高考英語三輪沖刺：讀后續(xù)寫之最后叮囑 講義

1、高考英語讀后續(xù)寫三輪沖刺：讀后續(xù)寫之最后叮囑打分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書寫、情節(jié)符合正常邏輯、所給兩段首句與你的續(xù)寫的銜接、語言（沒有簡單或重大語法錯(cuò)誤；有好的表達(dá)和句型）字和字?jǐn)?shù)就兩段，不能再分段，兩段字?jǐn)?shù)要平衡75詞左右(第二段也要推動(dòng)情節(jié))續(xù)寫的步驟分析人物關(guān)系、性格+情節(jié)（clues,伏筆和鋪墊）+議論的話（體現(xiàn)人的品質(zhì)、人和人之間的感情等）【別想太多】你自己準(zhǔn)備擬定的主旨（第二段結(jié)尾可以考慮，兩句話左右很加分“真善美”的主題）要自然：比如“.,”said Tom in the interview/report.妙用、慎用“引用”，比如“Love is what binds us,through fai

2、r or stormy weather.”“Where there is love,there is hope.”“If practice doesnt make perfect,at least it can make better.”故事大致方向（一定要確定第一段末尾要把故事寫到哪里為止；）不要隨意再加conflicts，著重解決現(xiàn)有的問題具體細(xì)節(jié)情節(jié)補(bǔ)充（漢語列出提綱：大概哪幾句？有意識(shí)地思考一下語言和句型）動(dòng)作？心情？說兩句話？心理活動(dòng)？even外貌和環(huán)境？不能跳情節(jié)邏輯故事寫什么具體內(nèi)容所寫的情節(jié)和細(xì)節(jié)都是為了凸顯主題；【全文和主旨意識(shí)】所寫內(nèi)容一定要推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展！語言以寫正確語法和

3、詞匯為準(zhǔn)。不能亂用難詞、大詞、不認(rèn)識(shí)的詞、各種疊加不確定的表達(dá)和句型。如果不確定，就利用漢語換一種自己會(huì)的表達(dá)。適當(dāng)活用原文的表達(dá)詞匯復(fù)現(xiàn)在此基礎(chǔ)上，考慮積累一些文學(xué)性表達(dá)&idiomatic expressions看范文考慮少量簡單短句、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)、非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語（包括形容詞）、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、插入語、賓補(bǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)、定語從句（尤其非限制性定語從句很容易出現(xiàn)）、名詞性從句、with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等有意識(shí)地使用adj&adv,二連形或二連副單個(gè)舉例：插入語Tom,nevertheless,would like to give up.Tom,though extremely hungry and tir

4、ed,took a deep breath and persisted.更高端的一些修辭：比如3句排比如It isthat三遍；比喻(用見過的)；alliteration押頭韻如A is part and parcel of B.A是B重要、不可或缺的部分。adj或adj短語作狀語“Oh,”said Mom,disappointed.Safe and sound,I got home.“I dont wanna try anymore,”he said,helpless&hopeless.Somewhat content/satisfied with what she said just no

5、w,the stranger二連adj/advRealizing the truth,he became embarrassed and guilty,and apologized sincerely to the beggar.Very quietly but determinedly she waved goodbye to him and went alone.倒裝句：Only whenwill youNever/Under no circumstances will I give up.見得略多And all of a sudden in walked two boys and a g

6、irl.In front of the TV sat/stood/lay a boy.Sitting inside the car was a man with/who（主語加點(diǎn)定語,避免頭重腳輕）Child/Young as/though he is,(盡管)Hardly had Tom laid eyes on the scene when the expression on his face changed from delight to shock.一就So loudly did he scream that everyone present turned around to see

7、what had happened.虛擬語氣的倒裝句“Had we done sth,we would”In addition to倒裝、定從狀從等混合,可考慮形成自己的固定高分復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)說話內(nèi)容+說話動(dòng)作&副詞等狀語+非謂語動(dòng)詞“You dont have to,”answered Dad in his soft voice,coming over and lifting me out of Moms lap.三連動(dòng)My dog,Daisy,followed me into the room,jumped on the bed,and started licking me all over m

