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【2023年】吉林省白城市大學(xué)英語6級大學(xué)英語六級模擬考試(含答案)學(xué)校:________班級:________姓名:________考號:________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicABoominContinuingEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.圖表所示為某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年參加成人教育(或繼續(xù)教育)的人數(shù)情況,請描述其變化

2.請說明產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因(可從社會發(fā)展及競爭能力方面加以說明)

3.請預(yù)測我國成人教育(或繼續(xù)教育)的前景

ABoominContinuingEducation

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTestforNationalCivilServants.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.近幾年興起了一股國家公務(wù)員考試(TestforNationalCivilServants)熱

2.產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我的看法

TestforNationalCivilServants

3.1.目前社會上存在著迷信文憑的現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對此的觀點(diǎn)

IsaDiplomaEverything?

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteaninquirylettertoafriend.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

假設(shè)你有一位居住在美國紐約的好友(DavidJohnson)。你寫信告訴他你已被錄取為紐約大學(xué)的研究生,即將在今年9月赴美學(xué)習(xí),向他詢問有關(guān)事宜。信件內(nèi)容要求如下:

1.問候朋友并告知自己的好消息

2.詢問關(guān)于在紐約留學(xué)的生活情況,如能否在學(xué)校附近找到住處,以及朋友有何生活上的建議等

3.希望他早日回信,并盼望在不久的將來能和他在紐約見面

AnInquiryLettertoaFriend

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicClassSkippinginColleges.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.目前大學(xué)生逃課現(xiàn)象很普遍

2.分析大學(xué)生逃課的原因

3.你對這一現(xiàn)象的看法

ClassSkippinginColleges

6.CollegeReadingRoomPhenomenon

1.描述圖表中的兩個(gè)循環(huán)(cycle)所反映的問題

2.分析引起該變化的原因

3.你的結(jié)論

(Sept:newtermstarts,Jan:vacation,June:exams,July:vacation)

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.人類面臨的環(huán)境問題越來越多,如氣候變化、環(huán)境污染、生態(tài)失衡等問題

2.但許多人仍然不懂得去保護(hù)環(huán)境

3.我的看法

OntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicALettertoaSchoolmate.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是李明,你有一校友玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲成癮,請給他寫封信,勸告他戒掉這種游戲。

你的信應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:

1.你得知他玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲成癮的渠道及你的感受;

2.過分玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的危害;

3.你對他的建議或忠告。

AlettertoaSchoolmate

9.Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessaybasedonthefollowingnewsextractedfromanewspaper,commentingonwhathadhappenedandgivingyourownunderstandingofit.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandgiveyouressayanappropriatetitle.

"香港著名影、視、歌三棲明星張國榮四月一日從香港某高層數(shù)縱身跳下,自殺身亡......"——《新民晚報(bào)》

10.Forthispart,youarerequiredtowriteacompositionbasedonthefollowingoutlinegiveninChinese.Thesuggestedtitleis:PrivateSchoolsinChina.Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsforyourcomposition.

1.私立學(xué)校在中國的興起。

2.私立學(xué)校可能帶來的好處。

1)人才市場的需要;

2)培養(yǎng)一流人才;

3)提高全民族科學(xué)、教育水平。

3.更多的孩子會上私立學(xué)。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.ManyruralregionsinEurope,suchastheGreekvillageofPrastos,areplaguedwithenvironmentalhazardsasmoreandmorefieldslayunattended.

12.

Yaleiscomposedof______colleges.

13.

Sportsstadiumsnowbecomesasourceofnoisepollutionbecauseof______.

14.

Freudbelievedthatinchildhoodsomepeopleexperiencedeepfeelingstheyarcashamedofandthesefeelingsoftenfadeawayintotheunconsciousmind,butmayreturnindreamsinlaterlife.

A.YB.NC.NG

15.

Itisnecessarytomakefrequent______readingrateadjustment.

16.WhatdoestheauthorsayaboutthecrazeforAuto-TunewhichtrendyCherstarted?

A.Itfadedsoon.

B.Itlastedformanyyears.

C.Itmadeengineerslazy.

D.Itharmedpeople'screativity.

