大學英語四六級寫作強化

四六級寫作內容篇題材現(xiàn)實性

四六級寫作的題材具有顯著的現(xiàn)實性，基本可以分為兩大類：

1.貼近大學生的學習工作及課余生活的校園題材

2.論及當前社會的現(xiàn)象、發(fā)展變化及進步的熱點話題。

1.RecreationalActivities(2008.6)2.WhatElectivestoChoose(2007.12)3.WelcometoOurClub(2007.6)4.VolunteersNeeded(2006.6)5.ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourist?(2005.12)6.Teachers’Day(2005.6)7.ACampaignSpeech(2005.1)8.ABriefIntroductiontoaTouristAttraction(2004.6)9.ALetterinReplytoaFriend(2004.1)

校園題材

關于此類題材的近五年的真題作文列舉如下：1.LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags(2008.12)2.SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV(2006.12)--3HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?（2010）1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切

2.為了讓孩子獨立,父母應該……--4OnlineShopping(2011.06)

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【優(yōu)化】Liesnotonlydoharmtothosewhoarebeingtoldlies,butalsodoharmtothosewhotellthem.

【例2】【例3】【原文】Usually,afactisdefinedasatruth.Thetruthcanbetestedbyobservationorexperimentation.

【優(yōu)化】Usually,afactisdefinedasatruth,somethingthatcanbetestedbyobservationorexperimentation.

【原文】Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.

【優(yōu)化】

Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresorttosmoking,thoughtheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.

【例4】【原文】WhenIturnedrightonthecorner,amotorbikeknockedintoasmallcar.Themotorbikewasred.Thereweretwopersonsonthemotorbike.Thecarwasyellow.Themotorbikefelldown.Thetwopersonsonthemotorbikewereslightlyinjured.Thedrivercameoutofthecaratonce,andaskedaboutthetwopersons’injuries.AssoonasIsawthat,Imadeatelephonecallto110.Thetrafficpolicearrivedinashorttime.

【優(yōu)化】WhenIturnedrightonthecorner,aredmotorbike

withtwopersonsknockedintoasmallyellowcar.Immediately,themotorbikefelldown,andthetwopersonsonthemotorbikewereslightlyinjured.Atthattime,thecardrivercameoutofthecar,andaskedaboutthetwopersons’injuries.Seeingthis,Idialedthe110.Inashorttime,thetrafficpolicearrived.

2.長句黑變短嘉句長句傲固然禾能表擴達出趨復雜埋而縝矛密的雁思想格，但咬如果腎片面雁追求鵝復雜勤句子帽，反以而會燃顯得題華而受不實集，成境為表侄達的總累贅提。寫創(chuàng)作中吵句子歡的長漸短應石根據(jù)宇表達鴉的需跌要而叉定。宋短句斜不僅扣指句拋子長達度較傳短，語也指直句子濃內部豆結構抵精煉驕，簡姥潔是之寫作神的一扣個重嚼要原槐則，敵用詞男累贅吼則是卡寫作派的大憂忌?！纠?】【原文】H齊is斑f吊at乞he蔥r,守w背ho株i貢s國a兼sa淋le來sm尖an句,州be障ca盾me說a豎m怠il得li堪on母ai擺re魔o雁ve剛rn它ig回ht箏.【優(yōu)化】H宗is茫f突at希he啞r,a共sa疼le怖sm班an,眼be掛ca米me納a救m誦il避li概on精ai踐re巧o等ve擇rn狀ig愉ht木.【例2】【原文】P陪er病ha疾ps惱t計he爐y幻玉ba灣si止ca羽ll翼y哨di槐st針ru隔st甘ed姓o捎ur傭c堅ap捉ac糟it爪y案to邪j蒸ud則ge扛c杠or衫re撓ct場ly血.【優(yōu)化】T或he代ydi貸st犯ru唱st洪ed逗o祥ur宴j鄉(xiāng)豐ud斧gm同en貫t.一、質將下抖面的隸長句泊和短洽句進啞行優(yōu)央化改泰寫，決使其敢更符隆合表敲達要誕求?！驹洹恳恪緝?yōu)化】Thecaptain,atall,thinmanwithabigmustache,waspacingthebridgewithalookofimportance.

Thegradingsystematourcollegeshouldbeabolished,becauseneitherthestudentsnortheinstructorslikeit.1.Thecaptainwasatall,thinmanwithabigmustache.Hewaspacingthebridgewithalookofimportance.

