浙江高考英語應(yīng)用文試題解析

2020年1月浙江高考英語應(yīng)用文試題解析01PartOne試題解讀思路點撥謀篇布局之開頭本題為熟人（朋友）之間的信件，故無需做自我介紹點明身份。從簡明的角度出發(fā)，建議開頭段開門見山提出邀請。思考：I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechCompetitioninourschool.WhydoyouinviteGeorge?KnowingthatyouarequitefluentandexpertinMandarin,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechContest.Tip1:

次要點——George的優(yōu)勢（邀請George的原因）可以用非謂語做原因狀語的形式表現(xiàn)出來。謀篇布局之中段邀請信內(nèi)容時間(必備)報名方式（必備）獎項設(shè)置到某處報名或填寫報名表送到某處(郵箱或辦公室),需寫上截止時間。具體到某月某日或周幾的早中晚的某一時刻。參賽優(yōu)勢地點（必備）評委話題（必備）學(xué)校里適合大型集會的場所，如報告廳、禮堂、劇場等。中文演講賽，話題最好體現(xiàn)中國元素，如：我最喜愛的中國文化元素或我眼中的中國等?？蛇m當舉例說明話題的涵蓋面?？蓮呐d趣、性格、特長等角度出發(fā)，適當描述?？蛇m當描述獎項、獎品設(shè)置為體現(xiàn)比賽的規(guī)格和權(quán)威性，可適當列舉評委陣容。謀篇布局之中段主要點的表達：1.時間、地點、話題ThetimeforthecontestisJanurary17thanditwillbeheldinthelecturehall.Thethemeforitis“MyFirstimpressiononChina”.Onthethemeof“FirstimpressiononChina”,thecompetitionisscheduledtobelaunchedintheschoolauditoriumat6p.m.onJanuary17th.Tip2:

以competition為主線，將時間、地點作為主要信息組成主句，將話題以介詞短語的形式表現(xiàn)出來。這個并列句中主、謂語均不一致，缺乏一貫而終的主線，句子只是“貌合神離”。主-系-表結(jié)構(gòu)的簡單句給人以“回答問題”的感覺，缺乏情感。Howtocombinetheinformation?謀篇布局之中段主要點的表達：2.報名方式Ifyouareinterested,pleasefeelfreetosignupforitbyEmail.Tip3:根據(jù)過往經(jīng)歷和生活經(jīng)驗，從讀者視角出發(fā)，適當增加必要的細節(jié)。如果George害怕失敗而不敢參賽，你將如何鼓勵他？

Yourabundantexperienceandoutstandingpresentationskillswillallowyoutowinoutinthecontest.郵件的具體地址是什么？報名的截止時間是什么？表明George的參賽優(yōu)勢和獲獎可能，增強他參賽的信心和勇氣。Soifyou’reinterested,pleasesignupforitontheschoolwebsite(fileyourapplicationviaChinesecontest@)beforeJanuary15th.謀篇布局之結(jié)尾本題屬于朋友間建議性質(zhì)的邀請，故無需要求對方回復(fù)。為彰顯誠意，可在結(jié)尾段表明期待參加，并可提前預(yù)祝對方取得好成績。常用句式：Yourpresenceishighlyanticipated.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.這封信是否需要回復(fù)？朋友之間需要如此客套嗎？Lookingforwardtoyourinvolvement.Wishyouagreatsuccess!Tip4:遣詞造句應(yīng)從適切性角度出發(fā)，根據(jù)與寫信對象的親疏程度選擇與之相適應(yīng)的語言，切忌生搬硬套模板句。02PartTwo下水作文賞析DearGeorge,KnowingthatyouarequitefluentandexpertinMandarin(普通話),I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechContesttobeheld.

Onthethemeof“FirstimpressiononChina”,thecompetitionisscheduledtobelaunchedintheschoolauditorium

onJanuary17that6p.m.Undoubtedly,yourabundantexperienceandoutstandingpresentationskillswillallowyoutowinoutinthecontest.Soifyou’reinterested,pleasesignupforitontheschoolwebsitebeforeJanuary15th. Lookingforwardtoyourinvolvement.Wishyouagreatsuccess!Yours,LiHua(90words)KeenFaithfulConcise03PartThree備考資源同體裁同話題備考資源DearJack,IamLiHua.OnbehalfofStudentUnion,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeoftheEnglishSpeechContesttobeheldnextFridayinourauditorium/schoolhall.

Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlastabouttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeechesonthegiventopic“Doingthingsrightordoingrightthings”.Withyourattendanceandpreciouscomments,itisboundtobeagreatsuccess.

Itcouldn'tbebetterifyoucouldofferussomevaluableadviceonlearningEnglishattheendoftheactivity.

Yourattendanceisgreatlyexpected.Pleaseinformyourpresenceatyourearliestconvenience.