17.HowSATSWork

Testsareafactoflifethroughoutourschoolcareers,butoneofthemostimportant,and,tosome,thescariest,ofthemallistheSAT—thatthree-hourexamthat'ssupposedtomeasureahighschoolstudent'schanceofacademicsuccessinthefirstyearofcollege.SomecollegesconsiderSATscoresmajorfactorsintheiradmissionprocess,whileothersviewhighschoolacademicperformance,alongwithrecommendationsandextracurricularactivities,equally,orevenmoreimportantly.Nomatterwhereyou'reheaded,ifyou'reahighschoolstudent,theSATisimportanttoyoubecausemostcollegesrequirestudentstoreporteitherSATorACTAssessmentscores.

WhatIstheSAT?

Firstofall,SATnolongerstandsforScholasticAptitudeTest(學(xué)術(shù)性傾向測驗(yàn)),theoriginalnameofthetestwhenitwasintroducedin1941.Althoughyoumaystillseethatnameoccasionally,theCollegeBoard,thenot-for-profiteducationalassociationthatsponsorstheSATS,decidedtolettheacronymstandonitsownasawayofaddressingcontroversyaboutthemeaningoftheword"aptitude".TheCollegeBoardalsorejectedthealternative"ScholasticAssessmentTest".(Englishteachersprobablypointedoutthatthisnamewasredundant,sinceassessmentmeanstest.)

TheSATImeasuresverbalandmathreasoningabilitiesthatyou'vedevelopedthroughoutyourschoolyears.Themultiple-choicetest,developedbythenot-for-profitEducationalTestingService,isintendedtoletstudentsdemonstratetheirverbalandmathabilitieswithoutregardtothekindofschoolingthey'vehad.AccordingtotheCollegeBoard,thetestlooksforastudent'sabilitytounderstandandanalyzewrittenmaterial,todrawinferences,todifferentiateshadesofmeaning,todrawconclusionsandsolvemathproblems—allskillsthatarenecessaryforsuccessincollegeandtheworkworld.

TheAmericanCollegeTesting(ACT)Assessment,whichwasintroducedin1959,isanalternativetotheSATthatvirtuallyallcollegesanduniversitiesnowaccept.Developersofthetesttoutitforitscurriculum-basedquestions,sayingthattheirtestismoredirectlyrelatedtowhatisactuallytaughtinhighschool.

What'stheSATII?

ThenewerSATII:SubjectTests,formerlytheCollegeBoardAchievementTests,areintendedtomeasureastudent'sknowledgeofaparticularsubject,suchasEnglish(writingorliterature),historyandsocialsciences,mathematics(variouslevels),sciences,andlanguages(Chinese,French,German,modernHebrew,Italian,Japanese,Latin,Spanish,English).SomecollegesrequireoneormoreSATIItests,buteveniftheyaren'trequired,SATIItestsscorescanhelpyoupresentamorepersonalizedportfoliothatillustrateshowwellyouwouldfitataparticularschool.MostcollegesuseSATIIscoresnotforadmissionpurposesbutforprogramplacementandcounseling.SATIItestsaregivenonaslightlydifferentschedulefromtheSATI.Generally,SATIItestsarconehourlongandconsistofmultiplechoicequestions.Thereareexceptions.Forexample,theWritingTesthas40minutesofmultiple-choicequestionsanda20-minutewritingsample.

Todecidewhichsubjecttestshouldbetaken,first,,makealistofallthecollegesyou'reconsidering.ThenreviewtheircatalogsorwebsitestofindoutiftheyrequireSubjectTestscoresforadmissionand,ifso,whichones.Useyourlistofcollegesandtheiradmissionrequirementstohelpplanyourhighschoolcourseschedule.Forexample,acollegetowhichyouplantoapplymayrequirealanguageSubjectTestscoreormightexemptyoufromafirst-yearcourserequirementifyoudowellonalanguageSubjectTest.

Inaddition,theCollegeBoardwebsitecanbesearchedforinformationaboutSubjectTestrequirementsatspecificcolleges.

WhenIstheSATTaken?

General

A.measurewhetherastudent'sabilitycanbesuccessfulinthefirstyearofcollege

B.evaluatehighschools'educationqualitythroughoutthecountry

C.helpimprovetheeducationincollegethroughoutthecountry

D.measurehighschoolstudents'chanceofafruitfullife

18.