2.Thegradingsystematourcollegeshouldbeabolished.Thestudentsdon’tlikegettinggrades.Theinstructorsdon’tenjoygivinggrades.

【原文】享【優(yōu)化】Theseriousnessoftheproblemonthereservesofrawmaterialsshowsthatitisimportanttosetupaplantoconserveanddivideupfairlynaturalresourcesonaworldwidescale.Thosewhodon’tlikehavingroommatesarguethatseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantnessbecauseeverypersonhashisorherownway.5.Naturalresourcesareverylimited.Theywillbeexhaustedinthenearfuture.Itisnottrue.Butitbecomesamajorconcernaroundtheworld.Thisisawidelyacceptedfact.

4.Somestudentsdon’tlikehavingroommates.Theythinkeverypersonhashisorherownway.Andseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantness.

3.Theproblemofthereserveofrawmaterialsisbecomingmoreserious.Itshowsitisimportanttobeginaplan.Weshouldconserveanddivideupthenaturalresourcesonaworldwidescale.

Itisawidelyacceptedfactthatthereisamajorconcernaroundtheworldfortheexhaustionoflimitednaturalresourcesinthenearfuture,thoughitisunlikelytobetrue.二、劇請按很照所肉給提召示對解下面顛的作叨文進籍行句蜜式優(yōu)漆化【原文】【優(yōu)化】①Withthedeepeningofreformandopeningupofourcountry,studyingoverseasisbecominganincreasinglypopularoption.②Peoplewhochoosetofurthertheirstudiesabroadinsistthatiftheygotostudyoverseastheycangetmanybenefitsindifferentways.③First,whentheyliveinaforeigncountry,theycanimprovetheirforeignlanguageskills.④Second,iftheycompletepartoralloftheireducationoverseas,theycangainabroaderordifferentperspectiveontheirfieldofstudy.⑤Third,theycanexperienceadifferentculturefirst-hand.

【提示】將②中的賓語從句改為簡單句，將其中的條件狀語從句改為主語。將③中的時間狀語從句改為現(xiàn)在分詞短語。將④中的條件狀語從句改為主語，該句變?yōu)楹唵尉洹?/p>

【優(yōu)化】Withthedeepeningofreformandopeningupofourcountry,studyingoverseasisbecominganincreasinglypopularoption.Peoplewhochoosetofurthertheirstudiesabroadinsistthatoverseasstudycanbenefitthemindifferentways.First,livinginaforeigncountry,theycanimprovetheirforeignlanguagesskills.Second,completingpartoralloftheireducationoverseashelpsthemgainabroaderordifferentperspectiveontheirfieldofstudy.Third,theycanexperienceadifferentculturefirst-hand.

⑥However,therearestillmanypeoplewhofavorstudyingathome.⑦Theyarguethat,studyingabroadistooexpensiveandthereforedoesnotpayoffandhavenolanguageandculturalbarriers.

【提示】將⑦改成兩句，分別陳述兩個理由。⑧Asforme,Ibelievebothopinionsareacceptableinsomesense.⑨Ifstudentswhowishtohaveoverseasacademicexperiencehavegotthechancesandfinancialresources,theyshouldseizetheopportunitytogoabroadandbroadentheirvision,whileifconditionsdon’tpermitthemtogoabroad,theycanpursuetheirstudiesattopuniversitiesinourcountry.⑩Theplacewheretheystudyisnotveryimportantforthem,andinstead,itiswhattheycanlearnthatisthemostimportant.

【提示】將⑨改成兩句，分別陳述兩種不同的情況。通過not…but將⑩簡化成一個簡單句。【優(yōu)化】However,therearestillmanypeoplewhofavorstudyingathome.Theyarguethat,studyingabroadistooexpensiveandthereforedoesnotpayoff.What’smore,therearenolanguageandculturalbarrierswhenstudyinginourcountry.

【優(yōu)化】Asforme,Ibelievebothopinionsareacceptableinsomesense.Ifstudentswhowishtohaveoverseasacademicexperiencehavegotthechancesandfinancialresources,theyshouldseizetheopportunitytogoabroadandbroadentheirvision.Ontheotherhand,ifconditionsdon’tpermit,theycanpursuetheirstudiesattopuniversitiesinourcountry.Whatcountsisnottheplacewheretheystudy,butwhattheycanlearn.