8、y face.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)+動(dòng)作+非謂語動(dòng)詞Fear sending his pulse racing,he tried to calm down but in vain,panting heavily and covered in sweat.Tired and hungry,he threw himself into the bed,his head buried in the pillow.對(duì)話標(biāo)點(diǎn)“AAAAAAA,”said Tom excitedly.“BBBBBBB.”,根據(jù)需要可換成?或!said可換成added/continued/repeated/answered/repli

9、ed/said in my ear/whispered/sighed(嘆著氣說)/mumbled(含糊著說)/agreed/explained/yelled(大叫)/shouted/insisted(堅(jiān)持說)/offered(主動(dòng)提出)/whimper(啜泣著說)等范文：As time went by,they could see more and more seagulls.And also more and more seaweed floated around their lifeboat.Whats more,the seaweed was green instead of brown

10、.Seeing that,the four men felt more excited because they were really approaching land.Then,as the boat was carried to the top of a great wave,the captain looked across the water and saw a lighthouse.The cook also said he saw it.After searching the sky for a long time,Stephen Crane finally found the

11、lighthouse.Though it was very far,at least there was hope for them.After a while,the captain shouted suddenly,“Look again.Its exactly in the direction.”Hearing that,they all forgot their pain and hunger and worked harder toward land.Unluckily,as they were getting close to the shore,the wave became l

12、arger and larger,and their boat was likely to be turned over at any time.However,they controlled the boat with all their strength.And finally they saw some people on the shore waving at them and they knew they could be saved.一些好的表達(dá)：升華主旨要自然（出彩最好）“When looking back on this narrow escape from death,I f

13、ound that it was the belief in hope that brought us the light and drove away the darkness,”he wrote in the newspaper article.“A man can be destroyed but not defeated,”he said with a broad smile on his face.“You know,that is my motto and I am theold man.”心情情感類：let out a cry of excitement be in high s

14、piritsAn atmosphere of sadness blanketing the whole world(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)),His heart swelling with pride/joy/anger(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)),His dark eyes glittering with delight/greed/anger(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)),His eyes flashing angrily/with anger,A look of terror flashing across his face(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)),Her eyes/face lighting up with joy/pleasu

15、re(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)),Her eyes lit up when he walked into the room.&Suddenly a smile lit up his face.(happy/excitement)His smile broadening from ear to ear,(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))A feeling of tiredness/isolation sweeping over me,(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))突然襲來哭burst into laughter/tears=burst out laughing/cryinga tear-stained face帶著淚痕的臉shed bit

16、ter tearsshed-shed-shedshed tears of happiness流出痛苦/幸福的淚水be on the verge of tears要哭了Tears streaming/rolling down his cheek,或Happy tears welling up in his eyes,或Tears blurring his eyes(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)),Feeling a sudden surge of anger/excitement/panic/relief,heWith a surge of relief/anxiety/despair washing over

17、/through him,the boysth offered a ray of hope for them.給了他們一線希望?！癆 ray of hope flickered in the sky.”be sunk in despair/depressionWith a touch of sadness in his voice,聲音中帶著一點(diǎn)傷感be overwhelmed with grief/sorrow/despair/gratitude陷入悲傷悲痛絕望；感激萬分；Overwhelmed by a feeling of guilt(非謂語動(dòng)詞),heHe could no longe

18、r hold back his anger/tears.She could hardly contain her excitement/curiosity.possess:被動(dòng)更多She was possessed by jealousy.她妒火中燒.A terrible fear/mad rage possessed her.細(xì)節(jié)外貌等描寫側(cè)面體現(xiàn)心情，比如angry(his voice rising,his face flushing)gloomy：a gloomy room/It was a wet and gloomy day.We sat in gloomy silence.(sad

19、&hopeless)Night/Darkness/Dusk fell.夜幕、黃昏降臨Are we doomed to die/failure?注定死亡、失敗I believe we can make it!If fortune could smile on us,after what seemed to be ages/a century,He finally broke the long silence between them.The lighthouse was flashing in the distance.It was the last thing he would like to do.They gathered all their strength to pull the oars.=pulled with all their st