/She is _(優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)), so we all like him/her. reading books/watching movies/.listening to music/taking exercise/. always ready to help others/honest and never tells lies/.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句In his/her spare time, he/she 成篇章

22、 Im Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think its necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term. This term, besides studying hard and making progress in my study, I also paid more attention to keeping healthy and I always ran for half an hour in the morning.

23、Whats more, I took an active part in different activities at school. It helps me learn the spirit of team work and I have got more chances to communicate with my classmates. 一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句成篇章 Im Li Ming, a studeDeveloping a good relationship with them certainly makes my school life more enjoya

24、ble. I also find some weaknesses that need to be improved. I am used to following others and I am not creative enough. So，being creative is the ability I should develop. So I will read more books to improve it. I hope I can become more and more excellent. I believe as long as I know my strengths and

25、 weaknesses clearly and try to improve my weaknesses, I can find a better me in the future.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫(xiě)好句Developing a good relationship(2019吉林改編)假如你是李華，想?yún)⒓覥hina Daily舉辦的以“夢(mèng)想職業(yè)體驗(yàn)”為主題的2020年夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給主辦人Mr Smith寫(xiě)一封介紹個(gè)人情況的英文郵件。要點(diǎn)：1. 性格：外向，樂(lè)于助人； 2. 愛(ài)好：讀書(shū)；3. 夢(mèng)想職業(yè)：成為醫(yī)生；4. 個(gè)人計(jì)劃(自主發(fā)揮)。注意事項(xiàng)：1. 詞數(shù)9

26、0左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵(2019吉林改編)假如你是李華，想?yún)⒓覥hina DaiDear Mr Smith，Its my pleasure to introduce myself to you._寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵 My friends say Im an outgoing and helpful girl, and its easy for me to get on well with others. As for my hobby, reading is what I like best. In my spar

27、e time, I spend much time reading books especially on medicine. Actually my parents are both doctors. They influence me a lot, so to be a Dear Mr Smith，寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵_I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours sincerely，Li Huagood doctor is my dream. I have

28、been studying hard to enter a good medical university. Besides, Im going to take more volunteer work to help sick people. Those experiences may help me become an excellent doctor. 寫(xiě)作練兵寫(xiě)作練兵_寫(xiě)作練兵巧變句首句式寫(xiě)作技巧 8巧變句首句式 變化句首句式，如以一個(gè)介詞短語(yǔ)、形容詞短語(yǔ)、不定式短語(yǔ)或副詞作為句子的開(kāi)頭，而不一定要采用固定的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)作為開(kāi)頭，以避免造成讀者的閱讀疲勞。寫(xiě)作練兵巧變句首句式寫(xiě)作技巧 8巧變

29、句首句式 變化句句 式 連 接 范 例 1. 介詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭：A village lies at the foot of the mountain.At the foot of the mountain lies a village.2. 不定式短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭：The students worked hard to pass the exam.To pass the exam, the students worked hard.3. 形容詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭：He was confused about the problem, so he went to ask his teacher for help.Con

30、fused about the problem, he went to ask his teacher for help.寫(xiě)作練兵巧變句首句式句 式 連 接 范 例 1. 介詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭：A4. 副詞開(kāi)頭：This dream came true again like the dreams before.Again, like the dreams before, this dream came true.5. 用分詞、分詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭： We climbed to the top of the tower and we saw a beautiful view.Climbing to the top of the tower, we saw a beauti