Theauthordoesanassessmentofallhigh-riskurbanareasintheU.S.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.

TheicetonguegrowingoutfromtheGreenlandcoastusedtorejectsaltbackintothewater,making______heavierandhelpingittosink.

20.

Whatthehistoriansdoin"UnsolvedHistory"islikedetective'swork,sotheirtheoriesarenotveryscientific.

A.YB.NC.NG

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.(35)

A.Two.B.Twenty-six.C.Twenty-eight.D.Thirty.

22.【B1】

23.(36)

A.Tobepatient

B.Tobepunctual.

C.Tebetolerant

D.Togettoanappointmentearlier.

24.(29)

A.Manknowswherethesocietyisgoing.

B.Peopledon'twelcometherapiddevelopmentofourmodernsociety.

C.Thespeakerisworriedaboutthefutureofourmodemsociety.

D.Mancandonothingabouttheproblemofpollution.

25.聽力原文:Weknowthenthatinthe,US,it'sthejobofCongresstoproposenewlaws,whichwecallbills,andperhapstomodifythesebillsandthenwriteonthem.ButevenifthebillispassedinCongress,itstilldoesn'tbecomealawuntilthePresidenthasachancetoreviewit,too.Andifit'snottothePresident'sliking,thebillcanbevetoedorkilledineitheroftwoways.Oneisbyavetomessage.ThePresidenthastendaystovetothebillbyreturningittoCongress,alongwiththemessageexplainingwhyit'sbeingrejected.ThiskeepsthebillfrombecomingalawunlessoverwhelmingmajoritiesofbothHousesofCongressvotetoover-rightthePresident'sveto.Sometimestheydothat.Often,lawmakerssimplyrevisethevetoedbillandpassitagain.Thistime,intheform.thePresidentislesslikelytoobjectto,andlesslikelytowanttoveto.TheotherwaythePresidentcankillabillisbypocketveto.Here'swhathappens.IfthePresidentdoesn'tsignthebillwithintendays,andCongressajournsduringthattime,thenthebillwillnotbecomelaw.NoticethatitisonlyattheendofanentiresessionofCongressthatthepocketvetocanbeused,notjustwheneverCongresstakesashorterbreak,say,forasummervacation.Afterapocketveto,thatparticularbillisdead.IfalawmakerinCongresswantstopushthematterintheirnextsession,they'llhavetostartalloverwithabrand-newversionofthebill.

(33)

A.HowthePresidentproposesnewlaws.

B.HowabillispassedbylawmakersinCongress.

C.HowthePresidentcanrejectaproposedlaw.

D.HowlawmakerscanforcethePresidenttosignabill.

26.

【B11】

27.聽力原文:M:Excuseme,IboughtthiswatchlastSaturday.It'ssupposedtobewaterproof,butitdoesn'tworknow.I'dlikemymoneyback.

W:Icompletelyunderstand,sir.Butusuallywedon'tgivemoneybackonreduceditems.Maybeyoucanspeaktothemanager.

Q:Whatdowelearnfromtheconversation?

(17)

A.ThemanboughtthewatchlastSunday.

B.Themanagercangivemoneybacktotheman.

C.Thewomanwillspeaktothemanageraboutthematter.

D.Thewaterproofwatchwasboughtintheperiodofpromotion.

28.聽力原文:W:Ican'tgetoverthewayyoutreatedmeatourowndinnertable.

M:Iwasirritatedatsomethingelse.IsaidIwassorry.Dowehavetogothroughallthatagain?

Q:Whathappenedtothewomantheotherday?

(19)

A.Shewashurtbytheman.

B.Shelosthertemper.

C.Shedidn'tspeaktoherhusband.

D.Shemissedthedinnerparty.

29.

【B2】

30.(31)

A.JohnAugustusRoeblingfellill.

B.Misfortunefellonthechiefengineer.

C.Thechiefengineerwasinshortofmoney.

D.WashingtonRoebfingmetwithanaccident.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.

Whatdoesthepassagesuggestmaybeagoodthing?

32.

【C3】

33.Amusselgripsahardsurfaceveryfirmlyto______.

