高考英語讀后續(xù)寫素材積累講義

英語高考讀后續(xù)寫素材積累具有人物特點的語言描寫7句1Shesaidshewantedto

livesomewhereremoved,detached(分開的),

where

neighborswouldn’tstareatherbelly,pointather,snicker(竊笑),or,worseyet,assault(攻擊)herwith

insincerekindnesses.

Nana的話語體現(xiàn)了她被人看不起的內(nèi)心的感受：想遠離這群對她嘲笑的人們。這些人是不尊重她的：

stareat，pointat，snicker(竊笑)，assault(攻擊)herwith

insincerekindnesses。她是自卑的。2Buthesaidhelikedthe

enchanting

sounds

theArabicwordsmadeasthey

rolledoffhistongue.Hesaidtheycomfortedhim,

easedhisheart.這段話表達了瑪麗雅姆父親對語言的感受：喜歡這些迷人的聲音enchanting

sounds；rolledoffhistongue；comfortedhim,easedhisheart。3"Ifyoureallycareabouther,thenyou

makeherseethatshebelongshereathomewithhermother.Thereis

nothingoutthere

forher.Nothingbutrejectionandheartache."

這是瑪麗雅姆母親娜娜對瑪麗雅姆老師說的一段話。因為瑪麗雅姆想出去與同齡人一起讀書，老師為她到她母親那里去說情。于是娜娜說了這番話。makeherseethatshebelongshereathomewithhermother，讓她明白她屬于這里，而且外面只會給她拒絕與令人心痛的事情。Thereis

nothingoutthere

forher.Nothingbutrejectionandheartache.我們可以看出她的思想是有局限性的?？墒菫楹嗡@么說?4“That’snotagoodidea,”saidNana.Hervoicewas

calm,hadthecontrolled,politetone

sheusedaroundJalil,butMariamcould

feelher

hard,accusingglare.細節(jié)描寫：對聲音的形象描述calm,hadthecontrolled,politetone冷靜，控制性的禮貌語氣。作者還從聽者角度來描述Mariamcould

feelher

hard,accusingglare。在聽的時候，瑪麗雅姆能感覺到母親嚴厲與責備的目光。從直接與間接的角度來描述母親娜娜說話的樣子以及話語傳達的言外之意。5“Whatrichlies!”NanasaidafterJalilleft.“Richmantellingrichlies.

Henevertookyoutoanytree.

Anddon’tlethimcharmyou.Hebetrayedus,yourbelovedfather.Hecastusout.Hecastusoutofhisbigfancyhouselikewewerenothingtohim.Hedidithappily.”這段話表明瑪麗亞姆母親娜娜的辛酸：未能受到丈夫的尊重，被排擠在外。她的話也表示了她對丈夫的控訴：Henevertookyoutoanytree.Hebetrayedus；Hecastusout；Hecastusoutofhisbigfancyhouselikewewerenothingtohim.Hedidithappily.這些話也深刻揭示了當時社會對待娜娜這些底層人的冷漠以及不公。6Nanasaid,“Learnthisnowandlearnitwell,mydaughter:Likeacompassneedlethatpointsnorth,

aman’saccusingfingeralwaysfindsawoman.

Always.Yourememberthat,Mariam.”

娜娜要女兒瑪麗亞姆記得男人永遠不會對女人滿意，男人總是責怪女人aman’saccusingfingeralwaysfindsawoman。而且要求她女兒：Always.Yourememberthat,Mariam.這也為瑪麗亞姆之后不幸的婚姻生活做了鋪墊。她丈夫Rasheed對她的還不僅僅是責怪，而是虐待。娜娜的教育也造就了之后瑪麗亞姆的忍耐與屈從。7“And,believeme,”Nanasaid,“itwasarelieftoyourfatherhavingmeoutofsight.

Itsuitedhimjustfine.”這段話表明娜娜對于丈夫已經(jīng)不抱幻想。她已經(jīng)徹底領(lǐng)教了社會的殘酷，丈夫的無情。所以她才會說：believeme，itwasarelieftoyourfatherhavingmeoutofsight...多么痛的領(lǐng)悟。細膩的表情與情緒描寫10句1WhenNanasawthebowl,

herface

flushedred

and

herupperlip

shivered,and

hereyes,boththelazyoneandthegood,settledonMariam

inaflat,unblinking

way.

