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1、Decide to Love1Decide to Love1Interpretation of the Text 文本解讀A storyhowwherewhenwhywhowhat2Interpretation of the Text 文本解Interpretation of the Text 文本解讀 (Who)“I”FriendStrangersA manReading for the relationship of the characters3Interpretation of the Text 文本解Interpretation of the Text文本解讀Reading for

2、the plot developments.Life-changing experience4Interpretation of the Text文本解讀Interpretation of the Text文本解讀Reading for the plot developments.Witnessing the family loveTip: Pay more attention to the use of v.s, adj.s & adv. s. to describe love.5Interpretation of the Text文本解讀Reading the underlined wor

3、ds for creationTip: 將10個(gè)下劃線詞當(dāng)成下棋的棋子，將它們擺一擺，看看他們?cè)诶m(xù)寫故事中的幾種情節(jié)發(fā)展的可能性。 10 underlined words: I; a friend; the man; his family; hug; softly; gaze; love; satisfiedCharactersI; a friend; the man; his familyActions smile; gaze; hugFeelingssoftly; satisfied; passionate6Reading the underlined words f2. Interpre

4、tation of underlined words下劃線詞解讀：I; a friend; the man; his family; hug; softly; gaze; love; satisfiedCharactersActionsFeelingsI; a friend; the man; his familysmile; gaze; hugsoftly; satisfied; passionate Interpretation of underlined words and given information劃線詞和續(xù)寫首句解讀72. Interpretation of underlin

5、eTip 2: Using the GN stratedyReading the first sentences of the two continued paragraphs for creation.Para. 1 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. Para. 2 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight i

6、n the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. Tip 1: Use reverse thinking (逆向思維) skillPara. 1 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. Para. 2 The

7、man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. 讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】8Tip 2: Using the GN stratedyRInterpretation of underlined words and given inf

8、ormation劃線詞和續(xù)寫首句解讀 (G-N策略） 1. Interpretation of given information首句解讀：Para. 1 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. Given InformationFirst he waved to his youngest son (maybe about six years old) as he laid down h

9、is bags. (Para. 3)2. The man said, “Hi, baby girl!” as he gently took the child from her mother.(Para. 5)讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】9Interpretation of underlined wInterpretation of underlined words and given information劃線詞和續(xù)寫首句解讀（G-N策略）New Information How long have you bee

10、n married and how long have you been away from your home? What was “my” reaction to the mans answers? How long had “I” expected the man had been away from his home? What did “I” react to the mans answer and do afterwards?1. Interpretation of given information首句解讀：Para. 1 For an instant they reminded

11、 me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. 讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】10Interpretation of underlined wInterpretation of underlined words and given information劃線詞和續(xù)寫首句解讀（G-N策略）1. Interpretation of given information首句解讀：P

12、ara. 2 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. I had one of those life-changing experiences. It occurred merely two feet away from me. (para 1)Given Information讀后續(xù)寫-高考英

13、語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】11Interpretation of underlined wInterpretation of underlined words and given information劃線詞和續(xù)寫首句解讀（G-N策略）1. Interpretation of given information首句解讀：Para. 2 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned

14、right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. New InformationWhat did the man do and say to “me”?Whats “my” reaction?What did “I” plan to do?What about “my” friends reaction?讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】12Interpretation of underlined w“I”FriendThe

15、 newly-married couplewas astonished flashed me his wonderful smile again, shook my hand Came upInterpretation of writing ideas 寫作思路解讀Idea 1:讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】13“I”FriendThe newly-married cou“I”FriendThe newly-married couplecouldnt help sighing reflecting on my ins

16、ipid marriageCame upInterpretation of writing ideas 寫作思路解讀Idea 2:讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】14“I”FriendThe newly-married couThe Micro-skills Training in writing 表達(dá)微技能：之動(dòng)作神態(tài)：肢體語(yǔ)言篇Para.4: Then the man stood up, gazed in the eyes of his oldest son (maybe nine or ten) and whil