A.sealitselffrombeingerodedbyseawater

B.producethewaterproofsuperglue

C.protectitselffrombeingblownawaybystrongwind

D.protectitselffrombeingthefoodofotheranimals

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.TherearegreatmanyreasonsforstudyingwhatphilosophersS1.______

havesaidinthepast.Oneisthatwecannotseparatethe

historyofphilosophyfromwhichofscience.PhilosophyisS2.______

largediscussionaboutmattersonwhichfewpeoplearequiteS3.______

certain,andthosefewholdoppositeopinions.Asknowledge

increases,philosophybudsoffthesciences.

Foranexample,intheancientworldandtheMiddleAgesS4.______

philosophersdiscussedmotion.AristotleandSt.ThomasAquinas

taughtthatamovingbodywouldslowdownuntilaforcewasconstantlyS5.______

appliedtoit.Theywerewrong.Itgoesonmovingunless

somethingslowsitdown.Buttheyhadgoodargumentsontheir

side,andifwestudythese,andtheexperimentswhichproved

themright,thiswillhelpustodistinguishtruthfromS6.______

falseinthescientificcontroversiesoftoday.WealsoseehowS7.______

differentphilosopherreflectsthesociallifeofhisday.PlatoandS8.______

Aristotle,intheslave-owningsocietyofancientGreece,thought

man'shigheststatewascontemplationratherthanactivity.Inthe

MiddleAgesSt.ThomasbelievedaregularfeudalsystemofnineS9.______

ranksofangels.HerbertSpencer,inthetimeoffreecompetition

betweencapitalists,foundthekeytoprogressinthesurvivaloftheS10.______

fittest.ThusMarxismisseentofitintoitsplaceasthephilosophy

fortheworkers,theonlyclasswithafuture.

【S1】

35.

【S8】

36.

【S9】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S7】

38.

【S8】

39.

【S6】

參考答案

1.ABoominContinuingEducationFromthegraphweknowthestatisticsoftheContinuingEducationparticipationandtheincreasingnumbersoftheparticipantsinXcity.In1989therewereonlythirtythousandpeopletABoominContinuingEducationFromthegraph,weknowthestatisticsoftheContinuingEducationparticipationandtheincreasingnumbersoftheparticipantsinXcity.In1989therewereonlythirtythousandpeoplet

2.TestforNationalCivilServantsNowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareattendingdifferentexamsorganizedbyauthorityorganizationstoacquiremoreskillsandqualifications.AmongthemthereisagrowingtrendtositfortTestforNationalCivilServantsNowadays,moreandmorepeopleareattendingdifferentexamsorganizedbyauthorityorganizationstoacquiremoreskillsandqualifications.Amongthem,thereisagrowingtrendtositfort

3.IsaDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcostsandothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehandpeoplebelieveahigherdiplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessfulcareersandrespectablepositions.Ontheotherhandthediplomapeopleholdisattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverythingforexampletofindajobtohaveadatewithagirl.Inmyopinionitisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportantbecauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.Howeveradiplomacannotproveeverythingnomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuousthesestillremainasquestions.IsaDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcosts,andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehand,peoplebelieveahigherdiplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuture,suchassuccessfulcareersandrespectablepositions.Ontheotherhand,thediplomapeopleholdisattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverything,forexample,tofindajob,tohaveadatewithagirl.Inmyopinion,itisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportant,becauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.However,adiplomacannotproveeverything,nomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuous,thesestillremainasquestions.解析:①由題目可知這是一篇分析型作文,需要運(yùn)用“描述現(xiàn)象——解釋原因—一提出解決辦法”的模式。本文按照要求可分成三部分,第一段簡單介紹目前社會存在的現(xiàn)象;第二段分析造成這一現(xiàn)象的具體原因,第三段闡述自己對該問題的看法。②在每段的論述中請注意句式的變化,如定語從句、讓步狀語從句等;注意銜接手段的使用,如however,asfor等。