主動狐句和秘被動疑句變頂換與漢娃語相央比，餐英語喉更注咳重動側作本悟身，活而不糊是動險作的垃執(zhí)行扛者，秤因此歌在英飯語中衡被動厭語態(tài)憲的使忌用相竭對多紡一些搜，但劑這并巨不表鞭明要釣一味鄙地追獎求被謠動語秀態(tài)的延使用鴿。主動謎變被窄動1）不厭需要才體現(xiàn)翠動作足的執(zhí)恥行者【原文】We系s饑ho虛ul詞d漢pa連y織mo示re努a床tt餃en烈ti無on白t蛛o章th菜e辯el練de裙rl擁y母wh因o張ha克d纖de馳vo耽te役d老th希ei蛙r秋yo誕ut筒h踩an虛d尺en乏er林gy課t蓄o偉ou蘇r異co太un賓tr獲y.【優(yōu)化】Mo爽re徐a言tt哪en抽ti傅on選s偶ho冬ul帝d之be鬼p咸ai懂d口toth誼e辱el盟de白rl作y挖wh巖o防ha蓮d愿de睡vo優(yōu)te碗d脖th閣ei魔r群yo徐ut角h主an聯(lián)d呆en灶er跌gy狼t梳o搬ou懶r谷co芹un報tr朵y.2）需趨要強春調動滋作的隊承受奴者【原文】Th辱e隨em任pl哪oy綿ee吵s堪el杜ec待te屆d作Mr警.惰Li遣c雖ha妹ir駐ma語n據(jù)of怒t仁he拳c租om捕mi嗽tt頁ee慚l鞠as量t揮we惱ek靈.【優(yōu)化】Mr果.殿Li勞w汽as膊e年le嫂ct伴edch英ai集rm沸an嘗o仙f僵th棍e觸co張mm管it釘te池e妖by糧t期he猶e水mp虧lo脖ye菜es屬l磨as始t牲we督ek鳳.3）保胡持陳抖述對傷象的惱一致愛，以胃求行傳文通神順【原文】Wh宣en霧t臺he忠P千ri紅me糠M姻in上is典te施r貝ar蠅ri座ve滲d形at團t刊he綿a切ir棋po悼rt液,損hu蟲nd辭re映ds攝o斷f憶re好po江rt蕉er毒s膨su算rr城ou遮nd圖ed僑h銷im圖i千mm民ed稼ia哨te妹ly結.【優(yōu)化】Wh刃en碌t適he枯P添ri怒me賴M接in掀is霞te五r疤ar之ri咬ve鈴d豆at牌t城he醉a守ir貞po拔rt糊,he惹w暫asim余me柜di穿at桿el耽ysu敬rr餃ou扎nd炒edby鳥h怒un憐dr零ed狹s元of泰r梨ep堡or捉te釣rs京.2.被動愿變主哈動1）需刮要體渾現(xiàn)動童作的正執(zhí)行劣者【原文】If事y碗ou穩(wěn)a墳re魯f吳ri簽en描dl四y偶to隱o久th盡er蠶s,紀y冤ou蝴w擴il坦l喇be盟h歸el津d療ho爬sp并it腔ab向le含a暫tt副it韻ud蝦e啞to草wa盯rd眼s委by詳t贊he團m狹an膨d經vi要ce果v旋er五sa寄.【優(yōu)化】If以y鍛ou棋a嚴re岔f定ri菜en塊dl買y姓to愈o健th靠er錄s,僅the晝y濾wi誘ll轉h深ol濟d賊ho秩sp揭it領ab職le街a書tt咸it鏈ud巡壽eto炮wa畝rd吃s臭yo鳥u銳an攻d承vi段ce劃v甚er量sa灰.2）保柜持陳禽述對領象的馳一致道，以類求行討文通訓順【原文】On決e基ve錯ry普i詢mp溜or鵲ta芬nt世q配ua靜li搏ty誦d甘ev轎el斧op狐ed石b版y徒ma裂ny賀i防nd完iv衡id昨ua頂ls寄d性ur輪in輪g陸a喘fi澡rs思t弊jo振b妖is秘s曾el銷f-運re劇li斬an祖ce統(tǒng).秩Th踏is苗q啊ua辭li甚ty秒w憶as很c徒ul牲ti破va攝te翠d晉by討m等e您wh時en鉗I鳳w素as翅a屑ll程ow叨ed柱b舉y傲my惡s鋸up編er淹vi寶so蓄r敗to刷s銳et砌u滿p鵝an梁d蝦co塌nd駛uc衡t茫my誼o崗wn雪s夜ur槽ve寫y熔pr貿oj月ec乖t.【優(yōu)化】Du姥ri秘ng此t鑼he赴ir露f飼ir軌st烘j威ob況,ma昨ny丈i鉗nd歪iv之id崇ua聾ls怕d疲ev沾el寺opth逝ei埋r溪ve俊ry辯i骨mp顯or榨ta頁nt化q露ua皂li移ty濤o摩f全se語lf核-r牌el奔ia苗nc忍e.移Icu紹lt畢iv菊at敘edth榮is便q汪ua愧li迷ty耳w參he離nmy喬s販up沙er供vi搬so擦r留al畏lo龍we指dme傭t垂o把se流t陜up挖a匹nd肌c女on靈du在ct露m點y誼ow貞n最su后rv偵ey腰p金ro疾je擦ct第.專項凍訓練一、秘要求：請觸將下嚷面句漁子中雕語態(tài)里使用雜不當獸的地助方進哨行優(yōu)欠化改列寫，皇使其姻更符益合表礙達需炊要?！驹摹俊緝?yōu)化】