17、e cupping his sons face in his hands戲劇中，肢體語(yǔ)言成為了演員塑造人物形象、表達(dá)角色思想情感的一個(gè)非常重要的途徑。演員能夠通過(guò)一系列肢體語(yǔ)言的合理運(yùn)用,使肢體表現(xiàn)和內(nèi)心情感有機(jī)的結(jié)合,從而塑造出完整的、鮮明的、具有獨(dú)特性格魅力的人物形象。文學(xué)創(chuàng)作中，作家通過(guò)對(duì)人物肢體語(yǔ)言等描寫，使作品中的人物血肉豐滿，厚實(shí)感人，增強(qiáng)敘述的畫面感。我們高考讀后續(xù)寫的評(píng)分原則之一是“內(nèi)容的豐富性”。所謂“內(nèi)容的豐富性”，就是要求續(xù)寫部分詳細(xì)、生動(dòng)地描述情景、態(tài)度和感情等。上面這一段文字情節(jié)完整，但是存在著信息量不夠，表達(dá)干癟的缺點(diǎn)，無(wú)法準(zhǔn)確傳達(dá)故事類文章的情感因素。讀后續(xù)寫-高

18、考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】15The Micro-skills Training in wThe Micro-skills Training in writing 表達(dá)微技能：之動(dòng)作神態(tài)：肢體語(yǔ)言篇詞的積累：名詞：hug, kiss, smile動(dòng)詞：wave, miss, hug, squirm, kiss, mouth, beam形容詞：long, loving, tender, satisfied, passionate副詞：shyly, softly, excitedly, gently, instantly, si

19、mply, silently我們可以通過(guò)架構(gòu)小說(shuō)人物的信息，通過(guò)細(xì)節(jié)描寫，展現(xiàn)人物年齡、性別、狀態(tài)、動(dòng)作、表情等的特點(diǎn)，讓人物更形象，文章更有血有肉，厚實(shí)感人。比如第一段中女人的哭，不僅有為生活艱難而情緒宣泄的痛哭，更有感動(dòng)和感激的哭。不同年齡的人、不同性別的人和處于不同情境中的人都會(huì)有不一樣的哭。在描寫時(shí)，加上哭的聲音、表情或動(dòng)作就可以讓人物更有區(qū)分度。那么，如何描繪一個(gè)長(zhǎng)期壓抑沮喪突然得以宣泄的中年女人的哭呢？讓我們一起來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)哭的各種表達(dá)。讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】16The Micro-skills Tra

20、ining in wII.詞塊和句的積累1. gave a long, loving hug; smile somewhat shyly; reply softly; gaze in the eyes of; cup ones face in ones hands; hug a most loving; tender hug; squirm(扭動(dòng)) excitedly in ones arms; never taking her little eyes off the wonderful sight of ; 2. They gave each other a long, loving hug

21、.3. His son smiled somewhat shyly, and replied softly, “Me, too, Dad!”4. Then the man stood up, gazed in the eyes of his oldest son and while cupping his sons face in his hands said, “”5. A baby girl was squirming(扭動(dòng)) excitedly in her mothers arms, never once taking her little eyes off the wonderful

22、 sight of her returning father.讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】17II.詞塊和句的積累1. gave a long, l6. He quickly kissed her face all over and then held her close to her chest while rocking her from side to side.7. The little girl instantly relaxed and simply laid her head on his shoul

23、der, satisfied.8. While waiting to pick up a friend at , I had one of those life-changing experiences.9. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person.10. Without hesitation, and with a curious sense of certainty, I replied softly, “My future!

