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wearing

a

bikini就行了，這就是后置定語，很簡(jiǎn)單吧

語法的問題不也解決了嗎，接下來就教大家一些細(xì)節(jié)地方上的技巧，首先因?yàn)槭裁丛趺凑f?because

絕大多數(shù)人都用這個(gè)單詞，教大家一個(gè)很絕的用法，逗號(hào)+for

就可以代替because！舉個(gè)例子，我總聽李孝利的歌，因?yàn)槲蚁矚g李孝利：I

often

hear

the

songs

of

李孝利，for

i

love

her

中間的逗號(hào)+for就相當(dāng)于because，同樣，掌握這個(gè)用法的同學(xué)不多！

:

可以引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句：for表現(xiàn)的因果關(guān)系不像because那樣強(qiáng)烈，它引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句并不說明主句行為發(fā)生的直接原因，

只提供一些輔：

He

could

not

have

seen

me,

for

I

was

not

there.

他不可能見過我，

因?yàn)槲也辉谀抢铩?/p>

倆不完全相同的

:

瞎，for和because用法有些不同啊，上次用就被打錯(cuò)了

:

a

girl

in

bikini

,for

=

because

?

從沒聽說過。

俺在美國(guó)6年了。

盡管怎么說？土人們although，而牛人用In

spite

of

舉個(gè)例子，盡管你是女生你也不能欺負(fù)我！In

spite

of

the

fact

that

you

are

女生，you

can't

欺負(fù)

me！

時(shí)間狀語大家掌握的都不錯(cuò)吧，一看到她媽媽，小女生一下就哭了，用when就是土人！直接寫seeing

her

mother，zhe

girl

cried

還有首先是first吧，以后大家可以寫first

and

foremost，和first一個(gè)意思，但看上去牛X的多，另外，用到這個(gè)用法時(shí)還可以用到一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的插入結(jié)構(gòu)

主語，first

and

foremost，謂語這就是一個(gè)插入結(jié)構(gòu)，我在前面還講了一個(gè)however吧，這個(gè)單詞放到句子中是沒什么意義的，就是為了裝酷！同樣可以用到這：主語，however，謂語插入結(jié)構(gòu)！

:

zhe

girl

cried

the

:

插入結(jié)構(gòu)樓主能不能舉個(gè)具體的句子例子

:

zhe

girl

cried

是the吧

:

非謂語。。新東方的老師說這是重點(diǎn)拉風(fēng)語法啊

:

in

pite

of

，初二就有的東西也會(huì)拉風(fēng)

都希望寫下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說：

Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.

如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：

Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.

其它的短語可以用：

besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover

:

其實(shí)句子如果可以簡(jiǎn)短一點(diǎn)出錯(cuò)的幾率就小點(diǎn)...

像這句"not

only

the

fur......"

直接寫"The

fur

coat

is

soft

and

warm."就行了

:他就是想麻煩，然后老師給高分

:只怕多寫多錯(cuò)

都希望寫下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說：

Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.

如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：

Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.

其它的短語可以用：

besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover

批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題，再說缺點(diǎn)，這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn)，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來點(diǎn)廢話，注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了。

Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之類的形象詞。再比如：

走出房間，general的詞是：walkoutoftheroom

有一個(gè)句式說：“?for

the

simple

reason

that?”表示某種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么。然而，很多同學(xué)一談到原因仍然是“?because?”如果要表示“總是能夠”的概念，很多同學(xué)提筆就會(huì)寫can

always，但理想的句子應(yīng)該是用雙重否定表示強(qiáng)烈的肯定，用never

fail

to。

注意英語中一些表達(dá)上的習(xí)慣。比如在正式文體的寫作中，很少用

“it

isn’t”這樣的略縮形式，而是

“it

is

not”。同理，在正式文體中的日期一般不縮寫，阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字一般會(huì)用英文表達(dá)(特別長(zhǎng)的數(shù)字除外)。

許多同學(xué)在寫作文時(shí)，習(xí)慣于把

“since”

“because”

“for”這樣的詞放在句首引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。事實(shí)上，在我們見到的英語報(bào)刊雜志文章中，這樣的從句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外,

“and”也常常被誤放在一句話的開頭，表示兩個(gè)句子之間的并列或遞進(jìn)關(guān)系。其實(shí)，經(jīng)常留心地道的英語文章能發(fā)現(xiàn)，如果是并列關(guān)系，完全可以不用連詞；如果是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，用

“furthermore”

“what

is

more”更為普遍

According

to（根據(jù)）

??題目大意??I

believe

that（我認(rèn)為）

??你的觀點(diǎn)

2.