看到碗的反應，神態(tài)。寫作技巧：作者從臉，嘴唇、眼睛等各個方面進行描述。herface：flushedred

herupperlip：shiveredhereyes：

settledonMariam

inaflat,unblinking

way.flush

[fl??]：Whenmygirlfriendfeelsembarrassed,herfaceflushedtomatored.

當我的女朋友感到難堪的時候，她的臉就變得通紅。拓展學習：aflushofanger/embarrassment/excitementetcasuddenfeelingofanger,embarrassmentetc=surgeShefeltasuddenflushofanger.flush

同義詞:

blush

chase

color

even

flat

full

level

redden

rush

pale2Butlater,whenhebroachedNana,she

droppedtheknife

withwhichshewasslicing(切片)onions.“Whatfor?”

用具體動作droppedtheknife，刀子掉了，表示驚訝。拓展學習：drop

同義詞:

abandon

cease

descend

dismiss

dive

end

fall

giveup

letgo

plunge

stop常用詞組dropacross

偶然遇見dropaway

(一個一個地)離開,散去dropbehind

落伍,落后,落在...之后dropby

[美]順便訪問一下droponsb.

順便走訪(某人);順便進去dropinto

1.跌入,落入2.偶然進入(某地)3.不知不覺地進入(某種狀態(tài))dropupon

偶然遇到;偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)dropout

退出,(中、小學生)中途退學,脫離dropthrough

落空;毫無結(jié)果;不再被討論;徹底失敗dropto

下降到;跌到3She

kepthergazetotheground,onherfeet,

stepping

onthegraystonepath.Shewasawareofthepresenceofpeopleinthegarden,

murmuring,

stepping

aside,assheandJalilwalkedpast.She

sensedtheweightofeyeson

her,

lookingdown

fromthewindowsupstairs.描述Mariam

到Jalil家沉重的心情。她的目光：盯著地面，然后移到她的腳，踩在灰色的石板路上。

She

kepthergazetotheground,onherfeet,

stepping

onthegraystonepath.這句話將她這種緊張不自在都體現(xiàn)出來了。她的感覺：她感覺到大家都看著她sensedtheweightofeyeson

her，反映出瑪麗雅姆是個敏感的女孩，第六感告訴她，人們關(guān)注她，而且不太友好。文中多處使用分詞murmuring,

stepping，lookingdown，語言簡潔有力。4Whenshesawherfriendatthedoor,hiswhitebeardandhisamiable,

toothlesssmile,Mariam

felttearsstingingthecornersofhereyesagain.

哭的細節(jié)描寫：

felttearsstingingthecornersofhereyesagain(文章中多次出現(xiàn)toothlesssmile來描述老師的外貌，是累贅嗎？為何這么寫？用重復的手法強化老師的特定形象，一個人因為關(guān)愛，因為美德，即使外表不好看，在我們的心里，他再丑都是美，都是他獨有的特點)

5“Ikeep,”Mariambegan.Shehadtostop,

feelinglikearockhadlodgeditselfinherthroat.“IkeepthinkingofwhatshesaidtomebeforeIleft.She—”表示難過的細節(jié)描寫：feelinglikearockhadlodgeditselfinherthroat感覺就像一塊石頭落在她的喉嚨里，表明她難過的心情。6

Mariam’schestwastightening.Theroom

wasreelingupanddown,theground

shiftingbeneathherfeet.聽到消息后，Mariam的反應Mariam’schestwastightening，而且連房間也

reelingupanddown上下?lián)u搖欲墜，地面

shiftingbeneathherfeet在腳下移動，

很形象地表明她的震驚與不能接受。7He

shook

thericeangrilyfromhisfingersandpushed

theplateaway,spillingsauceandriceonthesofrah.

Mariamwatchedashe

stormedoutof

thelivingroom,thenoutofthehouse,

slamming

thedooron

hiswayout.表達生氣的細節(jié)描寫：shook，pushed

theplateaway，stormedout，slamming

thedoor一連串的動作表示了瑪麗雅姆丈夫的生氣情緒。8“What’sthematter?”Mariamasked,

hatingtheapologetictoneofhervoice.Shecould

feelherpulsequickening,herskinshrinking.瑪麗雅姆問的時候，憎恨自己抱歉的口氣hatingtheapologetictoneofhervoice。她是個善良的女人，可在那樣的社會她無奈無助。她的生活是依附與她丈夫的。而且她已經(jīng)害怕她丈夫這種粗暴的行為，卻無能為力。她的脈搏加快，皮膚起皺Shec