4.AnInquiryLettertoaFriendDearDavid①Howareyouthesedays?IamwritingtotellyouthatIhavebeenenrolledinthegraduateprograminNewYorkUniversity.IamleavingthisSeptemberfortheUnitedStateAnInquiryLettertoaFriendDearDavid,①Howareyouthesedays?IamwritingtotellyouthatIhavebeenenrolledinthegraduateprograminNewYorkUniversity.IamleavingthisSeptemberfortheUnitedState解析:應(yīng)用文:書信煩亂。①審題及布局。這篇作文相對來說比較簡單,屬于信息咨詢類書信,同時(shí)屬于朋友間的通信往來,所以在語言和內(nèi)容上可以非正式一些。在完成書信格式的要求后,只要根據(jù)題目中給出的提綱來展開即可。②語言。本文是一篇非正式文體書信,所以語言要簡潔、清晰,更口語化,不需要使用過于生僻的詞匯。

5.ClassSkippinginCollegesClassskippingissomethingthatisalmostunimaginableforuswhenwewereinmiddleschoolandhighschool(1)butitbecomesausualphenomenonintoday'suniversities.What'sworsesomeoftheundergraduatesdonotthinkitis(2)atoskipclasses.(3)Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthephenomenon.(4)Firstuniversitystudentsarenotpreparedto(5)liveaself-disciplinedlifeandwhenthisiscompaniedbyaloosemanagementsystemofuniversitiesclassskippinginevitablyappearsandincreases.(4)Secondthesizeofsomeoftheuniversitycoursesistoobig:when(6)morethan100oreven200studentsarehavingonelecturetogethertheattendanceofallthestudentscannotpossiblybeaccuratelyrecorded.(4)Thirdsomeofthecollegestudentsmaynotfindthedirectionfortheirfuturedevelopment.(7)Inmyviewitisnotacceptabletoskipclasses(8)atourownwill(9)letalonetheimportanceofacademiclearningandskilltraining.Ifwecannotbearesponsibleindividualandchoosenottoobeytheruleswecannotmakeourselvesaneligiblecitizen.ClassSkippinginCollegesClassskippingissomethingthatisalmostunimaginableforuswhenwewereinmiddleschoolandhighschool,(1)butitbecomesausualphenomenonintoday'suniversities.What'sworse,someoftheundergraduatesdonotthinkitis(2)atoskipclasses.(3)Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthephenomenon.(4)First,universitystudentsarenotpreparedto(5)liveaself-disciplinedlife,andwhenthisiscompaniedbyaloosemanagementsystemofuniversities,classskippinginevitablyappearsandincreases.(4)Second,thesizeofsomeoftheuniversitycoursesistoobig:when(6)morethan100oreven200studentsarehavingonelecturetogether,theattendanceofallthestudentscannotpossiblybeaccuratelyrecorded.(4)Third,someofthecollegestudentsmaynotfindthedirectionfortheirfuturedevelopment.(7)Inmyview,itisnotacceptabletoskipclasses(8)atourownwill,(9)letalonetheimportanceofacademiclearningandskilltraining.Ifwecannotbearesponsibleindividualandchoosenottoobeytherules,wecannotmakeourselvesaneligiblecitizen.解析:[審題]本題要求寫一篇議論文,“逃課現(xiàn)象”是大學(xué)生非常熟悉的校園話題,與他們聯(lián)系比較密切,議論要客觀、具有說服力,而不能無理無據(jù)地空洞表述。

[思路]

第一段說明大學(xué)生逃課的普遍性;

第二段詳細(xì)論述大學(xué)生逃課的原因;