As

far

as

we

know（我們都知道）??題目大意??from

my

point

of

view

(我認(rèn)為)??你的觀點(diǎn)First

（首先）??second（其次）??at

last

(最后)??

First

（首先）??and

then

(然后)??in

conclusion（最后，總之）

As

far

as

we

know（我們都知道）??moreover（而且，此外）??

specially（特

別是）??inconclusion（最后，總之）表并列：

similarly同樣的

/

in

the

same

way

以同樣的方式

表轉(zhuǎn)折：however/but

但是

表對(duì)比：not

that

?but

that?不是?而是?/

one

hand?.on

the

other

hand一方面?另一

方面?/

unlike?與?不同/not

so

much?.as?與其?不如?

表目的：for

the???.為了?

表因果：therefore因此，所有/

so

所以

表例證：for

example

例如

表假設(shè)：if

如果

表讓步：although?雖然??（注意：后不可接but！雖然但是不可這樣連用）/of

course

當(dāng)然?/clearly?顯然?

all

in

all（總的來說）??

by

and

large

（總的來說）??

+in

my

opinion（我認(rèn)為）??

no

matter

how（不管怎樣）??

on

the

whole（總的來說）

回復(fù)299樓！如果基礎(chǔ)實(shí)在是太爛，原來只得個(gè)位數(shù)字的分?jǐn)?shù)，有一個(gè)好辦法最少能得13—14分。你只要做到如下兩點(diǎn)：1、卷面：寫好你的每一個(gè)單詞，先在費(fèi)紙上打草稿，然后往答題紙上抄，抄的過程要字大（字母寫的圓一點(diǎn)，不要斜著）行稀，并且上下對(duì)應(yīng)工整，每行的單詞數(shù)量固定，就像是在稿紙上那樣對(duì)應(yīng)，每一行八九個(gè)單詞就恰到好處，然后把答題紙上的所有行都寫滿，最多空一行?。ㄒ?yàn)槔蠋熍芯碜硬粫?huì)數(shù)單詞數(shù)量的，老師認(rèn)為你只要把所有空白地方寫滿就算單詞夠了，不然你寫的密密麻麻，寫的再多也算不夠數(shù)量）2為了避免語法錯(cuò)誤還有不會(huì)寫單詞，全部用簡(jiǎn)單句，一句話一句話的寫，但要注意加幾個(gè)短語，句中加幾個(gè)Althouth.舉例用for

example最后一段開頭用In

a

word總結(jié)等等?加幾個(gè)短語就能提2～3分！以上內(nèi)容只適合英語作文個(gè)位數(shù)的同鞋

相關(guān)過渡語

1).

表示時(shí)間順序:

first,

then,

afterwards,

meanwhile,

later，first

of

all,

finally,

at

last?

2).

表示空間順序:

near,

next

to,

far

from,

in

front

of,

on

the

left,

on

one

side?

3).

表示比較、對(duì)照:

like,

unlike,

such

as,

but,

however,

on

the

other

hand,

on

the

contrary,

nevertheless,

otherwise?

4).

表示因果關(guān)系:

because,

for,

as

a

result,

therefore,

thus?

5).

表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系:

besides,

what’s

more,

what

was

worse,

moreover,

furthermore,

in

addition,

on

top

of?

6).

表示并列關(guān)系:

and,

as

well

as,

also?

7).

表示總結(jié)性:

in

general,

in

a

word,

in

short,

on

the

whole,

to

sum

up,

in

brief,

to

conclude

接下來是替換篇，讓一些常用的單詞換種酷形式！牛人都必會(huì)的，堅(jiān)決不做土人！

1．occur

替換

think

of

Suddenly

I

had

an

idea

that

someone

had

broken

into

my

house.

→

An

idea

occurred

to

me

that

someone

had

broken

into

my

house.

It

occurred

to

me

that

someone

had

broken

into

my

house.

2．devote替換spend

He

spends

all

his

spare

time

in

reading.

→

He

devotes

all

his

spare

time

to

reading.