1.Weknowthatsmokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.2.Weshouldadvisepeopletoprotecttheirowninterestsandnottobeledastraybyfalseadvertisements3.Nowadays,publicplacesandadvertisementsofanykindforbidsmoking.2.Peopleshouldbeadvisedtoprotecttheirowninterestsandnottobeledastraybyfalseadvertisements.

3.Nowadays,smokingisforbiddeninpublicplacesandadvertisementsofanykind.

1.Itisalmostknownthatsmokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.

4.Computersmayhelpscientistsinanalyzingdataanddoingcomplexcalculation,whileengineersmakeuseofsomecomputersindesigningaplane,oraspaceship.

5.Thoseinfavorofuniversitymarriagearguethatweshouldgivecollegestudentstherighttogetmarriedsincetheyareadults.

4.Computersmayhelpscientistinanalyzingdataanddoingcomplexcalculation,whilesomecomputersaremadeuseofbyengineersindesigningaplane,oraspaceship.

5.Thoseinfavorofuniversitymarriagearguethatcollegestudentsshouldbegiventherighttogetmarriedsincetheyareadults.

非謂抗語和換從句蠅變換非謂租語動暫詞包勻括不袍定式爹、動壟名詞繳、現(xiàn)夫在分駱詞和火過去越分詞標。【例1】【原文】Wh藍en倆I別l火oo甩k躲in蔑to供t寄he斥f旁ut灑ur衡e,的I思w耳il宇l貨tr脆y守my同b渴es犧t嫩to輝s揀er熄ve裁m輔y并fe閉ll壇ow堆s貓tu猶de血nt型s勇if甩I割a龜m酒lu者ck轎y筒en字ou挎gh驗t珍o童be臨P牢re沫si幕de悼nt扎o籌f驅th伯e聯(lián)St槽ud當en談t趕Un璃io經n.【優(yōu)化】Lo淹ok渠in恢g駐in飼to址t山he翅f撲ut膨ur塵e,I遵wi百ll回t偵ry道m(xù)眨y象be辨st蹲t霧o度se聽rv巡壽e字my館f動el模lo施w規(guī)st各ud貧en黨ts枯i融f剩I盾am弓l排uc襯ky暗e零no城ug揮h藥to長b柏e暮Pr峰es綱id膛en寶t絕of地t隆he仔S挑tu或de饒nt竟U運ni櫻on吃.【例2】【原文】In彎1模83鑼6,糊t客he佳re輛a貼ro艦se象t孟he爪w姑or豎ki栗ng牌-c傾la丟ss撇m缸ov遣em皆en吐t野wh梢ic刃h居is房誠k懷no執(zhí)wn衣a家s棟Ch眾ar技ti悅sm秀,彎wh悄ic誓h生wa蔬s水th景e肯fi謎rs飛t往pr芬ol廊et燭ar牲ia慈n蹦re街vo月lu裁ti冰on刪ar叛y撞mo汪ve收me俊nt屋.【優(yōu)化】in我1勒83掠6,槳t感he糠re悠a袋ro范se勻t絕he判w辨or纖ki住ng它-c眾la邁ss嗚m藥ov陡em格en聲tkn擠ow最n府as盼C調ha輕rt痕is鑼m,wh光ic垂h敏wa盤s柿th尸e唉fi姑rs觸t飾pr壩ol嚷et看ar著ia魄n顫re細vo潮lu劫ti