第三段給出自己的觀點(diǎn):不要逃課。

6.CollegeReadingRoomPhenomenonAsisshowninthegraphofthecollegereadingroomattendancethereareroughlytwocycleswithgreatriseandfall.WhenthenewtermstartsinSeptemberthereareabout275studentswhogotothereadingroom.ThenumberincreasesrapidlywitheachpassingmonthtillNovemberandstillincreasesatamuchlowerratereachingthepeakjustbeforetheexamsinearlyDecember.Duringthewintervacationmoststudentsgohomesothenumberofstudentsusingthereadingroomdropstoalmost175.Thesecondcycleinthespringsemesterissimilartothefirst.Afterthreemonthsthenumbergoesupgreatly.ItisonlyafterAprilwiththeapproachingfinalexamsinmindthatmoststudentsstartseriouslyusingthefacilitiesofthereadingroom.Duringthesummervacationstudentsarerarelyseeninit.Theattendancefiguresreflectthestudents'lifeatcollege.Thegraphindicatesthatexamsarethedrivingforceformanystudents.Inthefirsttwomonthsofeachsemesterquiteafewstudentsrelaxsinceexamsarestillfaraway.Theyonlystudyhardinreadingroomafewweeksbeforetheexamsbecausetheretheycaneasilygetholdofallthereferencestheyneedfortheirtermpapersortheexams.Infactstudentsshouldnotstudyforthesakeofexamsbecauseitisjustoneeffectivewayoftestingtheknowledgetheyhaveabsorbed.Thereforeiftheystudiednotfortheexamsbutforacquiringknowledgetheirliveswouldbemucheasier.AsIseeitthekeytorealsuccessinstudyliesinone'swillingnesstoacquireknowledgeandgetgoodcommandofmodernscienceandtechnology.Soifonewantstobeatalentedstudentheshouldattendeverylectureandeagerlyabsorbnewknowledgeinthereadingroom.Thusthegraphabovewouldhaveasmootherorsteadiercurve.CollegeReadingRoomPhenomenonAsisshowninthegraphofthecollegereadingroomattendance,thereareroughlytwocycleswithgreatriseandfall.WhenthenewtermstartsinSeptember,thereareabout275studentswhogotothereadingroom.ThenumberincreasesrapidlywitheachpassingmonthtillNovemberandstillincreasesatamuchlowerrate,reachingthepeakjustbeforetheexamsinearlyDecember.Duringthewintervacation,moststudentsgohome,sothenumberofstudentsusingthereadingroomdropstoalmost175.Thesecondcycleinthespringsemesterissimilartothefirst.Afterthreemonthsthenumbergoesupgreatly.ItisonlyafterApril,withtheapproachingfinalexamsinmindthatmoststudentsstartseriouslyusingthefacilitiesofthereadingroom.Duringthesummervacation,studentsarerarelyseeninit.Theattendancefiguresreflectthestudents'lifeatcollege.Thegraphindicatesthatexamsarethedrivingforceformanystudents.Inthefirsttwomonthsofeachsemester,quiteafewstudentsrelaxsinceexamsarestillfaraway.Theyonlystudyhardinreadingroomafewweeksbeforetheexamsbecausetheretheycaneasilygetholdofallthereferencestheyneedfortheirtermpapersortheexams.Infact,studentsshouldnotstudyforthesakeofexamsbecauseitisjustoneeffectivewayoftestingtheknowledgetheyhaveabsorbed.Therefore,iftheystudiednotfortheexamsbutforacquiringknowledge,theirliveswouldbemucheasier.AsIseeit,thekeytorealsuccessinstudyliesinone'swillingnesstoacquireknowledgeandgetgoodcommandofmodernscienceandtechnology.Soifonewantstobeatalentedstudent,heshouldattendeverylectureandeagerlyabsorbnewknowledgeinthereadingroom.Thusthegraphabovewouldhaveasmootherorsteadiercurve.

7.[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadayssuchasclimatechangeenvironmentalpollutionandecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthesituationismanypeople[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadays,suchasclimatechange,environmentalpollution,andecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthesituationis,manypeople解析:本文標(biāo)題是“淪環(huán)境保護(hù)的重要性”,所以盡管outline中提到環(huán)境惡化、很多人不注意環(huán)境保護(hù)等內(nèi)容,但這些內(nèi)容似乎都不應(yīng)該作為重點(diǎn),而只能是不可缺少的“引子”,作文論述的重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該還是正面闡述“重要性”。

環(huán)境保護(hù)問題當(dāng)然是“老生常談”,但動筆具體寫的時(shí)候,卻讓人為難,可能總是轉(zhuǎn)不出“環(huán)境保護(hù)對人類的生存至關(guān)重要”這么一條理由。如何闡述理由,使這些理由相互關(guān)聯(lián)卻又截然不同,顯得層次分明,是考生寫作思路訓(xùn)練的重點(diǎn)。