24、”。讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】186. He quickly kissed her face 2. Bruce緊緊地抱著他，眼里充滿著感激的淚水。 Bruce hugged him tightly, _.(運(yùn)用并列句句型) Bruce hugged him tightly, _. (運(yùn)用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)) Have a try 牛刀小試：句子翻譯與句型轉(zhuǎn)換1. 他勇敢地走上前，給她獻(xiàn)上一束紅玫瑰。 He bravely went over to her _. (運(yùn)用連動(dòng)句句型) He bravely went ove

25、r to her,_.(運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)) and handed her a bunch of red rosesand tears of gratitudewelled up in my eyeshanding her a bunch of red rosestears of gratitudewelling up in my eyes讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】192. Bruce緊緊地抱著他，眼里充滿著感激的淚水。Have他輕輕地抱起那位被驚嚇的孩子，并把它抱到安全的地方。_, he picked up t

26、he _ boy and carried him to the safety. (用副詞作狀語(yǔ)，形容詞作定語(yǔ))3. 格林先生收到了期待已久的邀請(qǐng)函, 用激動(dòng)而顫抖的雙手把它打開。Mr. Green received the long-anticipated/long-expected invitation _. (運(yùn)用連動(dòng)句) Gentlyand opened it excitedly with his trembling hands5. 讓人難以忘懷的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴唇保持著微笑。_ her eyes that _ and lips held in a steady smil

27、e. (運(yùn)用倒裝和比喻修辭)Unforgettable werefrightenedshone like diamonds讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】20他輕輕地抱起那位被驚嚇的孩子，并把它抱到安全的地方。3. 格6. Lindas heart beat wildly and her legs trembled. Lindas heart beat wildly _. (用“with + n. + 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞”改寫句子) Lindas heart beat wildly, _. (用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句子)her l

28、egs tremblingwith her legs trembling7. 我們驚奇地張大了嘴。Our mouths_. dropped openin surprise8. 她將頭靠在他丈夫的肩膀上。She_ her husbands shoulder. rested her headon9. 那小女孩的臉上露出了燦爛的笑容。A bright smile_. appeared on/ spread across/ crossed the little girls face10. 小高斯站在房間外豎起(strain)耳朵聽父母在房間里說(shuō)什么。Little Gause stood outside

29、 the room,_ _what his parents were saying. his ears strainingto hear/ straining his ears to hear讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】216. Lindas heart beat wildly aPossible version 1 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that t

30、hey couldnt possibly be. Full of admiration, I asked, “Wow! How long have you two been married?” “Being together for fourteen years total, married twelve of those.” He replied, without breaking his gaze from his lovely wifes face. “Well, then, how long have you been away?” I asked. “Two whole days!”

31、 “Two days?” I was astonished. By the intensity (熱烈) of the greeting, I had thought hed been gone for at least several weeks - if not months. I knew my expression betrayed me, so I turned away my eyes and said quietly, “I hope my marriage is still that passionate after so long!” 讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課

32、件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】22Possible version 1 For an Possible version 1 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. “Dont hope, frienddecide!” Then he flashed me h

33、is wonderful smile again, shook my hand and said, “God bless!” With that, he and his family turned and walked away together. I was still watching that man and his special family walk just out of sight when my friend came up to me and asked, “What are you looking at?” Without hesitation, and with a c

34、urious sense of certainty, I replied softly, “My future!”讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】23Possible version 1 The man suPossible version 2 For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples, but I knew by the age of their kids that they couldnt possibly be. Full of admira

35、tion, I asked, “Wow! How long have you two been married?” “Twelve years.” He replied, without breaking his gaze from his lovely wifes face. “Well, then, how long have you been away?” I asked. “Two whole days!” “Two days?” I was astonished. By the intensity (熱烈) of the greeting, I had thought hed bee

36、n gone for at least several weeks - if not months. Reflecting on my insipid(平淡的，無(wú)趣的) marriage, I couldnt help sighing. I got lost in the thought of my own marriage. I knew my astonished and enviable expression betrayed me, so I turned away my eyes and said quietly, “I hope my marriage is still that

37、passionate like his!” 讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】讀后續(xù)寫-高考英語(yǔ)作文新題型PPT優(yōu)秀課件1【完美版】24Possible version 2 For anPossible version 2 The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye. With forcefulness that burned right into my soul, he told me something that left me a different person. “Dont hope, friend decide!” Then he flashed me his wonderful smile again, shook my hand and said, “God bless!” With that, he and his family turned and walked away together. I was still watching that ma