3．seek替換want

/

look

for

They

sought

(

wanted

)

to

hide

themselves

behind

the

trees.

4．a(chǎn)verage

替換ordinary

I’m

an

average

(

ordinary

)

student.

5．but替換very

The

film

we

saw

last

night

was

very

interesting.

→

The

film

we

saw

last

night

was

nothing

but

interesting.

The

film

we

saw

last

night

was

anything

but

boring.

6．seat

替換sit

On

his

way

to

school,

he

found

an

old

lady

seated

(sitting)

by

the

road,

looking

worried.

7．suppose

替換should

He

is

supposed

to

(

should

)

have

driven

more

slowly.

8．a(chǎn)ppreciate

替換thank

Thank

you

very

much

for

you

help.

→

We

appreciate

your

help

very

much.

/

Your

help

is

much

appreciated.

9．the

case替換

true

I

don’t

think

it

is

the

case

(

true

).

10．on替換as

soon

as

As

soon

as

he

arrived,

he

began

his

research.

→

On

his

arrival,

he

began

his

research..

11．due

to替換because

of

He

arrived

late

due

to

(

because

of

)

the

storm.

12．cover替換walk/read

After

covering

(walking)

10

miles,

we

all

felt

tired.

13．contribute

to替換

be

helpful/useful

Plenty

of

memory

work

is

undoubtedly

helpful

to

English

study.

→

Plenty

of

memory

work

will

undoubtedly

contribute

to

English

study.

14．round

the

corner

替換

coming

soon/

nearby

①

The

summer

vacation

is

round

the

corner

(

coming).

Do

you

have

any

plans?

②

Li

Ming

studies

in

a

school

round

the

corner

(nearby).

15．come

to

light替換discover

The

family

were

so

pleased

when

they

discovered

the

lost

jewels.

→

The

family

were

so

pleased

when

the

lost

jewels

came

to

light.

16．have

a

ball替換have

a

good

time/

enjoy

oneself

After

visiting

the

workshop,

we

went

back

to

school.

Every

one

of

us

had

a

ball

(

had

a

good

time

).

17．come

up

with替換think

of

Jack

is

very

clever.

He

often

comes

up

with

(

thinks

of

)

new

ideas.

18．set

aside替換save

Some

students

think

that

they

should

set

aside

some

of

their

pocket

money

for

books.

(2004天津卷)

19．be

of

+

n.

替換adj.

The

products

are

of

high

quality

(very

good

)

and

are

sold

everywhere

in

China.

20．refer

to

替換talk

about/of,

mention

The

professor

you

referred

to

(talked

about

)

is

very

famous.

21．can

not

but

/

can

not

help

but替換have

to

do

I

could

not

but

(had

to)

go

home.

22．more

often

than

not替換usually

More

often

than

not

(Usually),

the

meaning

of

many

words

can

be

easily

guessed.

23．lest替換so

that

/in

order

that

I

wrote

down

his

telephone

number

so

that

I

would

not

forget

it.

→

I

wrote

down

his

telephone

number

lest

I

(should)

forget

it.

24．be

long

for

sth.

/

be

long

to

do

sth.

替換want

to

do

sth./wish

for

I

want

to

see

you

very

much.

→

I

am

long

to

see

you.

25．be

caught

up

in/be

crazy

about/be

absorbed

in/be

addicted

to替換be

interested

in

He

is

caught

up

in

(

very

interested

in

)

collecting

stamps

26．more

than替換very

①

I’m

very

glad

to

learn

that

you

are

coming

in

September.

→

I’m

more

than

glad

to

learn

that

you

are

coming

in

September.

②

If

there

is

anything

I

can

do

for

you,

I

would

be

more

than

glad

to

help

27．perfect

(ly)

替換good/

very

well

He

speaks

perfect

(

good

)

English./

He

speaks

English

perfectly

(

very

well

).

28．do

sb

a/the

favor

替換help

Would

you

please

do

me

the

favor

(

help

me

)

to

turn

down

the

radio?

29．the

other

day替換a

few

days

ago

The

other

day

my

brother

and

I

went

to

the

cinema

by

bicycle.

30．in

the

course

of替換during

In

the

course

of

(During)

the

mountain-climbing,

please

help

each

other

and

pay

special

attention

to

your

safety.

31．the

majority

of替換most

32．consist

of替換be

made

up

o