Analysis

[1]第一段可以把outline中相應(yīng)內(nèi)容簡要介紹一下。

[2]前一句中的讓步結(jié)構(gòu)(seriousasthesituationis)運(yùn)用巧妙,而這一句就給出主題句。

[3][4]關(guān)于環(huán)保的重要性,能夠給出什么理由呢?這里只列了兩條:環(huán)??梢哉鹊厍颉覀兩娴募覉@;只有環(huán)保才能讓我們擁有健康生存所需要的資源。理由只列兩條時(shí),可以使用foronething…foranother的套話引出。注意,這里的兩條理由之間沒有重復(fù)交叉。如果舉出四五條理由,只不過分別說環(huán)保使我們得到干凈的水、空氣、土壤、糧食等等,雖然不算錯(cuò),但內(nèi)容上是重復(fù)的,說服力就不夠。

[5]結(jié)尾段重復(fù)一遍主題是必要的,注意語言上要有變化。本文用到important,importance,significant和vital等不同的詞表示“重要”,所以語言就富有變化。

8.ALettertoaSchoolmateDearfriendLasttimeIcameacrossyouIwassurprisedtofindthatyoureyeswereswollenandyourfacewaspale.Ithoughtyoumusthavestudiedlateintonight.Lateroneofyourclassmatestoldmethetruth.YouhavebeenaddictedtoonlinegamingforalongtimeandyouspentmostofyoursparetimeintheInternetcaf.WhenIlearnedaboutitIwasshockedandextremelyworried.AsisknowntousitisveryharmfultospendtoomuchtimeplayinggamesontheInternet.Firstlyitisanenormouswasteofyourprecioustime.Asastudentwearesupposedtoconcentrateourattentiononourstudies.Secondlyitdoesgreatphysicalharmtoyouifyoustayupsooften.Youarelikelytosufferfrombodyimbalanceasaresultofexhaustion.Thirdlyyourmentalhealthwillbeseriouslyaffectedtoo.Ifyoucompletelyimmerseyourselfintheunrealworldanddistanceyourselffromyourclassmatesandfriendsyouwillendupfeelinglonelyandisolatedintherealworld.Ihopeyouwillmanagetocontrolthisproblemandshiftyourattentiontoyourlessons.Trytotakeregularexerciseandcommunicatewithothersmoreoften.Inthiswayyouwillliveamorecolorfulandfruitfullife.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursSincerelyLiMingALettertoaSchoolmateDearfriend,LasttimeIcameacrossyou,Iwassurprisedtofindthatyoureyeswereswollenandyourfacewaspale.Ithoughtyoumusthavestudiedlateintonight.Later,oneofyourclassmatestoldmethetruth.YouhavebeenaddictedtoonlinegamingforalongtimeandyouspentmostofyoursparetimeintheInternetcaf.WhenIlearnedaboutit,Iwasshockedandextremelyworried.Asisknowntous,itisveryharmfultospendtoomuchtimeplayinggamesontheInternet.Firstly,itisanenormouswasteofyourprecioustime.Asastudent,wearesupposedtoconcentrateourattentiononourstudies.Secondly,itdoesgreatphysicalharmtoyouifyoustayupsooften.Youarelikelytosufferfrombodyimbalanceasaresultofexhaustion.Thirdly,yourmentalhealthwillbeseriouslyaffected,too.Ifyoucompletelyimmerseyourselfintheunrealworldanddistanceyourselffromyourclassmatesandfriends,youwillendupfeelinglonelyandisolatedintherealworld.Ihopeyouwillmanagetocontrolthisproblemandshiftyourattentiontoyourlessons.Trytotakeregularexerciseandcommunicatewithothersmoreoften.Inthisway,youwillliveamorecolorfulandfruitfullife.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursSincerely,LiMing解析:[審題]

本文是一封建議信。勸告校友戒掉網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲,需要說明沉溺于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的危害,以及如何擺脫網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲。同時(shí),作者需要注意說話的語氣。

[寫作思路]

第一段:得知校友玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲成癮,非常吃驚,同時(shí)感到非常痛心。

第二段:分析沉溺于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的種種危害——損害身心健康,浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和精力。

第三段:勸告校友及時(shí)從網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲中擺脫出來。

9.IsItaPerfectEnding?Somepeopleheartheirinnervoiceofpursuingperfectionincludingaperfectending.Suchpeoplebecometr

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